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Izuna Uchiha

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Oh wow...ok....

*Starts sending it out of my fingers*

Ok....I'm.....kinda.....getting...it

*Trying not to shock myself*

How's this?

Not too bad. U seem to be able to make it extend far, that's good for attack, but this move is also for defense.

Try and make the lightning shorter, but more spread, like this

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u see? more bolts, bur shorter one. This will help u defend against attack.

Try it,
 

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Not too bad. U seem to be able to make it extend far, that's good for attack, but this move is also for defense.

Try and make the lightning shorter, but more spread, like this

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u see? more bolts, bur shorter one. This will help u defend against attack.

Try it,
Ok.

*Raises my hands above my head and sends the chakra out through my fingers. Then makes it extend just far enough to hit the ground so I'm encircled in the lightning.*

Is that what you meant? Or is it better to focus it in kind of a wall right infront of me. I know that the more you concentrate on one area the stronger the attack or defense. The more spread out, the weaker, but you cover all sides.

Which is better, or does it just depend on what's coming at you?
 

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Ok.

*Raises my hands above my head and sends the chakra out through my fingers. Then makes it extend just far enough to hit the ground so I'm encircled in the lightning.*

Is that what you meant? Or is it better to focus it in kind of a wall right infront of me. I know that the more you concentrate on one area the stronger the attack or defense. The more spread out, the weaker, but you cover all sides.

Which is better, or does it just depend on what's coming at you?
Both are good, but u have to remember that this jutsu is still D-rank so any higher rank jutsu can break this defense (except wind because of the elemental affinities).

So what u did is just fine ^^
 

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o_O

Woah...huh..

Oh, ok Sensei

Raiton No Jutsu (Lightning Technique)

Type: Defence/Attack
Rank: D
Range:Short
Chakra cost:10
Damage Points:20
Description: Small static bolts for attack and defense.

*Shows you Raiton No Jutsu in defensive form to make the lightning chakra encircle me*
 

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No problem

Raiton No Jutsu (Lightning Technique)

Type: Defence/Attack
Rank: D
Range:Short
Chakra cost:10
Damage Points:20
Description: Small static bolts for attack and defense.

*Lightning shoots out of my finger tips*
 

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Raiton: Raijingu Sanda (Lightning Style: Raging Thunder)

Type:Attack
Rank: D
Range:Short
Chakra cost:10
Damage Points:20
Description: The user hits the opponent with an electric field shield that covers the users
body.
*does hand seals*
concentrate your chakra around yoour body
 

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Not too bad. U seem to be able to make it extend far, that's good for attack, but this move is also for defense.

Try and make the lightning shorter, but more spread, like this

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u see? more bolts, bur shorter one. This will help u defend against attack.

Try it,
Loving The Sparks There's Nothing Like A Bolt Of Lightning To Start Your day
 

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k.

*focuses on pushing more of my lightning chakra to the outside of my body to make the electrical field.*

Ok, this feels a little stronger, but it's kinda hard to maintain.

*Trys a few more times*

Hmm, well, it's gettin easier, and it feels about strong enough. How's this?

*Does it again*

(P.S- Saw your fight with Naruto.., it went well for ya.:D But I thought each person had a set amount of hp and chakra points depending on their rank? But in most battles I've seen it seems to end on whoever makes contact first.)
 

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k.

*focuses on pushing more of my lightning chakra to the outside of my body to make the electrical field.*

Ok, this feels a little stronger, but it's kinda hard to maintain.

*Trys a few more times*

Hmm, well, it's gettin easier, and it feels about strong enough. How's this?

*Does it again*

(P.S- Saw your fight with Naruto.., it went well for ya.:D But I thought each person had a set amount of hp and chakra points depending on their rank? But in most battles I've seen it seems to end on whoever makes contact first.)


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