Noni continues my Lightning

[Souji]

(I can't apologize enough once again for the late reply.)

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(Raiton: Jurokuchu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Sixteen-Pillar Bind
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the needed hand seals Rat ? Monkey ? Horse ? Tiger the user will create a even more powerful version of lightning release: four pillar bind, the user creates sixteen giant pillars, which then form a giant oven to trap the enemy. It is often used after Earth Release: Mud Fall to cover the enemy target in mud and then follow up with using Fire release: Firing Biscuit, creating flames in the oven to roast and harden the mud, immobilizing the enemy.

Strong points

• A stronger version of of the Lightning Release: Four Pillar Bind Technique.
• The pillars act as a way to trap the enemy, making it very useful in combination jutsus.
• This can be used to change the area of the battlefield in the user's favor.

Weak points

• Short ranged.
• The possibility of being trapped with the opponent exists, if I'm not out of range when the pillars erupt.
• Seems more like a support technique rather than an all out offensive one; not ideal for fighters who just like throwing jutsu out there.

Combinations-strategies The most obvious way would be to follow the combination as listed in the description. Otherwise, I could trap my enemy inside the pillars, and use some form of large scale water technique to flood the inside of the enclosure. When this makes contact with the lightning emitted, it will result in an incredibly deadly combination.

Ways to counter this technique I'd try to find some way to climb my way up the pillars, or destroy them. Perhaps large scale Earth Techniques that can destroy the ground can throw the pillars out of sync. Also,

Questions What exactly are the pillars made of? Lightning? Earth? How would I then be able to destroy them? If I don't use this with another jutsu as a combination, can it attack on its own, and how does it do so?

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(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact.

Strong points

• This can be used as a surprise attack; the extended range can even pierce more than one target!
• Splitting the chidori spear increases its ability to maim as well as the number of targets it can hit.
• Good for numbing, paralyzing the target.

Weak points

• If used by a non-expert, it has the standard chidori weakness.
• Travels in a linear path so it can be easily predicted and countered.
• Not as useful as the other Chidori techniques, such as the chidori senbon or nagashi.

Combinations-strategies Honestly, this is a very simple, one trick pony jutsu. I can't really find any creative combinations, other than perhaps having a chidori ready and faking the enemy into a false sense of security, and then firing the chidori spear when they least expect it.

Ways to counter this technique A wind technique of B-rank or higher is enough to stop the chidori. Staying out of range or dodging using a simple jutsu should also work as well. It essentially boils down to being able to read how the opponent uses the technique; if they simply fire it without any strategy it shouldn't be too hard to counter.

Questions Can this jutsu "reflect" off surfaces? Like, if it hits something, can it reflect, bending and approaching from another direction?

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(Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of wind and electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.

Strong points

• A lightning tornado is pretty OP, to be honest.
• Can be used to protect myself, fast and easy to perform.
• The lightning acts as an extension of the vortex, allowing to somewhat increase the technique's range.

Weak points

• The user must stay concentrated on performing the technique and while it's being used.
• If the lightning and wind chakra make contact in some way, the technique is nullified.
• The vortex's range is limited.

Combinations-strategiesI'd use this as a cover jutsu for another one that I'd launch behind it. So maybe an Earth technique from behind the opponent while they're focused on the vortex. Furthermore, I could also use this to keep an opponent off-balance, also shocking them when they're attempting to evade.

Ways to counter this technique A wind/fire combination jutsu is the complete bane of the technique. Otherwise, higher ranked wind techniques or fire techniques separately should also do the trick. Maybe I could get some way to make the lightning and wind chakra to make contact with each other, nullifying the technique. Breaking the user's concentration through some means (genjutsu?) works too.

Questions N/A

 

[Noni]

Questions What exactly are the pillars made of? Lightning? Earth? How would I then be able to destroy them? If I don't use this with another jutsu as a combination, can it attack on its own, and how does it do so?

Questions Can this jutsu "reflect" off surfaces? Like, if it hits something, can it reflect, bending and approaching from another direction?

They are made of earth, using a wind to cut through them is proper. It attacks on your command. A combo could be to blind the opponent and then rise the pillars. They rise slow so it needs some time and on your command they release the energy.
And no the spear can not do that. Also a combo off the top of my head for the spear is launch the opponent in the air and release the spear it moves so fast it be tough to evade. Just be sure he is in range.

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(Chidori Kireme) - One thousand Birds Breaker
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will deliver several punches and kicks to the opponent sending them into the air where the user will then strike a Chidori into their back.

The user from short range will begin to deliver punches and kicks at the opponent. Now with this small attacks be sure to describe where you are hitting and how. I recommend aiming for areas like the groin, head, and ankles. Then the user will have to deliver a final punch or kick to the chin sending the opponent in the air. From the air they will be hurt from the body attacks, then with great speed you will jump so high and fast your going to appear right behind the opponent in the air, then strike a chidori in their back. Piercing them from behind, the movement is very quick and hard to evade when you jump into the air. I recommend before you start the body attacks try to put the opponent off guard, something basic is sending a flash bomb to blind the opponent for a second, which is all you need to be in range and hit the opponent. Its a devastating jutsu, very deadly.

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(Chidori Tokkan) - One Thousand Birds Rush
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will first strike the target with a slash from their sword hitting them into the air and then as they begin to land the user will drive them into the ground with a Chidori.

This is very much similar to the jutsu from above but with only a sword. Now when the user dash towards the opponent with the sword the user will begin to strike the opponent with the sword slashing them upward into the air, the slash will cut them pretty badly. I would say aim for the stomach or chest, this would make the cut very long as well as have a large place to aim at in the body. In the air they will be vulnerable, when they begin to descend you will once again appear from behind them and send a chidori to crash them back into the ground, great jutsu to use for short range. Very deadly technique.

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(Raiton: Raiko Shishi Rendan) - Lightning Release: Lightning Flash Lion Combo
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user knocks the enemy into the air with thier Sword and jumps at them quickly after. They then proceeds to punch and kick the opponent while still in mid-air. After their combo, the user ducks to the floor, just underneath the opponent. As the opponent reaches him, the user strikes the falling opponent in the back with his Chidori, and then lets the helpless victim falls off.

This is pretty much a combo of the two jutsus above. User will dash towards the opponent and slash upwards sending opponent in the air, while they are in the air you will jump up and begin to deliver a series of punches and kicks sending them even further up. Then with the opponent with serious injuries, the user will drop down to the ground and create a chidori. Then the opponent will fall onto the chidori piercing them. This is a brilliant short range attack and hard to evade. I recommend evasion to be Drunken fist, makes it hard for the opponent to guess your movement and will be unable to touch you. This is a combo in itself.

 

[Souji]

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(Chidori Kireme) - One thousand Birds Breaker
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will deliver several punches and kicks to the opponent sending them into the air where the user will then strike a Chidori into their back.

Strong points

• A very nice mix of Taijutsu and Chidori applications.
• Pushing my opponent into the air is a good way to catch them off guard.
• A wealth of tactical/strategic options if I'm capable of finishing the combo.

Weak points

• This technique requires that I must come up close and personal with my opponent, which may not be the best thing to do in certain situations.
• A better Taijutsu user may even be able to turn the initial barrage against me, preventing me from finishing the combination.
• Chidori weaknesses still apply here.

Combinations-strategies As you suggested, finding a way to trap/immobilize/stun my opponent before beginning my assault would be ideal. Perhaps a flash/smoke bomb would work, or I could even have clones do the dirty Taijutsu work while I sneak in for the kill with the chidori.

Ways to counter this technique Water techniques that push back my foe from getting within close range. Wind techniques that have that equivalent function. In general, the best way to ensure my opponent doesn't find success would be to try and keep them staggered and off balance. maybe, I could raise myself up/destroy the footing of the arena with some form of Earth Technique.

Questions In a fight, could I substitute actual Taijutsu techniques instead of freeforming, and it wouldn't count as extra moves?

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(Chidori Tokkan) - One Thousand Birds Rush
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will first strike the target with a slash from their sword hitting them into the air and then as they begin to land the user will drive them into the ground with a Chidori.

Strong points

• Incorporates deadly Kenjutsu attacks and the Chidori into a simple, effective, combination.
• Strikes the enemy multiple times and pushes them up; fatal if perfectly used.
• The Chidori supplement is able to break through most defenses, especially Earth based ones.

Weak points

• Doesn't work if I don't have a sword of if my enemy finds some way to disable/stop my attacks.
• Short ranged; I can't think of a way to extend the range of this technique, maybe wind blades or something?
• As with the previous techniques, this multi step technique requires a high luck/skill factor to be able to pull off successsfully.

Combinations-strategies While attacking with the sword, I'd maybe try and infuse it with some form of element to increase cutting/slashing power of my techniques... a kentaijutsu style? Or, if I was proficient and descriptive enough, I could wield multiple swords to hit with a faster, stronger flurry of attacks.

Ways to counter this technique Parry with equal amounts of kenjutsu or a technique strong enough to release/break the sword. Genjutsu works charms here because the opponent has to dash up to me, getting within range of falling victim as such.

Questions My question here is the same as the one in the previous technique above; just substitute the phrase "kenjutsu techniques" Lol

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(Raiton: Raiko Shishi Rendan) - Lightning Release: Lightning Flash Lion Combo
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user knocks the enemy into the air with thier Sword and jumps at them quickly after. They then proceeds to punch and kick the opponent while still in mid-air. After their combo, the user ducks to the floor, just underneath the opponent. As the opponent reaches him, the user strikes the falling opponent in the back with his Chidori, and then lets the helpless victim falls off.

Strong points

• A very powerful, lethal combination.
• The opponent is helpless against my assault.
• can be combined with some form of attack that blinds/immobilizes for even greater effect!

Weak points

• Very elaborate and requires a lot of pre planning and isn't as straightforward.
• Again, interrupting this technique will prevent its completion, which is key to its success.
• Short ranged... no real way to perform this without leaving yourself slightly open as you close the range on your opponent.

Combinations-strategies This technique IS a combination. Not sure how else to combine it with other techniques.. maybe clones for extra effectiveness!

Ways to counter this technique As you recommended, Drunken Fist. That's a good counter, senpai! Also, pretty much the same counters as I listed previously.

Questions N/A

 

[Noni]

the punches and slashes are freeform. New template.

[B]Perform the technique:[/B]
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( Raiton: Raiun ) - Lightning Release: Thundercloud
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user generates a cloud above the battlefield kneaded with their chakra and then cause a series of lightning bolts to rain down upon the battlefield causing severe damage.

This is a very wide range technique. The user will create a clouds above the battlefield right above the opponent. The clouds will be generated with with a large amount of raiton chakra. Right when the cloud is made which does not take much time, the cloud will release its energy into a series of fast moving lightning bolts the size of rains. They rain down and cover a wide range. Try not to get caught under the cloud when it launches the bolts or else you can be effected. The bolts can pierce and paralyze. Its great for attacks in the air to distract or create awesome combos difficult for the opponent to evade. All you need to do is form the cloud and then release the bolts, you can move onto the next technique. The cloud though can be blown away with ease.

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( Raiton: Denko Sekka ) – Lightning Release: Lightning Mineralization
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user creates several large electrical balls of energy spread out around them and then causes electrical currents of lightning that spreads out on a vast area shocking any enemy target in the vicinity by connecting with the orbs.

The user will send large bolts of lightning balls all over the field and spread them out. They will be condensed with a large portion of energy. Now they stay dormant until someone touches them, then the energy is released shocking the opponent badly. This is great to change the battlefield in your favor, if you have a pushy opponent or quick one this can help force them back. The balls are sent very quickly and cause great damage on contact. You don't need to remain focused and you can send as many as you need, though the more you send the more weaker each are.

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( Raiton Chidori: Raijin no sakebi ) - Lightning Release One Thousand Chirping Birds: Cry of the Thundergod
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points; 60
Description: The user will attack the opponent with a series of slashes with their sword hitting the opponent into the air where they then finish them off by drilling them back into the ground with a Chidori.

This is very similar to the jutsu we learned previously, only difference is you must do series of slashes instead of just one upward. So the slashes will cause a more confusing disorder but its tougher for evasion, aim for vital areas as well. It does take some more time though and you can counter it during the slashes. When the opponent is finally slashed upwards in the sky, with great speed you will jump so high and fast your going to appear right behind the opponent in the air, then strike a chidori in their back. Piercing them from behind, the movement is very quick and hard to evade when you jump into the air.

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[Souji]

(I like this format a lot more, senpai U_U )

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( Raiton: Raiun ) - Lightning Release: Thundercloud
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user generates a cloud above the battlefield kneaded with their chakra and then cause a series of lightning bolts to rain down upon the battlefield causing severe damage.

Perform the technique:

I begin by gathering and molding Raiton chakra within my body, allowing it to surge through my chakra system. I then release this excess into the sky, invisible to the naked eye. This chakra then gathers around and above senpai and myself, reacting with the clouds and particles in the air to begin the formation of storm clouds, which cover up the rays of the sun, making the weather cloudy and grey. Then, once that is complete, I direct my chakra within the clouds, applying shape transformation to form the lightning energy into small bolts that are around the size of standard raindrops. With a flick of my wrist, I send down this "lightning rain" down to the ground, in a torrent of bolts.

Creative uses/strengths:

This jutsu is strong against even the best Earth defensive techniques. It has a large area of effect and can hit multiple targets or perhaps even larger ones, such as summonings. Furthermore, as a combination, I could perhaps perform an Earth Technique that attacks from the bottom, whilst simultaneously performing this technique, to create an assault from the top and bottom to make it almost unavoidable, which would be further compounded if I use a move at the end that attacks from the front.

Drawbacks/counters:

It's pretty short ranged so it requires a good setup. Wind techniques will blow it away, or staying out of range should also be sufficient; maybe using a technique that does so will work. Can also be blocked by large scale techniques or even summonings. Perhaps I could also channel a Raiton technique to the clouds to cancel out the raining bolts.

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( Raiton: Denko Sekka ) – Lightning Release: Lightning Mineralization
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user creates several large electrical balls of energy spread out around them and then causes electrical currents of lightning that spreads out on a vast area shocking any enemy target in the vicinity by connecting with the orbs.

Perform the technique:

This time, I apply both shape and nature transformation to create spheres of electricity in my hands. I toss them around the training ground, like lobbing balls. Then, I take a rock and toss it at one of the spheres, which causes it to explode in an electric shock that impacts the surrounding area.

Creative uses/strengths:

These are essentially mines, and can be very useful to catch an opponent by surprise or detonate on the battlefield to throw off balance or change the terrain of the battle. I could use this in conjunction with an Earth technique to quickly get rid of my opponent's footing, changing the battlefield in my favor. I can perhaps even disguise the balls so that the opponent will unsuspectingly step on one, a surprise attack!

Senpai, can I control when the balls can detonate or is it only by contact?

Drawbacks/counters:

These balls are only as good as how far I can throw them. Wind techniques can dissipate the lightning balls. Using a water technique to remotely detonate the balls would also work!

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( Raiton Chidori: Raijin no sakebi ) - Lightning Release One Thousand Chirping Birds: Cry of the Thundergod
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points; 60
Description: The user will attack the opponent with a series of slashes with their sword hitting the opponent into the air where they then finish them off by drilling them back into the ground with a Chidori.

Perform the technique:

Taking out my sword, I perform a series of freeform slashes at a target, hitting it in critical areas like the head, body, and legs. Then, I swipe upward, causing the target to clear the ground and fly into the air. I perform the required hand seals quickly after, and cause lightning to crackle in my hand; I had formed a Chidori in my hand. I then leap up, behind the target, allowing my hand to pierce the target's chest area as I thrust my Chidori hand through the center.

Creative uses/strengths:

Seems pretty straightforward. Good for closing the distance between myself and the enemy. Also, the hits are hard to evade if done properly. Fast and easy to execute. Maybe use it with a clone to cover my open guard so that I can complete the technique without being at risk to get countered.

Drawbacks/counters:

The weaknesses inherent in the Chidori are still present. If my opponent is at long/mid range, it's harder for me to close the distance. A skilled Kenjutsu user will be able to block my strikes, or a wise user will try to stagger my charge with some form of earth technique, or use it as an opportunity to cast a Genjutsu due to the technique's linearity.

 

[Noni]

They do so on contact when a force tries to stop them.

Well that marks the end for A-Ranks. Now I want you to look through the A-Ranks of lightning and make a list 1-5 (1 being highest) and place the jutsus in any position you like and feel they deserve. Also explain why you feel this way and lastly this is your opinion so you are not wrong in this part

 

[Souji]

Ok, here's my opinion on the A-ranks!

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(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.

I like this technique because it has offensive and defensive utility. However, I've seen this technique misused a lot in battles, and as a result can lead to a lot of contention in battles.

Just exactly what are the capabilities of this technique, senpai? That way, I don't make nooby mistakes. What's your experience with using it?

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(Raiton: Jurokuchu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Sixteen-Pillar Bind
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the needed hand seals Rat ? Monkey ? Horse ? Tiger the user will create a even more powerful version of lightning release: four pillar bind, the user creates sixteen giant pillars, which then form a giant oven to trap the enemy. It is often used after Earth Release: Mud Fall to cover the enemy target in mud and then follow up with using Fire release: Firing Biscuit, creating flames in the oven to roast and harden the mud, immobilizing the enemy.

This technique is good for taking out large scale Earth techniques or even things like summons. Has a wealth of combination options and hard to counter unless my opponent takes out the pillars. Seems very versatile.

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( Raiton: Denko Sekka ) – Lightning Release: Lightning Mineralization
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user creates several large electrical balls of energy spread out around them and then causes electrical currents of lightning that spreads out on a vast area shocking any enemy target in the vicinity by connecting with the orbs.

Essentially, Lightning mines. Good for strategies and keeping my enemies on my toes, making them have to fight on my terms!

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(Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of wind and electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.

The extended reach of the technique and the deceptive nature of the tornado will help against multiple elements. The wind can stop lightning and the lightning will destroy earth.

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(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact.

Of the multitude of Chidori techniques, I just like the way this one works as compared to the others, based on what I've seen in the anime.

 

[Noni]

Your list is very good. Well for the Nagashi other then what I already said when I explained it to you. I personally love using it with my weapons. It has no damage ability though it does hurt getting caught its main to paralyze. We have seen people hit with the Nagashi and live. So don't think its a instant kill attack. Other then that mistake most people make everything else I explained.

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(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user after performing the hand seal snake emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands whilst kakuzu lightning mask emits it from its mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

With one hand seal the user will generate lightning chakra on their hands and release the lightning and mold it into a spear. This is very similar to the B-Rank False darkness spear. The spear though is much more powerful and runs much quicker, its attack potency is high and can pierce through even the strongest of earth. The spears act to pierce the opponent and paralyze them when pierced. The technique though does not go long range. The spear can only be cut away using a equal rank lightning jutsu or dispersed by a wind technique. Lastly the spears can split on the users command to deceive, or attack more then one target. Its a fast performance, projectile based technique.

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(Raiton: Chidori Jinrai) – Lightning Release: 1000 birds ThunderClap.
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: After Performing chidori in mid air the user releases all of the lightning chakra within the chidori to create a Giant Thunder bolt that can be shot at the opponent.

Another Chidori based technique, the user mid-air will perform the chidori and release the lightning chakra from the chidori into a very large thunderbolt which is shot at the opponent, it moves at amazing pace and has great attack potency. Note this technique can only be used if your opponent is in a long range. The bolts can pierce through anything and shock the opponent terribly. Its a projectile based attack after you send the thunderbolt. Its a great jutsu to use if your stuck in mid-air. Its very fast to perform almost instantly since no hand seals are required.

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(Raiton: Chidori Raimei) - Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm
Rank: S
Type:Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a circular area destroying all thats in its way.

Another chidori technique, very fast to perform and easy. The user after making the chidori will spread from the users palm to cover a circular area. Its a fast moving technique and can cut through many attacks as well as shock the opponent badly. Its great to use to push an opponent back. After you send the lightning bolts from your hands it becomes a projectile based attack, its great to use for combos.

 

[Souji]

I'm back, super senpai! Exams are finally over and Winter break has begun! Let's finish this off!!

*feels more motivated*

I am willing to post as quickly as you are. We could finish today, couldn't we?

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(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user after performing the hand seal snake emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands whilst kakuzu lightning mask emits it from its mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

Perform the technique:

Performing the Snake hand seal, I mold Lightning chakra in my hands. I apply shape transformation and form a triangular shaped lightning spear, which forms around my left hand. I then thrust my left arm forward, which launches the spear at a nearby boulder, splitting it into two. I marvel at the destructive power of the S-rank techniques...

Creative uses/strengths:

This would be pretty great to counter the most powerful Earth techniques. Straightforward, only one hand seal, fast, powerful... pretty OP if used properly.

Drawbacks/counters:

Essentially, I'd need an A-rank wind or higher. Since this technique also has a limited range, I'd try and make myself get long ranged. Multiple layered elemental techniques should also protect me... furthermore, using an equivalent lightning technique should also work.

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(Raiton: Chidori Jinrai) – Lightning Release: 1000 birds ThunderClap.
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: After Performing chidori in mid air the user releases all of the lightning chakra within the chidori to create a Giant Thunder bolt that can be shot at the opponent.

Perform the technique:

I first create a chidori in my right hand. Then, taking a leap into the air, I focus all of the chakra contained within the chidori into a concentrated manner. Then, applying shape and nature transformation, I mold the chidori into a large thunderbolt, which I then release from my hand, dropping it towards the ground beside senpai.

Creative uses/strengths:

Good for a distraction/deception tactic; if I have my clone do this, and charge at the enemy, they'll expect a chidori from them. However, when my clone leaps up into the air and instead performs this technique, it should be able to be large and conspicuous enough for my opponent's attention to be focused and diverted on countering this technique, as I then move in for the kill with another technique to their blind spot!

Drawbacks/counters:

I think most counters to the chidori would work. Wind techniques and water techniques would electrocute/stop my opponent's assault. The key here is to attack my enemy while he/she forms the chidori, or when they are up in the air, at their most vulnerable.

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(Raiton: Chidori Raimei) - Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm
Rank: S
Type:Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a circular area destroying all thats in its way.

Perform the technique:

Creating another chidori (Lol, so many lightning techs are simply chidori variants), I then apply shape manipulation, causing the chidori to expand, and split into multiple lightning bolts, which form a circle of electric death around me, causing the ground to break up as the large amounts of energy surge throughout the training grounds.

Creative uses/strengths:

This would be a good area of effect attack. Also good for escaping large scale trapping Earth techniques. Another chidori variant... there's a lot of them, proof of the technique's versatility.

Drawbacks/counters:

Standard wind techniques, or stay out of the range of the circular attack radius. Also, perhaps I could try and use some form of water technique beforehand, which would deter my opponent from trying to electrocute the ground as there would be water around it.

 

[Noni]

( Raiton: Chidori Shinso ) - One Thousand Birds True Spear
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description:The user starts off by dashing at his opponent with a Chidori in his hand. As they strikes his opponent, they uses shape manipulation to extend the Chidori into a lightning spear that impales and hurtles the opponent into the air. The user then increases the potency of the lightning, generating a powerful electric explosion at the end of the spear and sending the enemy back to the ground.
Note: Only the spear extention can reach up to mid range.

This is a advance version of the lightning spear. Now with the spear alone, you could move it around and cut through many tough rocks. The spear is very useful to keep a distance away from an opponent, it also acts as a chidori which on contact will numb the area of the opponent if caught. You can wield the spear with great ease, it can cut through the most solid of metals. Its great to use to finish an opponent off, and the spear when release is very quickly. Now the spear extends mid-range (10m). The spear now if the opponent is pierced by it, the user can send extra chakra to the tip to create a explosion which can destroy the opponents inside. Its very deadly.

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(Raigen Raikochu) – Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar
Rank: S
Type: Supplementaty
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing the following handseals Ram ? Horse ? Snake ? Tiger the user will release a massive amount of lighting chakra which he uses to create a blinding light that appears to emanate from all over the users body. The light can blind any enemy that sees it but its main ability is that, through skill and precise chakra control and timing, the user can use it as a cover to put the enemy into a genjutsu by using the light as a decoy, preventing the enemy from noticing the genjutsu was placed.
Note: Can follow with any Genjutsu the user knows up to A-Rank but needs to have mastered Genjutsu. The user will need to effectively spend two moves, performing both the Lightning Illusion and the Genjutsu; the first only serves as a cover to place the second unnoticed
Note: Can only be used once every three turns

After doing the hand seals the opponent will generate a blinding light from their body. The light can easily blind the opponent obscuring the opponents vision, this is best to use against an Uchia, Byakugan users can see through it easy, I would also say its good to use against a Rinnegan user. The performance is quite slow but the light is generated fast. Its a very simple technique, and its meant for combo making. You can anticipate that the opponent will try to use an attack on you. When the user does use this jutsu, they will not be able to even look at the user for the duration. Notes are that the longer you keep generating your chakra the longer the light stays but you must keep focus and can not be able to use another technique. Its great to use with an ally or clone who is right behind you, not worrying about the light.

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(Raiton: Raikiri) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blade
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short (Long if applied to a projectile weapon)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The Lightning Cutter is an enhanced and concentrated form of the Chidori with the same effects and drawbacks that is done performing the Ox ? Rabbit ? Monkey hand seals. According to Might Guy, it gained its name after Kakashi split a bolt of lightning with it. Because the Chidori is already powerful on its own, the Lightning Cutter requires better chakra control, which is exemplified in its appearance. The Chidori appears as simply a mass of white electrical chakra in the user's hand, while the Lightning Cutter is much more focused. Kakashi has shown different ways of forming and using the Lightning Cutter, unique to him. For example, he demonstrated the ability to imbue a projectile weapon, such as a kunai, with his Lightning Cutter, granting the technique long-range capabilities by throwing the kunai towards his target. In this instance, the kunai was capable of piercing through multiple large rocks with ease, without any loss of momentum or change in trajectory.
Note: Kakashi biographies can use the technique without hand seals.
Note: Only Kakashi biographies can apply the technique to a kunai and use it as a projectile attack.

I'll be explaining this technique as if you have a regular bio and not a kakashi bio. The user will do 3 hand seals and create a serious condensed amount of raiton which appears almost completely white. It has a serious amount of power so much though that it can cut through actual lightning making it one of the most powerful techniques in the lightning jutsu list. It is mainly used as a melee weapon great for close range battle. This technique has the ability to cut through many dense objects. In short it is very similar to chidori but in a more advanced form.


Also where is your fire?

 

[Souji]

My Fire is at A-ranks, super senpai

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( Raiton: Chidori Shinso ) - One Thousand Birds True Spear
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description:The user starts off by dashing at his opponent with a Chidori in his hand. As they strikes his opponent, they uses shape manipulation to extend the Chidori into a lightning spear that impales and hurtles the opponent into the air. The user then increases the potency of the lightning, generating a powerful electric explosion at the end of the spear and sending the enemy back to the ground.
Note: Only the spear extention can reach up to mid range.

Perform the technique:

Forming YET ANOTHER chidori in my hand, I run forward, dashing at a nearby target. I then lunge forward, applying shape manipulation that impales the target in its chest area. I then swipe upward, bringing the target up, causing it to go up in the air, but still attached to the tip of the chidori spear I created. Then, surging my Raiton chakra through the end, I electrocute the poor thing and cause a powerful electric explosion, which severely burns the target and releases it from the spear, causing it to fall back to the ground.

Creative uses/strengths:

This is a good way to finish off a weaker opponent. However, standard Chidori weaknesses still apply here, I'd need a more than ideal situation in which I trap my opponent or have someone/something cover me while I perform this technique.

Drawbacks/counters:

The standard chidori counters work here. I can take advantage of my opponent's beeline, or try and use a wind technique to take care of them. Otherwise, I could layer enough defensive techniques to tank the hit as well, or use a clone feint.

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(Raigen Raikochu) – Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar
Rank: S
Type: Supplementaty
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing the following handseals Ram ? Horse ? Snake ? Tiger the user will release a massive amount of lighting chakra which he uses to create a blinding light that appears to emanate from all over the users body. The light can blind any enemy that sees it but its main ability is that, through skill and precise chakra control and timing, the user can use it as a cover to put the enemy into a genjutsu by using the light as a decoy, preventing the enemy from noticing the genjutsu was placed.
Note: Can follow with any Genjutsu the user knows up to A-Rank but needs to have mastered Genjutsu. The user will need to effectively spend two moves, performing both the Lightning Illusion and the Genjutsu; the first only serves as a cover to place the second unnoticed
Note: Can only be used once every three turns

Perform the technique:

Performing the hand seals Ram, Horse, Snake, and Tiger, I then release a massive amount of lightning chakra in the air, which collects and then "bursts", creating a blinding light that makes it look like I'm shining.

Creative uses/strengths:

Oh wow, I like this technique. Great range, good for combinations... very versatile in usage. Perhaps I could use this with a genjutsu, standard or not... but I think the overall effectiveness of the technique depends on what genjutsu the user decides to follow up with.

Drawbacks/counters:

Close my eyes? But then the genjutsu would still be followed up, though. Perhaps, I could protect myself with some form of large Earth technique that obscures the blinding light!

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(Raiton: Raikiri) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blade
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short (Long if applied to a projectile weapon)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The Lightning Cutter is an enhanced and concentrated form of the Chidori with the same effects and drawbacks that is done performing the Ox ? Rabbit ? Monkey hand seals. According to Might Guy, it gained its name after Kakashi split a bolt of lightning with it. Because the Chidori is already powerful on its own, the Lightning Cutter requires better chakra control, which is exemplified in its appearance. The Chidori appears as simply a mass of white electrical chakra in the user's hand, while the Lightning Cutter is much more focused. Kakashi has shown different ways of forming and using the Lightning Cutter, unique to him. For example, he demonstrated the ability to imbue a projectile weapon, such as a kunai, with his Lightning Cutter, granting the technique long-range capabilities by throwing the kunai towards his target. In this instance, the kunai was capable of piercing through multiple large rocks with ease, without any loss of momentum or change in trajectory.
Note: Kakashi biographies can use the technique without hand seals.
Note: Only Kakashi biographies can apply the technique to a kunai and use it as a projectile attack.

Perform the technique:

Performing the Ox, Ram, and Monkey seals, I concentrate lightning chakra in my hand, focusing and exerting my chakra control to condense the usual white mass of electrical energy into a sharp spear shape, it turns slightly blue from all the concentrated energy, and I focus it, whilst holding my wrist the Raikiri is on in order to ensure its stability.

Creative uses/strengths:

Essentially the same as a Chidori's uses... perhaps less versatile, but a stronger technique. Definitely requires some good planning if the user doesn't have a Sharingan's perception capabilities, for example. Maybe I could do what Kakashi does and try and extend the Raikiri to hit targets at a better range... but I don't think that's possible with a non-Kakashi bio.

Drawbacks/counters:

Just essentially a stronger version of the chidori.. the counters for the latter would work, although they'd need to be on a higher scale and more powerful.

 

[Noni]

Last two.
(Raiton: Raikiri Nibai Raikou Jishin) – Lightning Release: Lightning Blade Double Lightning Quake
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user performs (Raiton: Raikiri) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blade and splits it in two, covering both hands in Lightning. He will then perform a melee attack at the enemy, unleashing the powerful lightning into him.

The user will create the lightning blade and split in in half with the other hand. This will mean the opponent will have two lightning blades in each hand. Each being the power of A-Rank due to splitting them in half. Then with blazing speed you will zig-zag to the opponent and slam them with both the blades killing the opponent and paralyzing them. The speed of the movement is very quick, and due to the zig-zag moving it becomes difficult for the opponent to attack, it would be best to use wide range attack or to manipulate the ground to slow down or trip the opponent up. Its a brilliant technique and harm to counter.

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(Raiton: Kirin) - Lightning Release: Kirin
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 70
Damage Points: 120
Description: After using a fire jutsu to heat the atmosphere and create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
Note: Can only be avoided with time/space techniques or otherwise absolute defenses.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: In the turn before the use of Kirin, the user must have used at least a B-Rank, Long Range Fire (Katon) technique directed at the sky.
Note: User needs to post Chidori, meaning that in the turn Kirin is used, the user spends 2 moves.

The famous jutsu Sasuke portrayed. Now after using at least a B-Rank fire jutsu and sending it into the atmosphere. You will wait one turn for dark storm clouds to generate over the battlefield and they will be with real, large and powerful lightning. Then the user will perform the chidori and then send the lightning dragon from the clouds down towards the opponent. This is one of the most lethal jutsus, now its almost impossible to evade. Only if you have S/T can you evade this technique, other then that you must have a absolute defense. Examples could be that of Susano'o, their are other examples but not on the jutsu list mainly if you have a special bio or able to create a strong custom to defend against it. Now this does not mean you have to take the kirin head on, it takes one turn to create the clouds, so you are best to blow them away with wind technique, its also best to try and make sure the opponent does not have a clear view of yourself. Its one of the deadliest techniques, and tough to stop but it takes very long to perform.

 

[House]

Oh wow, I like this technique. Great range, good for combinations... very versatile in usage. Perhaps I could use this with a genjutsu, standard or not... but I think the overall effectiveness of the technique depends on what genjutsu the user decides to follow up with.

I'm pretty sure there's a lot more then to its strength. Do the whole think again, starting from D-ranks.

 

[Noni]

I'm pretty sure there's a lot more then to its strength. Do the whole think again, starting from D-ranks.

:|........................... get out.

 

[House]

Last two.
(Raiton: Raikiri Nibai Raikou Jishin) – Lightning Release: Lightning Blade Double Lightning Quake
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user performs (Raiton: Raikiri) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blade and splits it in two, covering both hands in Lightning. He will then perform a melee attack at the enemy, unleashing the powerful lightning into him.

The user will create the lightning blade and split in in half with the other hand. This will mean the opponent will have two lightning blades in each hand. Each being the power of A-Rank due to splitting them in half. Then with blazing speed you will zig-zag to the opponent and slam them with both the blades killing the opponent and paralyzing them. The speed of the movement is very quick, and due to the zig-zag moving it becomes difficult for the opponent to attack, it would be best to use wide range attack or to manipulate the ground to slow down or trip the opponent up. Its a brilliant technique and harm to counter.

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(Raiton: Kirin) - Lightning Release: Kirin
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 70
Damage Points: 120
Description: After using a fire jutsu to heat the atmosphere and create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
Note: Can only be avoided with time/space techniques or otherwise absolute defenses.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: In the turn before the use of Kirin, the user must have used at least a B-Rank, Long Range Fire (Katon) technique directed at the sky.
Note: User needs to post Chidori, meaning that in the turn Kirin is used, the user spends 2 moves.

The famous jutsu Sasuke portrayed. Now after using at least a B-Rank fire jutsu and sending it into the atmosphere. You will wait one turn for dark storm clouds to generate over the battlefield and they will be with real, large and powerful lightning. Then the user will perform the chidori and then send the lightning dragon from the clouds down towards the opponent. This is one of the most lethal jutsus, now its almost impossible to evade. Only if you have S/T can you evade this technique, other then that you must have a absolute defense. Examples could be that of Susano'o, their are other examples but not on the jutsu list mainly if you have a special bio or able to create a strong custom to defend against it. Now this does not mean you have to take the kirin head on, it takes one turn to create the clouds, so you are best to blow them away with wind technique, its also best to try and make sure the opponent does not have a clear view of yourself. Its one of the deadliest techniques, and tough to stop but it takes very long to perform.

1st tech; I make raikiri in both hands and my hand goes through like knife through butter.

2nd tech; I blow big fire into sky, sky makes clouds, I make chidori, boom boom grounds.

Anything else?

 

[Noni]

1st tech; I make raikiri in both hands and my hand goes through like knife through butter.

2nd tech; I blow big fire into sky, sky makes clouds, I make chidori, boom boom grounds.

Anything else?

And they call you a sage :|

 

[Souji]

I'm pretty sure there's a lot more then to its strength. Do the whole think again, starting from D-ranks.

:T_T:

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Yay, last two Lightning techniques!!!

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(Raiton: Raikiri Nibai Raikou Jishin) – Lightning Release: Lightning Blade Double Lightning Quake
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user performs (Raiton: Raikiri) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blade and splits it in two, covering both hands in Lightning. He will then perform a melee attack at the enemy, unleashing the powerful lightning into him.

Perform the technique:

I create a Raikiri in my left hand. Then, placing my hands together, I split the technique into two, precisely halving the lightning into each of my hands. They look like they're connected by a lightning tether of some sort. I then rush up to another target, performing a series of punches to various parts of the upper body, unleashing a little lightning that surges through its body with each and every point of contact.

Creative uses/strengths:

Great in a Taijutsu fight. Can also stop high level earth techniques and whatnot. Perhaps doing this with a clone, I can perform the clothesline technique (like what Kakashi did when fighting against the Bijuu in the manga).

Drawbacks/counters:

Raikiri counters x2. Doesn't seem that different from the standard Raikiri technique.

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(Raiton: Kirin) - Lightning Release: Kirin
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 70
Damage Points: 120
Description: After using a fire jutsu to heat the atmosphere and create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
Note: Can only be avoided with time/space techniques or otherwise absolute defenses.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: In the turn before the use of Kirin, the user must have used at least a B-Rank, Long Range Fire (Katon) technique directed at the sky.
Note: User needs to post Chidori, meaning that in the turn Kirin is used, the user spends 2 moves.

Perform the technique:

I begin by performing Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique, molding Katon chakra and sending it towards the sky. This causes the clouds to darken. Then, I form a Chidori in my other hand, sending the lightning chakra to the air, allowing me to manipulate the lightning. Then, I gather both natural lightning and my chakra, causing it to take the shape of a dragon, which emerges from the thunderclouds.

I give a devious smile that betrays my usual personality as I look senpai in the eyes, my own filled with killing intent.

"This is it, senpai. Thank you for everything."

Waving my hand down, the Kirin hits a nearby hill, a safe distance from myself and senpai. It explodes into a pile of earth as the technique causes absolute destruction of the hill, almost leveling it. The shape is still intact after the impact, though.

I wasn't going to hit senpai, what, are you mad? I wouldn't betray a fellow Konoha ninja...

Creative uses/strengths:

Too OP as a technique if it hits. Don't really need to be creative in its uses, since it's almost instantaneous, and is almost guaranteed to kill if it does.

Drawbacks/counters:

Plot no Jutsu should be able to stop it. Or, on a more serious note, I'd stop the user while they were setting up Kirin, that is the primary weakness of the technique... it's the most powerful lightning technique, but it requires plenty of setup and situational awareness in order for it to be effective. That's easily exploitable by a skilled fighter.

 

[Noni]

and he has finished, congrats.

 

[Souji]

Thank you very much, super senpai!! I appreciate the effort you put in and I will be sure to use these techniques wisely and for the sake of my village!

You are one of the best and most consistent teachers I've had! Thank you for putting up with me.



THE WILL OF FIRE BURNS STRONG WITH US #noniforsensei #noniforjuubijin #noniforrpadmin

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