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Remove the black chunin vest. It isn't really that much of an issue, but at this point you're still a genin.
What do you mean by "bloodthirsty demon"? If you're referring to it as a metaphorical way of speaking for just a character that's twisted I don't mind, we've got several other schizo's and psycho's here, though if you're actually talking about a real demon it has to go.
Try to give a bit more history.
For custom weapons read this
What do you mean by "bloodthirsty demon"? If you're referring to it as a metaphorical way of speaking for just a character that's twisted I don't mind, we've got several other schizo's and psycho's here, though if you're actually talking about a real demon it has to go.
Try to give a bit more history.
For custom weapons read this
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Well, ok, but FYI, the weapons are used in the series:
Mouth Ember:
Wind Shuriken:
Gauntlet:
Edit: Also, thanks for taking a look. Oh, and sorry about before. I should have read the rules. And bloodthirsty demon is a metaphor, but i'll change it.
Mouth Ember:
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Wind Shuriken:
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Gauntlet:
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Edit: Also, thanks for taking a look. Oh, and sorry about before. I should have read the rules. And bloodthirsty demon is a metaphor, but i'll change it.
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Changes: "Bloodthirsty demon" to "bloodthirsty in nature"
Added links and images to where the weapons can be found on narutopedia
Changed "Black Chunin Vest" to "Similar in style to a black chunin vest, however, is more similar to a combat (Bullet Proof) vest.
History Changed.
Added links and images to where the weapons can be found on narutopedia
Changed "Black Chunin Vest" to "Similar in style to a black chunin vest, however, is more similar to a combat (Bullet Proof) vest.
History Changed.
Re: Yoso Noko/The Raven King (User of the Elements)
Basic Information
Name: Yoso Noko
Nickname: The Raven King
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Clan: (None as of now, as Hanzo has no distinct clan)
Looks:
Medical:
Physical:
Personality:
.
Village Info.
Village of Birth: Amegakure
Village of Alliance: Konohagakure
Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Genin (Subject to Change)
Specialty: N/A at this time.
Elements: Fire
Your ninjutsu:
Background Info.
History:
Weaponry:
Other
Picture:
Theme Song: Remember the Name by Fort Minor (Normal Form) Last Resort by Papa Roach (MPD Form)
Background Music: Getting Away With Murder by Papa Roach
Battles
Won: 0
Lost: 0
Just thought I'ld add sum pictures for those who actually look
Does not need to be re-approved
Basic Information
Name: Yoso Noko
Nickname: The Raven King
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Clan: (None as of now, as Hanzo has no distinct clan)
Looks:
Medical:
Suffers from MPD (Multiple Personality Disorder)
Eye Color:usually raven black, MPD changes to red Sparkes in eyes, the color of blood.
Hair: Raven Black, Usually Crew Cut.
Skin: Light Tan
Scars on chest, back, and eye.
Weight: 120 Lb
Height: 6"0
Eye Color:usually raven black, MPD changes to red Sparkes in eyes, the color of blood.
Hair: Raven Black, Usually Crew Cut.
Skin: Light Tan
Scars on chest, back, and eye.
Weight: 120 Lb
Height: 6"0
Strong physically built. Often seen wearing either slacks, a shirt, and glasses, or a loose black T-shirt with black jeans (often Torn) On missions, wears armor (black) fish net on hands and elbows, Gloves, and a black armored vest (Similar in style to that of a chunin vest, however it lacks the leaf/whirlpool village symbols. I ould probably be seen more similar to a combat(Bullet proof) vest.) with black pants (style varies.)
Personality:
Considered to be somewhat "Emo", due to always wearing black and being somewhat reserved. Most don't know much about him, and fear him. He hates his home village for killing his father, even though it was not their fault. He killed all of the men and women involved in the mission and left. His MP (Multiple Personality) is a bloodthirsty and aggressive in nature and kills all in its path. Compared to his precise nature, there are multiple flaws in the MP’s tactics; the MP is brought on by great anger, such as the death of a friend in cold blood.
Village Info.
Village of Birth: Amegakure
Village of Alliance: Konohagakure
Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Genin (Subject to Change)
Specialty: N/A at this time.
Elements: Fire
Your ninjutsu:
(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
_____
(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
_____
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
_____
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
_____
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
_____
(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
_____
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
_____
(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
_____
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
_____
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
_____
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
_____
(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
_____
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
Background Info.
History:
Born in the Hidden Rain, his father, Hanzo the Salamander, was killed by Pein, he is the sole survivor of the clan. At the age of 6 months he was move to the Leaf Village of Konohagakure. He was a prodigy, surpassing the skills of the 5th Hokage by the age of 13. He was skilled in weaponry, taijutsu, genjutsu, ninjutsu, and strategy. He had very few friends, and was reluctant to make any. He became good friends with Sasuke, as they had very much in common: they both wanted to kill the man who killed their family. When Sasuke was confronted by Itachi (Pre-Shippuden) and lost, he broke this bond. They never spoke again. He was trained by Kurenai Yuhi in genjutsu. Although he never wants to see Sasuke again, he hopes to one day confront his rival at the Valley of End.
Weaponry:
Concealed Combustible Ember: A secret mber hiden inside the users body. Explodes when the user spits at a combustible substance.
Shadow Wind Shuriken: seen used by sasuke when attacked by Zabuza of the Bloody Mist.
Gauntlet: Used as a threebladed hand glove. Seen here:
Uses Multiple Swords.
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Shadow Wind Shuriken: seen used by sasuke when attacked by Zabuza of the Bloody Mist.
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Gauntlet: Used as a threebladed hand glove. Seen here:
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Uses Multiple Swords.
Other
Picture
Regular:
MPD:
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MPD:
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Theme Song: Remember the Name by Fort Minor (Normal Form) Last Resort by Papa Roach (MPD Form)
Background Music: Getting Away With Murder by Papa Roach
Battles
Won: 0
Lost: 0
Just thought I'ld add sum pictures for those who actually look
Does not need to be re-approved
marmariove
Member
Basic Information
Name: Yoso Noko
Nickname: The Raven King
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Clan: (None as of now, as Hanzo has no distinct clan)
Looks:
Medical:
Physical:Suffers from MPD (Multiple Personality Disorder)
Eye Color:usually raven black, MPD changes to red Sparkes in eyes, the color of blood.
Hair: Raven Black, Usually Crew Cut.
Skin: Light Tan
Scars on chest, back, and eye.
Weight: 120 Lb
Height: 6"0
Strong physically built. Often seen wearing either slacks, a shirt, and glasses, or a loose black T-shirt with black jeans (often Torn) On missions, wears armor (black) fish net on hands and elbows, Gloves, and a black armored vest (Similar in style to that of a chunin vest, however it lacks the leaf/whirlpool village symbols. I ould probably be seen more similar to a combat(Bullet proof) vest.) with black pants (style varies.)
Personality:
.Considered to be somewhat "Emo", due to always wearing black and being somewhat reserved. Most don't know much about him, and fear him. He hates his home village for killing his father, even though it was not their fault. He killed all of the men and women involved in the mission and left. His MP (Multiple Personality) is a bloodthirsty and aggressive in nature and kills all in its path. Compared to his precise nature, there are multiple flaws in the MP’s tactics; the MP is brought on by great anger, such as the death of a friend in cold blood.
Village Info.
Village of Birth: Amegakure
Village of Alliance: Konohagakure
Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Genin (Subject to Change)
Specialty: N/A at this time.
Elements: Fire
Your ninjutsu:
(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
_____
(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
_____
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
_____
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
_____
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
_____
(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
_____
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
Background Info.
History:
Born in the Hidden Rain, his father, Hanzo the Salamander, was killed by Pein, he is the sole survivor of the clan. At the age of 6 months he was move to the Leaf Village of Konohagakure. He was a prodigy, surpassing the skills of the 5th Hokage by the age of 13. He was skilled in weaponry, taijutsu, genjutsu, ninjutsu, and strategy. He had very few friends, and was reluctant to make any. He became good friends with Sasuke, as they had very much in common: they both wanted to kill the man who killed their family. When Sasuke was confronted by Itachi (Pre-Shippuden) and lost, he broke this bond. They never spoke again. He was trained by Kurenai Yuhi in genjutsu. Although he never wants to see Sasuke again, he hopes to one day confront his rival at the Valley of End.
Weaponry:
Concealed Combustible Ember: A secret mber hiden inside the users body. Explodes when the user spits at a combustible substance.
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Shadow Wind Shuriken: seen used by sasuke when attacked by Zabuza of the Bloody Mist.
You must be registered for see images
Gauntlet: Used as a threebladed hand glove. Seen here:
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Uses Multiple Swords.
Other
Picture:
Regular:
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MPD:
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Theme Song: Remember the Name by Fort Minor (Normal Form) Last Resort by Papa Roach (MPD Form)
Background Music: Getting Away With Murder by Papa Roach
Battles
Won: 0
Lost: 0
Just thought I'ld add sum pictures for those who actually look
Dude, if you want to put these stuff, you have to create a new thread like this :
Bio(update, needs re-approval)
For the body, just copy and past from your old biography and edit it, adding stuff you have just learned. Don't spam this thread anymore, nobody is going to check it out.
