Nothing Is What It Seems Chapter 2
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DeathDreamer
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o.o i really like this chapter i cant wait for the next one o.o :hug:
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great Sarah dear
I'll read the next chap
I'll read the next chap
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you write very well.. cause I can actually picture it in my mind...very good!!
but Gab's father is a MEANIE..but lol.. I know he has his reasons but still.. give this to that meanie..
lol.. good job 
but Gab's father is a MEANIE..but lol.. I know he has his reasons but still.. give this to that meanie..
lol.. good job lol tygreat Sarah dear
you write very well.. cause I can actually picture it in my mind...very good!!
but Gab's father is a MEANIE..but lol.. I know he has his reasons but still.. give this to that meanie..
yes he has his reasons U_U but he was a little harsh about it. :/
Gabriel's father is officially my favorite character...I don't know if it's well placed, but I have a feeling that something is going to happen to the father that is going to surprise people...although you've releaced 3 more chapters so for all I know I could be wrong already lolxd
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Simply Great work ....
Love the fight between the Autocrat & his Kid... i think kid should do this to his dad.....
Apart from that I love the way u describe things.... its been awesome.... i'm really going to finish it off today...
Love the fight between the Autocrat & his Kid... i think kid should do this to his dad.....
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Apart from that I love the way u describe things.... its been awesome.... i'm really going to finish it off today...
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Awesome job... xd
and lol is his father a Gangster..!!?
and lol is his father a Gangster..!!?
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lol something like that
ty for reading it! your feed back is most appreciated :hug:
Gangster then Mafia_O- ...lol i think it'll be fun in reading it...!!! and i'm honored xd thanks alot.....!!! :hug:
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wow .It remined me of my father and how disciplned and strict he was towrads me at schoo ,he was my teacher when I was 8 years old, and also when I was 11, he didn't cut into my flesh but in order to make me learn he punished me with putting six pens between each two fingers and them squeezing my hands while on echother with his bbothhands,beive it or not it wa the worst punishment ever of all times,Thank you,i REALLY ENJOYED reading HERE TOO.