New Manga

UzumakiJake

Active member
Legendary
Joined
Oct 2, 2008
Messages
10,148
Kin
0💸
Kumi
0💴
Trait Points
0⚔️
yah... i dont have a name for this yet... i was makin it and someone told me to post here...
so i hope u like it



Every 100 yrs an elemental spirit can choose to inhabit a new born. There are 6 elemental spirits Fire, Water, Wind, Earth, Dark, and Light.

A hundred yrs ago there was a great hero that had saved his people using an elemental spirit, now a hundred an 8yrs later his great grand son carries on his legacy.

In the country of Katoe

Lordock: Where is my dinner!

Servant: Sorry sir. We are waiting for our cooks to arrive.

Lordock: My cooks haven?t arrived yet!! What?s taking them so long?!?

Conkour: (Walks in) Sir the servants have arrived.

Lordock: Good when they get here let them make my dinner and then kill them!

Servant: Kill sir??

Lordock: why is there a problem with that??

Servant: No, sir.

Meanwhile in Boneigh

Caress: Hey look its jinketsu!!

Jinketsu: hey guys sorry I?m late!!

Scott: you?re an idiot, jinketsu! What took you so long!

Jinketsu: Sorry? My father made me do a lot of chores.

Caress: Hurry guys! Training starts soon!

Scott: right, and we are falling behind! We are almost the worst class and its all your fault jinketsu!!

Jinketsu: What!?! I will show you! Lets throw down right here, right now!

Caress: Guys stop! We have to go, were late already!

Jinketsu and Scott: Ok lets go!

Caress: boys?..

In the training field

Stiller: Alright guys, I have set up a tournament the worst students will participate in the gym. The worst Students include every one who has ranked any where from 1-50. Everyone else stays here.

Scott: Ha! Ha! Jinketsu! I guess you have to go to the gym! What where you saying earlier about wanting to fight me?

Jinketsu: Grr? Alright Scott Once I win the tournament over in the gym I will come back and take you on!

Stiller: Ok guys stop, you need to report to the gym Jinketsu.

Jinketsu?s fight at the gym starts!

Jinketsu: alright lets go!

Kristy: Haha as if you could beat me!

Jinketsu: Ha! Just fight!

Jinketsu and Kristy fight *Jinketsu rushes forward and jumps into the air with a downward trust with his leg. Kristy blocks the attacks with her arms and jumps back, getting her footing she rushes towards Jinketsu, she swings a kick towards his legs, which he jumps to avoid spinning in the air he comes back down and kicks her in the gut.*

Kristy: *pants*

Jinketsu: *offers hand* are you finished yet?

Kristy: (in head says to self) *this boy is stronger then I thought?.* Never! *gets up and attacks again*

Jinketsu: great?. I was hoping for a break? *blocks attack and gets back on offensive*

Jinketsu and Kristy continue to fight. *they rush towards each other, Kristy jumps up with a knee to the face which Jinketsu blocks with both hands and he does a back flip to avoid another attack but she kicks Jinketsu right in the face. He gets her in a head lock, kicks her feet up into the air and falls backwards landing on her*

Kristy: *pants* alright that?s it!!!!

*Kristy?s eyes turn fully brown and her face starts to crack next to her eye?s as if she was made of earth*

*Kristy waves her hands and the rock from the ground start to cover her fists*

Kristy: Take this! *attacks with full force*

Kristy punched and when jinketsu tries to block her attack was too great and jinketsu fell to the ground in pain.

Kristy: not so confident now are you?

Jinketsu: *squints 1 eye in pain while trying to hide it* NO? I?m just getting started!

Jinketsu jumps to his feet and tries a kick but she punched his knee. Jinketsu screams in pain.

Tournament referee: OK stop! Do you hear that?

Jinketsu: *laying on the ground in pain* hear what?

*Boom!!* an explosion is heard out side.
 

punk365

Active member
Elite
Joined
Jul 3, 2008
Messages
5,703
Kin
0💸
Kumi
0💴
Trait Points
0⚔️
yah... i dont have a name for this yet... i was makin it and someone told me to post here...
so i hope u like it



Every 100 yrs an elemental spirit can choose to inhabit a new born. There are 6 elemental spirits Fire, Water, Wind, Earth, Dark, and Light.

A hundred yrs ago there was a great hero that had saved his people using an elemental spirit, now a hundred an 8yrs later his great grand son carries on his legacy.

In the country of Katoe

Lordock: Where is my dinner!

Servant: Sorry sir. We are waiting for our cooks to arrive.

Lordock: My cooks haven?t arrived yet!! What?s taking them so long?!?

Conkour: (Walks in) Sir the servants have arrived.

Lordock: Good when they get here let them make my dinner and then kill them!

Servant: Kill sir??

Lordock: why is there a problem with that??

Servant: No, sir.

Meanwhile in Boneigh

Caress: Hey look its jinketsu!!

Jinketsu: hey guys sorry I?m late!!

Scott: you?re an idiot, jinketsu! What took you so long!

Jinketsu: Sorry? My father made me do a lot of chores.

Caress: Hurry guys! Training starts soon!

Scott: right, and we are falling behind! We are almost the worst class and its all your fault jinketsu!!

Jinketsu: What!?! I will show you! Lets throw down right here, right now!

Caress: Guys stop! We have to go, were late already!

Jinketsu and Scott: Ok lets go!

Caress: boys?..

In the training field

Stiller: Alright guys, I have set up a tournament the worst students will participate in the gym. The worst Students include every one who has ranked any where from 1-50. Everyone else stays here.

Scott: Ha! Ha! Jinketsu! I guess you have to go to the gym! What where you saying earlier about wanting to fight me?

Jinketsu: Grr? Alright Scott Once I win the tournament over in the gym I will come back and take you on!

Stiller: Ok guys stop, you need to report to the gym Jinketsu.

Jinketsu?s fight at the gym starts!

Jinketsu: alright lets go!

Kristy: Haha as if you could beat me!

Jinketsu: Ha! Just fight!

Jinketsu and Kristy fight *Jinketsu rushes forward and jumps into the air with a downward trust with his leg. Kristy blocks the attacks with her arms and jumps back, getting her footing she rushes towards Jinketsu, she swings a kick towards his legs, which he jumps to avoid spinning in the air he comes back down and kicks her in the gut.*

Kristy: *pants*

Jinketsu: *offers hand* are you finished yet?

Kristy: (in head says to self) *this boy is stronger then I thought?.* Never! *gets up and attacks again*

Jinketsu: great?. I was hoping for a break? *blocks attack and gets back on offensive*

Jinketsu and Kristy continue to fight. *they rush towards each other, Kristy jumps up with a knee to the face which Jinketsu blocks with both hands and he does a back flip to avoid another attack but she kicks Jinketsu right in the face. He gets her in a head lock, kicks her feet up into the air and falls backwards landing on her*

Kristy: *pants* alright that?s it!!!!

*Kristy?s eyes turn fully brown and her face starts to crack next to her eye?s as if she was made of earth*

*Kristy waves her hands and the rock from the ground start to cover her fists*

Kristy: Take this! *attacks with full force*

Kristy punched and when jinketsu tries to block her attack was too great and jinketsu fell to the ground in pain.

Kristy: not so confident now are you?

Jinketsu: *squints 1 eye in pain while trying to hide it* NO? I?m just getting started!

Jinketsu jumps to his feet and tries a kick but she punched his knee. Jinketsu screams in pain.

Tournament referee: OK stop! Do you hear that?

Jinketsu: *laying on the ground in pain* hear what?

*Boom!!* an explosion is heard out side.
so wat will be next?
 
  • Like
Reactions: UzumakiJake

UzumakiJake

Active member
Legendary
Joined
Oct 2, 2008
Messages
10,148
Kin
0💸
Kumi
0💴
Trait Points
0⚔️
OK... Chapter 2...


Jinketsu: What was that?!

Tournement Referee: Thats an attack on our city!

Croud: AHH!!! run!!

Judges: Every one stay calm our millitary will handle this! if not there are enough men to defend the city! every one stay Calm!!

Croud: Starts to calm

*Boom!!!* More explosions and buildings falling could be heard.

Jinketsu: we have to do something!

Kristy: *face turns back to normal* like what?! what can we do?! were 8! for crying out loud!

Jinketsu: If something is worth living for it should be worth dying for right?! well we need to do our part!

Tournement referee: Don't worry Jinketsu our referee will handle it.

Jinketsu: What about my brother and sister!?!

Tournement referee: they will be fine they should be on their way here now.

Door opens and the other group walks in.

Jinketsu: Where.... Where is my brother? Scott!! where are you!!!

Kristy: *rubs Jinketsu's back dont worry he will be ok*

Jinketsu: we have to go find him, we have to save him!!

Caress: Jinketsu!! Your here!

Jinketsu: Caress! where is scott!?!

Cares:......

Jinketsu: I see so he went to find mom and dad huh?

Caress: yah....

Jinketsu: then what are we waiting for lets go get him! *stands up and then falls down in pain grabing his knee.*

Caress: *grabs him as he falls* What happened.

Kristy: i was fighting him and i ended up unleashing power ive never seen before.

Jinketsu: there is no time for talk we need to run! *stands back up and leads Caress and Kristy to the back and climb out a window*



Mean while Scott arrives at his house

Scott: *Swings open door and runs into the house* Mom!! Dad!!! where are you!! Are you here!! MOM!!! DAD!!

Scott runs up the stairs and see's his parents dead on the floor.

Scott: Mom... Dad... *starts to cry* I shouldn't be crying im 10 after all.

Dark figure: So i see your moarning over your parents deaths are you?

*places hand on Scotts shoulder*

Dark figure: well... You see.... the person Responsible his name is Lordock.

*lifts hand and extends to offer help*

Dark figure: i follow orders this was not my doing but his. Come with me and i can train you and one day you can take your vengance.

Scott: *rubs his eyes* How do i know i can trust you?

Crash! something flies threw the wall.

Dark figure shoots fire out of his hands and attacks the figure that came through the wall

Dark figure: You see, i have what you call an elemental spirit inside me. You do too. i will help you unleash that power but you will have to come with me!

Scott: alright i will come with you but leave my brother and sister alone!

Dark figure: thats fine they will survive. Hey! Angel get in here!!!

Angel: *Jumps in on one knee and a fist to the ground* Yes sir?

Dark Figure: Take scott and bring him back to the city and start his training.

Angel: Yes master... But i have one question... Is he? you know like us?

Dark Figure: yes

Angel: Which spirit?

Dark figure: Lighting....

Angel: I see how many more are there?

Dark figure: four more we will have to find them some other time. now go i have some buisness to finish up.

Angel and scott leave, as The dark figure Just stands there.

Dark figure: kill his sibkings

Another figure in the dark: Yes sir.
 
Top