Need a sensei to teach lightning

[Akiza]

Cool.... Lemme try... I make following handseals and release Chakra from my body to the sky. After some time loud crackling fills d area and two lightning blasts come down and hit faust who walks by. MWHAHAHA!!!

Now I'm not your English teacher, but I edited your post for you to make it a lot clearer. In battle, your opponent would want you to be as clear as possible so they can understand what you're doing, when you're doing it. Okay? Anyways, let's continue.

Raikiri (Lightning Blade)

Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A more concentrated version of Chidori.

Ah, one of my favorites. You remember when Kakashi used Chidori for the first time ever in Kakashi Gaiden, right? Well, this is its more concentrated version (as in when he was about to use it on oro's butt when oro came to see sasuke during the chuunin exams). We begin with handseals. *shows u handseals for Raikiri* Practice them until you have them memorized.

 

[Passion]

I train handseals till I've fully memorized 'em. After it I am ready to start and make followed handseals concentrate my chakra flow on hand and More concentrated version of chidori that is able to split lightning.

 

[Akiza]

I train handseals till I've fully memorized 'em. After it I am ready to start and make followed handseals concentrate my chakra flow on hand and More concentrated version of chidori that is able to split lightning.

Alright,you formed it perfectly, but it should be a bit more powerful than what you made, so that way when you try attacking something directly with it, it should have no trouble slicing straight through it.

 

[Passion]

I activate my sharingan to get better control of my chakra and I am ready to start.. I make followed handseals and focus my chakra. After it I concentrate chakra on my right hand making it Hold blade of pure electricity. Good?

 

[Akiza]

Yes now. *five wooden dummies appear before you in a straight line.* Destroy said dummies sequentially using only that Raikiri you formed.

 

[Passion]

Okay... I charge with raikiri to first from left going through it. After it I Jump in air to and rush through middle one leaving second from left and two from right left. after it I stab my hand on second from left and make backflip hitting second from right in air and sharpen my chakra making raikiri blade extend and cut last one in half. How's that, senpai?

 

[Akiza]

*smiles* very good. now for

Raiton: Kirin (Lightning Style: Kirin)

Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: After using Great Dragon Fire to throw fire into the air a thunder storm forms
from the heated sky. You use Chidori to take control of the lightning and make it strike the opponent. This jutsu cant be avoided unless with space/time jutsu.

As you already know, Kirin is a multiple-turn and multiple-jutsu jutsu. It takes more than one turn and jutsu to use it. You already know how to make the clouds for this, so do that now.

 

[Passion]

I use:

(Katon: Gouryuuka No Jutsu) - Fire Style: Great Dragon Fire

Rank:A
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:Fire shape like dragon heads that is best used to make clouds for Kirin but can be used to also attack the opponent(this jutsu is made of multiple bursts of fire) .

To launch dragon head bullet on sky to make clouds for kirin...

 

[Passion]

I guess that next is chidori?

 

[Akiza]

I use:

(Katon: Gouryuuka No Jutsu) - Fire Style: Great Dragon Fire

Rank:A
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:Fire shape like dragon heads that is best used to make clouds for Kirin but can be used to also attack the opponent(this jutsu is made of multiple bursts of fire) .

To launch dragon head bullet on sky to make clouds for kirin...

I guess that next is chidori?

correct, and again, double post alert, just put what u want to say all into one post plz...

Use the chidori to take control of the lightning clouds made by great dragon fire, and then using the chidori, make the lightning clouds strike with a powerful shot of lightning on your opponent. *Shows you life size version of wooden dummy* he is your opponent.

 

[Passion]

I make followed handseals for chidori. Concentrate my chakra on hand making electricity crackle on it. I raise my hand with chidori to overcome lightning storm. After small time lightning strikes but this time in form of Kirin beast of japanese mythology that will destroy the wooden dummy in 1000 pieces.

 

[Akiza]

perfect. need another break? i know those three jutsu take much chakra and concentration

 

[Passion]

I am here to test my limits so is there any chance that we could continue?

 

[Akiza]

alright then, but if u faint all of a sudden, don't say i didnt warn u

final jutsu is

Raiton: Chidori Raimei (Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm)

Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a
circular area destroying all thats in its way.

We begin with handseals. *shows u the handseals for chidori raimei* practice them until u have them memorized.

 

[Passion]

Okay! I waste 10 minutes of my life to master these handseals. Okay.... I make followed handseals and focus chakra on my both hands THIS time I release it ( like in chidori currents aura ) from both of my palms not from whole body to wipe out everybody on my way.

 

[Akiza]

perfection, but u did one little mistake. you did the jutsu and i didnt instruct you to do it. so do it again plz xd

 

[Passion]

Mehh... I make following handseals and concentrate my chakra flow on both of my palms. After I've collected enough chakra I release Aura of chidori from both of my palms wiping off that faust over there. Nom nom nom nom nom nommm nomm nommm Grilled zetsu.

 

[Akiza]

xd all done. congrats, you have mastered lightning jutsu

 

[Passion]

Cool.... Do you have any spare time to help me reache something in fuuton ( I can revive old thread ) or mastering the third sharingan?

 

[Passion]

I would have better odds of defeating izure then... MWAHAHAHAH!