Nothing Is What It Seems Chapter 2

[Rozzy]

what type of book are you working on?

 

[JJR]

Finally read it!
idk if is better than the first one. They are equally good
Good job

 

[Seffy]

Finally read it!
idk if is better than the first one. They are equally good
Good job

lol ty

what type of book are you working on?

a romance (sort of) lol it's not your typical lovey dovey story but either way it's still classified under romance.

 

[Two]

Awesome!!!

 

[DeathDreamer]

o.o i really like this chapter i cant wait for the next one o.o :hug:

 

[Maina Deah]

great Sarah dear I'll read the next chap

 

[iamkawaii08]

you write very well.. cause I can actually picture it in my mind...very good!!
but Gab's father is a MEANIE..but lol.. I know he has his reasons but still.. give this to that meanie.. lol.. good job

 

[Seffy]

great Sarah dear I'll read the next chap

lol ty

you write very well.. cause I can actually picture it in my mind...very good!!
but Gab's father is a MEANIE..but lol.. I know he has his reasons but still.. give this to that meanie.. lol.. good job

yes he has his reasons U_U but he was a little harsh about it. :/

 

[Reborn]

Gabriel's father is officially my favorite character...I don't know if it's well placed, but I have a feeling that something is going to happen to the father that is going to surprise people...although you've releaced 3 more chapters so for all I know I could be wrong already lolxd

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[Seffy]

o.o i really like this chapter i cant wait for the next one o.o :hug:

:hug: ty for reading

Awesome!!!

ty

Gabriel's father is officially my favorite character...I don't know if it's well placed, but I have a feeling that something is going to happen to the father that is going to surprise people...although you've releaced 3 more chapters so for all I know I could be wrong already lolxd

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lol yeah well I guess you'll just have read the others xd
:hug: ty for the support

 

[Roger23]

another good chapter

 

[Seffy]

another good chapter

ty

 

[Roger23]

ty

welcome

 

[~Elixir~]

Simply Great work ....

Love the fight between the Autocrat & his Kid... i think kid should do this to his dad.....

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Apart from that I love the way u describe things.... its been awesome.... i'm really going to finish it off today...

 

[Seffy]

Simply Great work ....

Love the fight between the Autocrat & his Kid... i think kid should do this to his dad.....

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Apart from that I love the way u describe things.... its been awesome.... i'm really going to finish it off today...

lol yes that would have been funny!
Thank you

 

[SHARINGAN_USER UCHIHA_ITACHI]

Awesome job... xd
and lol is his father a Gangster..!!?

 

[Seffy]

Awesome job... xd
and lol is his father a Gangster..!!?

lol something like that
ty for reading it! your feed back is most appreciated :hug:

 

[SHARINGAN_USER UCHIHA_ITACHI]

lol something like that
ty for reading it! your feed back is most appreciated :hug:

Gangster then Mafia_O- ...lol i think it'll be fun in reading it...!!!
and i'm honored xd thanks alot.....!!! :hug:

 

[rezaamani]

wow .It remined me of my father and how disciplned and strict he was towrads me at schoo ,he was my teacher when I was 8 years old, and also when I was 11, he didn't cut into my flesh but in order to make me learn he punished me with putting six pens between each two fingers and them squeezing my hands while on echother with his bbothhands,beive it or not it wa the worst punishment ever of all times,Thank you,i REALLY ENJOYED reading HERE TOO.

 

[Seffy]

wow .It remined me of my father and how disciplned and strict he was towrads me at schoo ,he was my teacher when I was 8 years old, and also when I was 11, he didn't cut into my flesh but in order to make me learn he punished me with putting six pens between each two fingers and them squeezing my hands while on echother with his bbothhands,beive it or not it wa the worst punishment ever of all times,Thank you,i REALLY ENJOYED reading HERE TOO.

sounds painful >.< but i'm glad you enjoyed and I'm sure your father was strict so that way you could make it far in life, not out of cruelty