LizardLaw974
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'ello guys! well, i decided to post something since i haven't been, and then i saw this part of the forums and was like "
yes!"
I currently have many fanfictions written, with many more on the way (most recent idea is for Yu Yu Hakusho ) but this one, along with a Fruits Basket one I wrote, seems to be popular, so i thought i should post the first two chapters tonight, and then the rest soon.
this is my account on FanFiction.Net:
Enjoy~!wease: ^_^
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Nodoka winced at the blazing sun. The dull ache coming from her temples grew stronger as the rays made contacts with her sensitive eyes. She shielded her face with her hand, and then peeked out to see where the sun was located. It wasn't too far in the sky, seeing as it was still early morning. But, bluish-gray clouds were gathering in the sky, and Nodoka smelled a hint of rain in the wind.
She shut her eyes for a small period of time; before she heard her best friends call her name from a distance.
"Hey, Bookworm! Let's hurry, or we'll be late to class!"
That voice belonged to Yue, a blue-haired girl, about Nodoka's age, who was basically Nodoka's best friend. Nodoka turned to her left side to see two girls standing a good two feet away. Yue was the shorter one, while the taller one with the greenish hair and glasses was Haruna, another close friend of Nodoka's.
Nodoka quickly shuffled to their standing point, but for some reason, was panting heavily when she got to them.
"Hey, Nodoka…are you all right?" Haruna asked, looking at her face, which was hidden by the girl's purple bangs.
After her breathing slowed down a bit, she nodded and reassured in a quiet voice, "I'm fine. Don't worry about me-"
She suddenly broke out into a small coughing fit. Haruna opened her eyes a bit wider, while Yue's gaze burned into Nodoka's.
"You were up all night, studying, weren't you?" Yue asked after Nodoka stopped coughing. Before she gave the girl a chance to answer, Yue continued, "I saw you up last night, reading your English textbook. From the look on your drained face, I'd say that you didn't get any sleep at all last night, did you?"
Nodoka stayed quiet for a minute, before admitting, "Yes. I was up last night…but I DID get to sleep…at least a little…"
"How long?" Haruna asked, taking on the role like a mother.
Nodoka mumbled something inaudible and twisted the handle on her book bag multiple times before softly stating, "About two hours…"
"Two hours? Nodoka, why would you risk your health for a TEST?" Haruna scolded, making Nodoka cringe from apprehension and pain added to her headache.
"Well, I...I'm failing Professor Springfield's class…and I didn't want to add more bad scores so, I t-tried to study as much as I could…"
"But it's not good for you to stay up all night." Yue placed her hand on Nodoka's forehead. "You feel warm. Maybe…you shouldn't go to class." A certain hint of worry formed in her voice as she went on, "I could take you back to the dorm, and…"
"No, no it's okay. I'll be fine, Yue" Nodoka smiled, hoping Yue wouldn't buy it. Normally, Yue could see right through her. But today, Nodoka hoped that her luck would hold out and, surprisingly, it did.
"All right. But if you feel worse at all during the day, let me know" Yue still didn't sound convinced, but let it slide. "Now let's hurry up, before we're late"
Nodoka followed her pals as they walked to the courtyard and to the main entrance to Mahora Academy.
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"Hey, Yue. Is Bookworm okay?" Asuna asked, pointing at the tired-looking girl. They were in their homeroom; Class 2A. Everyone was talking to one another. They all conversed and chatted before the start f classes. Asuna was conversing with Haruna and Yue, with Sayo and Ayaka joining as well.
Asuna had seen Nodoka come in, pale and sleepy, and saw her sit down at her desk and fall asleep with her arms on the desk, and her head lying on top. Yue noticed this too, and started to become worried again.
"She was staying up last night, studying for the test, but I don't think she got much sleep last night. She was feeling warm and I insisted that she go back to the dorm, but she refused" Yue explained to Asuna.
"Well, if she's sick, then she shouldn't be here. She could get the rest of the class sick, "Ayaka dramatically explained, "including our precious Negi!"
"Oh, give it a rest, would ya, Ayaka?" Asuna bitterly retorted. The two never got along very well. But could you blame her? Ayaka was so over dramatic and she always talked about her crush on Negi. That was what Asuna found most repulsive; He was just a ten-year-old boy! The reason he taught at Mahora Academy was because he was super smart as well as a sorcerer prodigy.
Before Ayaka could send a comment flying at Asuna, Negi walked into the room, and everyone immediately got in their seats.
Negi set his books down and cleared his throat.
"Class…" he started, his sentences peppered with his British accent, "as you know, we have a test on Shakespeare"
This fact made the whole class groan.
"I know he's not an easy topic, but I'm sure that all of you will do great" he handed out papers to the students individually as he went on, "There are 20 questions on this paper, as well as a bonus that's worth 5 points. So, I encourage you all to do your best and…oh Nodoka, are you all right?"
Yue picked up her head and looked over to see Negi trying to shake the sleeping Nodoka awake.
"Nodoka…hey, can you hear me?"
A mumble was given as a response and the girl opened her eyes slowly, and looked up at Negi.
"Pro…Professor?"
"Nodoka, are you feeling well? Do you need to see Miss Minamoto?" Negi asked, referring to the school nurse.
Nodoka picked her head up and muttered, "No, sir, I'm all right"
"Are you sure?"
"Yes", she replied, in a quiet voice. She didn't pick her head up to look at him again; she was too nervous. She had a crush on Negi, only her crush was less obsessive and healthier than Ayaka's. Nodoka did feel Yue's gaze burning into her, knowing that Yue wanted Nodoka to get some sleep. But Nodoka had to pass this test.
Nodoka took a deep breath, which made her chest feel worse, and she coughed several times before gazing at the test. The nervousness was getting to her; she started to feel nauseous and light-headed. At least, that's what she thought was getting to her.
Well, it's now or never…Nodoka thought, and she clutched her pencil, ready to pass.
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"Go to the freakin' nurse already!"
Nodoka moaned, covering her ears with her hands to block out Yue's yells. The dizziness from earlier that day did not subside yet, so she kept her head down when she replied;
"No. There's no point. Only a few more minutes until the day is over" Nodoka cringed as she felt like she was swallowing broken glass.
And as if on cue, the bell rang and all the students ran out in a frenzy. Only Sayo, Asuna, Yue, Haruna, and Nodoka remained in the classroom.
"Well, I have to go to Library Island" Yue told Nodoka, "Haruna has to come with me; we are doing an extra credit assignment. Will you be all right by yourself?" Yue asked, taking Nodoka's hand in her own and starting at the purple haired girl.
Nodoka stared back until she looked down again and murmured, "Yes, I'll be fine"
Yue let go of the hand and walked out of the room with Haruna, who saw the girl's worried face and reassured, "She'll be fine. She's tougher than she looks"
That wasn't enough to ease Yue. Something was wrong with Nodoka.
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"Will you stop mimicking me?" Ayaka screamed.
"Hey everybody look at me! I'm Ayaka and my head is bigger than my chest!" Asuna giggled at her own joke.
"Hey! Like you're one to talk! You're fourteen and I've seen bigger boobs on a 10 year old!"
"Take that back, right now!"
A sneeze came from Nodoka as she tried to block out the noise. This certainly wasn't helping her headache, and now she felt extremely sick. Her head throbbed, her throat was scratchy and dry, her nose was clogged up, and every now and again, her stomach would make a rebellious move, causing her great discomfort. By this point, she was sure she had a fever.
I just gotta…make it to the dorm…
Thunder crashed and lightning struck, making all three girls jump and look out at the courtyard.
"Aww geez! Now we gotta run in this crappy weather?" Asuna complained.
Ayaka scoffed and snickered, "Are you afraid of a little water, Asuna?"
"No way!" and before you knew it, Asuna dashed out from under the awning and into the courtyard, with Ayaka and Nodoka at her heels.
Nodoka huffed and puffed, before a sudden chill made her gasp and slow down. Her head pain grew worse and her fever pitched. Her vision started to fade, making Nodoka groan loudly, and then suddenly stop.
Asuna heard the noise and turned back to Nodoka, seeing the girl had halted in the middle of the downpour.
"Hey, Bookworm!" Asuna ran back to the girl. Ayaka spun around and also went back to Nodoka. The poor girl was breathing hard, and her face looked as frail as ever.
"Nodoka…are you okay? Do you need help?" Ayaka asked, suddenly concerned.
Nodoka, in turn, didn't reply, but tried to gain her bearings back. However, the world spun around her, and her weak legs couldn't carry her any farther.
All she felt was the support from Asuna as she caught the sick girl from her faint.
"Nodoka! What's wrong? Say something!"
And then the world faded around her…
yes!"I currently have many fanfictions written, with many more on the way (most recent idea is for Yu Yu Hakusho
) but this one, along with a Fruits Basket one I wrote, seems to be popular, so i thought i should post the first two chapters tonight, and then the rest soon. this is my account on FanFiction.Net:
You must be registered for see links
Enjoy~!
wease: ^_^~~
Nodoka winced at the blazing sun. The dull ache coming from her temples grew stronger as the rays made contacts with her sensitive eyes. She shielded her face with her hand, and then peeked out to see where the sun was located. It wasn't too far in the sky, seeing as it was still early morning. But, bluish-gray clouds were gathering in the sky, and Nodoka smelled a hint of rain in the wind.
She shut her eyes for a small period of time; before she heard her best friends call her name from a distance.
"Hey, Bookworm! Let's hurry, or we'll be late to class!"
That voice belonged to Yue, a blue-haired girl, about Nodoka's age, who was basically Nodoka's best friend. Nodoka turned to her left side to see two girls standing a good two feet away. Yue was the shorter one, while the taller one with the greenish hair and glasses was Haruna, another close friend of Nodoka's.
Nodoka quickly shuffled to their standing point, but for some reason, was panting heavily when she got to them.
"Hey, Nodoka…are you all right?" Haruna asked, looking at her face, which was hidden by the girl's purple bangs.
After her breathing slowed down a bit, she nodded and reassured in a quiet voice, "I'm fine. Don't worry about me-"
She suddenly broke out into a small coughing fit. Haruna opened her eyes a bit wider, while Yue's gaze burned into Nodoka's.
"You were up all night, studying, weren't you?" Yue asked after Nodoka stopped coughing. Before she gave the girl a chance to answer, Yue continued, "I saw you up last night, reading your English textbook. From the look on your drained face, I'd say that you didn't get any sleep at all last night, did you?"
Nodoka stayed quiet for a minute, before admitting, "Yes. I was up last night…but I DID get to sleep…at least a little…"
"How long?" Haruna asked, taking on the role like a mother.
Nodoka mumbled something inaudible and twisted the handle on her book bag multiple times before softly stating, "About two hours…"
"Two hours? Nodoka, why would you risk your health for a TEST?" Haruna scolded, making Nodoka cringe from apprehension and pain added to her headache.
"Well, I...I'm failing Professor Springfield's class…and I didn't want to add more bad scores so, I t-tried to study as much as I could…"
"But it's not good for you to stay up all night." Yue placed her hand on Nodoka's forehead. "You feel warm. Maybe…you shouldn't go to class." A certain hint of worry formed in her voice as she went on, "I could take you back to the dorm, and…"
"No, no it's okay. I'll be fine, Yue" Nodoka smiled, hoping Yue wouldn't buy it. Normally, Yue could see right through her. But today, Nodoka hoped that her luck would hold out and, surprisingly, it did.
"All right. But if you feel worse at all during the day, let me know" Yue still didn't sound convinced, but let it slide. "Now let's hurry up, before we're late"
Nodoka followed her pals as they walked to the courtyard and to the main entrance to Mahora Academy.
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"Hey, Yue. Is Bookworm okay?" Asuna asked, pointing at the tired-looking girl. They were in their homeroom; Class 2A. Everyone was talking to one another. They all conversed and chatted before the start f classes. Asuna was conversing with Haruna and Yue, with Sayo and Ayaka joining as well.
Asuna had seen Nodoka come in, pale and sleepy, and saw her sit down at her desk and fall asleep with her arms on the desk, and her head lying on top. Yue noticed this too, and started to become worried again.
"She was staying up last night, studying for the test, but I don't think she got much sleep last night. She was feeling warm and I insisted that she go back to the dorm, but she refused" Yue explained to Asuna.
"Well, if she's sick, then she shouldn't be here. She could get the rest of the class sick, "Ayaka dramatically explained, "including our precious Negi!"
"Oh, give it a rest, would ya, Ayaka?" Asuna bitterly retorted. The two never got along very well. But could you blame her? Ayaka was so over dramatic and she always talked about her crush on Negi. That was what Asuna found most repulsive; He was just a ten-year-old boy! The reason he taught at Mahora Academy was because he was super smart as well as a sorcerer prodigy.
Before Ayaka could send a comment flying at Asuna, Negi walked into the room, and everyone immediately got in their seats.
Negi set his books down and cleared his throat.
"Class…" he started, his sentences peppered with his British accent, "as you know, we have a test on Shakespeare"
This fact made the whole class groan.
"I know he's not an easy topic, but I'm sure that all of you will do great" he handed out papers to the students individually as he went on, "There are 20 questions on this paper, as well as a bonus that's worth 5 points. So, I encourage you all to do your best and…oh Nodoka, are you all right?"
Yue picked up her head and looked over to see Negi trying to shake the sleeping Nodoka awake.
"Nodoka…hey, can you hear me?"
A mumble was given as a response and the girl opened her eyes slowly, and looked up at Negi.
"Pro…Professor?"
"Nodoka, are you feeling well? Do you need to see Miss Minamoto?" Negi asked, referring to the school nurse.
Nodoka picked her head up and muttered, "No, sir, I'm all right"
"Are you sure?"
"Yes", she replied, in a quiet voice. She didn't pick her head up to look at him again; she was too nervous. She had a crush on Negi, only her crush was less obsessive and healthier than Ayaka's. Nodoka did feel Yue's gaze burning into her, knowing that Yue wanted Nodoka to get some sleep. But Nodoka had to pass this test.
Nodoka took a deep breath, which made her chest feel worse, and she coughed several times before gazing at the test. The nervousness was getting to her; she started to feel nauseous and light-headed. At least, that's what she thought was getting to her.
Well, it's now or never…Nodoka thought, and she clutched her pencil, ready to pass.
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"Go to the freakin' nurse already!"
Nodoka moaned, covering her ears with her hands to block out Yue's yells. The dizziness from earlier that day did not subside yet, so she kept her head down when she replied;
"No. There's no point. Only a few more minutes until the day is over" Nodoka cringed as she felt like she was swallowing broken glass.
And as if on cue, the bell rang and all the students ran out in a frenzy. Only Sayo, Asuna, Yue, Haruna, and Nodoka remained in the classroom.
"Well, I have to go to Library Island" Yue told Nodoka, "Haruna has to come with me; we are doing an extra credit assignment. Will you be all right by yourself?" Yue asked, taking Nodoka's hand in her own and starting at the purple haired girl.
Nodoka stared back until she looked down again and murmured, "Yes, I'll be fine"
Yue let go of the hand and walked out of the room with Haruna, who saw the girl's worried face and reassured, "She'll be fine. She's tougher than she looks"
That wasn't enough to ease Yue. Something was wrong with Nodoka.
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"Will you stop mimicking me?" Ayaka screamed.
"Hey everybody look at me! I'm Ayaka and my head is bigger than my chest!" Asuna giggled at her own joke.
"Hey! Like you're one to talk! You're fourteen and I've seen bigger boobs on a 10 year old!"
"Take that back, right now!"
A sneeze came from Nodoka as she tried to block out the noise. This certainly wasn't helping her headache, and now she felt extremely sick. Her head throbbed, her throat was scratchy and dry, her nose was clogged up, and every now and again, her stomach would make a rebellious move, causing her great discomfort. By this point, she was sure she had a fever.
I just gotta…make it to the dorm…
Thunder crashed and lightning struck, making all three girls jump and look out at the courtyard.
"Aww geez! Now we gotta run in this crappy weather?" Asuna complained.
Ayaka scoffed and snickered, "Are you afraid of a little water, Asuna?"
"No way!" and before you knew it, Asuna dashed out from under the awning and into the courtyard, with Ayaka and Nodoka at her heels.
Nodoka huffed and puffed, before a sudden chill made her gasp and slow down. Her head pain grew worse and her fever pitched. Her vision started to fade, making Nodoka groan loudly, and then suddenly stop.
Asuna heard the noise and turned back to Nodoka, seeing the girl had halted in the middle of the downpour.
"Hey, Bookworm!" Asuna ran back to the girl. Ayaka spun around and also went back to Nodoka. The poor girl was breathing hard, and her face looked as frail as ever.
"Nodoka…are you okay? Do you need help?" Ayaka asked, suddenly concerned.
Nodoka, in turn, didn't reply, but tried to gain her bearings back. However, the world spun around her, and her weak legs couldn't carry her any farther.
All she felt was the support from Asuna as she caught the sick girl from her faint.
"Nodoka! What's wrong? Say something!"
And then the world faded around her…
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