Nothing Is What It Seems Chapter 5

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As i thought another great chapter by the best write ive ever seen.
 

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Nice! the story is gettin' better!
 

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can't wait for the update..!! :T_T: the torture big sis..:T_T:
 

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can't wait for the update..!! :T_T: the torture big sis..:T_T:

lol i haven't even started chapter 6 yet xd
I will have to get it out before the 15th though, if that eases your mind. :hug:
 

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I'm finally caught up...I liked the chapter, but for some reason I liked ch 1-3 a little more then than this one and the previous one...although it's just a prefrence of individual chapters everything here was still good, it's just the first three chapters appealed to me more.
 

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I'm finally caught up...I liked the chapter, but for some reason I liked ch 1-3 a little more then than this one and the previous one...although it's just a prefrence of individual chapters everything here was still good, it's just the first three chapters appealed to me more.

lol yay! you did catch up :D Everyone has their prefferences but if I continued on from after chapter 3 without introducing new characters, it would have gotten stale. chapters 3 and 5 are my faves :) where as others think the other was better than the last. It's all on how we see things I guess. Either way ty for reading and I do enjoy your feedback ;)
 

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it is an original story so i call it a fanfic :D

dude this fan fic is great, ive been a fan since chapter 1!xd


this was an epic chapter, it keeps getting better and better, that vincent guy has the perfect fighting attitude:cool: calm and collective, that chick is wild! lol she is very revengeful but hey none of us are perfect, but i didnt expect her to give gabriel that gold, that was generous of her,

cant wait for chapter 6! its like reading the manga, dont stop:)
 

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dude this fan fic is great, ive been a fan since chapter 1!xd


this was an epic chapter, it keeps getting better and better, that vincent guy has the perfect fighting attitude:cool: calm and collective, that chick is wild! lol she is very revengeful but hey none of us are perfect, but i didnt expect her to give gabriel that gold, that was generous of her,

cant wait for chapter 6! its like reading the manga, dont stop:)

lol xd yeah i know u have been a fan for so long :hug: I'm very greatful for that as well! Elizabeth maybe a handful, but she's not a terrible person. You will see more of what I mean next chapter. He would have to be to have some history with Elizabeth ;) lol ty ty and i won't hopefully 6 will be out befor ac comes out on the 15th (shooting for it anyways)
 

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lol i haven't even started chapter 6 yet xd
I will have to get it out before the 15th though, if that eases your mind. :hug:

can't wait for Nov. 15 to come then..:T_T:
yay!! ..I'm always here to cheer yah..
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can't wait for Nov. 15 to come then..:T_T:
yay!! ..I'm always here to cheer yah..
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lol aw :hug: ty and I said i'd have to have it out before the 15th :silly: ac comes out xd and i'm rocking that game! lol
 

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Elizabeth.....honestly i had thought ya'd use this....love her<3 and her Blue eyes...!!!! xd
btw its awesome...great thinking....!!!
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Elizabeth.....honestly i had thought ya'd use this....love her<3 and her Blue eyes...!!!! xd
btw its awesome...great thinking....!!!
:cool:

lol yeah Elizabeth and Vincent are my favorite names! Just need to have a boy now >.> lol doubtful! I don't want another kid :p
^_^ ty for reading it! I'm truly honored that you do.
 

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Awesome vincent and elizabeth are so badass...!!!
 

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Beheading....just keeps getting better and better, since the authorities are here to fight Vince and the annoying girl I guess more heads will fly. AWESOME!!!
 

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Beheading....just keeps getting better and better, since the authorities are here to fight Vince and the annoying girl I guess more heads will fly. AWESOME!!!

lol xd yes and the girl isn't suppose to seem annoying T_T
She was only standing up for Gabe, though she is a bit arrogant. xd
:zonder: action always makes things interesting!
 
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