Naruto: Uzumaki clan power

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Chapter 1: Uzumaki Clan Kekki Genki activates.

It was a cool afternoon as Naruto is at the trainning field until Hinata came along with her father as Hinata's father said "Naruto I am Hiashi Hyuuga and I came here to you because I wanna teach you some special taijutsu that may help you rescue your friend and to teach you the skills I'll use them on you but you must work together with your inner creature whatever it is" then Naruto replied "OK Hiashi Hyuuga sir I'll do my best and Hinata I love you which I would like to take you on a romantic datwe later on".

After Naruto spoke Hiashi Hyuuga began to attack Naruto with the 8 tri grams 64 palms until Naruto made a hand sign as Naruto focused his chakra so well that a special power in Naruto got activated as Naruto's eyes changed into a Kyuubi sage eyes which Hiashi Hyuuga said "This power you have can only be in a clan but not any ordinary clan but the mostpowerful special clan known to the hidden leaf village" so Naruto ran at lightling speed as Naruto yelled "Ninja art flying thunder god jutsu" then Naruto striked Hiashi Hyuuga with flying thunder god jutsu that caused enough shock that Naruto now has 4th hokage's lightling speed power.
 

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o_o

*eyes burn* *_*

Dude, no offense, but that...wasn't good >_>'
It happened way too fast and the writing style was very amateaurish.
Also, it doesn't really make sense. O_O
 

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this is amazing, best fanfic ive read all year ^^ reps <(^_^d)
its much better than that....Bleach fate of the strawberry crap i keep reading ~_~
Gats' wisdom has enlightened me. My previous fanfics (The Twelve Olympians and Bleach: Fate and the Strawberry) are but insects when compared to the greatness and magnitude of this fanfic O_O

*bows* U_U
 

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(Naruto is the 4th hokage's son and Naruto is an Uzumaki clan member since Naruto is the last of that clan it makes Naruto head of the Uzumaki clan).

Chapter 2: The Uzumaki clan Jutsu.

After Naruto used flying thunder god jutsu Hiashi Hyuuga looked really surprised as Hiashi Hyuuga said "That power is unbelieveable and Naruto how the ramen did you do that jutsu and even get out of a hyuuga style jutsu such as 8 tri grams 64 palms" then Naruto replied "I am the son of the 4th hokage and I am the head of the Uzumaki clan plus I have been head of Uzumaki clan since I was born plus the creature inside me is the nine tail fox demon Kyuubi plus my father the 4th hokage is Minato Uzumaki".

After Naruto spoke Hiashi said "OK that is enough trainning for now and Hinata go on a romantic date with Naruto because I want Uzumaki clan to do a peace treatment with the Uzumaki clan plus I do believe your the key to Uzumaki clan restorement but in peace with us Hyuuga's" so Hinata went to Iruchiraku ramen with Naruto as Naruto thought to himself "I will master demon summoning jutsu later on hoping that it will help me to be hokage".
 

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After Naruto had his thought Naruto kissed Hinata as Naruto said "Hinata I love you and I will not let anything happen to you no matter what" then Hinata replied with a blush "Thank you Naruto and I wanna invite you over to my house for dinner".
 

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And then Sakura walked in and b*tched slapped Hinata and called her a wh*re for taking her man, "Naruto" away...and then the 4th Hokage came out of thin air with the Great Jiraiya piggyback riding him along with Orochimaru. Sasuke then out of no where came out of Naruto's ramen and suddenly have heart attack and puked out Madara AKA: Tobi who is conveniently blinded (OMG his other eye too!) and handcuffed with a pinkish bunny fur handcuff. The Naruto world suddenly explodes in ramen and the series is finished....Kishimoto then smokes a fattie in his studio situated in Nara where he finally flips out and trashes his whole studio table and says.."f*ck it...I am done.." He then leaves his studio and proceeds to take a tour at toudaiji in Nara where he makes a wish to the Great Big Buddha who also happens to looks like my friend except my friend has bigger ears Fukuchi san. The End, thanks all.
 

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Chapter 3: A clan peace treaty.

After Hinata invited Naruto over for Dinner they dashed over to the Hyuuga mansion which as they arrived Hinata opens the door for them to go in then as they walked in Hiashi Hyuuga steps in as Hiashi Hyuuga said "Naruto I discovered that your from a very special clan the Uzumaki clan and I know that the Uzumaki clan is the most powerful clan well in words I wanna sign a clan peace treaty with you plus if you do our clans will be helping each other in times when help is needed".

After Hiashi Hyuuga spoke Naruto signed the clan peace treaty as Naruto said "Lord Hiashi Hyuuga sir I know your rivals of the Uchiha clan since whatever times of the past and I love your daughter Hinata Hyuuga no matter what you may think of me being the holder of the nine tail fox demon Kyuubi plus I have my clans power making me impressively more powerful well I did completely control Kyuubi in time to give Kazekage Garaa back control of his body by defeating the one tail sand spirit demon Shukaku".
 
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