New Beginning- Chapter#2:The Party

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Hey guys, am kinda free so I thought why don't I just update my chapter on my first story ^_^ thank you for your comments. So expect me to release alotta chapters on my story in the coming weeks and I'll make sure not to dissapoint you. NOW on with the replies *gives a thumb's up*

kyuubi-insomniac:

First up thank you for taking time in reviewing my crappy writing. Well the pairing will be introduced later and its mostly based around Team 7's POV. Also I appreciate you correcting my mistakes since i uploaded it early cause of it being hot off the presses LOL. . . Please continue oh and sorry i meant to select Naruto. U :p

CHAPTER 2
THE PARTY
She was running as fast as she could, just a little longer she thought. Ahead she could hear the intensity of the battle. Sakura along with Tsunade, Kakashi and the entire Konoha 11 were heading to the fight that shoke the shinobi world to its core. She ran as fast as she could, tears streaming in her eyes as she thought of the horror that might await her when she got there. All of them ran as fast as they could. When they got there a terrible sight was was in front of them. The entire place was completely destroyed and ruined. Nothing on this world could have lived. Sakura came to and saw Sasuke, bloodied and beaten, lying there on the floor. From what she could get, his ribs were completely broken and he didn't have the necessary chakra to even walk. She came running at him with the rest of the 11 behind her. She looked on at his injuries, they were far worst then she thought. Fear struck her that she might not be able to help him, but suddenly Sasuke grabbed her hand and whispered ever so slightly "Na...ru..to". Suddenly she saw a body lying some 20 feet behind Sasuke motionless, not breathing, no Chakra signals. Sakura got up ran to him but suddenly she just kept getting further no matter how much she ran she couldn't reach the ninja"NARUTOOOOOOOOOO!" was all that was heard as everything went black


Suddenly sakura awoke. She was completely covered in sweat and was shivering. "Oh...god that's the third time I had this dream" she thought as she slowly got up and went to freshen hereself up.

After finishing her breakfast, she head out to the Hokage tower to see what other work Tsunade-sama had. Although Sakura respected the old Hokage but her fear of her expelled that. She remembered when one time she slept in during her working hours at the hospital and Tsunade, as punishment, had her spend a day helping out Guy-sensei(that's punishment enough If you ask me -_-). Even her simple methods freaked her out. How she loved punishing her student. . . .

"Ah yes, sakura come in. . ." Tsunade said as her student came in the room. Usually Tsunade is not all hyped about working, you know signing papers, assigning missions, screaming at her. But today she looked oddly happy, not like lets-go-clubbin-happy but really happy.

"How are you Sakura?" Tsunade asked. "Am fine Tsunade-sama, you had some work for me?" Sakura asked.

"Oh yes ofcourse well since I am in a particularly good mood, you can take the day off" Tsunade said chearfully. Sakura was surprised, something's up she thought.

"We are having a councel's meeting today so, I will be particularly busy today, so no time for chit chats off you go" she said as Sakura left.

YAY, a whole day doing nothing, free of stupid hospital duties, free of crazy ass errands for Tsunade-sama. Finally she can spend "me" time and maybe get some stuff for the party today.

As Sakura left, Tsunade looked on through her glass window, "hehehe...Sakura your in for a crazy surprise" said Tsunade as she smiled a little.

KAKASHI P.O.V

"Okay, this is getting boring" Kakashi thought has he finished his Icha Icha paradise undying love for the fifth time now. "If only, Naruto was here, It's been 6 years now. It's just not the same anymore" Kakashi thought closing his book. Suddenly a small child by the age of three came to Kakashi with a plastic kunai and started hitting his leg. Kakashi gave his signature eye smile and picked up the little kid.

"Hey kiddo, still trying to mess up your old man?" as he picked him up. The kid laughed, and said "Daddy, mummy ish going shopping maybe you and me can play now?". Kakashi nodded and Tayo beamed at his dad with joy in his eyes." Come on dad, I wana show you my ninja outfit.

Kakashi smiled, Tayo was about 3. Grey hair, small eyes, but oddly he didn't wear a mask like his dad did. He loved watching his dad train and even though Kakashi had retired he would still often love to keep himself fit and would train often.

although annoyingly, his child had developed a liking to guy, something which kakashi found really odd cause to be honest, HE COULDN'T STAND THE GUY!. He was just too annoying with his pointless competitions, but still he was his friend and was the only one that Kakashi respected alot apart from the hokage and her wife ofcourse*shivers*.

"Come on dad! It's almosht time for your parthy" said Tayo. God Kakashi almost forgot he had to get ready, everyone will be there... and It would help take his mind off the retirement gig well, after he and his son shared their quality time ofcourse.

Everyone was suppose to meet near the Ichiraku Ramen shop. All of them were excited and really were going to be glad to see eachother again after such a LOOOOONG time. Sakura and Ino came there first. "Hey Ino-pig, Whatcha think?" Sakura said showing off her new outfit, she was wearing a pink dress with a beautiful necklace and high tops.

Ino thought about it and said"yeah totally. . . for a ****. . . " snickering. Sakura was shocked, now Ino was gonna get it. Just when the two were gunning for eachother. "Oh man I can't believe this you guys are about 21 and yet still you act like kids, how troublesome" in came Shikamaru with his normal shinobi outfit except now he was holding a cigarette and was wearing a ear top(small one). He smiled at the both of em and they greeted him.

"Hey SHIKA!" Ino yelled and she kissed her boy friend. " Nice to see ya too Ino, women. . . " Shikamaru said half smiling. "Hey there Sakura you look great today, just ignore what Ino said, she's always like that" said Shikamaru. Sakura smiled" hehe you JUST figured that out, I knew that when she was a like 3" sakura said. All three of them went on in the restaurent. They talked about their missions and how they been. Soon all of the Konoha 11 was at shinbuya. Choji had gotten really thin and wasn't that chubby at all. Hinata had really opened up to the gang since her confession to Naruto and was more outgoing and happy. Kiba was now a Jonin due to his actions in saving half the gang during the fourth war(more on that later). Neji became a councelor member for the hyuga clan since Hinata wasn't really that intrested in politics. Shino was...Shino(-_-). Lee had really matured since his time spending with his own genin team. He was more of a leader now and his team was known as Team YOUTH(Oh boy _). Guy sensei was still the same hyper, full of strength, and talkative. Then In came Sai, the silent one no more although he was still working on his emotions. Ten-Ten was also a genin now and was dating Lee.

"Man its great to see you guys again, but where is Kakashi sensei?" asked Kiba. Sakura gave an annoyed look and said" He'll be here dont worry. . .".

"Oh he'd better be for now I challange my rival to a stake eating contest, TO THE POWER OF YOUTH" Guy said giving his signature cocky smile. Everyone sweat dropped(including the author). Same old guys sensei he hasn't changed a bit.

So, Hinata how you been? You hardely ever are around" Ino asked the hyyuga. "Oh nothing, well I am just really busy with my missions and the time at the academy, those kids are a handful, now I know how Iruka sensei felt about Naruto" she said but knew instantly why she shouldn't have said that

Everyone grew silent, they all missed their friend. He was gone, for christ sake it had been 5 years since he left. Where could he be?

Suddenly in a poof of smoke Kakshi sensei appeared on top of their table "Sorry I am late guys, I was helping this old lady cross the river and. .. "

"LIKE HELL YOU WERE!" everyone said in unison and eventually laughed it off. It was great the way that everyone was getting along. They ate, made fun of eachother, told stories and even had a few drinks.

Then suddenly Shikamaru got up"Everyone I'd like to make a toast". All of them grabbed their sake and raised their glasses.

Shikamaru closed his eyes smiled and said " Thank you guys, for being with me,i mean us through all this time, through all that we have suffered and endured. To all the people that we have lost. And trust me, we have endured alot during our past experiences, and most of all thank you guys, for being my friends, To Friendship"

"To Friendship" everyone said and drank down their glasses. "Man o man how things have changed" a man with a hood came and said. " They got better since you weren't here you idiot" said another hooded man who came from the roof and settelled down next to his companion.

Everyone looked on, and then Sakura spoke" Who are you two?". The two looked at eachother and one of them said" So you really dont recognise us do you sakura?". She was awstruck, they knew her name then maybe-

All of a sudden they took off their hoods shocking the entire restaurant and the Konoha 11 to their cores and Sakura, who was completely overwhelmed with emotions, was shocked beyond belief

THE END

There It is guys, hope you enjoy it as much as i enjoyed writing it, please please rate and review or i might not write another chapter :p
 
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It was good, a few grammar mistakes, but one thing I noticed, is that when you put dialogue in for a few of the characters, like Shikamaru, it doesn't exactly sound like something that they would say. Ending was good! I just wish you had given us more....please write a third!
 

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@dogboy29 yeah i know what you mean, it's just that i've been trying to get their personalities accurate but not doing a good job, I'll try better next time oh and chapter 3 is up :D
 
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