~need approval~ Musa Kenoiko Bio

[1sasukeuchiha1]

Basic Information
Name:Musa Kenoiko
Nickname: none
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Clan:Kiba's clan

Looks: Black hair, Blue eyes, White skin, 5,5 feet tall

Personality: Funny, Nice, sweet

Village Info.
Village of Birth: Village hidden in the leaves
Village of Alliance: Travels around

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Genin
Specialty: water
Elements: Water
Your ninjutsu:


Background Info.
History: Musa was a very mature boy growing up with Kiba's clan, even though he was not blood related to the clan but he still barred the mark.
Musa was very intelignant and had a nin dog called Wolf. He was a smart dog who always protected Musa until Musa got training now they both go around fighting who ever came in there way.
Musa grew and grew until he was 19 years old now Musa is seeking a sensei, and is ready for any fight.

Other

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Battles

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[akumamecchen]

cool

 

[Pervyy]

More history, description on looks and post the E rank jutsu from the jutsu list

 

[Musashibo]

>.> Your using my name ;_;

1. Inukazu is Kiba's clan... Come on people. O_O
2. Add what he wears to the looks section to help out the thinned out look of your bio.
3. Do the same as #2 for your personality, unless you can't think of anything.
4. Remove your specialty since your 1 post above genin... You don't have a specialty.
5. You are fresh from the academy so you should have this in your ninjutsu list.

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(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

6. Make your history longer. Surely you don't have much experience of fighting, rping, or in this forum so it doesn't need to be a novel. Though it would help to get this bio approved by the people that do approve these. I suggest to make a bio in pieces:

• First write your childhood.
• Then after your childhood you can talk about how your academy life was.
• Next you can talk about your squad if you want to be in one, the Inukuza clan, or anything devestating of your life.
• Finally you say what your goals, how you are now, and more here.

Remember to add age breaks as in, "I gained my dog companion at the age of 5..." or something like that.
7. All Inukuza clan members have a dog companion so look for a picture, or perhaps just describe it in a way that can be pictured for battle. You only get a canine for your bio.

 

[Caliburn]

>.> Your using my name ;_;

1. Inukazu is Kiba's clan... Come on people. O_O
2. Add what he wears to the looks section to help out the thinned out look of your bio.
3. Do the same as #2 for your personality, unless you can't think of anything.
4. Remove your specialty since your 1 post above genin... You don't have a specialty.
5. You are fresh from the academy so you should have this in your ninjutsu list.

Spoiler

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
_____
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
_____
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
_____
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
_____
(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
_____
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

6. Make your history longer. Surely you don't have much experience of fighting, rping, or in this forum so it doesn't need to be a novel. Though it would help to get this bio approved by the people that do approve these. I suggest to make a bio in pieces:

• First write your childhood.
• Then after your childhood you can talk about how your academy life was.
• Next you can talk about your squad if you want to be in one, the Inukuza clan, or anything devestating of your life.
• Finally you say what your goals, how you are now, and more here.

Remember to add age breaks as in, "I gained my dog companion at the age of 5..." or something like that.
7. All Inukuza clan members have a dog companion so look for a picture, or perhaps just describe it in a way that can be pictured for battle. You only get a canine for your bio.

It's Inuzuka, not Inukuza -_- if you're going to write it wrong, it's better then that you say "Kiba's clan".

And I'm also in favour of people putting more effort in their bio and this one should have a bit more history, though you don't have to say that he has to write more as what he's wearing, especially when he posted pictures, or what his personality is. A lot of people do it that way: just posting some character-trademarks.

And people also don't need to follow something like: childhood etc. It's logcial that you do it in chronological order, but what they exactly write in there or how much or in which order is their business, so long it matches the Narutoplot and isn't to short.

It's his first bio -_- if you have made multiple bio's it's expected that they become better overtime, but a lot of people's first bio's are like this. No reason to start saying that he needs to make into an entire book.

 

[Musashibo]

It's Inuzuka, not Inukuza -_- if you're going to write it wrong, it's better then that you say "Kiba's clan".

And I'm also in favour of people putting more effort in their bio and this one should have a bit more history, though you don't have to say that he has to write more as what he's wearing, especially when he posted pictures, or what his personality is. A lot of people do it that way: just posting some character-trademarks.

And people also don't need to follow something like: childhood etc. It's logcial that you do it in chronological order, but what they exactly write in there or how much or in which order is their business, so long it matches the Narutoplot and isn't to short.

It's his first bio -_- if you have made multiple bio's it's expected that they become better overtime, but a lot of people's first bio's are like this. No reason to start saying that he needs to make into an entire book.

Whoops, whoops. My bad on the mistype. I wrote it write last time, but I guess I was distracted or forgot. Anyways...

All of my statements were suggestions or just corrections to help him out. I suggested a way to write a history bio, I didn't say it was law like that. I also said that it doesn't need to be a complete novel to pass, I was just saying that it would help to increase the size of the history. His experience, battle history, and overall NB history can be used overtime. I just wanted to help him out by giving him pointers.

If I made any mistakes by misspelling something, then I take back that suggested and hopefully he uses the correct form. It's his first bio, why not help him out. I'm not forcing, I'm helping. How I express my help is up to me.

 

[Caliburn]

Whoops, whoops. My bad on the mistype. I wrote it write last time, but I guess I was distracted or forgot. Anyways...

All of my statements were suggestions or just corrections to help him out. I suggested a way to write a history bio, I didn't say it was law like that. I also said that it doesn't need to be a complete novel to pass, I was just saying that it would help to increase the size of the history. His experience, battle history, and overall NB history can be used overtime. I just wanted to help him out by giving him pointers.

If I made any mistakes by misspelling something, then I take back that suggested and hopefully he uses the correct form. It's his first bio, why not help him out. I'm not forcing, I'm helping. How I express my help is up to me.

I know you never said it was a rule, but new members are incredibly influenceable for these kind of things. Not to long ago I got a PM from someone that thought she did something wrong because someone said she didn't used the code for the template. There was nothing wrong, only everything was written in the same size.

No need to make things overcomplicated. The only thing he needs to do is add the ninjutsu you posted and add a bit more history and it's fine to go.

Making distinction in your history is mainly for people like you or me who have longe history's, but for shorter ones it's not necessary and they will eventually grow automatically.

PS: to 1Sasukeuchiha1 you can be a blood relative of the Inuzuka-clan.

 

[AnimeLover3172]

cool