[Suiton] Passing On a Legacy

[Pervyy]

Hmmm, maybe i can call in a favour to help with this, if you like?

 

[Gutsy]

i would like that O__O wonders around XD

so.... *fiddles around with some paper* i replied to the fight XD

shouldnt you change your signature, Pervy of Sunagakure XD

in what way would you use the hair needle technique or the lion mane? i mean the lion mane seems like blunt force for direct attack, the hair senbon seem more like something of a quick surprise attack, like attack from behind or something.

 

[Pervyy]

Why not use all 3 hair jutsu together, release hair around you to defend send it out forwards as your hair source and as you send it out shoot out hair needles?

Its all about the situation at hand. Homework time, read my fight with nagato, detective L and serpent

 

[Gutsy]

alright time to read!!!!! O_O *activates the legendary eyes of umh... reading* >__>

 

[Pervyy]

Return to me once you're done

 

[Gutsy]

alright im done reading O___O the serpent and you were the longest read, but all of them good reads.

 

[Pervyy]

Now tell me what you thought, what did you learn? What could i have done better

 

[Gutsy]

Alright lets do this.

Detective L vs you I enjoyed the read, I think your first move of an offense was straight forward, jumping and roundhouse kick, just like i did in our fight. I think now that i tried it myself that it is possible not the best way to start a fight since it leaves you suspended in the air, while the opponent seems to have an easy way of countering it so perhaps next time i wont do the same and neither will you XD as for the fight, the way you quickly got the ground using added weight, the way you used partial camouflage combined with the wild lions mane, those two were quite smart moves, difficult to perceive especially the second one i mentioned. The added weight was smart to quickly get to the ground and continue with a swipe. Concealing your hair as it attacks cool! The last move you made Greater Earth Style, seems a bit more "normal" >__> using the same technique twice perhaps you could have used the dome but perhaps used it more to your advantage by going underground or perhaps you could have used one of the toad summonings.

You vs Nagato Tobi vs Jiraiya and there is a bit of background story i love it. Again first move is yours XD and you chose a jumping kick once more, and tobi dodges it pretty easy and delivers a dangerous attack from beneath you. perhaps i was right in my first assesment in the top if your not prepared for it. it has not gone long this fight, but the pressure palm was a quick way to counter his attack, and the last move so far you use speed over everything else to get up behind him and delivering a kick quite strong and smart move by using the barrier dome method, smart.

you vs Serpent a long ass fight >_> anyways overall cool move countering the bird by splattering it beneath gamabunta and his sword XD but how does a giant toad stand on such a head i feel he is bigger but idk xd serpent seemed repetitive about using that Asura Path >_> anyways nice hair combo to knock his missiles and then use quick needle shot to attack him. Toad Oil Flame bomb an easy way of countering several attacks as you shown nice. Sage Mode time! running around with hands bound yay! well golem was something i presume one needed to do since you cant you hand seals during that time. but again seemed like an easy way of countering for you. Sage Mode time, well that was some badassery right there in that move (didnt know you had custom ma and pa >_>) and nice use of dust cloud to conceal yourself while moving in with a tongue binding and quick finish of a punch xd and here comes some customs i never seen before. Using the rasengan and the natural energy against him as he tries to counter it with his absorbtion, cool! and i laughed when you pierced his chest as he basically could either stop his absorbing or let himself be pierced. Well nice way of using it to your advantage. From there on out the fight was basically yours, even though i felt that you could maybe have saved Ma and Pa before that happened but it is the price? Not letting him heal i see? food cart destroyer FTW and finally crushing him with Sage Crushing? nice technique. this was the best fight i feel so far, i liked the read.

anyways overall I learned how you acted as jiraiya, roleplayed, used the description. I feel after these reads that i might be able to roleplay better than before, come up with some more unique and awesome counters. And well what you could do better i said up there I am not really sure how much to say, but i didnt see much flaw >__>

 

[Pervyy]

Alright lets do this.

Detective L vs you I enjoyed the read, I think your first move of an offense was straight forward, jumping and roundhouse kick, just like i did in our fight. I think now that i tried it myself that it is possible not the best way to start a fight since it leaves you suspended in the air, while the opponent seems to have an easy way of countering it so perhaps next time i wont do the same and neither will you XD as for the fight, the way you quickly got the ground using added weight, the way you used partial camouflage combined with the wild lions mane, those two were quite smart moves, difficult to perceive especially the second one i mentioned. The added weight was smart to quickly get to the ground and continue with a swipe. Concealing your hair as it attacks cool! The last move you made Greater Earth Style, seems a bit more "normal" >__> using the same technique twice perhaps you could have used the dome but perhaps used it more to your advantage by going underground or perhaps you could have used one of the toad summonings.

You vs Nagato Tobi vs Jiraiya and there is a bit of background story i love it. Again first move is yours XD and you chose a jumping kick once more, and tobi dodges it pretty easy and delivers a dangerous attack from beneath you. perhaps i was right in my first assesment in the top if your not prepared for it. it has not gone long this fight, but the pressure palm was a quick way to counter his attack, and the last move so far you use speed over everything else to get up behind him and delivering a kick quite strong and smart move by using the barrier dome method, smart.

you vs Serpent a long ass fight >_> anyways overall cool move countering the bird by splattering it beneath gamabunta and his sword XD but how does a giant toad stand on such a head i feel he is bigger but idk xd serpent seemed repetitive about using that Asura Path >_> anyways nice hair combo to knock his missiles and then use quick needle shot to attack him. Toad Oil Flame bomb an easy way of countering several attacks as you shown nice. Sage Mode time! running around with hands bound yay! well golem was something i presume one needed to do since you cant you hand seals during that time. but again seemed like an easy way of countering for you. Sage Mode time, well that was some badassery right there in that move (didnt know you had custom ma and pa >_>) and nice use of dust cloud to conceal yourself while moving in with a tongue binding and quick finish of a punch xd and here comes some customs i never seen before. Using the rasengan and the natural energy against him as he tries to counter it with his absorbtion, cool! and i laughed when you pierced his chest as he basically could either stop his absorbing or let himself be pierced. Well nice way of using it to your advantage. From there on out the fight was basically yours, even though i felt that you could maybe have saved Ma and Pa before that happened but it is the price? Not letting him heal i see? food cart destroyer FTW and finally crushing him with Sage Crushing? nice technique. this was the best fight i feel so far, i liked the read.

anyways overall I learned how you acted as jiraiya, roleplayed, used the description. I feel after these reads that i might be able to roleplay better than before, come up with some more unique and awesome counters. And well what you could do better i said up there I am not really sure how much to say, but i didnt see much flaw >__>

Overall nice.

Now lets address what you said. First of all the starting off with a kick, you say its a mistake i say its bait. If i run and kick them they always think i'm open and they will just kick my ass from the word go. In reality, i'm baiting them into close combat to avoid a volleyball game of throwing nukes back and forwards, its more personal.

Now first battle: I used added weight as i needed to get out of the air true, simple and to the point, it means you just make more use of the jutsu you have rather than one direct route as most do. As for the earth, the dome is only short range, so i'd rather go simplistic with using the same jutsu twice in that way. I just wanted to stick to jiraiya to be honest, using earth. As for using the toad summonings and underground, there is a time and a place and i didn't feel it was time yet. thats building towards epicness


Second battle: A background story makes rp so much more fun you get in the zone, you imagine the terrain more and use it to your own advantage if you can. In this case not so much but other times you will. Once again the kick, but i know it would get me in close, get some tai going and there are so many ways to get out of it, even if someone gets a few punches in on you, you don't lose, you just get hit a few times, so can't go wrong. But look out for that nagashi as always. Barrier dome method, basic jiraiya all round sensing, its good to feel even attacks coming from behind you.

Third battle: Now this was epic storylineness. Serpent was unable to use everything he had previously learnt so he was at a bit of a disadvantage in this battle, even with nagato, but it was still great and a tough match. As you can see i made a mistake, giant toad ona smaller head, i need to pay attention to the terrain more. Running around with hands bound is mostly story rp than actual rules in all honesty but i thought i'd give it a shot to see how hard it is, and its hard. Now for the the main part. I knew that there was a weakness in the absorbtion, it can absorb chakra, not solid objects so i gave him an ultimatum, i thought he would save himeself by pushing me away or his chakra boots, but he wanted to take advantage too. But i had a trick up my sleeve, i prepared for this years ago and hence custom ma and pa. And in dispersing them freeing myself from the rinegan, good times. I could of saved ma and pa but the fight could go on forever that way. You need to keep on your opponent once you have an advantage.


You will notice in all the fights i only used fire, earth, toads, sage, nin and tai. I always stuck to what jiraiya used

 

[Gutsy]

Ah that clears up so much O___O thanks, but it seems i have difficulty in well countering your simple move, I dont think a kick in the air is the smartest way to initiate a taijutsu fight, id rather go with fists or perhaps a low attack to their legs. As for your explanation for it all i agree with you of course and i did notice you only used the same techniques and elements in which Jiraiya is capable of.

the lesson is learned but improvement is always something you can achieve XD

 

[Pervyy]

You will find your own way in which you want to do things. Mine is a kick, i always think of dynamic entry and it makes me laugh, but you can do anything you like. One counter i wanna try out soon is making a oodama rasengan infront of me as a kind of shield from an attack, but not been able to put it into practice yet

 

[Gutsy]

yes i believe i will, and as for that oodoma rasengan "shield" could be used against pretty large elemental attacks, it would shred them so could be easy to perform in a good time, if you have the time in the battle itself of course, but people seem to like fast paced attacks and quick kills.... >__> you should change your signature >_>

i think my move would usually be a punch, but actually i am more of a defensive orientated person.

 

[Pervyy]

I'm not telling you how to fight by the way, i'm showing you different ways and why that way can work. I want you to do what works for you. To be honest, give me any bio and i'll find a way to make it work for me and stay in character, might not win but i'll have fun.

You need to find you own path and i cba to ask someone to make me a new sig

 

[Gutsy]

yea i understand, you want me to find my own path, my own way of doing it all U_U you told me earlier that earth and fire is jiraiyas elements, and so far earth is my favorite element i enjoy using it, i just seem to feel fire is more of a straight forward blast destruction element, so combos with earth or something would be smart.

 

[Pervyy]

Yeah i know what you mean, but you've seen my dragon slayer customs i assume?

I made mine fire based to start as it made it so i could do tai, use fire like jiraiya and be able to avoid jutsu. I can release a stream of fire from my hands or feet to push myself out the way. Pretty cool ey?

 

[Gutsy]

now i have seen those techniques, in fact read most of your stuff long ago >_> but yes that is quite cool bro >_<

 

[Pervyy]

maybe make a jutsu where you spray mud from your feet? lol

 

[Gutsy]

i almost feel tempted to actually do that O_O or... you do realize you could make it more well inappropriate xd

 

[Pervyy]

stay focussed <_<

I'm just saying customs don't have to be one use. You could go to kick someone and spray out the mud too

 

[Gutsy]

yes sorry sensei U_U i will stay focussed from now on unless your not here lol

and true that, i might try to think of some kind of muddy or oily technique could be fun, why not use oil instead of mud, like the toads?