Naruto: Yellowflash legacy

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Chapter 1: Naruto's trainning.

It was calm day as Naruto is at 4th hokage's trainning field trying to create a new jutsu until deep within Naruto his yellowflash powers and yellow lightling chakra was awakend as Naruto thought to himself "I did it I got myself stronger and it means I can finally bring Sasuke back".

After Naruto thought to himself Naruto went to hokage office as Naruto said "Lady Hokage Tsunade I would like the request of me bringing Sasuke back and I have promised Sakura I'll bring Sasuke back which that I will not give up inspecially that I gained the ability of 4th hokage but who is 4th hokage along with the one known as red death".
 

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Chapter 1: Naruto's trainning.

It was calm day as Naruto is at 4th hokage's trainning field trying to create a new jutsu until deep within Naruto his yellowflash powers and yellow lightling chakra was awakend as Naruto thought to himself "I did it I got myself stronger and it means I can finally bring Sasuke back".

After Naruto thought to himself Naruto went to hokage office as Naruto said "Lady Hokage Tsunade I would like the request of me bringing Sasuke back and I have promised Sakura I'll bring Sasuke back which that I will not give up inspecially that I gained the ability of 4th hokage but who is 4th hokage along with the one known as red death".
huh?!
 

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Chapter 2: The destined mission.

After Naruto spoke Lady Tsunade said "Naruto you have a mission and it is that mission which you may go alone or bring two people with you" then Naruto replied "Thank you and I'll bring two clan leaders that I am sure to be useful for this mission" so Naruto dashed from Hokage office right to laf village gate where Hiashi Hyuuga and Kakashi Hatake is waiting.

As Naruto arrived at the village gate Naruto said "Kakashi sensei and Lord Hiashi we are going to rescue Sasuke Uchiha from Orochimaru since if Orochimaru ghets the powers of Uchiha clan along with Sasuke's body we are all done for" which Hiashi said "I have the sumoning jutsu impure world ressurrection scroll with me that hyuuga elder left me" so Kakashi said "I have brough along a weapon that my sensei left me but if seems to respond to your chakra meaning this belongs to you".
 

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That was.... very intresting.... Kyuubi Sage... can you make your fanfiction more .... uh.... beliveable?.... I know you're a fan, but.... where's the passion?! The page-turning feeling? The suspence? The love? The drama? Paint pictures with just words, blend sentances with the paintbrush of creativity. (Just to give you an idea)
 

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I'd also like it if you read my fanfiction. No rush, just when you have time. You can read it on my thread, One Day in Konoha, or just go to my blog to get the first and second part.
 

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Chapter 3: Yellowflash to be.

After Naruto recieved 4th hokage's special kunai knife the thunder blade Naruto said "Thank you and now I am going to save Sasuke Uchiha and even allow Kyuubi to get revenge on Orochimaru for causing me pain of losing Sasuke Uchiha" then Naruto took off alone to save Sasuke Uchiha from having his body stolen by Orochimaru".

As Naruto took off to save Sasuke Kakashi and Hiashi followed Naruto so as they arrived at Sasuke's location Naruto yelled "Hey Sasuke if your here with that creep Kabuto and that rotten jerk Orochimaru come out where I can fight you three in battle" which Sasuke came out from hiding along with Orochimaru plus Kabuto knowing that Sasuke has still got the curse mark with it's dark powers.
 
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