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The almighty great senpai has arrived. Now first I want you to perform the last technique to make sure I know you have a basic understanding in performing a jutsu. Then I ask you; do you want me to be straightforward in our training or shall we add RP in it? All up to you mate.
 

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Mind if I add a little RP? That way it's interesting and not copy pasting :| don't wanna waste your time or mine.




sees his almighty great senpai arrive.

He bows in respect and admiration.

"Thank you for taking the time to teach me, senpai. I look forward to learning from someone as accomplished as you. This was the last jutsu I performed..."

Concentrating his Raiton chakra in his left hand, Yu slams the ground, releasing a surge of lightning that covers a small area, shocking senpai with a mild lightning surge. Nothing life-threatening, though.

(Raiton: Raikou Oonami) - Lightning Release: Lightning Surge
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra and slam their hand on the ground to release a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.

"I hope my execution of the technique was acceptable."
 

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Jumps high into the air, avoiding the technique (don't really do that in battle though XD)

Actually I'm unhappy. Do it again, here are some pointers.

(Raiton: Raikou Oonami) - Lightning Release: Lightning Surge
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra and slam their hand on the ground to release a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.

Same as before focus on your chakra system and gather your raw chakra from all over your body. Send the chakra through your arm all the way to the palm of your hand. Manipulate the nature of the chakra into raiton chakra and slam your hand on the ground and release a surge of lightning through the ground towards the dummy standing next to me. The lightning will shock the dummy from underneath.
 

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(ah, so you want more detailed replies. Yes, I can do that, senpai)

"I apologize, senpai. I will focus!"

Determined to make senpai proud, I take a deep breath and focus.

Gathering the chakra from my chakra system, I begin to channel it towards my left arm, allowing it to flow quickly like a wave through it. My hand tingles as the chakra gathers at my fingertips, as if they're about to explode with energy. Holding it in, I then apply nature transformation, allowing the chakra within me to take the properties of crackling, chaotic lightning! It gives me a fierce sensation that surges through my body.

When it seems like my hand is about to burst, I quickly slam my arm and hand onto the ground directly below me, channeling a surge of lightning chakra through the ground. It's directed towards the dummy next to senpai, and it electrocutes the wooden guy from the ground up, causing the smell of burning wood to erupt as a result.

"Was that better, senpai?"
 

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Much better my student. Now lets continue with only performing them. I want to make sure you are taught right!

(Raiton: Raijingu Sanda) - Lightning Style: Raging Thunder
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user hits the opponent with an electric field shield that covers the users body.

I want you to do the usual, nothing special or different. Gather your raw chakra all over your body and manipulate the nature of the chakra into raiton. Release the raiton chakra all over your body on the edge of your skin, hold it still and condense there. This will create a electric shield around your body. When you are ready dash to the dummy and when you get into close range release the raiton from the edge of your body, the dummy will be caught and shocked badly.
 

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(omg, you actually reply!!! #noniforsensei)

"I appreciate the compliment, senpai!"

(Raiton: Raijingu Sanda) - Lightning Style: Raging Thunder
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user hits the opponent with an electric field shield that covers the users body.

"Alright, let's do this!!" I fist pump, more motivated to continue.

Once again, I gather raw chakra within myself. Applying nature transformation, it takes on the properties of Lightning.

This time, instead of focusing it on one spot, I allow the molded chakra to flow throughout my body. It reaches my chakra points and gathers there, about ready to burst, once again. I then allow the Raiton chakra to slowly leak out of my chakra points and pores, and the surge and sensation is... "shocking", for lack of a better word.

The chakra surges, chaotically. I then focus, sweating beads as I apply shape transformation to contain and condense the chakra to form an electric field that lies just on top of my skin. Senpai notes that it looks like an "aura".

"ARGH!!" I give a battle cry as I dash to the dummy.

Once I reach within close range, I release the Raiton chakra field from my body. It almost looks like an afterimage and outline of my body, as it collides with the dummy and fiercely electrocutes the poor thing.
 

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I'm enjoying the descriptions, very well done my student. Here is the next one I want you to do.

(Raiton: Sandaa Saaburu) - Lightning Style: Thunder Saber
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Hits opponent with an electric field shield that explodes and can blow back the enemy.

Similar to the last one but now with only your hand not entire body. Gather your chakra and send it towards one of your hands. Manipulate the nature of the chakra into raiton and release the raiton creating a lightning energy around your hand. Dash towards that dummy short range of you and thrust your hand on the dummy, releasing the raiton energy shocking the dummy and pushing it back.
 

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"Such power... I can only imagine what the stronger jutsus will be like, senpai..."

(Raiton: Sandaa Saaburu) - Lightning Style: Thunder Saber
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Hits opponent with an electric field shield that explodes and can blow back the enemy.

This time, I focus my Raiton chakra with shape and nature transformation around the chakra points in my right arm. I do the same procedure as the previous technique, allowing it to crackle out of my pores, and create the aura once more, except only around my arm this time.

I swing it around. It makes a -very- distinct buzz/hum sound.

"Senpai, it's like some 'saber of light'! It's a pity this attack is only short ranged..."

I dash towards the dummy, omitting the battle cry; it would probably get too obnoxious if done excessively. I thrust my hand at the dummy's chest area, and the lightning quickly surges from an aura around my body into the dummy itself. It makes a very noticeable Hum/Bzzt sound as it enters the dummy.

There is silence for a moment.

Then, the dummy "pops", erupting with electrical energy and being pushed back some distance.
 

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Damn good, I really am impressed by your effort and determination.
Last D-Rank


(Ration: Ikazuchi Kashou) - Lightning Release: Thunder Burn
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user fires a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent.

Okay the description is not much to work with but I will try to explain it best. This is very similar to the previous jutsu we learned. Focus your chakra and channel it to one of your hands, and then change your chakra into lightning as you release it forward. Manipulate the released lightning into a wave of small lightning bolts that you shoot at the dummy. and...GO!
 

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"I almost feel sorry for the dummies, senpai." I say, chuckling.

(Ration: Ikazuchi Kashou) - Lightning Release: Thunder Burn
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user fires a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent.

This time, I channel my chakra to my hands. I repeat the process of nature and shape transformation, creating the small "lightning aura" around my hands only.

Walking up to a dummy, I size it up, pointing a finger at it.

"What are you looking at, punk?"

The expressionless dummy just stays there, silent.

I cross my lightning chakra-coated arms in an "X" shape. Then, I swipe each of my arms across, releasing the energy as I do so. A stream of crackling lightning leaves a visible energy trail from the trajectory of my swipes. Now, it looks like there is a lightning "X" carved into the air.

From this wave of my hands, small lightning bolts blast out from it, pelting the poor straw dummy with a barrage of basic lightning bolts.

My hands are twitching with the residual chakra; it was seriously empowering.

"There you go, senpai."
 

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You like talking to dummies -__-

Now I deem you good for performance, so from now on we are going to use this scrolls.
sends thousands of scrolls
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Do we have a understanding :p
 

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Okay then lets do this!

(Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+5 if used in conjunction with a water jutsu)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.

Okay now its a simple technique and it vary from being a projectile or a streaming technique, depends on how you use it. The user will send lightning into their hands and release it towards an opponent sending a wave of electricity. You can send a short stream making it a projectile or continue to send it to make it a streaming tech. You can use it with a water technique. Its fast to perform and simple. Its rather straightforward though making evasion easy.

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(Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: By gathering chakra in their hands, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy.

Very much similar like the previous one, the user will gather lightning on the palm of their hand, condense it into a electrical ball of energy. The user will then proceed to throw it towards the opponent. It travels very fast to an opponent, its a projectile and its fast to make.

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(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Rank: C
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user surrounds themselves with electricity. The intense electric field protects them by electrocuting anyone who comes into contact with it, but only works for one attack.

The user will send lightning all over their body creating a armor. It can protect against projectiles and simple attacks. It easy and fast to perform also if you get get into contact with an opponent it sends a electric charge hurting the opponent. Only for one attack then its released. Your also a walking target for water attacks.
 

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"Scrolls? What do you mean, senp-"

As I turn to face him, the thousands of scrolls are in front of me.

"That's a lot of scrolls."

Undeterred, I begin by opening one of them and examining the jutsu that are found within.




(Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+5 if used in conjunction with a water jutsu)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.
Strong points

  • Can beat up to B-rank Earth Jutsu.
  • No hand seal requirement.
  • Variable power can throw an enemy off. They might expect a small surge but actually receive the more powerful version!
Weak points

  • Short range.
  • The wave of electricity is pretty conspicuous and a counter can be thought of by the enemy while it is being cast.
  • If there's no water source, it's not as powerful as its full potential as a technique.
Combinations-strategies

Obviously, from the description, I'd use some form of water jutsu. Maybe, try to get my opponent to stand on some water or douse him/her, making them wet. Then, I'd follow up with this technique to electrocute them, allowing the water to conduct the electricity.

Ways to counter this technique

D-rank Wind jutsus or higher. A defensive Earth Jutsu of A-rank or higher should be able to endure the assault.

Questions

"Senpai, in your opinion or experience, what would be the best water jutsu to use in combination with this technique?"




(Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: By gathering chakra in their hands, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy.

Strong points

  • It's like a Lightning Rasengan! ...ok, bad joke >_<
  • Seems like a simple jutsu that is quick to execute in a pinch
  • No hand seals.
Weak points

  • D-rank wind or higher can easily counter this.
  • Doesn't sound like it has the raw piercing power and damage of other lightning techs.
  • The ball goes in a linear direction, making it predictable.
Combinations-strategies

I'd use this after trapping my opponent in some kind of Earth Jutsu, that way I don't miss when I hurl the lightning ball.

Ways to counter this technique

Use some form of defensive/supplementary jutsu of a higher rank to block. Or, dodge with clones, substitution, etc.

Questions

"Senpai, can I control the Lightning Ball's path with my chakra?"




(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Rank: C
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user surrounds themselves with electricity. The intense electric field protects them by electrocuting anyone who comes into contact with it, but only works for one attack.

Strong points

  • An offensive and defensive technique at the same time; very useful against Taijutsu users.
  • The electric field can be used in conjunction with a water jutsu to conduct electricity!
  • It can conduct against multiple targets, making it a good AoE tech.
Weak points

  • Defense only works for one attack, then it must be reactivated.
  • Wind jutsus easily disperse the armor.
  • Most higher level attacks will be able to defeat the armor's protection and harm the user.
Combinations-strategies

I'd use this in a pinch, maybe when my opponent gets up and close with Tai. Then, I'd surprise them with this tech to get them off my back!

Ways to counter this technique

A D-rank wind tech or better. Basically, a higher ranked jutsu with high power will work in destroying the armor cloak.

Questions

"Senpai, what exactly can this jutsu defend against?"
 

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Explanations and answering
For the first question I would say anything water, projectile type attack and is C-Rank so they combine good with one another.
Second question, no when you send the ball it goes that direction much like a kunai.
Third question, Basic projectile attacks like kunais and shurikens, kunais, shurikens, B-Rank doton, C-Rank lightning and fire. I recommend not using to defend against water and D-Rank wind.
(Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+5 if used in conjunction with a water jutsu)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.

Okay a very simple technique, the user will send a wave of raiton energy from their hands towards the opponent. Depending on how the user uses the technique it can be a stream or a projectile technique. Now it is very simply nothing much to it, its straightforward and moves normal speed. Its best to use with a water technique to give it a more potential attack. Its fast to perform as well. I recommend using this as a projectile technique so you can send one attack after the other to make it harder on the opponent. Now due to it being a straightforward technique evasion is simple as well as blocking. You can use a wind technique to negate. Also with lightning properties if contacted with it, the opponent will be shocked.

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(Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: By gathering chakra in their hands, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy.

The user will gather lightning on the palm of their hand, condense it into a electrical ball of energy. The user will then proceed to throw it towards the opponent. It travels very fast to an opponent, its a projectile and its fast to make. You can aim it anywhere as well. Their is very little to add to this jutsu more then already explained.

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(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Rank: C
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user surrounds themselves with electricity. The intense electric field protects them by electrocuting anyone who comes into contact with it, but only works for one attack.

I like this technique, was my first ever favorite. Now its very fast to perform and set up. This jutsu when active stays active for more then one turn unless already used to block an attack or attack an opponent when in range. Also this gives you a serious advantage in short range battle. Especially if used correctly when you get in range, set it up and take the fight head on. A huge downfall is you are completely open for water attacks, one hit of water and you will be shocked better, its easy for an opponent to figure it out as well since the lightning is visible and you can hear the cracking of lightning, use with caution.

Next set.

(Raiton: Iwa Nadare) - Lightning Style: Stone Avalanche
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: By forming hand seals Snake ? Upside down Tiger ? Hands clapped together and running up a cliff face, the user causes stone and rock above him to become dislodged and rain down past him onto his opponents below by releasing a wave of electrical energy. However, this is extremely location-based and needs to be done uphill of a mountain for it to work.

Okay with 2 hand seals and running up a cliff with their hands clapped together, the user will send lightning towards the cliff dislodging the rocks in the clidd and causing the rocks to begin raining down on the opponent. Now this technique is very location based. Also you must have your hands clapped together while running up so you can continue to release the lightning.

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(Raiton: Shuurai Rappa no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Horn Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will raise their hand infront of them like a sword and it will begin glowing a pale yellow before releasing bolts of lightning in the shapt of a horn that spread outwards allowing it to attack multiple targets.

Underused technique that deserves some credit. The user will raise their hands in front of them and release lightning towards their hand creating a glowing pale yellow color in their hands then quickly release bolts of lightning shaped of a horn. Its spreads outwards while traveling allowing you to attack multiple targets. Fast and easy to perform. Projectile as well pretty darn quick.

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( Raiton: Inazuma ken Fudou ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blades Levitation
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will channel their lightning chakra into their sword to increase its cutting capabilities, and then levitate it in front of them. They will then multiply the sword creating two extra physical copies which are then all manipulated to spin rapidly and are controlled to fly towards and cut through the opponent/s.

Okay you need a sword out, the user will channel lightning into the sword increasing its destructive abilites. They will then manipulate the chakra in the sword to have it levitate in front of them. The using shape manipulating multiply the sword creating another two physical copies made of lightning. They then spin rapidly which finally a user will send towards the opponent cutting them badly if hit. Okay this is a slow performance technique as well as you must remain concentrated to execute perfectly. They move at normal speed as well.
 

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(Raiton: Iwa Nadare) - Lightning Style: Stone Avalanche
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: By forming hand seals Snake ? Upside down Tiger ? Hands clapped together and running up a cliff face, the user causes stone and rock above him to become dislodged and rain down past him onto his opponents below by releasing a wave of electrical energy. However, this is extremely location-based and needs to be done uphill of a mountain for it to work.

Strong points

  • Rock avalanches are definitely lethal.
  • The distance gained between myself and the opponent while running up the cliff face is a potentially useful setup for a follow up attack.
  • Powerful and damaging... can hit multiple targets and change the landscape to my favor!
Weak points

  • Hand seal requirement can cost critical moments in the time frame.
  • Location based, if there's no cliff... you can't really perform the jutsu. Unless you make a cliff.
  • Range is alright, not exceptional. I might get caught in the avalanche if I'm not careful, either.
Combinations-strategies

I'd need to have an arena with a cliff face. However, maybe I could use an Earth Jutsu equivalent that creates something of that scale, and perform the technique as such!

Ways to counter this technique

Destroy the cliff... stay out of range... use powerful wind/water combination jutsus to blow the avalanche away.

Questions

"Are the rocks electrified as they flow as an avalanche? Like can they shock opponents on top of crushing them too?"




(Raiton: Shuurai Rappa no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Horn Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will raise their hand in front of them like a sword and it will begin glowing a pale yellow before releasing bolts of lightning in the shape of a horn that spread outwards allowing it to attack multiple targets.

Strong points

  • My hand becomes, in essence, a lightning blaster. How is that not a strong point?
  • Can attack multiple targets!
  • The spreading motion makes it hard for the opponent to dodge, forcing them to use something defensive instead.
Weak points

  • The range leaves much to be desired.
  • The opponent will see the attack coming from a mile away; it's very conspicuous and predictable.
Combinations-strategies

I'd primarily use this as a means to distract my enemy from a potentially more powerful follow up technique, or cause them to go on the defensive, since it's harder to dodge.

Ways to counter this technique

Wind to dissipate the lightning bolts, or counter with the same jutsu! Otherwise, substitution, clone feints... plenty of possibilities.

Questions

"Can I use my hand for Taijutsu purposes, senpai? Like, punch my opponent with the lightning arm and then fire lightning bolts into their body?"




( Raiton: Inazuma ken Fudou ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blades Levitation
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will channel their lightning chakra into their sword to increase its cutting capabilities, and then levitate it in front of them. They will then multiply the sword creating two extra physical copies which are then all manipulated to spin rapidly and are controlled to fly towards and cut through the opponents.

Strong points

  • This is essentially a bunch of lightning sabers of spinning doom flying towards my opponent. OP.
  • Swords are sharper because of the infused lightning chakra... allowing it to pierce stronger Earth defenses!
  • Can be controlled in multiple directions, allowing for some interesting tactics.
Weak points

  • I'd need a sword to to this jutsu. Otherwise... I can't do the jutsu.
  • I could get hurt if I'm not careful in the execution of the technique.
  • I only wish the range was better :T_T:
Combinations-strategies

I'd use this to overwhelm my opponent. First, I'd use fire-coated shuriken flurries, then follow up with a lightning-infused sword assualt. Think about it, senpai. Flaming shuriken and Lightning sword barrages of death. Too OP!

Ways to counter this technique

Use a high level wind jutsu to blow away the lightning-infused swords. Pretty straightforward. Otherwise, I could use a Kenjutsu technique where I channel lightning chakra to parry the swords away with an equal and greater force.

Questions

"I can make more than just two copies... right, senpai?"

"Also, can I make the swords revolve around my body with my chakra (like how electrons spin around an atom) as a defensive tactic?"
 

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(Raiton: Iwa Nadare) - Lightning Style: Stone Avalanche
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: By forming hand seals Snake ? Upside down Tiger ? Hands clapped together and running up a cliff face, the user causes stone and rock above him to become dislodged and rain down past him onto his opponents below by releasing a wave of electrical energy. However, this is extremely location-based and needs to be done uphill of a mountain for it to work.

Strong points

  • Rock avalanches are definitely lethal.
  • The distance gained between myself and the opponent while running up the cliff face is a potentially useful setup for a follow up attack.
  • Powerful and damaging... can hit multiple targets and change the landscape to my favor!
Weak points

  • Hand seal requirement can cost critical moments in the time frame.
  • Location based, if there's no cliff... you can't really perform the jutsu. Unless you make a cliff.
  • Range is alright, not exceptional. I might get caught in the avalanche if I'm not careful, either.
Combinations-strategies

I'd need to have an arena with a cliff face. However, maybe I could use an Earth Jutsu equivalent that creates something of that scale, and perform the technique as such!

Ways to counter this technique

Destroy the cliff... stay out of range... use powerful wind/water combination jutsus to blow the avalanche away.

Questions

"Are the rocks electrified as they flow as an avalanche? Like can they shock opponents on top of crushing them too?"




(Raiton: Shuurai Rappa no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Horn Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will raise their hand in front of them like a sword and it will begin glowing a pale yellow before releasing bolts of lightning in the shape of a horn that spread outwards allowing it to attack multiple targets.

Strong points

  • My hand becomes, in essence, a lightning blaster. How is that not a strong point?
  • Can attack multiple targets!
  • The spreading motion makes it hard for the opponent to dodge, forcing them to use something defensive instead.
Weak points

  • The range leaves much to be desired.
  • The opponent will see the attack coming from a mile away; it's very conspicuous and predictable.
Combinations-strategies

I'd primarily use this as a means to distract my enemy from a potentially more powerful follow up technique, or cause them to go on the defensive, since it's harder to dodge.

Ways to counter this technique

Wind to dissipate the lightning bolts, or counter with the same jutsu! Otherwise, substitution, clone feints... plenty of possibilities.

Questions

"Can I use my hand for Taijutsu purposes, senpai? Like, punch my opponent with the lightning arm and then fire lightning bolts into their body?"




( Raiton: Inazuma ken Fudou ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blades Levitation
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will channel their lightning chakra into their sword to increase its cutting capabilities, and then levitate it in front of them. They will then multiply the sword creating two extra physical copies which are then all manipulated to spin rapidly and are controlled to fly towards and cut through the opponents.

Strong points

  • This is essentially a bunch of lightning sabers of spinning doom flying towards my opponent. OP.
  • Swords are sharper because of the infused lightning chakra... allowing it to pierce stronger Earth defenses!
  • Can be controlled in multiple directions, allowing for some interesting tactics.
Weak points

  • I'd need a sword to to this jutsu. Otherwise... I can't do the jutsu.
  • I could get hurt if I'm not careful in the execution of the technique.
  • I only wish the range was better :T_T:
Combinations-strategies

I'd use this to overwhelm my opponent. First, I'd use fire-coated shuriken flurries, then follow up with a lightning-infused sword assualt. Think about it, senpai. Flaming shuriken and Lightning sword barrages of death. Too OP!

Ways to counter this technique

Use a high level wind jutsu to blow away the lightning-infused swords. Pretty straightforward. Otherwise, I could use a Kenjutsu technique where I channel lightning chakra to parry the swords away with an equal and greater force.

Questions

"I can make more than just two copies... right, senpai?"

"Also, can I make the swords revolve around my body with my chakra (like how electrons spin around an atom) as a defensive tactic?"
Question answered
1- No they are not electrified, the lightning simply loosens them to fall down.
2- I would say no, this is a projectile based technique, not a melee.
3- No only 2 copies, you can't send one to attack and the other to defend. You control both since they are both linked for attack, so you can use for defense if you want or for attack, up to you. Don't forget though you must keep all your focus on the swords, if not then it will be released.

Before we continue, I request for you to add more to your combos and counters as well as advantages and disadvantages. I'm happy with the questions though means you have the right mind set to learn, but I want you to be as active as you can. Think and write more into it. Understood?
 

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Don't worry I'm enjoying it deeply. Remember to ask question and just have fun overall while learning.
Remember if you ever have a tough time finding something out tell me then and there. If you want I can show example on how it should be done for you.

Next set. Final two before we enter B-Ranks.

( Raiton: Denki Railansho ) - Lightning Release: Electric Discharge Palm
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid (Short range for the discharge)
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will manipulate their lightning chakra in their dominant hand generating electrical bolts of lightning around their forearm and they then jump into the air. The user will then land slamming their palm onto the ground causing the electrical energy to become discharged sending out bolts of lightning into the ground and around them up to 5 meters.

The user will gather a large sum of lightning chakra into their hand and forearm, then they will jump high into the air. When the reach the ground they will forcefully slam their palm on the ground sending a electrical energy through the ground up to a 5 meter radius, you can also send it forward towards an opponent. Its easy but your vulnerable in the air. Also right when you release the lightning in the ground you can go straight to another jutsu.



( Raiton no Heki ) – Lightning Release Wall
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user manipulates their chakra and then releases it in front of them whilst holding their hands out and they generate a wall of lightning energy that can defend against certain techniques. The user can use this defence to shock enemy targets who attempt close range combat and deliver a small electrical shock that can temporarily reduce their physical capabilities.

The user will put their hands in front of them and release lightning. They manipulate the lightning shape to become a wall which can easily block most projectile attacks and can be good to use in close range battle if used correctly. It would take a second to generate the wall but if a opponent is touched their physcial abilities are reduced for one turn, basically they are not as fast or strong.
 
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