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Basic Information
Name: Xinroki
Nickname: Xin
Gender: Male
Age: 39
Clan: N/A

Looks: Short-Long black hair, main eye color brown, (Eyes change color depending on how much power i'm using)
Personality:
Cares for others well-being, doesn't back down from a fight, keeps to my promises and doesn't quit. Always carries everything through to the end rather it fighting, drinking, talking or hating someone.
Takes care of those I love and makes sure they are happy for now and ever.

Village Info.
Village of Birth: Hidden Mist Village
Village of Alliance: N/A

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: S-Jounin
Specialty: N/A
Elements: Wind
Your ninjutsu:
(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Background Info.
History: I was born into the Village Hidden in the mist, led a tough life, but a somewhat normal one in the mist. I began my life with my brother, Father, Mother and my greatest friend Ichazu. My mother had an illness, my father was of great age, and my brother was always on missions. The only person that was around for me to talk to was Ichazu. One day, at the age of 14 for the both of us. My mother's illness finaly got the better of her and my father had come down ill too and died shortly after my mother. My brother from that point on would return home time to time to visit their graves and check up on me. I had been moved into the home of my friend so I was not homeless nore alone. I lived with them for a long while, I got to the point where I actually called it home. I found a job with my friend at a local romen shop. It was easy pay and a good way to meet new people. One day when I was the age of 18, a man came in by the name of Cazuro. He clamed to be a travaling ninja from the Hidden Leaf Village. He ordered quite alot of food while he was there, and once he was done he asked our names. After we gave them he asked if we had any intrest in Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, any type of Jutsu. We answered that we would like to learn it but knew little of the arts. He made a deal with us, He clamed he travals from village to village trying to make allies for the hidden leaf village, and in those travals he picks up people who want to learn more about Jutsus. Me and my friend thought it a fine idea but needed to think about it. About two weeks later the man was getting ready to leave. We dicided to go ahead and go with him. Me and my friend both. I had no family that was of my blood but I had a family that I could return to if I wanted. So I had nothing holding me there. But my friend had his family, but wished to learn how to protect them. So there, at the age of 18, me and my friend set off away from the mist village. Jumping from village to village with this Cazuro man. At the age of 26, he left me and my friend in a local town that isn't marked on the maps. We were there for weeks with him to be out of site and unheard from sense he left. We then got word that he was killed on his last mission and his body was missing. So me and my friend stayed in the town called Ichinoza town for a while until the age of 30. My friend made himself a family, and opened up his own business. For me on the other hand, wanted to continue travaling until my very heart stoped. My friend said he wanted to go with me but he had stuff tying him down now. And wished me luck. So from that point on, sense I was the age of 30. Have been jumping village to village learning new things and meeting new people. I returned to the town of Ichinoza from time to time to visit my friend, he was always well and healthy. A day came that I even returned to the mist village to check up on the family. After my third visit to the mist, I found the home burnt to the ground, and the family missing. I started asking around the village to only find more questions. Finally, a man told me that a fire had been started by a man from the leaf, and had killed the hole family in the proses. I began to research into it, only to find that it was the man that we thought dead, Cazuro. From that point on, everytime I entered a new or past village/town. I would ask questions about him, and do what I can to find him and kill him for what he did. Later on at the age of 38, I found myself in the leaf village. I began asking questions about Cazuro, but no one seemed to know who he was. I finally asked the Hokage of the village, and he clamed that this Cazuro, was a member of the Akatsuki. A vile and hateful organizantion. And from that point, I set myself a new goal. Find the main holdout of the organization called the Akatsuki, and distroy them.

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Battles

Won: None
Lost: None

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Take out everything about you being part demon and having wing's special Chakra and being super strong. for it will not be approved.

Also you will need to chose a village to be born from, you can not say unknown.

Edit: also your history is saying that you have swordmenship and other skills that you need to train for, but have not done so yet, you can add that later when you update your bio after training U_U
 
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1: This isn't the bio of a ninja, you need to state your Village of Birth and/or Village of Alliance. With other words you are not able to use any kind of ninja skills as it is now.

2: This is your first bio, so only state the first element you want to learn.

3: And above all completely remove that entire history and I mean everything of it. No demons, no superhuman strength, no demon-human hybrid. That's not even allowed in senior members bio's, let alone in someone's first bio.
 

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1: This isn't the bio of a ninja, you need to state your Village of Birth and/or Village of Alliance. With other words you are not able to use any kind of ninja skills as it is now.

2: This is your first bio, so only state the first element you want to learn.

3: And above all completely remove that entire history and I mean everything of it. No demons, no superhuman strength, no demon-human hybrid. That's not even allowed in senior members bio's, let alone in someone's first bio.
Alright. I set my one element and changed my history. Take another look plz and tell me if something needs to be changed again. Thanks. :D
 
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