Oraan "Kaijin" Nguyen

[BlacKing]

Name: Oraan Nguyen
Nickname: Kaijin and Haiena
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Clan: N/A

Looks:

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Personality: A Calm, Cool, and Collective Ninja.
Village Info.
Village of Birth: Konoha
Village of Alliance: Konoha

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Genin
Specialty:
Elements: Fire
Your ninjutsu:

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


Background Info.
History:
He uses his family's sword that has been passed down from generation to generation. It is said to have the Wood from the First Hokage wrapped around the hilt as a gift. Oraan has learned everything about swordsmanship from his father. His mother passed away giving birth to him. He keeps a copper pommel attached to the sword that once belonged to his mother. The word "Kaijin" engraved in small Japanese symbols.
He tends to be very short with people that he considers to be "unworthy of his time." His goals have pretty much been laid out for him by his father; to live as he best saw fit, but to live most of all. However Oraan has a two separate goals. He always enjoyed hearing the stories of bravery and courage that came with the "Legendary Kaijin" (Name of sword). So his first goal is to trace his family roots, to see how exactly his family came about their heirloom, and to live up to the gory of his families name. . The second is to teach.....Not in a classroom, but on the battlefield. He shall teach his enemies to respect him, respect him with their dying breath.

Theme Song and Background Music: Drowning Pool – Bodies.

Battles

Won: N/A
Lost: N/A

~Approved~ Have fun RPing

 

[Anbu578]

:| Take out all of those summonings and add the Basic E-Rank jutsu:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

And you must have 50 posts to make a bio plus take out the rank and finally put only one element for the element for you to be trained

 

[BlacKing]

Ahhhh, Thank you Anbu.

 

[Anbu578]

Ahhhh, Thank you Anbu.

Sure I am always here to help

 

[BlacKing]

Ok. So since I have to have 50 posts, Do I have to repost this when I hit 50, or will it just not be approved until I hit 50, and who approves it when I do.

 

[Sade]

grab the link and go to the profile of or Zenryoku or Emperor or Nero or Ragnaroc or RokuNR ,posta visitor messege that you have the link of the bio and tell them if they can approve it....u should procide to tis step,ONLY,if this bio doesnt get approved(for me) by the next day....

 

[Caliburn]

Completely rewrite your entire bio as you're breaking a bunch of rules:

1) It's forbidden to make a custom clan. Something like the Nguyen-clan doesn't exist in the Narutoverse. You can only make a custom clan when you reach the rank of sage, which you are far from.

2) You can't train to form your own KG. Again only when you reach the rank of sage and make a custom clan you can make a KG for that clan.

3) You're a genin, not a jounin. Read the Battle Ranks-thread.

4) It's your first bio, you don't have any specialties, remove them.

5) Add all these ninjutsu and copy paste them correctly, for some reason you messed up doing it the first time:

Spoiler

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
_____
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
_____
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
_____
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
_____
(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
_____
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

6) Rewrite your history. Remove everything that has something to do with that custom clan of yours, remove the Ram-summoning, remove the part of you seeing Tobi/madara as that's impossible considering they were far from the village at that time (also Akatsuki didn't even exist then, Madara was just wearing a black robe without red clouds).

7) Add your picture to your bio and don't refer to your avy as you can change your avy.

8) You have fought zero battles, so don't fill in anything there outside N/A or 0.

I suggest you read the rules

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[BlacKing]

Thanks Caliburn, Anbu and Yo.

 

[Caliburn]

Some more lines of history please. Then I will approve it.

 

[BlacKing]

Done Caliburn. Thx.

 

[BlacKing]

Name: Oraan Nguyen
Nickname: Kaijin and Haiena
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Clan: N/A

Looks:

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Personality: A Calm, Cool, and Collective Ninja.
Village Info.
Village of Birth: Konoha
Village of Alliance: Konoha

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Chuunin
Specialty:
Elements: Fire
Your ninjutsu:

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
_____
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
_____
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
_____
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
_____
(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
_____
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


Background Info.
History:
He uses his family's sword that has been passed down from generation to generation. It is said to have the Wood from the First Hokage wrapped around the hilt as a gift. Oraan has learned everything about swordsmanship from his father. His mother passed away giving birth to him. He keeps a copper pommel attached to the sword that once belonged to his mother. The word "Kaijin" engraved in small Japanese symbols.
He tends to be very short with people that he considers to be "unworthy of his time." His goals have pretty much been laid out for him by his father; to live as he best saw fit, but to live most of all. However Oraan has a two separate goals. He always enjoyed hearing the stories of bravery and courage that came with the "Legendary Kaijin" (Name of sword). So his first goal is to trace his family roots, to see how exactly his family came about their heirloom, and to live up to the gory of his families name. . The second is to teach.....Not in a classroom, but on the battlefield. He shall teach his enemies to respect him, respect him with their dying breath.

Theme Song and Background Music: Drowning Pool – Bodies.

Battles

Won: N/A
Lost: N/A

~Approved~ Have fun RPing

Changed to Chuunin

 

[BlacKing]

LEARNED Non Element Jutsu

Spoiler

(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique

Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja�s chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed

 

[BlacKing]

Suiton (Water Element Techniques)

Spoiler

(Mizu Bunshin) - Water Style: Water Clone
Rank: C
Range: Short
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user creates a clone of themselves made of water.

(Kirigakure No Jutsu) - Hidden Mist Jutsu
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user creates a thick, dense mist that covers the surrounding area.

(Suiton: Mizu Kuri No Yaiba) - Water Style: Sword of Draining
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: A technique that utilizes water to create a sword. The sword can be wielded in the normal fashion, allowing the ninja to cut and stab like with a normal blade.

(Suiton: Mizuame Nababara) - Water Style: Syrup Capture Field
Rank: C
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user projects a stream of sticky, syrupy liquid which can be spit onto a surface to form an adhesive trap or onto a person to inhibit their mobility.

(Suiton: Suigandan) - Water Style: Water Fang Bullet
Rank: C
Range: Short
Type: Offense
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user gathers water in his/her mouth and then shoots out multiple spherical projectiles.

 

[BlacKing]

Doton (Earth Element Techniques)

Spoiler

(Doton: Gansetsukon) - Earth Release: Rock Staff
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary/Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: This jutsu allows the user to take a small chunk of rock and turn it into the shape of a staff. The user can then use it as a weapon or throw it with pinpoint accuracy at their opponent. A variation of this jutsu allows the user to create several staffs and launch them at the target, but with less accuracy.

(Doton: Shinju Zanshu no Jutsu) - Earth Style: Double Suicide Decapitation Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user, emerging from the ground below the target area, pulls down the opponent so that only their head is above ground. Unable to move, the opponent can easily be decapitated or tortured.

(Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Style Technique
Rank: D
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Descripton: Creates small pillars of earth, small tools, and small shields of earth

 

[BlacKing]

Doton (Earth Element Techniques)

Spoiler

(Doton: Gansetsukon) - Earth Release: Rock Staff
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary/Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: This jutsu allows the user to take a small chunk of rock and turn it into the shape of a staff. The user can then use it as a weapon or throw it with pinpoint accuracy at their opponent. A variation of this jutsu allows the user to create several staffs and launch them at the target, but with less accuracy.

(Doton: Shinju Zanshu no Jutsu) - Earth Style: Double Suicide Decapitation Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user, emerging from the ground below the target area, pulls down the opponent so that only their head is above ground. Unable to move, the opponent can easily be decapitated or tortured.

(Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Style Technique
Rank: D
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Descripton: Creates small pillars of earth, small tools, and small shields of earth

(Doton: Ganban Kyu) - Earth Style: Bedrock Coffin
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This jutsu allows the user to control multiple sections of rock and move them around their opponent. The user then forms two gigantic sections that crush the opponent.

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[BlacKing]

Summoning Jutsu

Summoning Technique: Kaijin (Crocotta Summoning)
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: After doing the necessary hand seals and wiping blood across their hand, Oraan will wipe his hand on his sword blade and stab it into the ground summoning Crocotta, the Hyena King. Crocotta is a large Hyena about 7 feet tall and 800 pounds. He is capable of producing a laugh that mesmerizes a target; which is a form of Genjutsu. Can only stay on the field of battle for 2 turns.

Summoning Technique: Haiena (Pachycrocuta, Eucrocuta, and Aardwolf Summoning)
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30 (10P, 10E, 10A)
Damage points: N/A
Description: After doing the necessary hand seals and wiping blood across their hand, Oraan will wipe his hand on his sword blade swing it in a wide arc summoning P.E.A, Generals of the Hyena King. They are smaller Hyena, and in order of names are 4, 3 and 2 feet tall and ranging from 300 to 500 pounds. They are capable of producing a laugh that confuses a target as to the whereabouts of each animal. They may only stay on the field for a maximum of 3 turns.

 

[BlacKing]

Custom Jutsu

Suiton Release: Unsanmushou no Jutsu (Water Release: Vanishing Mist)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short/Mid/
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Doing two handseals, Oraan creates a slightly dense mist that can conceal his and his Summoning’s Chakra for 3 turns only. While this is in effect, Oraan also cannot use any Jutsu. An A Ranked or Higher Wind Technique may dispel the Mist. Can only be used once per battle, and Oraan can dispel the mist at will by doing the two handseals in reverse order. Dispelling the Technique does not count as one of the 3 moves in one turn. The mist is made of extremely dense water chakra, so the mist's own chakra signature cloaks Oraan's and his Summon's chakra. When the mist is in effect, Oraan cannot sense his opponent's chakra.

 

[BlacKing]

Doton/Fuuton: Shouchikubai Ashibishi (Earth/Wind Combo: Elevated Stepping Stones)
Type: Defense/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Rank: A
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: N/A
Description: 5 Large patches of earth infused with wind chakra raises out of the ground elevating the user. Can be used to catch the user while plummeting from the sky. Jutsu last for only 1 minute, before slowly sinking back into the ground.
Restricted to 3x per battle.
Only Oraan may teach

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[s06p]

What're you doing?
Y post all the jutsus you know here?
When you learn new jutsus you are supposed to make a new bio which is considered as updating here?
Though what you are doing is much more efficient the above updating system is uses so that people don't add jutsus they haven't learn.

 

[BlacKing]

SO6P. Thats what I was going for. Keeping track record. And then when I learned all in every element, I was going to post my new Bio. But I was told to stop and just to wait til I learned it all, then post it. So I stopped. lol.