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bio.I activate my Byakugan and watch the white-haired individual in front of me. He doesn't seem like the fighting type but I smile and think to myself that anyone can become a powerful ninja. I take a quick glance at the surroundings and see that there is just grassy field for as far as the eye can see. I concentrate my Fuuton chakra and inhale sharply before releasing dozens of small wind bullets at great speeds from my mouth. I then condense my Doton chakra to create a giant lid above you which quickly falls down trapping you just as the bullets strike.
( Futon: Shinkūdama ) - Wind Release: Vacuum Bullet
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: The user will begin sucking in wind which results in drawing in opponents towards them and by kneading with their chakra in their mouth the user then releases the wind chakra in the form of a powerful bullet that blasts the opponent away.
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: The user will begin sucking in wind which results in drawing in opponents towards them and by kneading with their chakra in their mouth the user then releases the wind chakra in the form of a powerful bullet that blasts the opponent away.
(Doton: Otoshibuta) – Earth Release: Dropping Lid
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user creates a giant, boar-shaped, earthen lid high in the air that falls on the target, trapping them underneath.
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user creates a giant, boar-shaped, earthen lid high in the air that falls on the target, trapping them underneath.
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Seeing the bullets are heading towards Jiraya, he performs a single hand seal and causes a wall of earth to rise from beneath him in order to raise him up above the ground and out of the trajectory of the bullets.
(Doton: Doryuheki) - Earth Release: Earth Style Wall Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will first perform the Tiger → Hare → Boar → Dog and then creates a solid wall of earth as a form of defence. Chakra is either converted to earth within the body and then spat out to form the wall or the user can manipulate pre-existing earth to form the wall. The earth then instantly rises up and takes form. The barrier itself is also coated with chakra, making its strength incomparable to that of a normal mud wall. Because of the earth's special characteristics, the wall is highly resistant against, for instance, fire and water. Hizuren Sarutobi spits mud from his mouth to perform the jutsu whilst Kakashi creates a wall composed of bulldog sculptures to box-in Pain.
Being closer to the lid as it is falling, Jiraya performs the ram hand seal and inhales, releasing a spherical, expanding blast of wind at an angle so it hits the edge of the lid so the lid is overturned. The wind blast hits the lid and turns it towards the woman before Jiraya causing the boar side of the lid to crash onto the woman.
(Fūton: Atsugai) - Wind Style: Pressure Damage
Rank: A
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user does the Ram handseal and inhales, kneading his chakra into his lungs, exhaling a huge blast of wind that levels anything in its path. Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast moves in tremendous speed and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, it will harm him also.
After releasing the the blast of wind Jiraya still has vision of the woman for a short moment so he uses that moment to cause a pillar of water to push the woman towards the lid for her to be crushed by it. The water would also make her wet making usage of lightning risky.
( Suiton: Mizu Hashira Suiryoku no Jutsu ) - Water Release: Water Pillar Thrust
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra and then they create water to rise up from the ground beneath the target lifting them into the air.
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(Doton: Doryuheki) - Earth Release: Earth Style Wall Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will first perform the Tiger → Hare → Boar → Dog and then creates a solid wall of earth as a form of defence. Chakra is either converted to earth within the body and then spat out to form the wall or the user can manipulate pre-existing earth to form the wall. The earth then instantly rises up and takes form. The barrier itself is also coated with chakra, making its strength incomparable to that of a normal mud wall. Because of the earth's special characteristics, the wall is highly resistant against, for instance, fire and water. Hizuren Sarutobi spits mud from his mouth to perform the jutsu whilst Kakashi creates a wall composed of bulldog sculptures to box-in Pain.
Being closer to the lid as it is falling, Jiraya performs the ram hand seal and inhales, releasing a spherical, expanding blast of wind at an angle so it hits the edge of the lid so the lid is overturned. The wind blast hits the lid and turns it towards the woman before Jiraya causing the boar side of the lid to crash onto the woman.
(Fūton: Atsugai) - Wind Style: Pressure Damage
Rank: A
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user does the Ram handseal and inhales, kneading his chakra into his lungs, exhaling a huge blast of wind that levels anything in its path. Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast moves in tremendous speed and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, it will harm him also.
After releasing the the blast of wind Jiraya still has vision of the woman for a short moment so he uses that moment to cause a pillar of water to push the woman towards the lid for her to be crushed by it. The water would also make her wet making usage of lightning risky.
( Suiton: Mizu Hashira Suiryoku no Jutsu ) - Water Release: Water Pillar Thrust
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra and then they create water to rise up from the ground beneath the target lifting them into the air.
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Minerva watches you overturn the lid with the Fuuton attack and sees it turn over towards her. She gets ready to evade but with her Byakugan notices water rising from under her and as it pushes her closer towards the lid she makes the Tiger → Dog and compacts a vast amount of wind chakra and pressurizes it before releasing it from her mouth and it busts a hole in the lid which she goes through as she continues her momentum up. As gravity begins to pull me back down to earth I quickly concentrate my Katon chakra and shoot out 3 large fire balls from my mouth which head straight towards you and finally as I touch back down on the ground I make the Ram hand seal and focus my Doton chakra and cause the ground he is standing on to suddenly sink down towards the center of a pit.
(Fūton: Shinkū Taigyoku) – Wind Release: Vacuum Great Sphere
( Katon: Gōenka ) - Fire Release: Great Flame Flower
(Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Antlion Technique
*The fireballs hit around the time when the Antlion begins.
(Fūton: Shinkū Taigyoku) – Wind Release: Vacuum Great Sphere
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: After performing two hand seals Tiger → Dog the user launches a stronger version of the Wind Release: Vacuum Sphere technique, where the user instead chooses to compress the entirety of the previously inhaled breath into a single large, crushing sphere of wind chakra that they then proceed to expel from their mouth.
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: After performing two hand seals Tiger → Dog the user launches a stronger version of the Wind Release: Vacuum Sphere technique, where the user instead chooses to compress the entirety of the previously inhaled breath into a single large, crushing sphere of wind chakra that they then proceed to expel from their mouth.
( Katon: Gōenka ) - Fire Release: Great Flame Flower
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user jumps in the air and shoots three giant bullets of fire that come down like giant meteors, then erupt into a geyser of flame.
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user jumps in the air and shoots three giant bullets of fire that come down like giant meteors, then erupt into a geyser of flame.
(Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Antlion Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user performs the Ram hand seal and causes causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the centre, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated. The range of the pit is determined by how much chakra is put into the technique.
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user performs the Ram hand seal and causes causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the centre, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated. The range of the pit is determined by how much chakra is put into the technique.
Seeing as a hole is blown into the lid by a blast of wind (I presume it doesn't go towards me as you didn't state so) and the woman following through with the water pushing her, Jiraya releases a massive stream of flames which covers a huge area. The stream happens around the same time as the fireballs, stopping the fireballs and continuing towards the woman, engulfing her in flames and preventing her from continuing with her offense.
(Katon: Gōka Messhitsu) - Fire Release: Great Fire Destruction
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into fire, and then expelled from the mouth in a massive stream of intense flames. The technique has an enourmous range and can cover a huge area. When it was used by Madara Uchiha, the massive scale of the technique was such that, in comparisson, his incomplete Susanoo seemed small.
Since the womans trajectory was downwards, Jiraya stops the stream of fire that engulfed here and channels chakra into the earth causing spikes to rise and impale her from below.
(Doton: Ganchūsō) - Earth Release: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique lets the user create a few rock pillars that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The rock pillars will even pass through obstacles to reach their target