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~Yubel~

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Midrange, plain field with lake to my right
Post your bio and make your move

As i'm trying to improve, i'd like to be pushed by my opponent so if you're weaker then me, don't bother.
 
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I don't know if i'm good enough for you, due to I haven't learned any s-anks but if you put the limit to a ranks, i'm pretty sure i'll rock your world, thinking i'm lying check out my spar with Nathan the grim, sempai of wesobi...xd.
 

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Bio: the ultimate being in sig.

*kefa chases his dangerously Powerful target to a grassy plain field, kefa knows that his target is of sannin rank, but still his village sends him to kill him, the man known as Griffith. Kefa feels like he is trapped cause Griffith stopped moving, not wanting to be ambushed, kefa prepares himself to attack, kefa runs into mid range to his target, and as the sannin turns, kefa throws a kunai tagged with a paper bomb, kefa then immediately throws another kunai tagged with a paper bomb towards the other he threw, as it goes kefa builds his wind chakra and spits out a powerful gust of wind, which is ignited with flames by the explosion of the kunai knives,(therefore a big flames heads towards Griffith.), as the big flames blocks Griffith view of him(kefa), kefa raises his hand and sends lightnig essense to the sky, preparing for a lightning strike, kefa runs a little closer to the sannin(behind the fire ball) kefa jumps up, staying in the air at an angle of 45 degres towards the sannin and spits out a lightning spear which eventually splits into 2 aimed at his head and chest, as kefa lands back on the ground, so does his lightning strike from the
Cloud lands on Griffith.

Kefa:(thinking) I know i'm over doing it, but if I don't then i'm screwed....

(Fūton: Daitoppa) - Wind Release: Great Break Through
Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: This is a relatively simple technique that when the user performs the following hand seals Tiger → Ox → Dog → Rabbit → Snake they create a sudden gust of wind, but its scale varies greatly depending on the user. If used by a superior shinobi, it has enough destructive power to knock down a large tree. The wind from the squall can blow away all things in the user's line of sight. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame.

(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Lightning Fang
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user sends an electrical essence into the clouds, allowing them to create lightning strikes in the desired location.

(Raiton: Gian Yari) - Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.
 

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Griffith stares at the man infront of him, he thinks to himself what could be his intention to have followed him here. He gives a faint smile to the man before being attacked by tagged kunais ignited by wind and Griffiths view gets blocked by the flames, he immediately goes underground and travels fast to his opponents location where he mold his chakra to become invisible before coming up behind his opponent silent, invisible and without disturbing the ground at all, he slice his throat with a kunai as he finishes sending lightning essence into the sky. Griffith looks at the corpse falling to the ground while becoming visible.

Hmm, i wonder why he attacked me..well, it doesnt matter now does it?

Note: Since my vision was blocked by the fire, you wouldnt be able to see me either and you wouldnt see me go underground. Your own strategy killed you.

(Doton: Dochū Eigyo no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Underground Projection Fish Technique
Rank: C
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using this jutsu, a person can hide underground until they're ready to attack an opponent. By utilizing earth-chakra, the person can stealthily emerge from the ground without disrupting the ground around him. This jutsu can also be used to avoid incoming jutsus.

(Meisai Gakure no Jutsu) - Camouflage Concealment Technique
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja can grant themselves near invisibility to the naked eye. Doujutsu can see through this technique.

(Muon Satsujin Jutsu) - Silent Homicide Technique
Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:20
Description: Muon Satsujin Jutsu, the ability to commit a silent homicide, is a technique to dispatch your foe with no warning. Your quick speed and skills will instantly kill them before they can provide a defense.
Tactic:Best used with Hidden Mist jutsu.
 

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Fine, do your counter but keep in mind you can't see nor hear me get behind you nor would you expect anything since you kept attacking thinking i would bother defend against you.
 

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*kefa looks at the spot where he attacked Griffith, when all of a sudden he feels pain on his neck like someone is cutting him with a knife, being as he is kefa activates his water replacement jutsu, so the unseen attacker doesn't cut through his whole throat, but kefa is left with somewhat of a deep cut on his neck, kefa pretends that he is dead and falls to the ground to also confuse his opponent, thinking that his opponent should be very close to him to be able to cut him, kefa Lays on the floor and claps his hand when he releases his water jutsu: the water shockewave(since Griffith is close to me, it. should be able to hit him and throw him back), kefa gets back up and looks around for Griffith not knowing where he is or the jutsu is used, kefa forms some hand seals and it begins to rain, the rain makes kefa to sense/perceive chakra therefore making him somewhat of a sensor type, therefore kefa can sense griffith's chakra. Also knowing where he is.*

Kefa: I knew I shouldn't have accepted this mission, I almost died....but now I can sense his chakra, I should be careful.

(Suiton: Mizu Kawarimi) - Water Style: Water Replacement
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user can freely transform his body into liquid. This form allows him to avoid taking direct damage from many physical attacks but can not attack while in this form.


(Suiton: Suishōha) - Water Style: Water Shock Wave
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid (Made short range of the user with a med range reach)
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: This technique allows the user after claping their hands together to make a spiralling vortex of water out of knowhere. The vortex then proceeds to explode from the top in the form of a wave. The user can also control the direction the wave goes with hand movements.

(Suiton: Ukojizai no Jutsu) - Water Style: Rain Tiger at Will Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A perception ninjutsu, allowing one to freely manipulate rain infused with the user's own chakra after waving the Bird → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Rat → Snake hand seals. The rain falls from rain clouds, formed with the users own chakra. During this technique, the falling raindrops are closely linked to the users senses. When the rain is obstructed by a chakra belonging to someone the existence of the target can be detected. The rain will keep on falling until the user uses the seal to cancel it.
 

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Griffith gets hit and taken back by the wave but with a simple hand gesture release wind from his left hand that slices though the water and cuts the man to shreds. He falls back from the wave mid-range but land on his feet in a cool manner, slightly impressed that his opponent managed to survive. Griffith smiles as he looks up admiring the bright sky while yawning.

Ahhh, such a nice day..

(Fūton: Kaze No Yaiba) - Wind Style: Wind Blade
Rank: A
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A blade of wind that is unblock able due to wind intangibility.
 

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*kefa prepares to make the rain fall when he see's the wind slice, switching back to water replacement tech, the wind attack passes through him, kefa then makes the rain to fall to be able to detect Griffith, still feeling over whelmped, kefa feels the obstruction of his chakra by another, locating the obstruction kefa spits out a water bullet towards it.*

(Suiton: Mizu Kawarimi) - Water Style: Water Replacement
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user can freely transform his body into liquid. This form allows him to avoid taking direct damage from many physical attacks but can not attack while in this form.

(Suiton: Ukojizai no Jutsu) - Water Style: Rain Tiger at Will Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A perception ninjutsu, allowing one to freely manipulate rain infused with the user's own chakra after waving the Bird → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Rat → Snake hand seals. The rain falls from rain clouds, formed with the users own chakra. During this technique, the falling raindrops are closely linked to the users senses. When the rain is obstructed by a chakra belonging to someone the existence of the target can be detected. The rain will keep on falling until the user uses the seal to cancel it.

(Suiton: Teppoudama) - Water Style: Water Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will do one handseal and will gather water in his mouth and then spits out a large sphere of rotating water that can blast a huge area leaving it soaked. It can also be used in quick succession to shoot up to 3 smaller but faster bullets of water.
 

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Oh, now you are just grasping at straws. You have had your throat sliced, partly but still, you dont have much time left, in two moves or so you will die from blood-loss and i dont see how you can manage to do the water replacement faster then i strike you because you are not faster then me especially considering the circumstances. I let it slide before but i will bring up now, once you use water replacement your body is water meaning you must revert back to human form to do the other things, this means you wouldnt be able to fake your death at all.

With that said, i will end it
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As Griffith falls back from the wave he sees Kefa having turned into water again and focus his fire chakra in his feet. As soon as he lands on his feet a large pillar of fire erupts from under the body of water before he can reform back, evaporating the man and putting him out of his mistery.

(Katon: Gōka Honoo no Hashira Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Fire Flame Pillars Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will knead their fire chakra and release it into the ground by stomping down their leg and then causing three pillars of fire several meters tall spaced out evenly. The Pillars of fire can act as a defensive wall against incoming techniques or targets or used to attack low aerial targets.
 

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I know that . I'm desperately trying to proove that i'm not weak, i'm sorry but you are too powerful...but I promise you that we'll have another spar when I either reach s or sannin class.

*kefa drops to the ground due the losss of blood, kefa smears the blood on his hand and forms some hand seals, kefa then summons a bird which Carrie s him away from the battle fiwl for treat,ent...*

Kefa: I rather save myself than be assasinated by the one i'm to assasinate.
 

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Lol, as if you would have chance to escape but dont sweat it. Im weak too but im not trying to prove anything, rather i try to improve so we are in the same boat there, tell you what? Once you reach S class and have gotten some training done, let me know and we will spar again. Man, how did this happen?
I ended up from trying to sharpen my skills to taking a weird teacher role.:sy:
 

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Lol..:) and surprisingly your good at the teaching role, I think you should aply for sensei-ship. And i'm sorry to about not helping you sharpen your skill but trust me you aren't weak, i'more of a Power person and u are the brains. Not wasting tech and easily evading,I Wang to be like you when I grow up!...:T_T:
 

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Best advice i can give you is to have more fights and get more training. Also learn to think ahead, don't leave yourself open in your moves.
 
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