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Rei's R&R
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Open grassy field, nothing surrounding the area, no water source
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*As we stand before each other i swiftly release a large amount of doton chakra into the ground right beaneath you causing a flower of earth to rise up under you, with you in the middel of it, it starts wrapping itself around your whole body, with many thorns inisde it, each the size of a kunai and as they are thorns they will tear the flesh open while they surface. Witout any other hesitation i bite my thumb and wipe the blood over the back of my hand thus making a slam movement with my right hand in mid-air before me, summoning Amaymon the earth gryphon also known as the earth king. (summoning him behind me)*

(Doton: Akuma no Hana) - Earth Style: Demonic Flower
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will focus his doton chakra through the ground and form a range of three handseals causing a flower of earth to rise up under the opponents, with the target in the middel of it, wrapping itself around the whole body of the opponent, with many thorns inisde it, with the size of an kunai and as they are thorns they will tear the flesh open of the enemy hence the name "Demonic Flower". And the moment it closes it releases all the oxygen inside of it as it doesn't take unnecessary space it directly climbs up, thus pushing the oxygen out, and goes back undeground suffocating the targets. This jutsu represents the cannibalistic flowers, the user can make it rise up anywhere on the battlefield.

♦ Note: Can only be taught by Lucifer.
♦ Note: This jutsu can only be used trice per battle.
♦ Note: The user can't perform any earth jutsu for one turn after this jutsu is used.
(Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Amaimon) - Summoning Technique: Amaymon
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user bites his thumb and wipes blood over a tattoo placed on a body part and slams his hands on the ground to call forth the legendary and mighty , the earth emperor, Amaymon is a very large Gryphon and is able to carry a total of five people on his back, he is the exact same size as gamahiro, Amaymon usualy wears silver armor, which protects him from kunai's and basic weapons, as seen in the picture, but what makes him special is his looks his fur/feathers are goldish/silver of color, with the tip of his feathers colored light brown, and his eyes are the color of the desert repersenting his elemental affinity, he has a very interesting body strucutre which is very well build even amongs the Gryphon's it's muscular and just as hard as stones. Amaymon has the manipulation of the Earth affinity, from his birth he trained to master the earth element in Iwagakure and thus he became more accustomed to it, therefore she can use the earth element upto S-rank, without any use of hand seals (counting towards the users moves), and he can only perform his jutsu's while he is on the ground. Amaymon is often refered to as the Earth King, Amaymon.

♦ Note: Amaymon can only be summoned once per battle.
♦ Note: Amaymon can stay on the field for 5 turns per battle.
♦ Note: Can only be taught by the holder of the gryphon contract.
 

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*As we stand before each other i swiftly release a large amount of doton chakra into the ground right beaneath you causing a flower of earth to rise up under you, with you in the middel of it, it starts wrapping itself around your whole body, with many thorns inisde it, each the size of a kunai and as they are thorns they will tear the flesh open while they surface. Witout any other hesitation i bite my thumb and wipe the blood over the back of my hand thus making a slam movement with my right hand in mid-air before me, summoning Amaymon the earth gryphon also known as the earth king. (summoning him behind me)*

(Doton: Akuma no Hana) - Earth Style: Demonic Flower
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will focus his doton chakra through the ground and form a range of three handseals causing a flower of earth to rise up under the opponents, with the target in the middel of it, wrapping itself around the whole body of the opponent, with many thorns inisde it, with the size of an kunai and as they are thorns they will tear the flesh open of the enemy hence the name "Demonic Flower". And the moment it closes it releases all the oxygen inside of it as it doesn't take unnecessary space it directly climbs up, thus pushing the oxygen out, and goes back undeground suffocating the targets. This jutsu represents the cannibalistic flowers, the user can make it rise up anywhere on the battlefield.

♦ Note: Can only be taught by Lucifer.
♦ Note: This jutsu can only be used trice per battle.
♦ Note: The user can't perform any earth jutsu for one turn after this jutsu is used.
(Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Amaimon) - Summoning Technique: Amaymon
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user bites his thumb and wipes blood over a tattoo placed on a body part and slams his hands on the ground to call forth the legendary and mighty , the earth emperor, Amaymon is a very large Gryphon and is able to carry a total of five people on his back, he is the exact same size as gamahiro, Amaymon usualy wears silver armor, which protects him from kunai's and basic weapons, as seen in the picture, but what makes him special is his looks his fur/feathers are goldish/silver of color, with the tip of his feathers colored light brown, and his eyes are the color of the desert repersenting his elemental affinity, he has a very interesting body strucutre which is very well build even amongs the Gryphon's it's muscular and just as hard as stones. Amaymon has the manipulation of the Earth affinity, from his birth he trained to master the earth element in Iwagakure and thus he became more accustomed to it, therefore she can use the earth element upto S-rank, without any use of hand seals (counting towards the users moves), and he can only perform his jutsu's while he is on the ground. Amaymon is often refered to as the Earth King, Amaymon.

♦ Note: Amaymon can only be summoned once per battle.
♦ Note: Amaymon can stay on the field for 5 turns per battle.
♦ Note: Can only be taught by the holder of the gryphon contract.


Note: Agree talking doesn't break time frame?
Note: Nice CJ/Summon U_U

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As I approach the battlefield and about to have a nice battle. I quickly notice that the ground below me is shaking. Not understand what is going on without any words exchanged. I then immediatly notice some type of earth based flowers.

Saeko: What the f...????

With quick calculations and reaction, knowing that it came from below and has an earth element to it, I quickly break that apart before it tries to eat me. By emitting lightning from my body defend this crazy attack.
(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.

Saeko: Dirty trickery!!!! I am no *****! Don't eat me PLEASEEEE!!!!

As I was defending from your attack and can see what you are doing at all times as i am keeping an eye at you constantly. By the time that I finish defending you had already bit your thumb and in the motion of slaming your hands on the ground. While making that motion, and just as you are about to hit the ground to summon, I turn that very ground into swamp. Binding you and also stoping you in your tracks.

(Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will first perform Boar → Tiger and then by changing the surface of an object beneath an enemy into mud and creating a non flammable swamp, the user can sink his enemy into the mud. The adhesive, chakra-infused mud ensnares the enemy's body, making it almost impossible to recover one's strength and escape from the swamp. The size and depth of the created swamp depends on the user's skill and the amount of chakra used, but if the user is an expert in this technique, it will always be possible to make a fair-sized swamp which is extremely effective against a great number of enemies or when having to face gigantic creatures.

Then without hesitation, I make a clone which stands next to my right. Named Emma.

(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.

Emma: Hey Saeko! Who's this guy??
Saeko: Some guy that use's trickery!
Emma: Oh noes!!! Tricks are for kids!
Saeko: My point exactly.

 

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Trickery you say? *smirks*

*As i've summoned Amaymon and he notices the ground softening below his claws, he releases his doton chakra through the ground (no need for any heandseals) while he does that he petrifies the ground turning it to rock hard earth again only covering short range, And the moment your clone is created i focus my suiton chakra and cause a large pool of water to materialize right beneath your clone and yourself, while it's materializing it starts lifting both of you upwards while sending you into the air it releases a range of water bullets from the pool itself striking you both from several angles thus making your clone poof away, and as you get hit by the bullets it forms into a large water dragon which attacks you by sending you crushing into the ground (antlion), causing several injuries. And while you're in mid air amaymon releases his doton chakra again into the ground creating a antlion while you hit ground, sucking you in just as you make impact, thus killing you.*

(Doton: Kajūgan no Jutsu): Earth Style: Added Weight Rock Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: By performing the snake hand seal the user will use this technique to petrify whatever or whoever is touching them, causing the object in question to start to crumble. Due to essentially being turned to stone, the affected target considerably increases in weight. The afflicted person or object of this techniques effects increases their power by +10 to techniques but reduces their speed.
Note: The target stays petrified for 1 turn.
(Suiton: Suiryū Kōbaku ) - Water Release: Water Dragon Biting Explosion
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user creates a large pool of water that gushes upwards lifting the opponent into the air, after firing the enemy into the air, the user shoots numerous water bullets at them from the pool of water and then finishes by forming the water bullets into a water dragon which attacks the target, sending them crashing into the ground.
(Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Antlion Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user performs the Ram hand seal and causes causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the centre, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated. The range of the pit is determined by how much chakra is put into the technique.
Tsk, did we get her karin-chan? (Amaymon)
I really don't think that she's such a simpleton to die by something like that..
 

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Trickery you say? *smirks*

*As i've summoned Amaymon and he notices the ground softening below his claws, he releases his doton chakra through the ground (no need for any heandseals) while he does that he petrifies the ground turning it to rock hard earth again only covering short range, And the moment your clone is created i focus my suiton chakra and cause a large pool of water to materialize right beneath your clone and yourself, while it's materializing it starts lifting both of you upwards while sending you into the air it releases a range of water bullets from the pool itself striking you both from several angles thus making your clone poof away, and as you get hit by the bullets it forms into a large water dragon which attacks you by sending you crushing into the ground (antlion), causing several injuries. And while you're in mid air amaymon releases his doton chakra again into the ground creating a antlion while you hit ground, sucking you in just as you make impact, thus killing you.*

(Doton: Kajūgan no Jutsu): Earth Style: Added Weight Rock Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: By performing the snake hand seal the user will use this technique to petrify whatever or whoever is touching them, causing the object in question to start to crumble. Due to essentially being turned to stone, the affected target considerably increases in weight. The afflicted person or object of this techniques effects increases their power by +10 to techniques but reduces their speed.
Note: The target stays petrified for 1 turn.
(Suiton: Suiryū Kōbaku ) - Water Release: Water Dragon Biting Explosion
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user creates a large pool of water that gushes upwards lifting the opponent into the air, after firing the enemy into the air, the user shoots numerous water bullets at them from the pool of water and then finishes by forming the water bullets into a water dragon which attacks the target, sending them crashing into the ground.
(Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Antlion Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user performs the Ram hand seal and causes causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the centre, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated. The range of the pit is determined by how much chakra is put into the technique.
Tsk, did we get her karin-chan? (Amaymon)
I really don't think that she's such a simpleton to die by something like that..



As you turned my swamp back into solid ground, My clone notices water forming from the bottom underneath us. Quickly perform a single hand seal both Saeko and emma petrifies the water in short range and at the same time stopping your antolion technique.[due to my earth jutsu being at a higher rank.]

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(Doton: Kajūgan no Jutsu): Earth Style: Added Weight Rock Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: By performing the snake hand seal the user will use this technique to petrify whatever or whoever is touching them, causing the object in question to start to crumble. Due to essentially being turned to stone, the affected target considerably increases in weight. The afflicted person or object of this techniques effects increases their power by +10 to techniques but reduces their speed.
Note: The target stays petrified for 1 turn.


Soon after but not too long after I quickly make sure that I am able to sense where ever you might be in the future and to help me aide in this battle.

(Chakra Henkanshi no Jutsu) - Chakra Sensing Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: This is a very advanced of advancing the ability to feel chakra. The technique allows the user to concentrate and detect someones chakra. Using these technique sensors can tell when the enemy is approaching and can easily track down targets. (Techniques activation lasts 5 turns)
Note: Can only be used by bio with sensory ability

Emma: This could be a bit tough!

Saeko: Focus!!


Don't know that jutsu(water) so i looked it up and got this

6:19-6:27


 
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Do us a favour..

*At this point in the battle i think it would be wise to activate my sensing ability by forming a single handseal and releasing a descent amount of chakra through the whole battlefield which can help me detect your presence etc. After your second Added Weight Rock Technique. Then amaymon causes a earth pleateau to rise up one meter before you and you clone and another behind you both from below in a sixty degree angle slamming into your back and pushing you torwards the wall (while making your clone go poofie) before you while breaking your backbone into pieces due to the shear force, as the first wall rises up it emits dozens of spikes all over the first wall (right before you) covering the wall completely the spikes are each one meter long, breaking your backbone with the first one and penetrating you with the second, while they rise they make you loose your balance due to the small tremors. And at the same time as amaymon causes the plateaus to rise up i form a single handseal and stomp my right hand on the ground sending electrical currents that destroy the surface while continuing at you, but it destroys whatever it comes in contact with.*

(Chakra Henkanshi no Jutsu) - Chakra Sensing Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: This is a very advanced of advancing the ability to feel chakra. The technique allows the user to concentrate and detect someones chakra. Using these technique sensors can tell when the enemy is approaching and can easily track down targets. (Techniques activation lasts 5 turns)
Note: Can only be used by bio with sensory ability
(Doton: San-Kai Hashira Kaden) - Earth Release: Three Pillar Household
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: By performing a single handseal, the user makes three great plateaus of earth and stone rise up through the ground wherever he wishes. The plateaus rise through the ground very quickly and without warning, and they cause small tremors around them as they rise. The user is able to slightly manipulate the shape and form of the plateaus, before they rise through the ground, to suit his needs. By forming a single handseal, the user is able to emit spikes from the plateaus. This technique is an advanced version of the Earth Style: Earth Flow Rampart.
Notes:
• Can only be used 4 times per battle.
• Can only be taught by Leeroy G. Zero
(Raiton: Ikazuchi Hakai) – Lightning Release: Lightning Destruction
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing a small sequence of hand seals the user will place their hand on the ground converting their chakra in to lightning. The user then sends an enormous bolt of electricity that cuts through the ground in the direction of the enemy. The shape of the bolt is a triangular with the base in the direction of the user and the tip headed towards the target. It causes devastating destruction on its way and generates enough heat and power to destroy whatever it comes into contact with.
And die!! (amaymon)
 

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*At this point in the battle i think it would be wise to activate my sensing ability by forming a single handseal and releasing a descent amount of chakra through the whole battlefield which can help me detect your presence etc. After your second Added Weight Rock Technique. Then amaymon causes a earth pleateau to rise up one meter before you and you clone and another behind you both from below in a sixty degree angle slamming into your back and pushing you torwards the wall (while making your clone go poofie) before you while breaking your backbone into pieces due to the shear force, as the first wall rises up it emits dozens of spikes all over the first wall (right before you) covering the wall completely the spikes are each one meter long, breaking your backbone with the first one and penetrating you with the second, while they rise they make you loose your balance due to the small tremors. And at the same time as amaymon causes the plateaus to rise up i form a single handseal and stomp my right hand on the ground sending electrical currents that destroy the surface while continuing at you, but it destroys whatever it comes in contact with.*

(Chakra Henkanshi no Jutsu) - Chakra Sensing Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: This is a very advanced of advancing the ability to feel chakra. The technique allows the user to concentrate and detect someones chakra. Using these technique sensors can tell when the enemy is approaching and can easily track down targets. (Techniques activation lasts 5 turns)
Note: Can only be used by bio with sensory ability
(Doton: San-Kai Hashira Kaden) - Earth Release: Three Pillar Household
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: By performing a single handseal, the user makes three great plateaus of earth and stone rise up through the ground wherever he wishes. The plateaus rise through the ground very quickly and without warning, and they cause small tremors around them as they rise. The user is able to slightly manipulate the shape and form of the plateaus, before they rise through the ground, to suit his needs. By forming a single handseal, the user is able to emit spikes from the plateaus. This technique is an advanced version of the Earth Style: Earth Flow Rampart.
Notes:
• Can only be used 4 times per battle.
• Can only be taught by Leeroy G. Zero
(Raiton: Ikazuchi Hakai) – Lightning Release: Lightning Destruction
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing a small sequence of hand seals the user will place their hand on the ground converting their chakra in to lightning. The user then sends an enormous bolt of electricity that cuts through the ground in the direction of the enemy. The shape of the bolt is a triangular with the base in the direction of the user and the tip headed towards the target. It causes devastating destruction on its way and generates enough heat and power to destroy whatever it comes into contact with.
And die!! (amaymon)


As the walls are begins to rise, Emma quickly release doton chakra into the ground in a wide manner where all the ground erupts. Nullifying the ground itself there fore the ground is risen slightly. Not harming either Emma or Saeko.

At the same time as Emma performs her jutsu, Saeko quickly sense chakra released from you and automatically detects lightning chakra. With that seciond, Saeko, shoots a massive wind that will nullify your attack as well as continueing on towards you. It is at a wide scale, that would be dangerous to both of you.

Soon as the earth had stopped from moving Emma, quickly takes a step foward, with Katana in hand[one motion], Soon as her first step hits the ground, she disappears from your view. Then quickly reappears, after your neck has been cut off and behind you.

(Doton: Chidōkaku) - Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
Rank: A
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user lowers or raises the ground in the surrounding area at high speeds, allowing them to create giant holes in the ground or avoid attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that it is lowered to is up to the user and rasing earth can be done up to 20 meters tall creating a small cliff or they can create trenches that can be as deep as 20 meters. Other than being moved below ground relative to the surrounding surface the terrain is not altered, plant life and people retaining their same positions.


(Fūton: Atsugai) - Wind Style: Pressure Damage
Rank: A
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A Huge blast of wind that levels anything in its path; Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast moves in tremendous speed and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, it will harm him also.


(Fuuton: Ekusupuro-Jon Uindo): Wind Release: Wind Explosion
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: During movement of the user. The user will release a burst of exploding wind towards the bottom of their feet to move at the speed of sound. It will appear to the opponent as the user had teleported, however this is not the case. Any dojutsu users as well as sound and sensory ninja's would be able to follow the movements however they would lose the movements towards the end as the user would be moving too fast.

Note: User has to be moving to use this jutsu.
Note: Can be used two times per battle.
Note: Can't use to move in the air or fly around
Note: Can use it to change direction, but will count towards the users 3 moves per turn
Note: Can only use this to move within the line of sight. (Meaning can't go around walls without changing directions)
Note: If ran into something the user will take -50 damage as a result of the great speed
Note: Can only be taught by NineVision

Saeko: Dead yet?

 
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