I was asked by Twilight to check this fight to sort out a few issues. So here it goes. I'll break it down move by move to give a clear picture and outline any issues that may arise in the process.
Turn one:
Skorm: You start off by trying to activate passive sensory and the mind transmission jutsu. This would actually cause both jutsu to fail. You can't activate two jutsu at the same time (Including passives) that use chakra, unless it's a doujutsu. This only changes when an enhancement jutsu are used that explicitly say "Used within the same timeframe". Passive jutsu are used between timeframes, not taking up a slot, but can't be done at the same time. This date's back to at least 2015 with my fight with Aj, it can be found in my rulings thread.
With those two failing, you follow with the typhoon (These must form 5m from opponent for spawning rules) boosted due to typhoon being your harmony element.
Twilight: You start by activating your byakugan then tried to do the genjutsu. The problem here, is that your Byakugan activation isn't passive. So the timeframe would be:
Sensory/telepathy (though both failed) > Byakugan > Typhoon.
So you'd be hit by the typhoons taking the damage, following that your genjutsu would be activated. At this point you have taken 50 damage from the typhoon. The jutsu in itself doesn't state how the nausea translates to the rp. So it's more an rp aspect. For it to effect your speed/tracking/reactions it would need to state a clear value. Anyway you'd be hit then the illusion would activate. Then the earth jutsu
Turn two:
Skorm: You can detect anything below MS gen, so the A rank gen you can detect, but your actual counter fails to break it.
Yin Specialist:
Users will gain heightened spiritual abilities translating into an awareness of all genjutsu and spiritual entities below MS level and passive genjutsu kai up to B-rank. As well, Yin user's genjutsu give them heightened genjutsu prowess, allowing them to render their genjutsu techniques unbreakable by one of the primary methods of release (to be specified during the move). The user's chakra siphoning abilities becomes stronger allowing them to passively siphon 30 chakra per turn from enemies.
Note: Requires Yin.
You can't use the A rank version without the handseal. You can detect anything below MS level, but the passive kai without a handseal is still only up to B rank. As the illusion is A rank, you remain in it.
Following this, you deal with the earth because you say you sense it, but as your sensory failed, you wouldn't be able to sense the earth so your counter in itself fails. So with this you take 40 damage from the earth. Even if your sensory was active, as soon as you move to perform the handseal you'd be cut all over in the illusion.
Summary: Skorm, your sensory/telepathy aren't active. Twilight you took the damage from the wind and lose 30 chakra a turn. This chakra doesn't get added to skorm's total though, that's not how it works. It just dissipates.
The gen happens, the counter to the gen fails, the effects set in. The detection of the earth jutsu was wrong so the counter fails. Skorm takes the damage from the earth.
With that it's twilight's turn.
Edit:
Your bio isn't approved at this time, the one you linked.