Nothing Is What It Seems Chapter 5

[DeathDreamer]

As i thought another great chapter by the best write ive ever seen.

 

[Maina Deah]

Nice! the story is gettin' better!

 

[Seffy]

As i thought another great chapter by the best write ive ever seen.

:hug: ty!

Nice! the story is gettin' better!

yes every good story builds up to some amazing plots

 

[iamkawaii08]

can't wait for the update..!! :T_T: the torture big sis..:T_T:

 

[Seffy]

can't wait for the update..!! :T_T: the torture big sis..:T_T:

lol i haven't even started chapter 6 yet xd
I will have to get it out before the 15th though, if that eases your mind. :hug:

 

[Reborn]

I'm finally caught up...I liked the chapter, but for some reason I liked ch 1-3 a little more then than this one and the previous one...although it's just a prefrence of individual chapters everything here was still good, it's just the first three chapters appealed to me more.

 

[Seffy]

I'm finally caught up...I liked the chapter, but for some reason I liked ch 1-3 a little more then than this one and the previous one...although it's just a prefrence of individual chapters everything here was still good, it's just the first three chapters appealed to me more.

lol yay! you did catch up Everyone has their prefferences but if I continued on from after chapter 3 without introducing new characters, it would have gotten stale. chapters 3 and 5 are my faves where as others think the other was better than the last. It's all on how we see things I guess. Either way ty for reading and I do enjoy your feedback

 

[Uchiha Paulsama]

it is an original story so i call it a fanfic

dude this fan fic is great, ive been a fan since chapter 1!xd


this was an epic chapter, it keeps getting better and better, that vincent guy has the perfect fighting attitude calm and collective, that chick is wild! lol she is very revengeful but hey none of us are perfect, but i didnt expect her to give gabriel that gold, that was generous of her,

cant wait for chapter 6! its like reading the manga, dont stop

 

[Seffy]

dude this fan fic is great, ive been a fan since chapter 1!xd


this was an epic chapter, it keeps getting better and better, that vincent guy has the perfect fighting attitude calm and collective, that chick is wild! lol she is very revengeful but hey none of us are perfect, but i didnt expect her to give gabriel that gold, that was generous of her,

cant wait for chapter 6! its like reading the manga, dont stop

lol xd yeah i know u have been a fan for so long :hug: I'm very greatful for that as well! Elizabeth maybe a handful, but she's not a terrible person. You will see more of what I mean next chapter. He would have to be to have some history with Elizabeth lol ty ty and i won't hopefully 6 will be out befor ac comes out on the 15th (shooting for it anyways)

 

[iamkawaii08]

lol i haven't even started chapter 6 yet xd
I will have to get it out before the 15th though, if that eases your mind. :hug:

can't wait for Nov. 15 to come then..:T_T:
yay!! ..I'm always here to cheer yah..

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[Seffy]

can't wait for Nov. 15 to come then..:T_T:
yay!! ..I'm always here to cheer yah..

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lol aw :hug: ty and I said i'd have to have it out before the 15th :silly: ac comes out xd and i'm rocking that game! lol

 

[SHARINGAN_USER UCHIHA_ITACHI]

Elizabeth.....honestly i had thought ya'd use this....love her<3 and her Blue eyes...!!!! xd
btw its awesome...great thinking....!!!

 

[Seffy]

Elizabeth.....honestly i had thought ya'd use this....love her<3 and her Blue eyes...!!!! xd
btw its awesome...great thinking....!!!

lol yeah Elizabeth and Vincent are my favorite names! Just need to have a boy now >.> lol doubtful! I don't want another kid
^_^ ty for reading it! I'm truly honored that you do.

 

[SHARINGAN_USER UCHIHA_ITACHI]

lol yeah Elizabeth and Vincent are my favorite names! Just need to have a boy now >.> lol doubtful! I don't want another kid
^_^ ty for reading it! I'm truly honored that you do.

lmao.....!!!! xd
and no prob..!!! :hug:

 

[Rand al'Thor]

Awesome vincent and elizabeth are so badass...!!!

 

[Seffy]

Awesome vincent and elizabeth are so badass...!!!

lol yes they are

 

[~Uzumaki~]

Beheading....just keeps getting better and better, since the authorities are here to fight Vince and the annoying girl I guess more heads will fly. AWESOME!!!

 

[Seffy]

Beheading....just keeps getting better and better, since the authorities are here to fight Vince and the annoying girl I guess more heads will fly. AWESOME!!!

lol xd yes and the girl isn't suppose to seem annoying T_T
She was only standing up for Gabe, though she is a bit arrogant. xd
:zonder: action always makes things interesting!