[Ninja Battle Training] 2.1 Earth Release/Doton (Professor Sarutobi VS Wesobi)

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No Stealing
No Killing (this is just training)
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You are limited to Earth up to S-Rank, Taijutsu and basic ninja tools


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i'll go first since i started 2nd last time, Bones bio like last time and if it matters i'll fight your vendetta bio.

Daz Bones eyes you up then makes a single handseal and creates an earth clone on his right hand side, then i make the ground under you drop 2 meters at high speeds as the clone slams his hand on the ground, making the ground that is now surrounding you spiral inwards on you tight enough to hold you tototally still.


(Doton: Tsuchi Bunshin no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Earth Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 25
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates upto three clones of earth and mud. Since they are made of such materials, they can reform after being hit by physical, water or wind techniques. They can also use up to C rank earth techniques.


(Doton: Chidōkaku) - Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
Rank: A
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user lowers or raises the ground in the surrounding area at high speeds, allowing them to create giant holes in the ground or avoid attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that it is lowered to is up to the user and rasing earth can be done up to 20 meters tallcreating a small cliff or they can create trenches that can be as deep as 2meters. Other than being moved below ground relative to the surrounding surface the terrain is not altered, plant life and people retaining their same positions.


(Doton: Retsudotensho) - Earth Style: Split Earth Turn Around Palm
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique causes the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave.


 

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As V sees your clone being made, he create a sucking vortex in the ground, sucking in you and your clone.


(Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Style: Antlion Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: This jutsu causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the center, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated.

While you two are struggling to get out, I make a clone of myself to my side.

(Doton: Tsuchi Bunshin no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Earth Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 25
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates upto three clones of earth and mud. Since they are made of such materials, they can reform after being hit by physical, water or wind techniques. They can also use up to C rank earth techniques.

The clone throws a series of kunai (with explosion tags) at you while I then instantly do 3 hand seals and create a wave of earth that shackles you and your clone in place while we start to ride towards you towards you, while spikes made out of the front of the wave pierce through both of you.


(Doton: Doryūha) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Wave
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After performing the required 3 set hand seal sequence the user creates and rides a wave of earth that can branch of to attack from a distance. The user can also use the technique to manipulate the terrain and trap the target by wrapping earth round their legs preventing them from moving
 

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as the antlion is created under us i create a giant stone golem out of my mouth who puts his arms and/or legs (as they are formed, arms first then legs then stands up a little as we climb on) on either side of the ground where the antlion doesn't reach as my clone and i grab onto him and climb on his back, getting out of the pit and my clone begins throwing his own bomb kunai to counter yours.

as i see the earth begining to rise up under you to form the wave a gigantic pillar of rock rises from the ground in front of the antlion pit and smashs into you and your wave, sending you flying while another pillar emerges from your clone's left hand side, smashing him to mud.




(Doton: Dai iwa Kyojin no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Great Stone Golem Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user creates a even larger and stronger version of Earth Release: Stone Golem Technique



(Doton: Kujo Joushou Iwa Chuuseki) - Earth Release: Destructive Rising Rock Pillars
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: This jutsu causes gigantic pillars of rock to forcefully emerge from the ground. This is a even greater scaled Earth Release: Rising Spikes and is large enough to impale a summoning technique.


 

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(You forgot to defend from the kunai, as the tags would have atleast startled you, but I guess this is disputable)
As you crawl on the golem, a huge fissure appears under you and your clone, the golem, and about anything in a close radius of you. The hole is atleast 15 meters deep. This fissure is made by my clone.


(Doton: Doryuu Kekai) - Earth Style: Earth Fissure
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This jutsu splits the earth apart to make a fissure. The size of the fissure is proportioned to the amount of chakra of the user.

While I create spikes in the fissure from on top of the wave.


(Doton: Ganchuusou) - Earth Style: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user creates spikes of earth that come up from the ground to stab the enemy.This jutsu can be made in a short or mid distace but the jutsu its self is made of a 6 foot radius of spikes.

Unbeknown to you, my clone then goes underground and can sense anything you are doing.


(Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Hiding like a mole technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user changes earth into fine sand by channeling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. While underground one can sense what is happening on the surface and use the information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. Once can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy cant reach.
 

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Sorry didnt get a chance to get on yesterday

As the fissure opens below us my earth clone grabs my hand and throws me over to the edge while I cover myself in stone armor, so if you fire spikes at me I can easily break them, I use the stone on my arms to extend as spears and use them like vaulting poles to get back on the ground, my clone throws kunai with steel wires to pull himself up during this. As we both get on the earth he makes spears come up in front of you and I make 3 seals making a wave of earth come from behind yours and slam into it, throwing you into the spikes.


(Koka no Jutsu) -Hardening Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offense/Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: By utilizing earth-based chakra, the user creates armour made of rock that encases their body. The armour can also be used to create extendable weapons to strike a target with.

(Doton: Doryūha) -Earth Release: Earth Flow Wave
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid -Long
Chakra cost:20
Damage points: 40
Description: After performing the required 3 set hand seal sequence the user creates and rides a wave of earth that can branch of to attack from a distance.The user can also use the technique to manipulate the terrain and trap the target by wrapping earth round their legs preventing them from moving

(Doton: Ganchuusou) -Earth Style: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user creates spikes of earth that come up from the ground to stab the enemy.This jutsu can be made in a short or mid distace but the jutsu its self is made of a 6 foot radius of spikes.
 

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Sorry, I forgot to sticky this thread.
Though there are several technical errors (I'm pretty sure Scorps will go over them soon, I don't want to sound cocky, sorry if I do... :() in your move, I'll react accordingly.
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As your clone launches you in the air, the sky opens up above you and mud starts to drop all over the area above you and your clone, and the entire area around the fissure (I don't get hit though, obviously >.>). You wouldn't notice due to your attacks on me, and if you notice it would probably be too late as you're in the air (atleast up to mid air).

(Doton: Doro Kakou) – Earth Release: Mud Fall
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates an opening within the sky, which drips down onto the opponent a large amount of mud, covering them. It’s normally followed up by Lightning release: sixteen pillar bind to create a giant oven around the opponent and then using Fire release: Firing biscuit technique to ignite the oven, hardening the mud and immobilizing the enemy target.

As the mud drips over both of you, my clone release kunai with explosion tags at you. They detonate near you, causing the mud in the surrounding to turn to lava due to the increased heat and fire, and to give you severe wounds as we speak.

As if this were not enough, the ground around your clone start to crackle and disrupts him as my clone uses his technique


(Doton: Retsudotensho) - Earth Style: Split Earth Turn Around Palm
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique causes the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave.

while all this is happening, I take out a map and start to manipulate the ground, causing a huge spike to come out of the ground and impale you as you deal with the mud, and causing other spikes to erupt as well around the big one. Not only that, but me and my clone rise up on a rampart. I then leave put the map back in my pocket.



(Doton: Uiten Pen) - Earth Style: Wheel Of Fortune
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Descripton: A form of summoning where the user first takes out a topographical map that they can use to change any earth-based feature of the battlefield.
Note: can only be used once per battle
 

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Probably but meh

As the hole in the sky opens and mud starts falling out my clone, having just thrown me is still facing towards me and sees this so Instead of saving himself he creates a rampart that comes out of the side of fissure extends to block the mud from hitting me, letting me use the stone armors ability to extend the stone at my arms to turn them into spears with hands on the ends that attach to the fissure wall and then shorten again, pulling me to the wall where I then merge into the ground and reappear long range behind without a sound.

After emerging and avoiding detection I slam my hand on the ground and throw you up into the air very high by making the ground under you explode upwards forming into a volcano, if u cant break your fall you'll plunge into the crator at bone breaking pace.

(Doton: Doryuu Jouheki) - Earth Style: Earth Rampart
Rank: C
Type: Supplenetary
Range: Short
Chakra cost:15
Damage Points: 30
Description: An earth jutsu that makes the earth rise like a Plateau and can be used with Waterfall Basin to make a waterfall.

(Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu)– EarthRelease: Hidinglike a mole technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost:15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user changes earth into fine sand by channeling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. While underground one can sense what is happening on the surface and use the information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. Once can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy cant reach.

(Doton: Kaido Shōkutsu) - Earth Style: Opening Earth Rising Excavation
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost:40
Damage points: N/A
Description: With the technique, the user can bring up something from deep within the ground. The result of which has the appearance and near size of an erupting volcano.
 

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In my last move since u opened a portal with mud fall he hadn't had time to do the previous move ( spikes) so he falls to his death in the fissure while I go underground through the side of the fissure u made.
 

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Now, i'll try to review this point by point and get someone to review my review. lol

i'll go first since i started 2nd last time, Bones bio like last time and if it matters i'll fight your vendetta bio.

Daz Bones eyes you up then makes a single handseal and creates an earth clone on his right hand side, then i make the ground under you drop 2 meters at high speeds as the clone slams his hand on the ground, making the ground that is now surrounding you spiral inwards on you tight enough to hold you tototally still.


(Doton: Tsuchi Bunshin no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Earth Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 25
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates upto three clones of earth and mud. Since they are made of such materials, they can reform after being hit by physical, water or wind techniques. They can also use up to C rank earth techniques.


(Doton: Chidōkaku) - Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
Rank: A
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user lowers or raises the ground in the surrounding area at high speeds, allowing them to create giant holes in the ground or avoid attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that it is lowered to is up to the user and rasing earth can be done up to 20 meters tallcreating a small cliff or they can create trenches that can be as deep as 2meters. Other than being moved below ground relative to the surrounding surface the terrain is not altered, plant life and people retaining their same positions.


(Doton: Retsudotensho) - Earth Style: Split Earth Turn Around Palm
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique causes the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave.


Nice opening move but in my own opinion, earth clones are only useful in taijutsu as most elemental clones. You could have ended up better with another attack jutsu. Also, if you made the earth beneath him rise, the effect of the earth split around palm would be higher as the movement of the earth would actually stick him to the technique.

As V sees your clone being made, he create a sucking vortex in the ground, sucking in you and your clone.


(Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Style: Antlion Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: This jutsu causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the center, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated.

While you two are struggling to get out, I make a clone of myself to my side.

(Doton: Tsuchi Bunshin no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Earth Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 25
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates upto three clones of earth and mud. Since they are made of such materials, they can reform after being hit by physical, water or wind techniques. They can also use up to C rank earth techniques.

The clone throws a series of kunai (with explosion tags) at you while I then instantly do 3 hand seals and create a wave of earth that shackles you and your clone in place while we start to ride towards you towards you, while spikes made out of the front of the wave pierce through both of you.


(Doton: Doryūha) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Wave
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After performing the required 3 set hand seal sequence the user creates and rides a wave of earth that can branch of to attack from a distance. The user can also use the technique to manipulate the terrain and trap the target by wrapping earth round their legs preventing them from moving
Antlion=excellent counter as it doesn't allow Sarutobi to make a move without having to defend against it. However, your following moves aren't very intelligent in the use of earth. Dropping lid or spikes are a good follow up to the ant lion. The first traps your enemy in the ant lion, the second pierces him/her while he's in it. Also, your flow wave. Honestly i think people are teaching this technique wrong. in my opinion it can either lock your opponent or make a wave for you to ride on. Not both at the same time. But that doesn't even matter. Why? because he was in the ant lion when you used it (or he would be unless he defended which he did) which would make locking him in place impossible as his body is already wrapped in the ant lion. It wouldn't work very well and its useless. You could however use, for example, bedrock coffin to squash him and the ant lion all together.

as the antlion is created under us i create a giant stone golem out of my mouth who puts his arms and/or legs (as they are formed, arms first then legs then stands up a little as we climb on) on either side of the ground where the antlion doesn't reach as my clone and i grab onto him and climb on his back, getting out of the pit and my clone begins throwing his own bomb kunai to counter yours.

as i see the earth begining to rise up under you to form the wave a gigantic pillar of rock rises from the ground in front of the antlion pit and smashs into you and your wave, sending you flying while another pillar emerges from your clone's left hand side, smashing him to mud.




(Doton: Dai iwa Kyojin no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Great Stone Golem Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user creates a even larger and stronger version of Earth Release: Stone Golem Technique



(Doton: Kujo Joushou Iwa Chuuseki) - Earth Release: Destructive Rising Rock Pillars
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: This jutsu causes gigantic pillars of rock to forcefully emerge from the ground. This is a even greater scaled Earth Release: Rising Spikes and is large enough to impale a summoning technique.


Well, the golem is big and he would be able to make you rise from the ant lion and block your descent and save you...if he thrown you off of the ant lion. The way you used it you are assuming the ant lion is about 2 mt around and its bigger... Also, the golem only stays in play the turn you use it. Because of this, you should have used it to throw you away from the ant lion instead of standing on his back. As for the pillars it was a good use of them, so nothing to say about that. ^^

(You forgot to defend from the kunai, as the tags would have atleast startled you, but I guess this is disputable)
As you crawl on the golem, a huge fissure appears under you and your clone, the golem, and about anything in a close radius of you. The hole is atleast 15 meters deep. This fissure is made by my clone.


(Doton: Doryuu Kekai) - Earth Style: Earth Fissure
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This jutsu splits the earth apart to make a fissure. The size of the fissure is proportioned to the amount of chakra of the user.

While I create spikes in the fissure from on top of the wave.


(Doton: Ganchuusou) - Earth Style: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user creates spikes of earth that come up from the ground to stab the enemy.This jutsu can be made in a short or mid distace but the jutsu its self is made of a 6 foot radius of spikes.

Unbeknown to you, my clone then goes underground and can sense anything you are doing.


(Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Hiding like a mole technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user changes earth into fine sand by channeling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. While underground one can sense what is happening on the surface and use the information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. Once can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy cant reach.
See the bolded part in his previous post quote.

Well, since you interrupted your opponent you should have started by saying *As i see you climb into the golem i, instead of making the earth flow, use...* since you'd be using the earth flow wave or the fissure, its good to always state that you change your previous move when you alter the time line. Other than that i liked your move. The going underground of the clone is iffy...not he going under, but you saying that sarutobi wouldn't be able to see it.

Sorry didnt get a chance to get on yesterday

As the fissure opens below us my earth clone grabs my hand and throws me over to the edge while I cover myself in stone armor, so if you fire spikes at me I can easily break them, I use the stone on my arms to extend as spears and use them like vaulting poles to get back on the ground, my clone throws kunai with steel wires to pull himself up during this. As we both get on the earth he makes spears come up in front of you and I make 3 seals making a wave of earth come from behind yours and slam into it, throwing you into the spikes.


(Koka no Jutsu) -Hardening Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offense/Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: By utilizing earth-based chakra, the user creates armour made of rock that encases their body. The armour can also be used to create extendable weapons to strike a target with.

(Doton: Doryūha) -Earth Release: Earth Flow Wave
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid -Long
Chakra cost:20
Damage points: 40
Description: After performing the required 3 set hand seal sequence the user creates and rides a wave of earth that can branch of to attack from a distance.The user can also use the technique to manipulate the terrain and trap the target by wrapping earth round their legs preventing them from moving

(Doton: Ganchuusou) -Earth Style: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user creates spikes of earth that come up from the ground to stab the enemy.This jutsu can be made in a short or mid distace but the jutsu its self is made of a 6 foot radius of spikes.
Hum...this was a bit confusing to me. I didn't get why you used hardening technique if your clone throwed you off the fissure. The spikes would be done on the fissure and its walls, not out of it. Also, if your clone sends you out of the way, this means he's caught in the fissure and is falling and would be impaled by the spikes before he can get himself out of the way. Also, you say you make 3 hand seals (needed for flow wave) but how?

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Its a misconception that you can use hand seals while having the hardening technique activated. You can, however, stated you disabled it to make the hand seals, releasing it previously.

Sorry, I forgot to sticky this thread.
Though there are several technical errors (I'm pretty sure Scorps will go over them soon, I don't want to sound cocky, sorry if I do... :() in your move, I'll react accordingly.
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As your clone launches you in the air, the sky opens up above you and mud starts to drop all over the area above you and your clone, and the entire area around the fissure (I don't get hit though, obviously >.>). You wouldn't notice due to your attacks on me, and if you notice it would probably be too late as you're in the air (atleast up to mid air).

(Doton: Doro Kakou) – Earth Release: Mud Fall
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates an opening within the sky, which drips down onto the opponent a large amount of mud, covering them. It’s normally followed up by Lightning release: sixteen pillar bind to create a giant oven around the opponent and then using Fire release: Firing biscuit technique to ignite the oven, hardening the mud and immobilizing the enemy target.

As the mud drips over both of you, my clone release kunai with explosion tags at you. They detonate near you, causing the mud in the surrounding to turn to lava due to the increased heat and fire, and to give you severe wounds as we speak.

As if this were not enough, the ground around your clone start to crackle and disrupts him as my clone uses his technique


(Doton: Retsudotensho) - Earth Style: Split Earth Turn Around Palm
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique causes the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave.

while all this is happening, I take out a map and start to manipulate the ground, causing a huge spike to come out of the ground and impale you as you deal with the mud, and causing other spikes to erupt as well around the big one. Not only that, but me and my clone rise up on a rampart. I then leave put the map back in my pocket.



(Doton: Uiten Pen) - Earth Style: Wheel Of Fortune
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Descripton: A form of summoning where the user first takes out a topographical map that they can use to change any earth-based feature of the battlefield.
Note: can only be used once per battle
Two things about this move: First, if you use mud fall, you would have to use it either after the earth spikes or before. If before, you would actually fill the whole fissure with mud and bury your enemy in it. If after you would make his movements restricted since you'd only get him more or less about the time he would be already out of the fissure and landing on the side.

The other thing is wheel of fortune. Its a misconception that you can use it that way. I mean you conveniently had a map with the design of the battle ground with all the alterations you and sarutobi have already made and the spikes already drawn in the spot where sarutobi would be? Unless you drawn the map on spot its impossible to use this technique that way because you can't possibly know before hand (before the battle starts) were your opponent will be and what your effects will be on the battle field. Drawing it at the time you are to use it is ridiculous since you wouldn't have time. And taking out a pre made map would only work if its something generic like making a rampart or a mountain or something that wouldn't depend on the battle or the position of your enemy.

Probably but meh

As the hole in the sky opens and mud starts falling out my clone, having just thrown me is still facing towards me and sees this so Instead of saving himself he creates a rampart that comes out of the side of fissure extends to block the mud from hitting me, letting me use the stone armors ability to extend the stone at my arms to turn them into spears with hands on the ends that attach to the fissure wall and then shorten again, pulling me to the wall where I then merge into the ground and reappear long range behind without a sound.

After emerging and avoiding detection I slam my hand on the ground and throw you up into the air very high by making the ground under you explode upwards forming into a volcano, if u cant break your fall you'll plunge into the crator at bone breaking pace.

(Doton: Doryuu Jouheki) - Earth Style: Earth Rampart
Rank: C
Type: Supplenetary
Range: Short
Chakra cost:15
Damage Points: 30
Description: An earth jutsu that makes the earth rise like a Plateau and can be used with Waterfall Basin to make a waterfall.

(Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu)– EarthRelease: Hidinglike a mole technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost:15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user changes earth into fine sand by channeling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. While underground one can sense what is happening on the surface and use the information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. Once can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy cant reach.

(Doton: Kaido Shōkutsu) - Earth Style: Opening Earth Rising Excavation
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost:40
Damage points: N/A
Description: With the technique, the user can bring up something from deep within the ground. The result of which has the appearance and near size of an erupting volcano.
Actually there are several errors on this one all having to do with misuse of jutsu. You can't use earth rampart like that and if you did, you'd actually be blocking your own ascending motion and you would hit the "rampart" you made to block the mud fall. Earth rampart, the C-Rank can only create a plateau of earth from beneath you. Again, you are sticking too much techniques into the time frame. Earth escavation doesn't do damage and it wouldn't make wesobi be thrown up in the air except if he was underground, which he wasn't.

Time frame gets very scrambled by now. When you change the time line you should always always state what changes. *since you have to defend against X you won't do Y * or *since i see you do W i instead of doing Z, do K*

Ah well, Scorps said he was going evaluate it here. So I guess we should just call it a day :p.
In my last move since u opened a portal with mud fall he hadn't had time to do the previous move ( spikes) so he falls to his death in the fissure while I go underground through the side of the fissure u made.
I'm sorry, but if your clone is looking up, how can he see his spikes hit me?
Any questions on my review? I'll try to have this checked by a sensei ^^
 

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Well I had been told by several senior members you can create ramparts out of the sides of earth instead of below you so if that's changed I didn't know about it. And I was thinking of using mountain smash instead in my last attack but wasent sure if that'd be helpful since you can merge into earth to avoid attacks like that.
As for hardening technique would I be able to just say I make the earth surrounding my hands move so my hands aren't covered in it at the time?
 

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Well I had been told by several senior members you can create ramparts out of the sides of earth instead of below you so if that's changed I didn't know about it. And I was thinking of using mountain smash instead in my last attack but wasent sure if that'd be helpful since you can merge into earth to avoid attacks like that.
As for hardening technique would I be able to just say I make the earth surrounding my hands move so my hands aren't covered in it at the time?
The C-Rank version of earth rampart is short ranged. Logically it will only be able to rise earth right beneath you. B-Rank earth rampart is more free since its short to mid, meaning that you would be able to create plateaus in different places around that range. But the fact remains that if you use that from the sides of the fissure to block the mud it means you aren't off the fissure completly and that you would also be blocking your ascension and would hit the portion that protects you from the mud.

As for mountain smash, no. The slabs are infused with S-Rank earth chakra. Only an equal or higher merging technique would be able to do it. You can, however, merge with the ground since the technique only affects 2 slabs from the side.
 

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Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Wall no Text!

i'll go first since i started 2nd last time, Bones bio like last time and if it matters i'll fight your vendetta bio.

Daz Bones eyes you up then makes a single handseal and creates an earth clone on his right hand side, then i make the ground under you drop 2 meters at high speeds as the clone slams his hand on the ground, making the ground that is now surrounding you spiral inwards on you tight enough to hold you tototally still.


(Doton: Tsuchi Bunshin no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Earth Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 25
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates upto three clones of earth and mud. Since they are made of such materials, they can reform after being hit by physical, water or wind techniques. They can also use up to C rank earth techniques.


(Doton: Chidōkaku) - Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
Rank: A
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user lowers or raises the ground in the surrounding area at high speeds, allowing them to create giant holes in the ground or avoid attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that it is lowered to is up to the user and rasing earth can be done up to 20 meters tallcreating a small cliff or they can create trenches that can be as deep as 2meters. Other than being moved below ground relative to the surrounding surface the terrain is not altered, plant life and people retaining their same positions.


(Doton: Retsudotensho) - Earth Style: Split Earth Turn Around Palm
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique causes the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave.


The idea in your move is nice, though when starting out in a battle you want to the gain the advantage by keeping him busy. So first a jutsu which can keep him busy, which could be Antlion. Then the clone maybe. Though you always wants to be on the offensive to have the advantage of the battle.

As V sees your clone being made, he create a sucking vortex in the ground, sucking in you and your clone.


(Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Style: Antlion Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: This jutsu causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the center, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated.

While you two are struggling to get out, I make a clone of myself to my side.

(Doton: Tsuchi Bunshin no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Earth Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 25
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates upto three clones of earth and mud. Since they are made of such materials, they can reform after being hit by physical, water or wind techniques. They can also use up to C rank earth techniques.

The clone throws a series of kunai (with explosion tags) at you while I then instantly do 3 hand seals and create a wave of earth that shackles you and your clone in place while we start to ride towards you towards you, while spikes made out of the front of the wave pierce through both of you.


(Doton: Doryūha) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Wave
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After performing the required 3 set hand seal sequence the user creates and rides a wave of earth that can branch of to attack from a distance. The user can also use the technique to manipulate the terrain and trap the target by wrapping earth round their legs preventing them from moving

Good move, though I'm not sure what you're doing with the earth wave, lol. You can only use either of the things you want to do with the earth wave, and where do the spikes come from? By using the Earth Flow Wave? It's soft earth, which can't really pierce, thus why it can be ridden on or either hold/Prevent a the target's movements. Also, why would you bind him in the antlion? Doesn't that defeat it's purpose? By holdning into the wall of loosen earth you basically keeping him above danger as the jutsu itself(Antlion), does damage by using the masses of weight of earth after had burrying the opponent.

as the antlion is created under us i create a giant stone golem out of my mouth who puts his arms and/or legs (as they are formed, arms first then legs then stands up a little as we climb on) on either side of the ground where the antlion doesn't reach as my clone and i grab onto him and climb on his back, getting out of the pit and my clone begins throwing his own bomb kunai to counter yours.

as i see the earth begining to rise up under you to form the wave a gigantic pillar of rock rises from the ground in front of the antlion pit and smashs into you and your wave, sending you flying while another pillar emerges from your clone's left hand side, smashing him to mud.




(Doton: Dai iwa Kyojin no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Great Stone Golem Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user creates a even larger and stronger version of Earth Release: Stone Golem Technique



(Doton: Kujo Joushou Iwa Chuuseki) - Earth Release: Destructive Rising Rock Pillars
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: This jutsu causes gigantic pillars of rock to forcefully emerge from the ground. This is a even greater scaled Earth Release: Rising Spikes and is large enough to impale a summoning technique.



What you did with the Earth Golem was a tad unnesscary, lol. Also, the Antlion isn't that small, it's actually a quite big technique. Of course, it depends on how the user describes his move when using it. You could used many other techniques, for an example; Hidden in the Rock Technique. The thing most people forget is that Antlion goes much down in depth so once the opponent falls into it, the user won't be able to see him. Thus why Wesobi's restrainin' move failed imo, as he didn't know your position besides you being in the antlion.

You don't want to use the pillar infront of the earth wave, but much rather underneath it, by doing so, you would nullify it immediatly, plus putting your opponent into a more dangerous sitaution. You shoulda used it more sneaky.
And by nullifying his earth wave, I mean your pillar would simply make it splash out in all direction while he woulda got hit by the blunt force, aswell would his clone.
(You forgot to defend from the kunai, as the tags would have atleast startled you, but I guess this is disputable)
As you crawl on the golem, a huge fissure appears under you and your clone, the golem, and about anything in a close radius of you. The hole is atleast 15 meters deep. This fissure is made by my clone.


(Doton: Doryuu Kekai) - Earth Style: Earth Fissure
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This jutsu splits the earth apart to make a fissure. The size of the fissure is proportioned to the amount of chakra of the user.

While I create spikes in the fissure from on top of the wave.


(Doton: Ganchuusou) - Earth Style: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user creates spikes of earth that come up from the ground to stab the enemy.This jutsu can be made in a short or mid distace but the jutsu its self is made of a 6 foot radius of spikes.

Unbeknown to you, my clone then goes underground and can sense anything you are doing.


(Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Hiding like a mole technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user changes earth into fine sand by channeling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. While underground one can sense what is happening on the surface and use the information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. Once can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy cant reach.

If his golem is already holdning onto the side of the earth, and you create a fissure out of that, wouldn't he not just continue to climb without further problems? The earth fissure imo was unnessecary, you shoulda just went with the spikes. Though would that kill his golem? I doubt so.

Sorry didnt get a chance to get on yesterday

As the fissure opens below us my earth clone grabs my hand and throws me over to the edge while I cover myself in stone armor, so if you fire spikes at me I can easily break them, I use the stone on my arms to extend as spears and use them like vaulting poles to get back on the ground, my clone throws kunai with steel wires to pull himself up during this. As we both get on the earth he makes spears come up in front of you and I make 3 seals making a wave of earth come from behind yours and slam into it, throwing you into the spikes.


(Koka no Jutsu) -Hardening Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offense/Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: By utilizing earth-based chakra, the user creates armour made of rock that encases their body. The armour can also be used to create extendable weapons to strike a target with.

(Doton: Doryūha) -Earth Release: Earth Flow Wave
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid -Long
Chakra cost:20
Damage points: 40
Description: After performing the required 3 set hand seal sequence the user creates and rides a wave of earth that can branch of to attack from a distance.The user can also use the technique to manipulate the terrain and trap the target by wrapping earth round their legs preventing them from moving

(Doton: Ganchuusou) -Earth Style: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user creates spikes of earth that come up from the ground to stab the enemy.This jutsu can be made in a short or mid distace but the jutsu its self is made of a 6 foot radius of spikes.

I don't know what to say, lol. Hardening technique cannot be used airborne, It's used by gathering the rocks around one. Basically it makes you stationery, lol. So that wouldn't have worked, and I don't know what to add about the last part. =|

Sorry, I forgot to sticky this thread.
Though there are several technical errors (I'm pretty sure Scorps will go over them soon, I don't want to sound cocky, sorry if I do... :() in your move, I'll react accordingly.
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As your clone launches you in the air, the sky opens up above you and mud starts to drop all over the area above you and your clone, and the entire area around the fissure (I don't get hit though, obviously >.>). You wouldn't notice due to your attacks on me, and if you notice it would probably be too late as you're in the air (atleast up to mid air).

(Doton: Doro Kakou) – Earth Release: Mud Fall
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates an opening within the sky, which drips down onto the opponent a large amount of mud, covering them. It’s normally followed up by Lightning release: sixteen pillar bind to create a giant oven around the opponent and then using Fire release: Firing biscuit technique to ignite the oven, hardening the mud and immobilizing the enemy target.

As the mud drips over both of you, my clone release kunai with explosion tags at you. They detonate near you, causing the mud in the surrounding to turn to lava due to the increased heat and fire, and to give you severe wounds as we speak.

As if this were not enough, the ground around your clone start to crackle and disrupts him as my clone uses his technique


(Doton: Retsudotensho) - Earth Style: Split Earth Turn Around Palm
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique causes the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave.

while all this is happening, I take out a map and start to manipulate the ground, causing a huge spike to come out of the ground and impale you as you deal with the mud, and causing other spikes to erupt as well around the big one. Not only that, but me and my clone rise up on a rampart. I then leave put the map back in my pocket.



(Doton: Uiten Pen) - Earth Style: Wheel Of Fortune
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Descripton: A form of summoning where the user first takes out a topographical map that they can use to change any earth-based feature of the battlefield.
Note: can only be used once per battle

Yes, Mud fall is a great technique, though as he threw himself foward and the way I understood what you have been doing on your wave, you, yourself. Is pretty much in for the same radius of getting by the mud. But anyways, must of the mud would fall down into the fissure, though due theres so much it will fill it up with ease and Saru wouldn't have been sucked down, lol. Also theres only a small chance that woulda happenend.

Explosion tags do not turn mud into lava, extreme heat over time does. Like Hiruzen's Dragon Flame Fire technique~. Nonetheless, the explosive tags would only blow the mud in all directions.

You cannot use Wheel of Fortune like that. Also, if I'm correct, as it was shown in the movie or w.e, the user actually summons a cranyon out from the scroll which he then can manipulate and alter the terrain as he wishes, though not in an offensive purpose! You could place him on a pillar with spikes underneath, but not the way you used it.

Probably but meh

As the hole in the sky opens and mud starts falling out my clone, having just thrown me is still facing towards me and sees this so Instead of saving himself he creates a rampart that comes out of the side of fissure extends to block the mud from hitting me, letting me use the stone armors ability to extend the stone at my arms to turn them into spears with hands on the ends that attach to the fissure wall and then shorten again, pulling me to the wall where I then merge into the ground and reappear long range behind without a sound.

After emerging and avoiding detection I slam my hand on the ground and throw you up into the air very high by making the ground under you explode upwards forming into a volcano, if u cant break your fall you'll plunge into the crator at bone breaking pace.

(Doton: Doryuu Jouheki) - Earth Style: Earth Rampart
Rank: C
Type: Supplenetary
Range: Short
Chakra cost:15
Damage Points: 30
Description: An earth jutsu that makes the earth rise like a Plateau and can be used with Waterfall Basin to make a waterfall.

(Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu)– EarthRelease: Hidinglike a mole technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost:15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user changes earth into fine sand by channeling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. While underground one can sense what is happening on the surface and use the information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. Once can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy cant reach.

(Doton: Kaido Shōkutsu) - Earth Style: Opening Earth Rising Excavation
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost:40
Damage points: N/A
Description: With the technique, the user can bring up something from deep within the ground. The result of which has the appearance and near size of an erupting volcano.

You cannot use earth techniques related to the earth itself, unless you're in contact with the ground. Unless shown other-wise in the manga/anime.(Though that only counts for the certains jutsus shown that for.)

I don't have much to say with the hiding like a mole technique, probably because your move went wrong as you performed the earth rampart while mid-air.

To scorps, I think you said something about the last jutsus of Saru's; It can be used to launch the opponent into the air with. I mean, what happens if you stand on the epicenter of a piece of earth which is about to crack up, you go up with it. Thus why it can be used to launch people up with. Same goes for underground.

I think that was pretty much it.
 
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So basically I have the wrong idea on a couple things of earth, its been a long time since I saw lee vs the guy who used hardening technique I thought you made the earth out of chakra and it formed on your skin not just gathering real rocks. Thanks gobi :)
 
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