Nothing Is What It Seems Chapter 15

[Reborn]

There's that favorite phrase of yours, crimson liquid xd

Baby go back, she just cut the mofo's head off without a second thought and the blood sprayed onto her...very lady like

This demon...I have a feeling since we were talking about blood drinking rituals last chapter and then in the beginning of this one we're talking about how Anilla's brother lost his humanity and his soul. Oh well he's dead though, I mean that's what you said...or was it a play on words

I hope my prediction is right :T_T:

 

[Seffy]

There's that favorite phrase of yours, crimson liquid xd

Baby go back, she just cut the mofo's head off without a second thought and the blood sprayed onto her...very lady like

This demon...I have a feeling since we were talking about blood drinking rituals last chapter and then in the beginning of this one we're talking about how Anilla's brother lost his humanity and his soul. Oh well he's dead though, I mean that's what you said...or was it a play on words

I hope my prediction is right :T_T:

It has it's appeal to me
She didn't cut his head off, the mysterious figure did.
lol guess you will have to read chapter 16

 

[Aze]

There is certain pressure between Vinc and Ely , I love this...the cliffhanger was pretty good IMO.

And again I can sense some writing skills in this one , although it seemed to me that somewhere in the middle you maybe rushed a little bit or you had somekind of other idea there and replaced it.

Well anyways I got mental images from reading this

Thanks again + Rep

 

[Seffy]

There is certain pressure between Vinc and Ely , I love this...the cliffhanger was pretty good IMO.

And again I can sense some writing skills in this one , although it seemed to me that somewhere in the middle you maybe rushed a little bit or you had somekind of other idea there and replaced it.

Well anyways I got mental images from reading this

Thanks again + Rep

Actually you are absolutely right!
I started going one way with it and changed it at the last moment xd
I did rush a little bit :ghehe: but that's because I was so excited about the next chapter ^_^ which I had Bod read over to make sure it was perfect!
Ty for reading and I enjoy the feed back as you pick up on things others don't!

 

[Rand al'Thor]

Sarah: You are officially my mind blower..O_O

 

[Seffy]

Sarah: You are officially my mind blower..O_O

:rofl: ty :hug:

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

So the killer is revealed to be Gabriel's uncle-I was not expecting that! The bickering between Gabriel, Vincent and Sophia was humorous. I also didn’t expect Elizabeth to decapitate the Prince but given her raw persona I shouldn’t have been surprised-she is a bloodthirsty one! lol The ending was left off in an intriguing cliffhanger-which I liked very much!

You were so worried before this release as you mentioned in the bottom of the chapter but you’re a natural when it comes to FF. You have nothing to worry about as you are an incredible writer-just never forget it. I will have to read the last chapter most likely tomorrow as my time has pretty much ran out -_- Until then ^.^

 

[Seffy]

So the killer is revealed to be Gabriel's uncle-I was not expecting that! The bickering between Gabriel, Vincent and Sophia was humorous. I also didn’t expect Elizabeth to decapitate the Prince but given her raw persona I shouldn’t have been surprised-she is a bloodthirsty one! lol The ending was left off in an intriguing cliffhanger-which I liked very much!

You were so worried before this release as you mentioned in the bottom of the chapter but you’re a natural when it comes to FF. You have nothing to worry about as you are an incredible writer-just never forget it. I will have to read the last chapter most likely tomorrow as my time has pretty much ran out -_- Until then ^.^

She's not really bloodthirsty, just very hot headed and temperamental. I'm glad to hear you liked the cliff hanger! =DD Ty for your kind words and I can only hope that this will one day make an awesome novel. xd :hug: Ty for the encouragement and same goes for you as well! ^_^ Thank you for taking the time to read it! :ice: