New Fanfic (Title will come)

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(Here’s the first paragraph of my new story! It reveals the character's traits. I spent 2 whole days on just this paragraph. I am really trying to please you and take my time! The rest won’t come out for a few days, but I thought you should get a preview! Enjoy and tell me what you think of the story! Play: )

Hagane’s the name. I’m a twenty-five year-old man, have long brown hair, and grey eyes. I’m always with a cowboy hat, and chewing on a toothpick! I’m currently on the desert plains, but oh screw that crap! Just know that I’m a bad ass who’s escaped the Sand. You don’t need to know my whole life story! Just watch what I do, that should be enough! I’m quite strong in wind style jutsu, and I used to be a great Jonin-level ninja from that rat hole they call a village, but now I’m important as hell. I’m ready to take on anything! In fact, why don’t I just tell you what I am! Did you guess? I’m a kage hunter! I hunt wack-job kages! Whom do I work for? How the hell should I know? He’s really secretive. Anyways, am I good or evil? What are they anyway? Well, why don’t you decide sugar?


The release date is on April 1st Pacific Time 5:00 PM. For you kitties that don’t live there, do the math! Oh no, now I’m sounding like him!
 
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Hmmm I like this character already he sounds interesting:):)
I can't wait 2 see what he's all about and his many adventures,trails and presevarants:D:D
 
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Seems okay. But, I don't like narrations done in first person. You don't have to adjust it for me though. Everybody have different likes and you can't please everybody.;)
 
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