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Didn't we already have a similar technique before in that you do pretty much the same thing? I might be wrong of course, but it so reminds me of a ninjutsu technique, however this one is a bit more complicated then it looks like for one simple reason, it is just a technique with many 'parts to do' meaning that it will slow you immense and, unless you don't distract your opponent/your target with something, it won't land and you will be damaged badly if your opponent plays his cards the right way. The range is the only good thing of this technique in my opinion, other than that if you manage to distract your opponent it's not a bad technique, it's just something that I won't use in a fight. The best way to use it will be to follow up with a genjutsu and a technique beforehand and use this technique as the final third technique or rather for the final 'blow'. The countering part is pretty easy and straightforward, I don't even need to mention it but I will, you can basically use the timeframe to your advantage and use elemental ninjutsu or taijutsu/kenjutsu to interrupt the following technique; you can of course also overpower it. B rank or higher would work fine and I doubt anyone will have problems with countering just basic and straightforward technique.

The only cool thing about this technique is the name of it. Pretty much that yeah. It's once again one of these weapon ninjutsu technique which terribly annoy me. If I want to throw a kunai I would most likely do it by free form throwing a kunai, I don't even understand why there are such techniques as this one, but yeah what can you do. Not to mention it's only usable in short range, I mean come on you can free form a kunai in any range but you can't use such techniques in medium and long range, that's a shame. The countering part is easy, e.g. : earth shield/dome, wind blast, wind wall etc. I would rather strike the opponent with lighting release because lighting is the fastest travelling element after all and it will work good here. I really don't see myself using this particular technique just because you need to heavily rely on the distraction before this technique and I have really no idea how someone will let themselves get hit by such technique. Not that it's a terrible technique, it's just not my style, that's all.
 

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I don't see the need to add anymore when it comes to this type of techniques, they are pretty bland, and I think I add everything that is needed when I post the techniques.

(Sōgu: Kaien Geki) - Manipulated Tools: Spinning Swallow Show
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user hits the opponent with a pair of tonfa, then tosses a scroll in the air to summon a bo staff and hits them with it. When the opponent is lying prone on the ground, they summons a huge spiked club and crushes them with it.

Okay so take this pair of tonfa I hand you, from there I want you to hit my clone with them a few times, and that is happening I want you to grab out a scroll and throw it into the air, which you will send your chakra into the scroll to summon a bo staff, that you will grab and hit my clone once more, hit him so that it hits to the ground. Once more take out a scroll and throw it above my clone, send your chakra to the scroll to summon a huge spiked club that will crush my clone. Honestly this technique has too much going on, and would be super hard to actually use.

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(Sōgu: Tenkosai) - Manipulated Tools: Heavenly Steel Disaster
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: Like Manipulated Tools: Heavenly Chain of Destruction, The user unrolls and throws thier large scroll over the enemy. They summons countless Kunai from the scroll to rain down on the enemy before releasing four large chains to force the enemy to the ground as the chains collapse on them.

Grab out a large scroll and throw it up into the air in the direction of my clone, send your chakra into the scroll to summon a massive amount of kunai that will rain down on my clone, as the kunai is raining upon my clone. Four large chains will also be released from the scroll, each chain grabbing one of my clones limbs, so tying him down, as the kunai rain down on him.
 

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These techniques, my god. I'm starting to have nightmares with those, like seriously who uses such things. Anyways, for the first one, once again I have nothing to really explain and analyse about it. It's plain simple and very straightforward in fact I have no idea how to successfully land this particular ninjutsu technique on someone. Nobody would ever let you proceed with it until the end of it meaning nobody would even let you finish the particular technique. At the moment where you take out your tonfa, if the opponent for example is like me and has sharingan he will read through your movements/motions and will react immediately, if not then it's straightforward anyways and the opponent will just counter the tonfa first and thus causing the other parts of the technique to be canceled or rather they just won't happen. Once again the time-frame will be used against you and your opponent will just have an easy time. The only reason to use this if you successfully for example put your opponent under genjutsu and paralyse him/her so you can proceed with this technique, or catch him with a technique in which the opponent can't move. The only way to use such techniques is to follow them up with something good otherwise it's a dumb move by your side and you will lose a lot. About countering I would counter it with basic taijutsu, or even kenjutsu. Of course I can just hit my opponent with lighting release, wind release or even catch him in something with water release but I feel like if it is in short range it's best to be used taijutsu and in medium range it's best to be used elemental ninjutsu for a counter. Other than that I have nothing to add about the technique, I don't like it and I won't use it for sure.

About the second one, for a I don't know what time, nobody would use kunai techniques in our RP. At least I won't and I don't see a reason to waste chakra for such techniques. The technique is made out of more than one part meaning that if someone manages to counter the first part the other part won't even take place in the timeframe thus meaning that they won't happen. Once again for this to work you need a good combination beforehand, again I like to use my genjutsu skills to put my opponent into genjutsu so he isn't aware of the reality around him thus giving me some time to use such technique. The only good thing about it is that it can be used in long range meaning that it can maybe land against some opponents. In my opinion for the countering part, I will use a wind blast against the kunai and just attack the opponent (user of the current ninjutsu technique) right away without wasting any time and without any hesitation. I personally again don't see myself using this technique in future fights.
 

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Weapon techniques are so much fun!!

(Hana Ninpō: Kyōku Sai) - Flower Technique: The District End
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user reaches out his/her hand, sending a stream of flower petals from their palm towards the opponent. The flower petals encircle the enemy and dark smoke fades their surroundings to black, hiding the user.

Pretty much tells you what to do, so I will let you analyse it for me. :D

(Gen'ei Tajū Shuriken) - Multiple Phantom Shuriken
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After performing the shadow clone technique the user and the two clones perform the Dog → Rabbit → Monkey → Clap Hands and they throw several shuriken which multiply and attack the opponent.
Note: Requires two shadow clones before use.

Okay I want you to create two shadow clones, once you have done that I want you to get the clones to perform the handseals Dog → Rabbit → Monkey → Clap Hands, as soon as they both clap their hands, I want you to tell them to get out many shuriken which they will throw, and by the clones using their chakra, they will be able to multiply the thrown shuriken to do more damage to my clone.
 

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Yeah no comment on this technique, with this technique I can say that I have seen everything in my rp career. I don't know why would someone want to use this in a fight, it's just terrible. Anyways, it can be a good follow up for a genjutsu technique which requires similar things if I remember right. About the countering part I would say that I would use wind to blast/blow the petals away before they arrive at me and use their smoke to blind my vision. I assume that they don't cover you from above, meaning that you can just jump and counter them? I might be wrong though.

About the second one, well a weapon technique again. This time it's really bad because of one thing, it requires you to do the shadow clone technique which will waste a lot of time (timeframe) again thus giving your opponent a chance to completely counter your technique and destroy you. The handseals are a lot also so I don't see anything good about this technique to be honest. The only way this is hitting is only if you blind or catch your opponent in something/with something. I assume that the countering part will also be easy, basically earth wall, water blast/spear/sphere or wind blast/gust/slice. I'm not a fan of a weapon technique as you see!
 

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I was referring to the first wind release technique with which you can release a small gust of wind, but now I released that it is written: "The user will release basic simple blasts or streams of wind from his limbs or mouth to defend or attack an enemy.", meaning I can't freeform jump and use the blast towards the ground to blow myself up. So yeah you are definitely right, earth pillar is the best to do here.
 

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Exactly. xD

A-ranks time!

(Himitsu Kibaku Fuda no Jutsu) Hidden Explosive Tags Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
The user does a sequence of 4 hand seals (Tiger → Rat → Bird → Snake) or slams his hand on the ground or surface. Using his chakra, he is able to stream a multitude of paper tags through the ground and use his chakra to keep them hidden from sight. As they stream towards the target, they are undistinguishable from the ground, seamlessly merged with it. Nearing the target, they rise from the ground, "crawling" up the target. As they wrap themselves in lairs around the target, the user can choose when to detonate them, making a quicker, weaker detonation or waiting for more paper tags to pile in the target and adding more damage.

Okay so I want you to perform the seals, from that slam your hands on the ground, and by using your chakra you will be able to send a crap load of paper bombs though the ground, and use your chakra to keep them hidden from sight. Then you send the paper bombs towards my clone, they move though the ground without disrupting it or anything, as they get close to my clone, they will start to come out of the ground, and crawl up my clones legs and soon his whole body, you can detonate them at anytime. You can also put this in your own earth techniques, make them so much more powerful.

(Kuchiyose: Sanjū Rashōmon) - Summoning Technique: Triple Rashōmon
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: This summoning is an upgrade of the standard Rashomon in which the user summons 3 of these demonic forms of the main gate of old Kyoto. Each gate has a specific duty: the first red gate takes the attack head-on, the second green gate reduces the power of the attack, and the third blue gate disperses the pressure.
Note: This technique can only block A rank and below.

Similar to the parent technique, but this time around you are able to summon up to three Rashōmon, and each gate has a duty. Though, this can only block A-rank and below attacks
 

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The technique is pretty nice. I like it. As you can clearly see the technique is a combination of a summoning technique and an ignition technique. I say that is is a summoning technique because the user after performing the four required handseals releases a large number of paper bombs that originate from the point of contact on the surface on which the technique is used. He can then use his chakra to make the tags blend in with the surface to prevent the opponent from seeing it. Those with sensory abilities and eye techs can easily see through the technique. The paper bombs will cover the opponent and detonate, this is the ignition part. You can either make it so that it is a constant stream of smaller explosions or one massive explosion once all the tags have surrounded your target. This is a great technique to use when your opponent is first trapped or bound by an earth technique. You can follow up by also wrapping him in tags as he is bound causing him to take more drastic defence measures. Also one could first launch a large fireball towards the opponent, which would need to be fairly large, so as force the opponent into working out a strong counter whilst being unable to see past the incoming fireball to the discrete gestures made to use this subsequent technique. It would also be possible and potentially viable to make a clone, conceal the clone, and have it use the technique from its maximum range. About the countering part well, an easy way to defend against the technique is to stop the flow of tags after sensing them or detecting them through other means. This can be done by using an earth technique to alter the earth so the tags cannot flow in your direction. The only cons about this technique is that it requires four handseals, because sometimes you don't have enough time in fights to wave so many handseals, but if you are smart and you have a very good strategy behind your move it should work like charm. One of my favourite ninjutsu techniques so far and very useful in fights. I plan on using it in the future. Amazing technique!

The second technique is something we already have seen and known. I just adore the defensive ninjutsu techniques for the reason that the elemental defences are not that cool and some of them are weak. But ninjutsu defences have no elemental weaknesses meaning that they are neutral and work as the same rank. Anyways it's basically a summoning. This summoning happens to summon 3 walls instead of 1 (as we have already seen in the B rank version of it). The use of this technique is purely defensive. It'll allow you to defend against an A-rank tech. The technique works by giving each of the three walls a purpose. The first wall is meant to rake the burnt of the attack. It is essentially meant to take all the physical force and power of the attack and slow it down. The second wall is mean to reduce the power of the attack by completely removing the physical aspects of the technique it is blocking and leaving it as energy only. The third and final wall is meant to simply prevent the energy from coming close to you. Since the first two wall not only take the burnt of the physical force but also cause the attack to lose a lot of energy as well, the last wall's sole duty is to spread the energy out as it collides with the attack and disperse the blow by evenly distributing the pressure within itself. I was thinking about the countering part of this technique and I manage to come up with the following. Given that this technique is a defensive move, there's no real need to defend against it; one just needs to either scale over the walls or use a sufficiently powerful technique to completely overwhelm all three segments of the technique, which in my opinion is not something that you necessary need to do, because you need to destroy with an S or higher rank technique thus causing you a lot of chakra and unnecessary energy to waste. However something that I noticed about this particular wall is that it is a blade with two edges. It hides your vision of your opponent, but it also hides his vision of you meaning that one has to be careful how to use it, because if you manage to lose sight of your opponent for more than ten-twenty seconds things are going to get bad. He can basically throw a technique at you and go underground with hiding like a mole technique and pop behind you and kill you. Everything has it's pros and cons but overall I like this technique and plan on using it.​
 

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God damn. o_O Both a really good techniques, both are useful and helpful as!

(Sōshōryū Seichuu) - Rising Twin Dragons Control
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: This technique is similar to the normal Twin Rising Dragons, but is an upgraded version. The user doesn't have to hold onto the weapons; they can just send them flying only with a movement of thier hand, which makes the weapons a lot faster. Also, with this new version, The user includes exploding tags in the spread in order to make the technique more effective.

Like it's parent technique; but with this one you don't have to hold the weapons, you can just throw the weapons and control them using hand movement, which in short make the weapons faster, on each weapon also each of the weapons have exploding tags on them.

(Sōgu: Tensasai) - Manipulated Tools: Heavenly Chain of Destruction
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: A stronger version of the Twin Rising Dragons, the user tosses their large scroll into the air above her opponent and summons hundreds of different weapons from it, which then rain down, impaling the opponent and anything in their path. The weapons move so fast that they appear as white streaks.

With this one, I want you to grab out a scroll and throw it above my clone, from there use your chakra aiming it at the scroll to summon hundreds of weapons, all different from it. They will rain down, so fast they look like white streaks, pretty good technique though.
 

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These techniques again -.- Sensei did you put me into an endless genjutsu of explaining weapon techniques @_@ ?

Obviously very similar to its parent technique. Indeed it becomes faster and stronger but it's still basically the same as it was before. The only one this particular ninjutsu technique can work is if you are really good at distracting your opponent fully, and by fully I mean putting him in a genjutsu or striking him with lighting so he can become numb a.k.a. paralyse him in a way so he can't move hence can't react to the technique. I don't see an other way how this can work. The counter part is once again easy, elemental ninjutsu A rank or higher. Wind or water blast will work, as well earth techniques. There are endless variations of how to counter this technique so I think I don't need to mention them. I don't plan on using such techniques against anyone and I think nobody will use such technique against me either.

Second one is a bit better but still the same old weapon techniques. I'm starting to get sick of these, like seriously they are just endless. Once again it costs a lot timeframe and it requires a distraction (as I have mentioned above). Nobody will let you hit him/he r with such straightforward and basic ninjutsu technique, therefore once again genjutsu beforehand is the best thing, if not the perfect, to use in this situation. About counter I would say basically an lighting release spear at the moment she takes out a scroll, if you play with the timeframe you can catch your opponent off guard immediately and don't even give him any chances to pull out such a technique. Of course you can use wind/earth or water for this journey of countering such a straightforward technique. A basic powerful wind blast will work against all the weapons.
 

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Would I do that to you? (Maybe ;D)

Simple and straigfht to the point, don't need to add anything.

Next up is a kind of odd technique, but I think you will do just fine.

(Kage Kagami Shiten No Hou) - Shadow Mirror Body Change Method
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user turns him/her self into a mirror image of their desired form.This transformation is permanent.The user can only use their own original jutsu.

Obviously best suited for NW, in a spar or battle. This would be somewhat pointless.
 

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Oh well, I don't see how I can analyse this when there is nothing to analyse about it. It's basically only use-able in the NW, as you mentioned, and can be used in short range only and this transformation is permanent which is kind of bad for the user. I can't think of a combination with it just because I don't see many reasons to use it in an actual fight other than to trick your opponent into believing things that are not true. Is this something like a transformation technique or some sort of thingy? If yes, can for example a dojutsu user see through it immediately?
 

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Yes, pretty much.

As far as I am aware no. But most people would figure it out, for example, you change into a person who uses the sharingan a lot, and well you don't use it. That is a kind of giveway if that makes sense. o.o
 

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(Bunshin Bakuha) - Shadow Clone Explosion
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:At first glance the clone appears to be a normal tangible Bunshin, but the user can detonate the clone at any time to form a very large explosion. (This shadow clone variant can only use normal ninjutsu, and Taijutsu).
Note:Must already know shadow clone jutsu to use this jutsu.

I like this technique, pretty much just like a shadow clone; but is a walking bomb, you can detonate it at any time you want.
 
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