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Standing on the surface of the pool at first by the mercy of chakra coated feet I allowed myself to sink into the body of water slowly. Then, I began to use my Suiton chakra to merge with the water, disguising my physical form my senpai it was almost as if my body had turned to complete water. I then moved quickly while submerged and merged to end up underneath and behind my senpai before bursting from the water and delivering a crippling punch to his occidental lobe.

Senseing me behind senpai doges me quite easily and attachks me by throwing several shurikens, so i jump back on the near by pond. While standing on the water i start by doing the Tiger hand seal, while also focusing my suiton chakra into my right foot. After I've gathered enough I quickly stomp my foot onto the ground while releasing the built up chakra, causing water to rise up. The water speeds towards senpai's incoming shuriken attack, my attacks blocks senpai's incoming shuriken attack & also at the same time attacks senpai .

I just can't give him enough time to react (talking to myself), standing mid range from him, I imagine my self splitting into two identical copies of myself then i begin building up chakra i then send the chakra throughout my entire body next i make the tiger hand sign and while imagining myself i release the chakra from my body then a second me poofs into existence next to me. My clone and me look at each other and nod our head. I start concentrating on my water chakra to make it dense and strong. Then i start gathering suiton chakra from throughout out my body and focus it into my mouth. While my clone inhales air into my lungs, knead it with his futon chakra then gather energy below his jaws and forcefully release the wind infused air out of his mouth, he then continues until he had completely emptied his air sac. He focuses on the released air then control it to turn into a twister heading toward senpai. While in the mean time my real body starts to compress the suiton chakra making it as small possible and continuously compressing it and after that my main body releases a water wave from his mouth, the wind twister and my water gun collides which then combines and turns out to be a twistering water bullet! The twistering bullet goes on to hit senpai!! Kaboom!



(Suiton: Suichuu Teigen no Jutsu) – Water Release: Underwater Motion Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This Technique allows the user to properl themselves through a body of water by using their chakra. While underwater, this technique will also partially mask the users prescence.
Note: Must be a large water source such as a lake to use.

(Suiton: Mizu Kamikiri) - Water Release: Rising Water Cutter
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After waving the Tiger hand seal the user slams his foot to the ground, causing water to rise up and travel towards his target as a slicing jet.

(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.

(Suiton: Taihoudan) - Water Style: Water Gun
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: A strong water wave spit from the mouth that is more compressed than Chaos Water Wave and can carve the earth if used on the same area multiply times.

(Fūton: Shippuu Tama) - Wind Release: Twister Shot
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user releases a stream of wind infused chakra from their mouth that takes on the shape of a twister to attack the enemy.

 
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Once again, It's not correct. In our Battle RP, you are only allowed to perform three techniques per move. And each and every move should follow the correct timeframe. Timeframe is one of the key concept in our RP. The time frame goes like them

Your opponent's first move -> Your move -> Opp's move -> Your move -> opp's move -> Your move.

It's not a must to perform three technique per move, you could perform less, but not more that 3 moves. Talking about time frame, you are not allowed to intercept your opponent's first move, nor your opponent is allowed to intercept your first move.

For example, Say that the your opponent performs a technique with 5 hand seals and sends a wind gust towards you, You can only perform your move as soon as your opponent sends the wind gust towards you. You cannot intercept the opponent whilst he is performing the hand seals since hand seals in not considered an offensive action.

An example move:

I will be using my Minato Namikaze bio since Excalibur requested to use it and my Kakuzu bio is in an another official fight.

Consider that My face is covered with a Anbu mask to hide my identity.


Minato Namikaze looks at his opponent who is at mid range to him. Giving a sterner look to his opponent, Minato in one fluid motion take two FTG kunais from his ninja pouch, each in one hand and tosses them towards the sides of opponent in such a way that they will take a projectile path and reach a position of 4 meters behind and 4meter to the sides of the opponent on both his sides. As soon as the kunai leaves his hand, Minato perform a single hand seal and slam his hand hand on the ground and starts to release massive amount of lightning chakra that pools behind the opponent. The chakra then release itself into a gigantic column of lightning that affects a area of 5x5 meter above the surface with the opponent as its epicenter, thereby catching the opponent in the technique and electrocuting him.

( Raiton: Denpō Sekka ) – Lightning Release: Telegram Flash
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After doing the Rabbit → Rat → Horse → Ram hand seals, the user will slam his hand on the ground and release into it a massive amounts of lightning chakra which will then pool beneath his opponent before releasing itself into a gigantic column of lightning which shocks anything caught above it. The technique can affect a bigger or smaller area depending on the users will.


Minato then carefully watches the opponent on how he is reacting to the technique. he now takes an arc like path towards his right and dashes towards the opponent. As he is dashing towards the opponent, Minato yells loudly.."Mokuton Hijutsu : Flower Head bud No jutsu". As soon as he shouts that Minato traps the opponent in a genjutsu in which the opponent appears to be trapped in a large flower bud which then explodes. The opponent believes that an explosion actually happened and suffers severe mental stress. The opponent will also be fooled by Minato that the technique was actually a wood style technique and Minato is a wood user. It will be hard for him to figure out that is a genjutsu.

( Magen: Hanarasui ) - Demonic Illusion: Flower Head Death
Rank: B
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short- Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40 due to stress on the mind
Description: The user will trap the target within an illusion where the opponent appears to be trapped in a large flower bud which then explodes. The opponent is made to believe that an explosion actually occurred and collapses, believing himself to be injured. The resulting stress on his mind causes damage.


As he reaches the right side, 6 meters from the genjutsu affected opponent, Minato concentrates his chakra and creates a exact copy of himself and names it as "Obito". Obito now takes a similar arc like path and reaches 6 meters behind the opponent watching the genjutsu affected opponent collapse due to the effects of the genjutsu.

(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.
Any doubts or questions regarding this? :)
 

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Standing mid range from senpai, I imagine my self splitting into two identical copies of myself then i begin building up chakra i then send the chakra throughout my entire body next i make the tiger hand sign and while imagining myself i release the chakra from my body then a second me poofs into existence next to me. My clone and me look at each other and nod our head.

I start concentrating on my water chakra to make it dense and strong. Then i start gathering suiton chakra from throughout out my body and focus it into my mouth. While my clone inhales air into my lungs, knead it with his futon chakra then gather energy below his jaws and forcefully release the wind infused air out of his mouth, he then continues until he had completely emptied his air sac. He focuses on the released air then control it to turn into a twister heading toward senpai. While in the mean time my real body starts to compress the suiton chakra making it as small possible and continuously compressing it and after that my main body releases a water wave from his mouth, the wind twister and my water gun collides which then combines and turns out to be a twistering water bullet! The twistering bullet goes on the direction of senpai! Did i get him??

(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.

(Suiton: Taihoudan) - Water Style: Water Gun
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: A strong water wave spit from the mouth that is more compressed than Chaos Water Wave and can carve the earth if used on the same area multiply times.

(Fūton: Shippuu Tama) - Wind Release: Twister Shot
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user releases a stream of wind infused chakra from their mouth that takes on the shape of a twister to attack the enemy.



I bet this is okay now!!
 
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Much better. ^^


Next one is a pretty nice technique!. I need you to perform the Boar → Dog → Ram hand seal and utilise your water chakra to create a waterfall by developing a spring of water in a place without water veins. Although this technique sounds to be pretty useless, You can make the water under the feet of the opponent to make the opponent loose their balance. There are many nice advantages to this technique.

*Creates a clone*

"Make my clone loose it's balance"

(Suiton: Takitsubo) - Water Release: Waterfall Basin

Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the required hand seals Boar → Dog → Ram the user creates a waterfall by developing spring water in a place without water veins and manipulating the resulting water current to form a wave. This is a very convenient technique as it can be used for training or relaxation. On the other hand, because it changes the environment on a large scale, it also has the effect of hiding one's location from the enemy by confusing them. The width of the water source, waterfall, and basin can be expended, as long as the user continues to send chakra in.

Next one is pretty simple. Create a water clone. I believe you are aware of the fact that water clone can only reach short range from you. Make the water clone go upto short range from you and them the clone to dissolve back into water and turn into a four pointed projectiles that shoot at the opponent.

*Creates a clone*

"Perform please"

(Suiton: Mizu Tsurudan) - Water Release: Water Tendril Bullets

Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will manipulate one of their water clones to dissolve back to water and turn into four pointed projectiles that shoot at the target.
Note: Must create a water clone before hand.
 

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(Suiton: Takitsubo) - Water Release: Waterfall Basin



(Suiton: Takitsubo) - Water Release: Waterfall Basin
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A

Advantage

  • By sending suiton chakra into the water, the water can still be manipulated to form other jutsus.
  • The water basin can be created under the opponent in such a way that if the water is hit with a lightning jutsu, it will deal a great amount of damage to the target due to the presence of the water.
  • I don’t truly see very many strong points with this jutsu as it wouldn't normally be used in a fight unless I was using it to hide behind after blocking my enemy's vision.

Disadvantage

  • If the jutsu is done under the user's feet and the water is struck with a lightning jutsu, it will deal a shocking damage on the user.
  • If the jutsu is done under the user's feet and the water is struck with a lightning jutsu, it will deal a shocking damage on the user.
  • Not good for a battle.
  • Pointless unless opponents vision is blocked or his/her movement is restricted.

Counter Strategies

To counter it, i would increase the level of the earth under the base so it will suck the water back into the earth or just exhale a massive fire at it to turn the water into smoke.

Performing the Tech

To start the jutsu, i begin by making the required 3 hand-seals Boar → Dog → Ram in that order then i start to focus on my chakra system and chakra flow and i proceed further to turn my raw chakra into suiton chakra by making my raw chakra cool and free flowing. I then release the suiton chakra underneath your clone to form a basin of water under him. Which eventually makes him fall


(Suiton: Mizu Tsurudan) - Water Release: Water Tendril Bullets




(Suiton: Mizu Tsurudan) - Water Release: Water Tendril Bullets
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30


Advantage

  • It can be used to attack an opponent surprisingly.
  • Good for a combo attack with clones, i could use it on a close ranged clone to attack.

Disadvantage

  • A water clone must already be made by the user before the jutsu can be done.
  • The jutsu cannot be controlled, it goes in the direction that it is being launched to from the start.
  • If the opponent destroys the clone before i use the jutsu then it would have been a waste of chakra.

Counter Strategies

I would counter it by using Earth Release: Earth Shore Return to block the Water Tendril Bullets.

Performing the Tech

I start by creating a water clone and then using my chakra i make my clone dissolve back into water. Next the dissolved into water separate 4 blobs of water i then use shape manipulation to turn them into spiked cones which points towards your clone. Finally i aim them and fire them so that 2 go through the gap between your clones arms and body just under your arm pit and two go through your clones legs.
 

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I meant if i increase the volume of doton just exactly over the water basin, the earth will eat away the water! This is the same process used to fill up places like small ponds, lakes and even rivers!

And since this water jutsu is just C rank an A/S Rank fire jutsu can easily evaporate all the water from the water basin!
 

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A/S rank fire is a very bad counter. And also this technique when used under you will easily make you lose your balance thereby preventing you from performing any hand seals. Earth doesn't eat water, But if that's the case can you tell me which Earth technique are you intending to use and post it?
 

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I was willing to use (Doton: Uitenpen) - Earth Style: Wheel Of Fortune! okay if none of them works i could use (Doton: Chidōkaku) - Earth Release: Moving Earth Core out of the water basin!!
 

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Both will not work. I will give you a hint. you can "escape" from this technique using a D rank technique. Try to find out what that technique is. Take a look at all the D ranks in all 5 elements and try guessing it.
 

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Is it ( Suiton: Junsai no Jutsu ) - Water Release: Water Shield Technique?? or is it (Fūton: Kaze Ogawa no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Wind Stream Technique??
 

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Both will not work though wind stream is debatable. The technique that you can use to perfectly evade this technique is...Wind release : Basic technique.

(Fūton Kihon Jutsu) Wind Release Basic Technique
Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Rank: D-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 10
Damage: 20
Description: The user will release basic simple blasts or streams of wind from his limbs or mouth to defend or attack an enemy.
 

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Good. a slight change in training method. Templates are weird. Just do what you do in the performance part of the template. okay?

*Creates a clone and sends it towards you*

Now, dash towards the clone and execute a few kicks and punches and make a final blow that will make the clone go airborne. Once the clone is airborne, gather water chakra in your dominant hand and release it in a crescent like slash to create a crescent blade that will strike and poof the clone away. Excellent technique to use in combo with Tai based moves.
 

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(Suiton: Mizu Yashiken no Jutsu) - Water Release: Water Palm Blade Technique



(Suiton: Mizu Yashiken no Jutsu) - Water Release: Water Palm Blade Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user will first strike their target with couple of punches and kicks them lifting the target into the air and the user will then concentrate their chakra into their palm and then swinging their arm in a arc they release chakra creating a cresent blade of water that strike the target.

Advantage

  • It is an attack that cannot be easily evaded since the target will still be trying to recover from the punches and kicks.

Disadvantage

  • The user must first deliver several punches at the target before this jutsu can be done.
  • The jutsu only affects a target within short range from the user and must also be in mid air.

Counter Strategies

I would counter it by simply using the wind stream technique to change my direction in mid-air in order to escape the attack.

Performing the Tech

Sprinting towards the battle ready clone arms posed for CQB combat. Then, as I was in striking range I delivered a powerful punch to the solar plexus area- stunning it but not dispersing it. Then, I began my barrage of punches and kicks each one heavier than the last. Then, as my final hit connected sending it into the air I focused Suiton chakra onto my fingers having my hand set in a blade like manner. I then swiped my hand from right to left in one quick and efficient motion creating a sharp and thin blade of water ultimately dispersing it.
 
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