Nothing Is What It Seems Chapter 4

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wonderful context.I liked the part gabriel yelling and puching the mirror it was just like in the films,well the lady with knife looked scary ,I hope you wouldn't use one against me when you become a famous writer and I COME TO you for an autograph ;-)

lol the lady with the knife isn't suppose to look scary xd she has child like features. >.> knife what knife *hides my throwing knife* jk, glad you liked it!
 

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lol the lady with the knife isn't suppose to look scary xd she has child like features. >.> knife what knife *hides my throwing knife* jk, glad you liked it!

oh please I was also joking sarah,But really I am looking forward to a day you become a famous writer,can i have an autograph then?<3
 

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Really nice i totally hope that this thing turns into a novel one day or even better...an actual anime (i totally love this)
 

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Really nice i totally hope that this thing turns into a novel one day or even better...an actual anime (i totally love this)

ty so much! yeah i'm actually working on the novel verison of it now, so it's going to be better than this. I hope to anyways ^_^ I'm glad you enjoyed it!
 

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Amazingly detailed....The girl sounds supercool and loved the 'what happens next' ending.... hopping to the next chapter... :)
 

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Me: Looks at ending paragraph* o_O, What happens!
 

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Murder seems to be commonplace(referring to the girl with the skull stabbing, she's cool btw).
Hasn't Gabe seen enough blood? If I were him I'd walk out of that place and follow the nearest scent of food I pick up. People just killin' each other.
So its as I thought, Dad beat up Gabriel so that he won't die in massacre. Dad losing to two assassins is pretty embarrassing, hope there's more to it than that.
 

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Murder seems to be commonplace(referring to the girl with the skull stabbing, she's cool btw).
Hasn't Gabe seen enough blood? If I were him I'd walk out of that place and follow the nearest scent of food I pick up. People just killin' each other.
So its as I thought, Dad beat up Gabriel so that he won't die in massacre. Dad losing to two assassins is pretty embarrassing, hope there's more to it than that.

The person to whom he was killed by, is nowhere near embarrassing.
If you want things done right, you hire the best :p
Everything is tied together in one way or another :hint: ^_^
ty for reading! :hug:
 

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Amazing And a new chracter, cant wait to find out what heppens next and who she is :D
 
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