OuD Chapter 3 - Sweet Dreams

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[size=+3]Chapter 3 - Sweet Dreams[/size]
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Chapter inspired by the song and video: Sweet Dreams (Are made of This) - Marilyn Manson

Twisted and putrid, the house rose upon the view... The blurry beings, of tainted intentions, approached. There is an attempt of screaming, but no sound is produced. Black mouths and white eyes closed and oppened. Attempt of running, locked muscles. Trapped... twisted... rotten... horror... The only spot of purerity was created by the white bride on the burnt corner. But from the incognit veil, an horrible laugh filled the body...

Mike - Gosh...

Jake - I woke up screaming O_O

Mike - *laughs* Well, I'd wake up screaming too... Anyways, what happened last night?

He grabbed the spoon and shoved a new bunch of cereals in his mouth.

Jake - Maddie dreamt about her father again...

Mike - But she never acted like she did last night.

Jake - I know!

Mike shoved another spoon on his mouth and spoke at the same time.

Mike - *munch* And then *munch* you had the dream... Spooky man, spooky...

Jake - Speaking of which, have you seen Maddie?

Mike - Mother Superior summoned her to her office.

Jake - What for?

Maddie - Adoption!!

She shouted from behind, making Mike spit a jet of milk and cereals all over the table.

Jake - *stutter* Ad-d-option?


His heart felt on the ground and suddenly all his body became cold.

Maddie - Yes! Mother Superior told me someone came last night.

Mike - But you're 16...

Maddie - Adoptions of the same age happen all the time...

Jake - You're going to leave us...

He said the words, but he felt like someone else said them. Maddie suddenly realized.

Maddie - Oh god...

Tears formed beneath her eyes.

Maddie - Adoption is a good thing isn't it...? *her lips mumbled*

Mike saw Jake petrefied on the chair, pale as a ghost. He stood up and hugged Maddie

Mike - Of course it is... Jake?

He stood up and ran away, covering his eyes from both. Man don't cry...

Maddie - Oh god...

She intended to run after him but Mike hold her wrist.

Mike - Let me...

He shown a gentle smile, but his eyes felt differentely. Mike ran to the dormitory and found Jake on the bed looking dull to the ceiling.

Mike - What the hell are you doing?

Jake - What?!

Mike - She is our friend!

Jake - And?

He went to Jake and grabbed him by his collar. His eyes emmited no emotion.

Mike - You should be happy for her!

Jake - *roll eyes* I don't care...

Mike released the grip. And suddenly puched him.

Mike - You selfish bastard!

Jake sit on the bed and dropped his head on his hands.

Jake - I'm sorry...

Mike - It isn't me the one you should apoligize... It's Maddie. she is going away and you haven't said goodbye. Go now Jake, go!

Jake smiled to him in gratitude. Mike changed his face again. Go Jake.

He found Maddie on the Hall. Everyone was there saying goodbye. A tall man dressed in brown had his hand on top of Maddie's shoulder. She was holding a suitcase in front of her with both hands. A few girls were crying, but she was static.

He approached her and hugged her.

Jake - *whispers* I'm sorry... Be happy Maddie, you deserve.

He released her to look into her eyes. But she was pale.

Jake - What's wrong?

Her mouth trembled a little

Maddie -*whispers* He's my father...

Jake - I know, Maddie...

Jake was confused. Being adopted was good thing... What was wrong?

Maddie - *whispers* No, Jake... he's my father...

And the man lead her to the door, making him face her back.
The light darkenned. The door closed.

And then it stroke.

Trapped... twisted... rotten... horror... The only spot of purerity was created by the white bride on the burnt corner. But from the incognit veil, an horrible laugh filled the body...
The bride vanished, the purety disappeared, the laugh remained.
 
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xd Not sure how well you'd like them.. Or how they'd they influence you, for that matter, but here are four of my favorite songs:






<.< Yeah, all the same band, but they are one of my favorites so far.

Either way, I look forward to the next chapter! :D (suggest you enter the Fan Fiction of the Month contest with this o.o)
 

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xd Not sure how well you'd like them.. Or how they'd they influence you, for that matter, but here are four of my favorite songs:






<.< Yeah, all the same band, but they are one of my favorites so far.

Either way, I look forward to the next chapter! :D (suggest you enter the Fan Fiction of the Month contest with this o.o)
Done already. And i'm gonna try your songs. Maybe I'll get inspired :)
 

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well i would suggest this one but its dub, and its not for any taste

so check this one :)
words should fit :)
 

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well i would suggest this one but its dub, and its not for any taste

so check this one :)
words should fit :)
Oh dude...Oh dude... Oh dude...

The first song was so good. Was so great. It was epic! I'm gonna use it on the 5th chapter and I'm gonna have it on my mp4.

The last video I didn't really like the song. It's not not liking, it's just indiference. But the videoclip I saw was amazing. It made me really sad. It was about a robot and a face.
 

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Oh dude...Oh dude... Oh dude...

The first song was so good. Was so great. It was epic! I'm gonna use it on the 5th chapter and I'm gonna have it on my mp4.

The last video I didn't really like the song. It's not not liking, it's just indiference. But the videoclip I saw was amazing. It made me really sad. It was about a robot and a face.
Imogen Heap - 2-1 its my AMV and had official rights for using this song on my AMV?s :D so its like having official soundtrack
 
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