[Mystery] [Of Tales and Tastes] The Candymaker - Chapter 2

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Nicely done! On a wild guess, is your clan somehow related to that fat candy lady Yonkou from one piece manga? The word destruction and candy always remind me of her. yet I don't know her name xD
 

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Nicely done! On a wild guess, is your clan somehow related to that fat candy lady Yonkou from one piece manga? The word destruction and candy always remind me of her. yet I don't know her name xD
Lool, no. I had the idea on my own. Yet I hear the Doctor has a similar ability. From Doctor Who, of course. xD
 

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Awesome storyline so far *_* Just one question, this Temujin Otaghen guy, is he a Kaguya?
No, the Kaguya have white hair and very controlled and poised manners, as well as a more classical speech. The Temujin clan is not a prominent clan, Ota had to work in order to get to the position he is.

Hm let's say its somewhat connected to X-men.
How very mysterious ;)
 

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"...getting his position through the art of brown nosing"

Haha, this made me laugh xD
I think this chapter was short, but right on point. Entertainment-wise, I think it was better than the first chapter as the pacing seemed faster.

As Solf J. Said, he sure reminds me of someone, and I can only think of Wormtongue from the Lord of The Rings.
 

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"...getting his position through the art of brown nosing"

Haha, this made me laugh xD
I think this chapter was short, but right on point. Entertainment-wise, I think it was better than the first chapter as the pacing seemed faster.

As Solf J. Said, he sure reminds me of someone, and I can only think of Wormtongue from the Lord of The Rings.
Well thank you! It was indeed a more comedic chapter. Since it's mostly dialog based, it's faster paced
 
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