Nothing Is What It Seems Chapter 4

[Rozzy]

like the way you made this chapter so it could leave you open to aload of options great chapter this is where the boy makes friends on his journey i think

 

[Seffy]

like the way you made this chapter so it could leave you open to aload of options great chapter this is where the boy makes friends on his journey i think

lol ty and of course xd

 

[Reborn]

As usual, I have nothing to complain about with this story...I feel like Gabriel would've gotten sick or something from handling so many bodies. I mean all that blood...it is not healthy at all lol. I hope he scrubbed down before he left.

 

[Seffy]

As usual, I have nothing to complain about with this story...I feel like Gabriel would've gotten sick or something from handling so many bodies. I mean all that blood...it is not healthy at all lol. I hope he scrubbed down before he left.

lol yes I said he washed up or was it cleaned up before he gathered his things to go look for money for his trip. xd He got sick in the begining but he found himself able to over come it after.

 

[Reborn]

lol yes I said he washed up or was it cleaned up before he gathered his things to go look for money for his trip. xd He got sick in the begining but he found himself able to over come it after.

Oh I must have missed the washing part. But what I meant by sick was by actual disease, and it was a kind of joke lol

 

[Seffy]

Oh I must have missed the washing part. But what I meant by sick was by actual disease, and it was a kind of joke lol

"He took haste in packing a bag of necessities, after changing into some fresh clothes and washing up."

as stated in the story lol I didn't want to linger on such things :/
I understand what you're saying now *shivers* the very thought of touching a dead body creeps me out. I don't want to think about having to catch something from the actual contact of it xd

 

[Roger23]

awesome chapter yet again

 

[Seffy]

awesome chapter yet again

lol ty xd and now you're all caught up

 

[Roger23]

lol ty xd and now you're all caught up

thanks to you

 

[~Yubel~]

You are a special chick as your username says.

 

[Seffy]

thanks to you

it wasn't a problem at all happy that my story was able to entrain you.

You are a special chick as your username says.

I hope that it's special in a good way xd lol
Ty

 

[~Elixir~]

now tht was a real cliffhanger u put it at the end....

i'm sure gabriel would now come in to picture...

 

[Seffy]

now tht was a real cliffhanger u put it at the end....

i'm sure gabriel would now come in to picture...

yeah it was kind of a mean one xd lol

 

['Kurapika]

:worshippy: wow i'm speachless
i wonder if this girl is the one who sticked the knife in that corps's eye in the last chapter

 

[Seffy]

:worshippy: wow i'm speachless
i wonder if this girl is the one who sticked the knife in that corps's eye in the last chapter

lol she had nothing to do with that xd
and actually this is chapter wasn't my best ty for reading it! Glad you liked it ^_^

 

['Kurapika]

lol she had nothing to do with that xd
and actually this is chapter wasn't my best ty for reading it! Glad you liked it ^_^

it would of been so bad ass if she was one of the assassin's xd
and wth thank me for reading it
i should pay you for reading it

 

[Seffy]

it would of been so bad ass if she was one of the assassin's xd
and wth thank me for reading it
i should pay you for reading it

i'm thanking u for ur support xd lol
nah she plays to big of a role, oooooo just wait lol i have something special in mind that's all i can say
lol :hug:

 

[SHARINGAN_USER UCHIHA_ITACHI]

lol lil sad story but nice and great effort, you are very good at words....!!!

and i think his mother was kidnapped by his father's Mafia..!!! xd

 

[Seffy]

lol lil sad story but nice and great effort, you are very good at words....!!!

and i think his mother was kidnapped by his father's Mafia..!!! xd

:rofl: The Mafia?! you crack me up! :hug: ty for reading it. I'm honored by your kind words

 

[rezaamani]

wonderful context.I liked the part gabriel yelling and puching the mirror it was just like in the films,well the lady with knife looked scary ,I hope you wouldn't use one against me when you become a famous writer and I COME TO you for an autograph ;-)