[Paint Tool SAI] Another Character Drawing #5.

[Kagerou]

This is probably the last drawing thread I'll be doing for the visual novel, as I've already reached a max amount of girls to add to the story.

There seems to be something wrong with the drawing overall that I can't seem to point out, but here it is.

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Also my first time drawing glasses.

If you guys were wondering why I use the same style for all of mine, it's because I use the same reference for all the characters. I think I'm going to stop using the same reference now though. >_>

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CnC is always appreciated. ^^

 

[Ja maya]

Outlining the hair seems weird to me, since hair in real life doesn't have a dark lining. Just blending is what you'd need to polish, since all it seems your doing is putting one lighter color towards the roots. And the darker color towards the end. Which is backwards since hair at the roots is naturally darker. The hair gloss is fine, the glasses seem wrongly placed but very great first try. I'd recommend working on blending hair, utilize that blending tool. z.z Overall I think your improving. Good job

Haven't used paint tool sai in awhile, tutorials help loads. hope this CnC is enough.

 

[Kagerou]

Outlining the hair seems weird to me, since hair in real life doesn't have a dark lining. Just blending is what you'd need to polish, since all it seems your doing is putting one lighter color towards the roots. And the darker color towards the end. Which is backwards since hair at the roots is naturally darker. The hair gloss is fine, the glasses seem wrongly placed but very great first try. I'd recommend working on blending hair, utilize that blending tool. z.z Overall I think your improving. Good job

Haven't used paint tool sai in awhile, tutorials help loads. hope this CnC is enough.

Glad I finally got some CnC after a while. >_>

Yeah, the outline was something I felt was quite off, but after looking at it a bit more, the bust and the face structure was quite off in the dimensions I had in mind aswell.

This is what happens when you work when tired. >_>

Will definitely keep this in mind, thanks Amaya. ^^

 

[Ja maya]

Glad I finally got some CnC after a while. >_>

Yeah, the outline was something I felt was quite off, but after looking at it a bit more, the bust and the face structure was quite off in the dimensions I had in mind aswell.

Will definitely keep this in mind, thanks Amaya. ^^

Lol, glad to offer advice. And yeah outlining it makes it look choppy or like a sticker to me. Nothing major is off with the body, I just think hair is what needs improving on. Like strands.

No problem if you need tips or anything pm me.