Naruto: thinking ahead of the manga chapter 5-the scratched forehead protector

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ok guys this is fully a talk no jutsu chapter but also a very crucial one...forgive me for my shit talk no jutsu but i hope that chapter 6 will make up for it.


Chapter 5: the scratched forehead protector

The two jutsu clash. Slowly both of them are transported to that other white dimension. We only get to see Sasuke. As Sasuke wanders a bit at this dimension he sees a younger version of himself crying. Suddenly Naruto approaches the older Sasuke.

Naruto: I used to be just like that kid there you know…because of the kyuubi inside me…
Sasuke: Naruto I don’t care about you…I don’t care about anyone but those who are already dead…
Naruto: that’s not true…you once cared and I think you still do…deep inside you…even when you turned your back and joined Orochimaru you just defeated the 1000 man he served you…you didn’t kill them…

Sasuke: I was different back then…I…
Naruto: no you aren’t…back then you were seeking revenge…that’s what you do now for once more…
Sasuke: (speaks at a loud tone) why do you care about me?!?! What’s your point?
Naruto: it’s not the cause but the person who is hiding behind him…
Sasuke: I don’t care about what you say…all I want is to kill those who brought pain to me…

Suddenly another Naruto appears…one that is crying about jiraiya’s death.

Naruto: I sought revenge once as well…but when I finally saw the target of my vengeance dead the only thing I felt was emptiness and sorrow…and I think that goes for you…when you killed danzo and Itachi…nothing really changed right?

Sasuke: god damn it Naruto!!! I am not doing this for me!!! I am doing this so the souls of the whole Uchiha clan will rest in peace!!! So that their deaths will be justified…

Naruto: do you think that’s what they really wanted?

Sasuke remembers Itachi saying the exact same line.

Naruto: I think that what makes your parents souls angry…is seeing you like that…helping a scumbag like tobi who wants to rule the world and living your life in misery!!!!

Sasuke remembers some of his moments with his family. He suddenly starts crying but he doesn’t try to hide it.

Sasuke: all I wanted was to do something…so I wouldn’t feel guilty…
Naruto: then let me tell you this…tobi is the one who actually caused the nine tails incident…he is the core of your clan’s destruction!!

Sasuke: (after a long pause) then maybe…even in the end…I might be able to do something…I abandoned Konoha…joined Orochimaru…killed Itachi…my life was one full of mistakes…so if you accept it…I shall do something right…I officially declare the reformation of konohakagure’s team seven!!

The dimension disappears and they are both back…Naruto has a really big smile.

Naruto: well in that case…you are going to need this…(draws out Sasuke’s forehead protector)
Sasuke: (smiles calmly for the first time)…yeah in the end you did make it to scratch it…

Puts the protector on.

Kakashi recovers.

Kakashi: what the heck happened here? What is Sasuke doing?
Naruto: well Kakashi sensei, you should be really glad…team 7 is fully membered once more!

Kakashi: (surprised at the beginning but then smiles)…well…good for us. But Sasuke I don’t know if you noticed but there is a slight problem…you are considered an s rank criminal!! Before you join us again the five kages shall judge if you are worthy of their “mercy” or not.

Sasuke: what if they judge that I am not worth it?
Kakashi: well in the worst case…
Sasuke: I get it…


After 4 hours the kages are all gathered into their meeting room of the war. Mifune is also there.

Mifune: we are all gathered here today to decide whether the s rank criminal Sasuke Uchiha shall be allowed to be a Konoha shinobi once more or sentenced to death…

Raikage: is there a question to it? He was an akatsuki!!! He tried to kill my brother!! We shall kill this fu*king bastard at once!!

Mifune: lord Raikage please try to control your emotions…first of all we shall ask Sasuke himself about that matter.

Sasuke: (after a short pause) all I have to say is that I am not denying what was mentioned…I have done everything that you said but I have regretted for them…

Mifune: well in such case since you don’t deny anything the kages will give a vote each…and shall decide whether you will be considered a Konoha shinobi again or killed…

All kages except tsunade and gaara vote to kill him.

Sakura: (screams) no!!!

Naruto stands up.

Naruto: I request you to vote once more…
Raikage: what the hell are you saying you little brat!!
Naruto: Raikage you once tried to kill me for what you believed was right…you granny tsunade, once you had decided to help Orochimaru for the ones you love…gaara you would have destroyed Konoha if it wasn’t for me…for you gramps tsuchi and lady mizukage…well I don’t know anything about you but…you yourselves said that you didn’t want to repeat past mistakes…why should you be forgiven and not him?

Mifune: (after a pause) who votes to let him go?

All kages except Raikage raise their hands.

Mifune: very well in that case I officially announce that Sasuke Uchiha of the Uchiha clan is allowed to live and carry missions as a konohakagure shinobi!!!


team 7 reunited!!! next chap: team 7 teamwork!!!
 

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don't take it as an insult but this one wasn't as good as the others
sasuke changed sides too easily.

note:
I also want sasuke to change sides
so that naruto and sasuke can fight together
however I don't like the current sasuke who just throws his hatred to anyone who meets


I liked seeing him change sides
but it being too easy wasn't good
 

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yeah flame alchemist you are right but i really cant make talk no jutsu chapters...my forte is imagination in battles and really when i am searchin an my imagination boxes for dialogs nothing comes to mind...however i already have in mind how chap 6 and 7 will be and believe me they are in a higher level then all the rest...especially in chap 7(someone dies:( )
 
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woow sasuke back didn't see that one coming but i like it you my friend make awesome chapters
ps : you should keep giving me heads ups as soon as you release your chapters thanks :)
 
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