Demonster99
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Hey guys, I'm back I had to update since people are enjoying my work and this chapter will have more detailing and character development, let's hope I can pull this off. Here we go guys enjoy. . .
CHAPTER#6
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Naruto and Hinata were walking with eachother. It had been quiet some time since neither of them said a word to eachother. Naruto was tensed, he had no idea what to say to the Hyuga heiress. This was the same girl who loved him for who he was, she loved him despite his idiocity, his stupidness, and most of all his clueless nature. He glanced up at her, she sure was beautiful. She had grown her hair even longer then before, her bangs were longer too, she didn't stutter when he was around, and most of all her clothes...they were more...revealing. She wore a west and a shirt over it bearing the Hyuga symbol, her pants were just below her knees and she wore purple sandles. He didn't want to admit It but she looked...well..cute
They reached over a bridge, there was a pond underneath it. Both of them hung over the bridge thinking about what to say to eachother. Naruto finally broke the silence "Sooo Hinata, how is everything?" he asked while cursing himself from the inside. "Oh well great, I got promoted to Jonin havent you heard?" hearing that made Naruto pout"OH MAN! hearing about your promotions makes me sick, I can't believe I'm still a Genin. . ."
Hinata giggled "dont worry Naruto-kun, you were the hero of the entire world you'll be given the highest honors eventually". Naruto smiled at her which caused her to blush slightly, "You know how I feel about you right?" she asked and this left Naruto speachless, how could he forget that moment. He was down and out when Pein was about to take him, but out of the blue Hinata showed up she fought Pein for him, all for him. She toke stakes in her body all because of him and she then told him that she loved him. Since then in his eyes, Hinata had attained a very high place in his mind...and heart.
He looked at Hinata, into her deep white eyes and she looked into his ocean blue ones. He spoke"...I do... but It's complicated", he was expecting Hinata to cry out or leave but instead she simply smiled "It's Sakura isn't It. . . ", "no no ofcourse not, she's just a friend Hinata. . ". She turned away from him "I've seen the way you look at her Naruto, you look at her with love, respect and admiration. . . I would kill for you to look at me like that".
Naruto felt like he was smacked in the face, what am i gonna say now? This is not going as I planned. "Look Hinata, It's really complicated for me right now. . . My feelings are sort of tangled. I mean your great, smart, beautiful, cute but. . .I just need time"
She looked at him with a hint of sadness but all of a sudden that sadness turned into a small smile"I understand Naruto, but you should know that my feelings for you haven't changed...not one bit. I'll be waiting for you and be sure of it Sakura is gonna have some serious competition" Hinata chuckled a little bit and Naruto did the same.
He came closer to Hinata, who started to blush. He got more closer and she blushed even more furiously. Then Naruto whispered ''Thank You'' to Hinata as he kissed her cheek. . .
"Later" he said as Naruto literally disappeared in front of her as Hinata was frozen in her spot. She couldn't move an inch her hand slowly touched the patch on her cheeks where Naruto had kissed her 'he...he k-k-kissed me?' as she tried to steady herself before eventually she fainted happily.
SAKURA'S APARTMENT
She was lying in bed, looking up at the ceiling, the little cherries on the ceiling keeping her amused until she fell asleep. Until she heard something swoosh by her window. She sat up quickly rubbing her eyes 'What the heck, how did that open?' she climbed out of her bed and looked out the window. There was no one there, just the rustling of the leaves and the wind until her eyes fell upon the street. . .
There he was, standing still, looking at the alley way was the same hooded figure who was with Naruto all this time. He slowly turned around and Sakura swore she just heard a 'follow' from him as he sped up in to the forest.
"Wait!" Sakura called, damn it where did he run off to, did he want me to follow him? as she quickly got up and found her boots. She was dressed identical to the way she used to dress before her training with Tsunade. She put on her boots and jumped out the window after him. . . .
She ran after him for quiet a while but was unable to pick up to his speed. . . To put it short, man he was fast! They ran after eachother turning, moving, warping until the hooded figure settled down on a patch leading to the outside of the village, Sakura followed.
She had a look of determination in her eyes "Ok I'm not moving another inch if you do not tell me who you are and what is going on here? Why drag me out here at 12am?" He didn't answer and simply looked up at the sky. "Do you remember this place, Sakura?" he said.
She heard him and slowly looked around, It was familiar but she just couldn't remember. . . then It hit her, the bench. . .'No way. . ' Sakura thought as she toke in the environment. This was the exact same place where Sasuke had left the village after knocking Sakura out, could It be. . .
Slowly but surely the hooded figure removed his hood, which left Sakura shocked. She couldn't feel her feet, they had gone numb just like her brain. 'It's not possible, It can't be possible. . ' she thought as she looked on towards the face that had haunted her memories for years, the face that made all the difference, the face that meant everything to her, and the face which showed her what love is. . .
"S-Sasuke. . . ."
THE END
So guys how was it? i tried to improve as much as I could and i hope you like it. . .please review this and state your comments or I won't update anyomore
CHAPTER#6
WORDS
Naruto and Hinata were walking with eachother. It had been quiet some time since neither of them said a word to eachother. Naruto was tensed, he had no idea what to say to the Hyuga heiress. This was the same girl who loved him for who he was, she loved him despite his idiocity, his stupidness, and most of all his clueless nature. He glanced up at her, she sure was beautiful. She had grown her hair even longer then before, her bangs were longer too, she didn't stutter when he was around, and most of all her clothes...they were more...revealing. She wore a west and a shirt over it bearing the Hyuga symbol, her pants were just below her knees and she wore purple sandles. He didn't want to admit It but she looked...well..cute
They reached over a bridge, there was a pond underneath it. Both of them hung over the bridge thinking about what to say to eachother. Naruto finally broke the silence "Sooo Hinata, how is everything?" he asked while cursing himself from the inside. "Oh well great, I got promoted to Jonin havent you heard?" hearing that made Naruto pout"OH MAN! hearing about your promotions makes me sick, I can't believe I'm still a Genin. . ."
Hinata giggled "dont worry Naruto-kun, you were the hero of the entire world you'll be given the highest honors eventually". Naruto smiled at her which caused her to blush slightly, "You know how I feel about you right?" she asked and this left Naruto speachless, how could he forget that moment. He was down and out when Pein was about to take him, but out of the blue Hinata showed up she fought Pein for him, all for him. She toke stakes in her body all because of him and she then told him that she loved him. Since then in his eyes, Hinata had attained a very high place in his mind...and heart.
He looked at Hinata, into her deep white eyes and she looked into his ocean blue ones. He spoke"...I do... but It's complicated", he was expecting Hinata to cry out or leave but instead she simply smiled "It's Sakura isn't It. . . ", "no no ofcourse not, she's just a friend Hinata. . ". She turned away from him "I've seen the way you look at her Naruto, you look at her with love, respect and admiration. . . I would kill for you to look at me like that".
Naruto felt like he was smacked in the face, what am i gonna say now? This is not going as I planned. "Look Hinata, It's really complicated for me right now. . . My feelings are sort of tangled. I mean your great, smart, beautiful, cute but. . .I just need time"
She looked at him with a hint of sadness but all of a sudden that sadness turned into a small smile"I understand Naruto, but you should know that my feelings for you haven't changed...not one bit. I'll be waiting for you and be sure of it Sakura is gonna have some serious competition" Hinata chuckled a little bit and Naruto did the same.
He came closer to Hinata, who started to blush. He got more closer and she blushed even more furiously. Then Naruto whispered ''Thank You'' to Hinata as he kissed her cheek. . .
"Later" he said as Naruto literally disappeared in front of her as Hinata was frozen in her spot. She couldn't move an inch her hand slowly touched the patch on her cheeks where Naruto had kissed her 'he...he k-k-kissed me?' as she tried to steady herself before eventually she fainted happily.
SAKURA'S APARTMENT
She was lying in bed, looking up at the ceiling, the little cherries on the ceiling keeping her amused until she fell asleep. Until she heard something swoosh by her window. She sat up quickly rubbing her eyes 'What the heck, how did that open?' she climbed out of her bed and looked out the window. There was no one there, just the rustling of the leaves and the wind until her eyes fell upon the street. . .
There he was, standing still, looking at the alley way was the same hooded figure who was with Naruto all this time. He slowly turned around and Sakura swore she just heard a 'follow' from him as he sped up in to the forest.
"Wait!" Sakura called, damn it where did he run off to, did he want me to follow him? as she quickly got up and found her boots. She was dressed identical to the way she used to dress before her training with Tsunade. She put on her boots and jumped out the window after him. . . .
She ran after him for quiet a while but was unable to pick up to his speed. . . To put it short, man he was fast! They ran after eachother turning, moving, warping until the hooded figure settled down on a patch leading to the outside of the village, Sakura followed.
She had a look of determination in her eyes "Ok I'm not moving another inch if you do not tell me who you are and what is going on here? Why drag me out here at 12am?" He didn't answer and simply looked up at the sky. "Do you remember this place, Sakura?" he said.
She heard him and slowly looked around, It was familiar but she just couldn't remember. . . then It hit her, the bench. . .'No way. . ' Sakura thought as she toke in the environment. This was the exact same place where Sasuke had left the village after knocking Sakura out, could It be. . .
Slowly but surely the hooded figure removed his hood, which left Sakura shocked. She couldn't feel her feet, they had gone numb just like her brain. 'It's not possible, It can't be possible. . ' she thought as she looked on towards the face that had haunted her memories for years, the face that made all the difference, the face that meant everything to her, and the face which showed her what love is. . .
"S-Sasuke. . . ."
THE END
So guys how was it? i tried to improve as much as I could and i hope you like it. . .please review this and state your comments or I won't update anyomore
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