new eye charechter bio!! (is bad )

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BASIC INFORMATION
Name: Xavior
Nickname: experiment 1
Gender:Male
Age: 1,000 years old (looks like he is 20)
Clan: N/A

Looks: 6 ft. tall, with dark brown eyes able to change pupils to triangle shapes with mini triangular shapes around it and yellow around pupil and triangle shapes, with spiky black hair.

Personality: known as evil but he is trying to become good.

Village Info.
villige of birth: lab- unknown location
villige of allience: Kumogakure

Rank/ /Chakra info.
Ninja Rank: Missing Nin
Speciality: None
Elements: Lightning ( working on )
Your Ninjutsu:Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


Bakground Info.
History:xavior was made in a lab. He had been experimented on by combining many eyes. one was the sage of six paths rinnigan! others were byakugan, sharingan, and just for a body and extra power a jinchurikis seal broke out and was used for a body. one day xavior broke free of the lab. and went out into the world he had been found by a man in Kumogakure.He trained hard and soon became very strong. He had heard of the lab which he was born in and of a new experiment 2 whos name was to be xivior. xavior went to the lab but when he got there it was too late xivior had escaped. luckly xivior was new born so hwe was as powerfull as xavior. if he had been a day older he would have been stgronger than xavior. xavior finished the job and used xiviors burrogun to add to his. He had collected more power and a way to stay young wqith the passing years. soon he had met a boy named minato. xavior decided to train minato for a few days and leave. he did so. he was declared missing nin when the fourth Raikage was in charge. So by then he tried to convince people of his good will but they got afraid of his eye and sense of chakra. even a normal human could smell it! from then on his objective was to rid the world of evel and make people believe he was good.

Other
pictures: none(still working on drawings)
Themesongs/ Background musics: AAA With you ; Naihi Shinsho One OK Rock ; Niji Aqua times

Battles
Won: None(new to NB)
Lost:None (new to NB)
 
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ok well all u need to do now is add these jutsu (under ninjutsu ofcourse)


Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
_____
(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
_____
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
_____
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
_____
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
_____
(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
_____
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


(just copy and paste it under ninjutsu)

for speacialty put none.
and for elements put one element, and write tht u need to be trained in it.

and next time u cud just edit ur bio. instead of creating a new thread.
 

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should i make new title saying NINJUTSU?

hello ?

dopeyboy do i make new title?

o wait put under already existing thing?

ill do tat
 
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no i see the title already there. just paste it under your ninjutsu.

and dont spam here. ur gonna get banned for doing that in this section.
 

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ok do u like my bio now
. ive already made a new naruto comic script with little scetches with this guy in it. It name is Naruto Kaihousuru

kk ty AND I NOT GONA SPam i did by accident above srry.

pls post comments to make this better ty
 
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u cant have any dojutsu, kekkei genkai yet.
u need 1,500 post to do that

u only have about 50

and u cant have a custom kekkei genkai, ur still to inexperienced.
 

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This bio was born dead without any chance of survival, but to be sure it will never rise again it will be locked away in the deepest dungeon of the Tartarus *moves it to the declined section*

Read the rules and that you can't combine three doujutsu's and be a 1000 years old is obvious.
 
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