O twilight O twilight

[Nocturne]

So this is the poem i wrote today like in 10-15 min..i was just observing twilight and thought of writing the poem.

Also it is dedicated to my new best friends in nb "ThatOneChick"..I read some of her poems in FF and inspired me to write one too..

It may not be really good...but i had to post it for ThatOneChick.

O twilight O twilight

O twilight O twilight
where have you been
I missed you deeply
From my heart within

Now is the time
to see her face
her beautiful smile
and her sparkling gaze

She'll come sweeping in my house
her eyes looking desperately for me
i'll go running towards her
and we'll fold us tightly


the night is ours
when you will fade
I'll be over her,
o desperately over her

when the morning arrives
she'll no longer be there
the time till twilight
will be a walk in a hell's pain

and thats when i'll be again
sitting by the tree
waiting for you twilight
when will you be...
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P.S.: My love in this poem is not ThatOneChick...Its my love...my real love..

CnC!​

 

[Seffy]

first to post! lol I'm honored my poem inspired you to write this. It's great! ^_^

 

[Nocturne]

first to post!

...now...did you read it...btw am i suppose to rep. the 1st post,,..just asking...

and ty so much that you liked it...i wanted to rep you now but i gotta spread some......anywayz yes you do a great inspiring work...i'll be writing more poems now...the next one will probably be about our friendship...^^

 

[Seffy]

...now...did you read it...btw am i suppose to rep. the 1st post,,..just asking...

lol no it's just the whole thing a few of my friends do. I read it and edited my first post Didn't think you would respond so quickly :ghehe:

 

[Nocturne]

lol no it's just the whole thing a few of my friends do. I read it and edited my first post Didn't think you would respond so quickly :ghehe:

i was desperately waiting for your reply...o desperately waiting for it...xdxd:glomp^^

 

[Seffy]

...now...did you read it...btw am i suppose to rep. the 1st post,,..just asking...

and ty so much that you liked it...i wanted to rep you now but i gotta spread some......anywayz yes you do a great inspiring work...i'll be writing more poems now...the next one will probably be about our friendship...^^

can't wait to read it! ^_^
I'm glad to hear you will be writing more poetry!
I was extremely big into poetry before I moved onto stories. ^_^

i was desperately waiting for your reply...o desperately waiting for it...xdxd:glomp^^

:hug: well it was wonderful, keep up the good job ^_^

 

[Nocturne]

can't wait to read it! ^_^
I'm glad to hear you will be writing more poetry!
I was extremely big into poetry before I moved onto stories. ^_^

:hug: well it was wonderful, keep up the good job ^_^

thanks a BUNCH!!....<3<3