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[B]One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
[LIST][*]1. Great defensive water technique. [*]2. Field of vision is maintained with the technique allowing for follow up attacks.[*]3.[*][/LIST]
One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):[/B]
[LIST][*]1. Requires a good amount of hand seals to perform. [*]2.[*]3.[*][/LIST]
[B]How you would use it in battle:[/B] In instances where, say, an A rank or lower fire technique were heading straight for you and you needed something to defend against it.
[B]How you would counter it:[/B] Since the technique covers the user entirely one would have to come up with a way to use force to pierce through the defense.
[B]How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):[/B]
*I begin by performing the required hand seals Tiger → Snake → Rat → Snake → Tiger while simultaneously gathering my suiton chakra. Once I've done this I then expel it from my mouth, creating a wall of water that surrounds me entirely.*
 

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Your 'How to perform this' is lacking. >_>

(Suiton: Kōka Suijin) - Water Release: Hard Whirlpool Water Blade
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user makes the water under the enemy explode, launching them into the air. Then the user jumps above the enemy and creates a large whirlpool around his arm, striking the enemy with it and creating a large water explosion.
Note: Water source required.

Use your chakra to make the water under my clone explode, launching him into the air, you will jump into the air above my clone, create a large whirlpool around your arm, then striking my clone with it, thus creating a large water explosion.
 

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My bad, had a derp moment. T_T

One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
  • 1.Does damage while sending the target into the air restricting their movement.
  • 2. Also a good way to egt close to the opponent after they have been sent in the air.
  • 3.
One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):

  • 1. Water source required.
  • 2. Can only be executed within short range.
  • 3.
How you would use it in battle: In instances where one would like to blast the opponent into the air and close in for another explosive attack that could send them crashing towards the ground.
How you would counter it: Could possibly be countered by making a small pillar of earth in a diagonal manner to send you away from the water that is about to erupt below.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can): *Despite the rigorous amount of training that I had been exposed to for the past days, I was determined to master the suiton element. Nathan-senpai, with great clarity and wisdom not only introduced to me several new water techniques in a short amount of time, but demonstrated their proper use in battle and demanded that I analyzed and repeated his actions, a common but effective method of instruction. Shortly after performing the previous water wall jutsu he calmly weaved the proper hand sign, prompting a clone to appear directly in front of us, about four meters away from he and I's current position. After explaining what needed to be done, I nod, focus my attention towards the clone, and begin to gather suiton chakra. By utilizing the chakra that I had gathered I manipulate the existing water from the lake that the three of us currently stand upon, captivating, such a crystal clear fluid, glistening brightly due to the sun's warm rays. The water under the clone blasts upwards, sending the clone soaring upwards into the sky. In what looks like only seconds I move, positioning myself above the clone, and by focusing suiton chakra into my right arm, form a large whirlpool around it, striking the clone directly in the head. Once again another explosion of water bursts, this time from my right arm, causing the clone to be sent crashing down towards the lake. The clone breaks through the water below and is slammed to the bottom of the fairly shallow lake, dispersing soon afterwards. Assuming that I had performed the technique correctly I glance towards Nathan-senpai, observing for any signs or words of approval.*


*Forgets to take the CODE tag out this entire time* :|
 
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Amazing! And you ain't the first one. :p

(Suiton: Mizu no Tatsumaki) - Water Release: Tornado of Water
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: After performing the Ram → Horse → Bird the user is able to create a technique that utilizes water to create a spinning water vortex around the user. The water vortex acts both as a barrier and an attack mechanism. The power of the vortex is enough to knock an opponent unconscious.
Note: Requires a nearby water source

Perform the seals, and use your suiton chakra to gather the nearby water source around you, to block incoming attacks. The vortex has enough power to knock your target back.
 

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One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
  • 1. Can knock an opponent unconscious.
  • 2. Can act as a defense as well as an offense.
  • 3.
One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):

  • 1. Requires multiple hand seals.
  • 2. Requires a water source.
  • 3.
How you would use it in battle: In instances where one must defend themselves from, say, an equally or lower ranked fire technique.
How you would counter it: By using an earth technique to bring the ground under them lower or send them launching into the air with a pillar to disrupt the vortex.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can): *I walk towards the nearby lake and after gathering a raw chakra into my feet proceed to walk on the water towards the center. I then perform the required hand seals Ram → Horse → Bird while gathering my suiton chakra, using shape manipulation to form a water vortex that envelops me entirely. The vortex spins viciously and with great noise.*
 

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Well done.

(Suiton: Dai Bakusui Shōha) - Water Release: Great Exploding Water Colliding Wave
Rank: A
Type: Offensive,Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: This technique is a stronger version of exploding water colliding wave technique. The user will first perform the ram hand seal and then spits out a large amount of water that covers an entire area, with massive waves that can crush the opponent. The user then forms the water into a giant orb, instead of releasing like weaker version of the technique.

Perform the ram seal, gather a huge amount of suiton chakra in your mouth the release it, doing this you'll release a large amount of water that will cover the entire area. Then you will form the water into a giant orb.
 

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One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
  • 1. Stronger version of original technique.
  • 2. Can be used as a follow up for a lightning technique since it covers the area in water. Can drown the target if they do not either move out of the dome of water or use a technique to help them breath.
  • 3.
One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):

  • 1. Requires hand seals.
  • 2. One is trapped within the orb of water with the target.
  • 3.
How you would use it in battle: In instances where one would like to cover the area with water and damage the opponent simultaneously.
How you would counter it: By using some sort of technique that can propel you quickly out of the orb of water. (Referring to that one water technique specifically that increase your swim speed.)
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can): *I take a few steps back and begin by forming the ram hand seal, while simultaneously gathering my SUiton chakra. Once I've gathered enough I then proceed to spit it out directly below me, creating a large amount of water that forms into large, crushing waves. After a short amount of time I then manipulate the created water into a dome like structure that covers the training area entirely.*
 

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Great!

(Suiton: Mizu Shishi) - Water Release: Water Beast
Rank: A
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user after performing the Dog → Horse → Monkey → Ram and by manipulating a pre-existing water source and transforms it into a giant wolf-like beast. The beast can launch powerful streams of water from its mouth equivilant to B rank, or sweep the area with its claws to let a powerful torrent of water to wash away the enemies.
Note: The Water Beast remains active for three turns

Perform the seals, then manipulate the water source nearby to create a giant wolf made out of water. The beast can fire water from it's mouth that is a B-rank at best.
 

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One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
  • 1. The water beast can attack from long range.
  • 2. Lasts three turns.
  • 3. Can fire up to B rank water techniques.
One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):

  • 1. Although not noted, this technique does require a pre-existing water source to execute.
  • 2.
  • 3.
How you would use it in battle: It can be used as an offensive attack or a way to shield oneself from an incoming attack, such as a C rank wind projectile.
How you would counter it: Using a high rank lightning technique on the water beast can cause it to dissipate.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can): *Turning towards a nearby rock structure I begin by forming the hand seals Dog → Horse → Monkey → Ram while gathering my suiton chakra. Using the suiton chakra that I had gathered I manipulate the pre existing water from a nearby lake, using shape manipulation to create a giant wolf made out of the water. The water wolf then proceeds to sweep outwards in front of itself, causing a powerful torrent of water to head towards the rock structure. Upon contact the rock structure is destroyed by the torrent of water.*
 

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Good.

Also;

There's one extremely important pro about this jutsu that you probably won't find on your own and is a bit obvious but people tend to overlook it. The beast in itself is pretty big, which is nice and all, but it can also defend you from multiple fire attacks. It can shoot a beam of water towards one attack, while sacrificing itself to stop another attack. With that, if someone ever uses 2 fire jutsus in 1 turn, this is one of the most come in handy and underrated water jutsus out there.

(Suiton: Suiryū Kōbaku ) - Water Release: Water Dragon Biting Explosion
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user creates a large pool of water that gushes upwards lifting the opponent into the air, after firing the enemy into the air, the user shoots numerous water bullets at them from the pool of water and then finishes by forming the water bullets into a water dragon which attacks the target, sending them crashing into the ground.

Alright, first of all you create water with this technique. It doesn't need a water source. You let the water gush the opponent upwards (rather high). While they are launched in the air, you manipulate the water on the ground again to shoot water bullets at them. Then, combine these bullets to attack the opponent. The nice part is you can control the dragon to some extent, but obviously it won't be allowed in our RP that you can manually outmaneuver attacks to counter this one. I'd say you best use this when the opponent is under a genjutsu or otherwise occupied, or the'll just use an earth based technique to overpower this one.
 

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That's awesome, thanks. :D

One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
  • 1. Pretty much a barrage of multiple water attacks that happen (although not simultaneously) in different directions.
  • 2. The water dragon can be manipulated to some extent.
  • 3.
One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):

  • 1. Despite all of the pros as the dragon must be fairly large it can be countered fairly easily with a proper earth technique.
  • 2.
  • 3.
How you would use it in battle: In instances where the opponent is distracted or are unable to act or counter.
How you would counter it: By using a equally or stronger earth based technique one can counter this one effectively.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can): *Turning towards the clone I begin by gathering my suiton chakra. Once I've done this I then proceed to form water underneath it, prompting a large amount of water to shoot up into the sky along with it. By continuing with manipulating the formed water I launched several water bullets towards the target in the air. I then combine the bullets, using shape manipulation to form a water dragon that consumes the clone in it's entirety, smashing into it. The clone soon after disperses.*
 

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That's awesome, thanks. :D

One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
  • 1. Pretty much a barrage of multiple water attacks that happen (although not simultaneously) in different directions.
  • 2. The water dragon can be manipulated to some extent.
  • 3.
One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):

  • 1. Despite all of the pros as the dragon must be fairly large it can be countered fairly easily with a proper earth technique.
  • 2.
  • 3.
How you would use it in battle: In instances where the opponent is distracted or are unable to act or counter.
How you would counter it: By using a equally or stronger earth based technique one can counter this one effectively.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can): *Turning towards the clone I begin by gathering my suiton chakra. Once I've done this I then proceed to form water underneath it, prompting a large amount of water to shoot up into the sky along with it. By continuing with manipulating the formed water I launched several water bullets towards the target in the air. I then combine the bullets, using shape manipulation to form a water dragon that consumes the clone in it's entirety, smashing into it. The clone soon after disperses.*
Yeah, Wes told me about it, thought I'd pass it on. :p

you forgot 1 thing though, it has 3 parts in it and counts as one jutsu yes, but you have to continue channeling chakra through it, otherwise the technique will not fully work. The bullets won't shoot out themselves and turn into a dragon out of nothing.
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(Suiton: Mugensame)-Water Style: Infinite Shark Frenzy
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: A highly advanced form of Five Shark Frenzy where the user creates one shark that attacks the opponent, dragging them into the water. Then, the user unleashes a storm of sharks to attack the opponent from all angles and directions, ending up in a water explosion.
Note: Requires a water source.

I'm not a big fan of these shark jutsu's. They are so unrealistic to use in our RP as no one really dares go stand on a water source and the use of them is quite useless in our RP, but anyways, you basically put your palm on the water source (which your opponent stands on) and then make sharks in the water. They'll drag the opponent down and then simply explode underwater, hurting and killing the opponent.
 

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I see.

S ranks! *faints*
One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
  • 1. A stronger version of Five Shark Frenzy.
  • 2. Sharks come from all angles and directions.
  • 3.
One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):

  • 1. Requires a water source.
  • 2.
  • 3.
How you would use it in battle: In instances where both you and your opponent are standing upon a water source.
How you would counter it: Using some sort of technique that can move you out of the sharks' way in time is best.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can): *Walking atop the nearby lake surface I face towards the clone, also standing atop the water. I then gather my suiton chakra, crouch down and place my right palm gently on the water surface while simultaneously sending the chakra that I had gathered below. Using shape manipulation I then form five strong water sharks that proceed to break out of the water surface below the clone, attacking it from all directions. The clone is grasped with the strong crunch of the sharks and dragged underwater, where an explosion occurs soon after, causing the clone to disperse.*

Trying to come up with some different disadvantages/advantages but I'm having some trouble as these are pretty straightforward, (to my understanding) sorry. T_T
 

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No worries, the shark ones are well simple. ._.

(Suiton: Gobo Shukusame) – Water Release: Burdock Root Eating sharks
Rank: S
Type: Offensive, deffensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user slashes a body of water, creating a pillar of water that launches the enemy into the air. He then releases five water sharks that attack the enemy until one devours them before imploding, launching the enemy into the air. The remaining water sharks surround the enemy and force them under water where they implode in on the enemy. It is known that if the sharks are damaged, they can regenerate themselves, unless completely destroyed.
Note: To reform the sharks require a water source.

Slash a body of water to create a pillar of water that launches your enemy up. Then, release the sharks from the water and let them attack your enemy, imploding it and launching it in the air again. The last few sharks will then drag it under water and implode again.
 

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...What the hell kind of techni- ahh forget it. xD


One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
  • 1. Enemy is launched into the air hindering their movement.
  • 2. Multiple implosions that can kill the target quite easily.
  • 3.
One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):

  • 1. Gonna assume that since it describes it as a slash that some sort of sword is required? .-.
  • 2. To reform the sharks requires a water source.
  • 3.
How you would use it in battle: During moments where your opponent can be caught off guard, providing a higher chance of the slash sending them into the air with out any problems.
How you would counter it: If one can somehow counter the slash that produces the pillar ultimately sending you into the air then one can prevent the rest of the technique from occurring.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can): *As I stand at about 5 meters away from the clone I, after gathering a sufficient amount of suiton chakra, proceed to slash at the body of water where we stand, creating a water pillar that shoots the clone high into the air. I then use shape manipulation to form several sharks that attack the clone in mid air, finishing the attack with a violent implosion. As the clone falls down into the lake the remaining sharks that are still formed bite the clone, causing another implosion. The clone disperses thereafter.*
 

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Shark techniques everywhere. xD

(Suiton: Daikōdan no Jutsu) – Water Release: Great Shark Missile Technique
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user performs Tiger – Serpent hand seals to create a stronger version of the Water Release: Water shark Bomb technique, which creates a gigantic shark, far larger than the user, to attack the opponent. This technique differs from its parent jutsu in being able to absorb the chakra from an opponent's technique, and in turn use that chakra to grow larger and more powerful.
Note: Technique can only absorb up to B rank level techniques and requires a Large water source.

Now, an interesting jutsu. Do the hand seals and manipulate your water chakra into a source of water. Form that source into a huge water shark and send it at the enemy. Perfect counter for any B-jutsu that is a projectile. It even works against ones like lightning if you theorize about it considering it "leeches" the chakra from the technique, rendering it useless.
 

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Interesting jutsu indeed. O__O It's like a make-shift dark release technique in a way. xD

One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
  • 1. Can absorb up to B rank level techniques.
  • 2. The absorption of such techniques causes this jutsu to grow in size and in strength.
  • 3.
One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):

  • 1. Requires a large water source.
  • 2.
  • 3.
How you would use it in battle: In instances where the enemy has sent a B rank or lower projectile based jutsu towards you, providing a great defense and an even stronger offense by using this jutsu.
How you would counter it: A technique that can quickly move you out of the shark's range is best to use, as the water technique cannot be manipulated while in mid air.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can): *Turning towards the clone I begin by gathering my suiton chakra. Once I've gathered enough I then use the chakra to manipulate a large amount of water from the lake nearby, creating a great shark that is sent towards the clone. As the shark makes contact with the clone it crunches onto the clone's mid-section, shortly after exploding.*
 

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And great.

(Suiton: Senijikizame) – Water Release: A Thousand Feeding Sharks
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: A much more powerful version of the Water Release: Five Feeding Sharks, the user creates one thousand sharks out of water, and they enter a wall formation, raining down to attack the opponent.
Note: Requires a large water source
Note: User must be Kage rank or above
Note: Technique may be used once per battle


Easy technique, self explanatory, and awesome imo.
I honestly think this is overpowered as hell. :|
 

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*Jaw drops* One thousand. xD

One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
  • 1. One thousand water sharks that form a wall, capable of completely decimating the opponent. O__O
  • 2. Because of the number of water sharks this technique, if the opponent cannot move, proves to be very difficult to counter.
  • 3.
One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):

  • 1. Requires a large water source.
  • 2. Can only be used once per battle.
  • 3.
How you would use it in battle: In instances where the opponent is zoned into an area where simply using a technique to move away would prove impossible.
How you would counter it: By using that chidori variant where a large field of electricity is created in a 360 degree motion. (Chidori Thunderstorm I think.) ._.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can): *Turning towards the clone I begin by gathering my suiton chakra. Once I've done so I then use the chakra to manipulate the existing nearby water, a lot of it. I then use shape manipulation to form a staggering one thousand water sharks that bundle up into a wall formation, following by attacking the clone. Upon contact the sharks completely envelop the clone, biting and tearing at it viciously.*
 

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Well done!

( Suiton: Suijinchū ) - Water Release: Water Encampment Pillar
Rank: S
Type: Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: A defensive technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into water, and then expelled from the mouth in a dense torrent, effectively creating a near instantaneous barricade that can be used to intercept incoming attacks.

Pretty much your straightforward S-rank water shield against heavy fire techniques. Knead the chakra, and spill it out (of your mouth). It creates a barricade of water infront of you to protect you from incoming harm.
 
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