Nothing Is What It Seems Chapter 9

Zwei

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yay! another Fan-tastic FF!! :D
 

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I get what you're saying, it doesn't matter to the story. I just saw that little note at the bottom and I just wanted to sound smart and helpful for once :shy:

I take another direction instead of denial with my chapters, involving the romance. You may already see what I mean, but the plot gets thicker when there is another "factor" added, which you will see in chapter seven.

How's the vauge spoiler for ya lol:D
lol it's true we defiently do romance a certain way. i just create that drama of omg kiss her already, but they do the opposite. though it's not too bad in this story. lol i love vague spoilers! lol

Awesome!!
:hug: ty!

@Norman: ty lil bro :hug: glad you liked it!
 

hyugastyle

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:lmao: that ending part was so unexpected! xd

your twist helped with my ideas for a story! this is a classic ladies and gentlemen! xd
 

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:lmao: that ending part was so unexpected! xd

your twist helped with my ideas for a story! this is a classic ladies and gentlemen! xd

lol ty xd and if you liked this twist you will fall in love with chapter 10, though it's not as long :/
 

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Awesome chapter I read it again :hug: I will read chapter 10 in a bit. :D
 

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nice work. I can see both serious and comic moments in it which keep the mood not too heavy and yet compelling.

:win:
 

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nice work. I can see both serious and comic moments in it which keep the mood not too heavy and yet compelling.

:win:

lol ty xd
you can't be all work and no play, that just makes a boring story :/
glad you liked it :)
 
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