Nothing Is What It Seems Chapter 2

[rezaamani]

sounds painful >.< but i'm glad you enjoyed and I'm sure your father was strict so that way you could make it far in life, not out of cruelty

ya it does sound,and you are right,he didn't do it out of cruelty .I was very glad when reading this part it reminded me my childhood and i could touch a few moments of it,Thank you for yournice words Sarah

 

[Prince Saiomora]

 

[UzumakiNarutoFan]

I could actually visualise the fight between them...gr8 story telling....

 

[Seffy]

ya it does sound,and you are right,he didn't do it out of cruelty .I was very glad when reading this part it reminded me my childhood and i could touch a few moments of it,Thank you for yournice words Sarah

np :hug:

lol glad you liked it

I could actually visualise the fight between them...gr8 story telling....

ty I try to paint a picture for the reader so they don't have to think too much about what's going on. Hopefully my novel verison that I have been working on clears that all up better

 

[Rand al'Thor]

finished it..as expected anodr mindlowing chp..*goes to chp 3*

 

[Zeref]

i loved it nice job

 

[Synister.]

So good wease: