-Haku Yuki-
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people didn't like the ending or how naruto couldn't pick up susano'o so i though i would re try writeing this it's almost completly differnt.
Kakashi and sakura stand off in the distance as naruto and sasuke walk towards each other stop stop mid range from each. they are surronded by many moutin's.
naruto:...
flash back...
sasuke: naruto your one of the people i want to fight.
sasuke: what do you know about it huh! you where on your own to begin with what makes you think you could possabley know what it feels like to lose all that!
sasuke: i have other bonds bonds with my older brother it is the bond of hatered.
sasuke: why are you so obseesed with me!
naruto: if we fight we're borh gonna die
now...
sasuke:...
naruto: ( sasuke if only i could have stoped you on that day you left the village maybe this wouldn't have happened)
naruto see's sasuke in front of him and he begins to walk away naruto tries to chase him but sasuke only goes further and further soon darkness starts to surrond sasuke.
sasuke: naruto once you'r dead your village is next they will pay for what they have done to the uchiha for what they did to my family.
sauske runs forward and jumps over naruto and takes out his blade naruto takes out a kunai and blocks the sword naruto jumps back and makes the hand seals for the shadow clone jutsu two clones appear beside naruto and run at sauske they start swinging their kunai at sasuke sasuke blocks and dodges each one he jumps up and spins he kicks one clone in the side of the head it goes poof sasuke turns to block another kunai slash from naruto the other clone appears from under the ground and upper cuts sasuke into the air.
sasuke: ( his clone must have gone under ground when i wasn't looking)
naruto makes a large chain of clones each one garbs each other's ankles and the last one garbs sasuke naruto spins the clones and then throws them onto the ground sasuke hits the ground very hard the clones poof and a large amount of dust goes into the air from the impact sasuke jumps threw the cloud of dust and slahs naruto's chest naruto jumps back in time to dodge the rest of the sword. naruto charges at sasuke and sasuke charges at naruto naruto punchs sasuke sasuke garbs his fist. naruto flashs back to their first fight when they did the same thing. sasuke jumps back and slams naruto into the ground relaseing his hand on impact naruto punchs sasuke in the face sending him flying back naruo makes a clone who help's him make a rasengan. sasuke get's on his knee's and makes a chidori.
naruto stares into sauske's cold eyes that start to form the sharingan.
flash back.
sasuke: it's time we put on end to this battle and all the battles we've had untill now
( this mis at the finally vally btw)
naruto forms a ninetails rasengan and sasuke makes his level two curse mark chidori they charge at each other.
now..
naruto: ( sasuke it's my fault your trying to kill me now i wish i could have stoped you, had i brought you home would it have changed anything? )
sauske: ( die naruto)
they charge at each other.
sauske:chidori!
naruto: rasengan.
the two jutsu clash naruto puts his all into the jutsu and so does sasuke the ground starts to crack and water comes pouring out from under them the two get blown back and land on the ground the water now covers the full terrin they get up from the water and stand on it's surface.
sasuke: susano'o
sasuke's skelton form of susano'o appears around him it's fist goes forward and hit's naruto he goes flying back hiting the the moutins behind and breaking the ground under him as he is draged acroos the ground by the blow sasuke's susano'o fires an amteasru arrow at naruto naruto gets up and makes a clone the clone throws naruto over the arrow at sasuke the arorw hits the clone and poofs naruto goes into sage mode and transforms back to normal he makes a rasenshuriken and throws it while in mid air sasuke fires an arrow the two jutsu clash and a large explosion englufs the area with amateasu and rubble is every where aroudn them naruto makes a rasengan and clashs it against sasuke's susano'o naruto goes flying backwards he back flips and lands on his feet.
naruto: ( that thing is heavy a normal rasengan won't do the trick)
susano'o takes it's complete form.
naruto: this chakra it's so cold it's even colder then the fox's chakra.
sasuke: DIE!
sasuke fires 5 arrows at naruto all with amateasu on them naruto jumps to the side to avoid one but another is about to hit naruto naruto makes a large rasengan and hits the arrow with it anther explosion engulfs the area changing the land scape more and more the other arrows are heading in kakashi and sakura direction.
naruto: ( oh no)
naruto goes into km ( kyuubi mode ) and a chakra arms extend to garbs the arrow before it gets close enough to them the arms throw the arrow right back at sasuke the arrow disappears before it hits sasuke's susano'o. sasuke's susano'o's arm slms it's first into the water causeing a large amount of water in the form of a wave at naruto.
naruto: rasengan
naruto hits the water with a rasengan and it cretaes an opening in the water naruto jumps threw the opening and see's an arrow flying at him.
naruto: sage art gaint rasen shuriken.
naruto throws it at the arrow and there is another explosion but there was another rasen shuriken hidden in the shadow of the first one that continue's to fly at sasuke it hits susano'o the rasen shuriken blows up and cracks susano'o to the point that all that remains in a bit of the rib cage.
sasuke: he broke susano'o?
naruto appears in front of sasuke and tries to hit him with the rasengan sasuke garbs naruto's wrist.
sauske: these eyes can keep up with your speed naruto ( sasuke has his ems active)
naruto: ( what with my sage mode and kyuubi mode mixed i thought i would be to fast to be seen)
sasuke tries to break naruto's hand but a chakra arm garbs sasuke and throws him over naruto and onto the ground sauske let's go of naruto's hand as he is thrown.
saukra: what's happening?
kakashi: i have no idea but it's getting ugly
sasuke: ( i'll use blaze relase) amterasu chidori.
naruto: rasen shuriken.
sasuke: ( wind relase huh? so that's why it broke threw susano'o )
they charge at each other their jutsu clash the black flames start to fly all over the place the wind jutsu moves them to another direction as the shuriken is going at a fast rate sasuke takes out his sword and covers it in the black flames useing blaze relase and tries to strike narutpo in the rib cage nauto jumps back canceling his jutsu out as he does sasuke swings his blade makeing the black flames surround naruto in a circle of fire.
sasuke: take this kirin.
naruto: what is that thing?
sasuke: be gone with the thunder clap.
naruto makes a rasen shuriken above his head the lighting jutsu rashs into naruto and casuses the terrin to change to nothing but rubble for five miles naruto looks close to un hurt becasue the shueiken protected him.
sasuke: ( i see he put it over his head like a shiled since wind is stronger then lighting of corse it would be enough to protect him but let's see him do that agin with my next move) amteasu
the black flmaes go into the sky and start takeing form of kirin but as black flames sasuke focases the last of the lighting in the sky into the amteasu so it keeps it's spped it had as a liughting jutsu.
narto: again? and this time with amateasu!
sasuke brings his hand up and makes a chidori with black flames around it sasuke brings his hand down makes the black flamed kirin come down almost as fast as normal kirin the whole area is engulfed in black flmaes and is destoryed by the force of the jutsu.
sasuke: that must have gotten him.
naruto appears in front of sasuke and punchs him in the face as hard as he can sending sasuke flying back for miles naruto appears behind him and starts punchsing him in a very fast speed he elbows sasuke in the back and he goes forward a little sasuke turns around and forms susano'o's arm it fires two arrows at naruto ( no black flames this time) the arrows mange to cut naruto's chest but naruto dodges and the rest doesn't hit himthe arm swimps naruto in the rib cage and naruto goes flying breaking the ground as he hits it naruto appears in front of sasuke the arm tries to punch naruto but naruto blocks it a chakra arm comes from naruto's stomach and punchs sasuke in the gut sending him back the arm disappears.
sasuke: allow me to show you the 4th power granted to those who have the etrnal mangekyo sharingan. white flames.
white flames come from sasuke and head towards naruto naruto runs from them for 5 minutes but the flames continue to chase naruto.
sasuke: ( it's useless these flames are attaced to chakra as long as you have it they will continue to chase you.)
naaruto makes a clone the flames hit the clone and burn him till he poofs it then continues at naruto naruto exits kyuubi mode.
naruto: huh?
kyuubi: naruto those flames will continueto chase you till you have no chakra left they are attrected to chakra.
naruto: your really helping me? thanks nine tails.
naruto stops and cuts the flow of chakra like how j man thought naruto he flames go around naruto and hit some random tree.
naruto dash forward back to sasuke. both are panting.
naruto enters kyuubi mode
mean while..
madara: sasuke every thing has it's draw back use the ems for to long or to much it kills you.
naruto makes a tailed beast rasengan.
sasuke makes an white flames chidori.
naruto: sasuke i'm sorry that it came to this.
sasuke naruto prepare to die.
naruto: it hurts doesn't it we used to be friends now look where we are about to kill each other if only i could stop your hatered.
sasuke: my hate will never be stopped you can't even under stand my hate.
naruto: your wrong i can feel how you feel while in thois mode i can feel your emomotions.
( note how that word starts with emo xd)
sasuke:???
naruto: madara told me every thing nd itachi said to me that he didn't want the clns reputaion to be ruined had they gone threw with this coup de tate it would have ruined your clans reputaion and the village.
sasuke:...
naruto: and madara was the one behind the fox's attack 16 years ago it's thanks to him your clan is now gone and my father and mother as well it's thanks to him we've both lived such lives and that we are where we are now.
sasuke: enough talk naruto let's end this.
naruto: ok.
they charge at each other a large amount of light over comes them the next scean we see naruto on the ground breatheing but bearly.
sasuke: naruto your right it's madara who needs to pay you've done enough thank you i will kill madara now.
sasuke dashs off towards madara. sakura and kakashi appear by naruto to see him bearly breatheing naruto reachs up to sakura face and smiles sakura begins to heal him.
end tell me how it was and sorry if there was grammer mistakes.
Kakashi and sakura stand off in the distance as naruto and sasuke walk towards each other stop stop mid range from each. they are surronded by many moutin's.
naruto:...
flash back...
sasuke: naruto your one of the people i want to fight.
sasuke: what do you know about it huh! you where on your own to begin with what makes you think you could possabley know what it feels like to lose all that!
sasuke: i have other bonds bonds with my older brother it is the bond of hatered.
sasuke: why are you so obseesed with me!
naruto: if we fight we're borh gonna die
now...
sasuke:...
naruto: ( sasuke if only i could have stoped you on that day you left the village maybe this wouldn't have happened)
naruto see's sasuke in front of him and he begins to walk away naruto tries to chase him but sasuke only goes further and further soon darkness starts to surrond sasuke.
sasuke: naruto once you'r dead your village is next they will pay for what they have done to the uchiha for what they did to my family.
sauske runs forward and jumps over naruto and takes out his blade naruto takes out a kunai and blocks the sword naruto jumps back and makes the hand seals for the shadow clone jutsu two clones appear beside naruto and run at sauske they start swinging their kunai at sasuke sasuke blocks and dodges each one he jumps up and spins he kicks one clone in the side of the head it goes poof sasuke turns to block another kunai slash from naruto the other clone appears from under the ground and upper cuts sasuke into the air.
sasuke: ( his clone must have gone under ground when i wasn't looking)
naruto makes a large chain of clones each one garbs each other's ankles and the last one garbs sasuke naruto spins the clones and then throws them onto the ground sasuke hits the ground very hard the clones poof and a large amount of dust goes into the air from the impact sasuke jumps threw the cloud of dust and slahs naruto's chest naruto jumps back in time to dodge the rest of the sword. naruto charges at sasuke and sasuke charges at naruto naruto punchs sasuke sasuke garbs his fist. naruto flashs back to their first fight when they did the same thing. sasuke jumps back and slams naruto into the ground relaseing his hand on impact naruto punchs sasuke in the face sending him flying back naruo makes a clone who help's him make a rasengan. sasuke get's on his knee's and makes a chidori.
naruto stares into sauske's cold eyes that start to form the sharingan.
flash back.
sasuke: it's time we put on end to this battle and all the battles we've had untill now
( this mis at the finally vally btw)
naruto forms a ninetails rasengan and sasuke makes his level two curse mark chidori they charge at each other.
now..
naruto: ( sasuke it's my fault your trying to kill me now i wish i could have stoped you, had i brought you home would it have changed anything? )
sauske: ( die naruto)
they charge at each other.
sauske:chidori!
naruto: rasengan.
the two jutsu clash naruto puts his all into the jutsu and so does sasuke the ground starts to crack and water comes pouring out from under them the two get blown back and land on the ground the water now covers the full terrin they get up from the water and stand on it's surface.
sasuke: susano'o
sasuke's skelton form of susano'o appears around him it's fist goes forward and hit's naruto he goes flying back hiting the the moutins behind and breaking the ground under him as he is draged acroos the ground by the blow sasuke's susano'o fires an amteasru arrow at naruto naruto gets up and makes a clone the clone throws naruto over the arrow at sasuke the arorw hits the clone and poofs naruto goes into sage mode and transforms back to normal he makes a rasenshuriken and throws it while in mid air sasuke fires an arrow the two jutsu clash and a large explosion englufs the area with amateasu and rubble is every where aroudn them naruto makes a rasengan and clashs it against sasuke's susano'o naruto goes flying backwards he back flips and lands on his feet.
naruto: ( that thing is heavy a normal rasengan won't do the trick)
susano'o takes it's complete form.
naruto: this chakra it's so cold it's even colder then the fox's chakra.
sasuke: DIE!
sasuke fires 5 arrows at naruto all with amateasu on them naruto jumps to the side to avoid one but another is about to hit naruto naruto makes a large rasengan and hits the arrow with it anther explosion engulfs the area changing the land scape more and more the other arrows are heading in kakashi and sakura direction.
naruto: ( oh no)
naruto goes into km ( kyuubi mode ) and a chakra arms extend to garbs the arrow before it gets close enough to them the arms throw the arrow right back at sasuke the arrow disappears before it hits sasuke's susano'o. sasuke's susano'o's arm slms it's first into the water causeing a large amount of water in the form of a wave at naruto.
naruto: rasengan
naruto hits the water with a rasengan and it cretaes an opening in the water naruto jumps threw the opening and see's an arrow flying at him.
naruto: sage art gaint rasen shuriken.
naruto throws it at the arrow and there is another explosion but there was another rasen shuriken hidden in the shadow of the first one that continue's to fly at sasuke it hits susano'o the rasen shuriken blows up and cracks susano'o to the point that all that remains in a bit of the rib cage.
sasuke: he broke susano'o?
naruto appears in front of sasuke and tries to hit him with the rasengan sasuke garbs naruto's wrist.
sauske: these eyes can keep up with your speed naruto ( sasuke has his ems active)
naruto: ( what with my sage mode and kyuubi mode mixed i thought i would be to fast to be seen)
sasuke tries to break naruto's hand but a chakra arm garbs sasuke and throws him over naruto and onto the ground sauske let's go of naruto's hand as he is thrown.
saukra: what's happening?
kakashi: i have no idea but it's getting ugly
sasuke: ( i'll use blaze relase) amterasu chidori.
naruto: rasen shuriken.
sasuke: ( wind relase huh? so that's why it broke threw susano'o )
they charge at each other their jutsu clash the black flames start to fly all over the place the wind jutsu moves them to another direction as the shuriken is going at a fast rate sasuke takes out his sword and covers it in the black flames useing blaze relase and tries to strike narutpo in the rib cage nauto jumps back canceling his jutsu out as he does sasuke swings his blade makeing the black flames surround naruto in a circle of fire.
sasuke: take this kirin.
naruto: what is that thing?
sasuke: be gone with the thunder clap.
naruto makes a rasen shuriken above his head the lighting jutsu rashs into naruto and casuses the terrin to change to nothing but rubble for five miles naruto looks close to un hurt becasue the shueiken protected him.
sasuke: ( i see he put it over his head like a shiled since wind is stronger then lighting of corse it would be enough to protect him but let's see him do that agin with my next move) amteasu
the black flmaes go into the sky and start takeing form of kirin but as black flames sasuke focases the last of the lighting in the sky into the amteasu so it keeps it's spped it had as a liughting jutsu.
narto: again? and this time with amateasu!
sasuke brings his hand up and makes a chidori with black flames around it sasuke brings his hand down makes the black flamed kirin come down almost as fast as normal kirin the whole area is engulfed in black flmaes and is destoryed by the force of the jutsu.
sasuke: that must have gotten him.
naruto appears in front of sasuke and punchs him in the face as hard as he can sending sasuke flying back for miles naruto appears behind him and starts punchsing him in a very fast speed he elbows sasuke in the back and he goes forward a little sasuke turns around and forms susano'o's arm it fires two arrows at naruto ( no black flames this time) the arrows mange to cut naruto's chest but naruto dodges and the rest doesn't hit himthe arm swimps naruto in the rib cage and naruto goes flying breaking the ground as he hits it naruto appears in front of sasuke the arm tries to punch naruto but naruto blocks it a chakra arm comes from naruto's stomach and punchs sasuke in the gut sending him back the arm disappears.
sasuke: allow me to show you the 4th power granted to those who have the etrnal mangekyo sharingan. white flames.
white flames come from sasuke and head towards naruto naruto runs from them for 5 minutes but the flames continue to chase naruto.
sasuke: ( it's useless these flames are attaced to chakra as long as you have it they will continue to chase you.)
naaruto makes a clone the flames hit the clone and burn him till he poofs it then continues at naruto naruto exits kyuubi mode.
naruto: huh?
kyuubi: naruto those flames will continueto chase you till you have no chakra left they are attrected to chakra.
naruto: your really helping me? thanks nine tails.
naruto stops and cuts the flow of chakra like how j man thought naruto he flames go around naruto and hit some random tree.
naruto dash forward back to sasuke. both are panting.
naruto enters kyuubi mode
mean while..
madara: sasuke every thing has it's draw back use the ems for to long or to much it kills you.
naruto makes a tailed beast rasengan.
sasuke makes an white flames chidori.
naruto: sasuke i'm sorry that it came to this.
sasuke naruto prepare to die.
naruto: it hurts doesn't it we used to be friends now look where we are about to kill each other if only i could stop your hatered.
sasuke: my hate will never be stopped you can't even under stand my hate.
naruto: your wrong i can feel how you feel while in thois mode i can feel your emomotions.
( note how that word starts with emo xd)
sasuke:???
naruto: madara told me every thing nd itachi said to me that he didn't want the clns reputaion to be ruined had they gone threw with this coup de tate it would have ruined your clans reputaion and the village.
sasuke:...
naruto: and madara was the one behind the fox's attack 16 years ago it's thanks to him your clan is now gone and my father and mother as well it's thanks to him we've both lived such lives and that we are where we are now.
sasuke: enough talk naruto let's end this.
naruto: ok.
they charge at each other a large amount of light over comes them the next scean we see naruto on the ground breatheing but bearly.
sasuke: naruto your right it's madara who needs to pay you've done enough thank you i will kill madara now.
sasuke dashs off towards madara. sakura and kakashi appear by naruto to see him bearly breatheing naruto reachs up to sakura face and smiles sakura begins to heal him.
end tell me how it was and sorry if there was grammer mistakes.
