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Chapter 2: The discovered Jinchuriki!
As Might Gai Hits the blue figure it retaliates by using Water Release: Water Shark Bullet Technique which hits its target blasting Gai in the Arm and in the chest causing him to cough up blood, Gai then releases the fourth and fifth gate to Heal it and try to gain an advantage, Naruto then rushes to interfere. "Bushy brow sensei look out!" naruto yells this just a moment too soon for gai to evade the 5 hungry sharks that suddenly all swarmed him and bit into him causing him to retreat an inch or two.
"ive been waiting to pay you back for before" As the figure says this Gai is confused and then the blue figure catches the glare and fully forms showing who he is as he grins madly like a shark while sighing at Gai. "you really do have the intelligence of a wild beast"
As Killer bee arrives just in time to see who it really is as he yells for yamato to go to naruto who is still tired from the massive training. In unison both Gai and Bee yell "KISAME HOSHIGAKI" Completely surprised that hes alive Bee is shocked but smiles as he takes out Samehada but notices naruto Fly by and Kick Kisame with incredible force sending him flying.
As kisame Catches himself in mid air He see's Gai opening the other gates and as the 6th gate is opened, Kisame loses track of Gai then suddenly He appears right in front of Kisame and uses The morning peacock but manages to only destroy a clone. At the same time, the real Kisame gives a scroll to a shark while he see's that Gai figured out his plan and he uses Water Release: Thousand Feeding Sharks to conceal it. Gai realizing he cant stop it he opens the 7th gate and uses the daytime tiger to block all of them and defeat kisame.
They then Try to get information out of the unconscious Kisame but upon coming to his memories of the Akatsuki's plans he awakens and uses water prison on himself but just before he is completely trapped he summons 3 sharks and they eat him. He remembers his past with itachi and his final words are. "Itachi… It seems that in the end… I'm not so terrible after all." Gai gains respect for him after seeing how devoted Kisame was for his comrades.
Then gai and everyone else try to read the scroll only to be caught in a booby trap, They are all trapped in water prisons as the scroll is taken by a shark to someone.
A few days later when naruto is just about to begin training for the day he senses a massive amount of evil heading towards the island and he sees Deidara and kabuto flying towards the island. Suddenly they are destroyed by Ōnoki's dust release but watches in shock as he sees yamato being taken away by The same two he thought were destroyed. Onoki then tells them they have been discovered and they all head towards the battlefield.
Elsewhere's Tobi smiles as kabuto arrives with his captive. "finally now i have the first hokage Hashirama senju's DNA, now i can strengthen the white zetsu army even further" Soon after White zetsu appears with the scroll from Kisame, he reads it and gives some orders to Kabuto and Zetsu. He then heads off to check up with sasuke's recovery.
At the same time The Allied shinobi forces are spreading out into their formations.
Im not sure about this one, Please tell me how it is
chapter 1 link :
I know it will probably seem like im copying the original but, its just the start of my FF
As Might Gai Hits the blue figure it retaliates by using Water Release: Water Shark Bullet Technique which hits its target blasting Gai in the Arm and in the chest causing him to cough up blood, Gai then releases the fourth and fifth gate to Heal it and try to gain an advantage, Naruto then rushes to interfere. "Bushy brow sensei look out!" naruto yells this just a moment too soon for gai to evade the 5 hungry sharks that suddenly all swarmed him and bit into him causing him to retreat an inch or two.
"ive been waiting to pay you back for before" As the figure says this Gai is confused and then the blue figure catches the glare and fully forms showing who he is as he grins madly like a shark while sighing at Gai. "you really do have the intelligence of a wild beast"
As Killer bee arrives just in time to see who it really is as he yells for yamato to go to naruto who is still tired from the massive training. In unison both Gai and Bee yell "KISAME HOSHIGAKI" Completely surprised that hes alive Bee is shocked but smiles as he takes out Samehada but notices naruto Fly by and Kick Kisame with incredible force sending him flying.
As kisame Catches himself in mid air He see's Gai opening the other gates and as the 6th gate is opened, Kisame loses track of Gai then suddenly He appears right in front of Kisame and uses The morning peacock but manages to only destroy a clone. At the same time, the real Kisame gives a scroll to a shark while he see's that Gai figured out his plan and he uses Water Release: Thousand Feeding Sharks to conceal it. Gai realizing he cant stop it he opens the 7th gate and uses the daytime tiger to block all of them and defeat kisame.
They then Try to get information out of the unconscious Kisame but upon coming to his memories of the Akatsuki's plans he awakens and uses water prison on himself but just before he is completely trapped he summons 3 sharks and they eat him. He remembers his past with itachi and his final words are. "Itachi… It seems that in the end… I'm not so terrible after all." Gai gains respect for him after seeing how devoted Kisame was for his comrades.
Then gai and everyone else try to read the scroll only to be caught in a booby trap, They are all trapped in water prisons as the scroll is taken by a shark to someone.
A few days later when naruto is just about to begin training for the day he senses a massive amount of evil heading towards the island and he sees Deidara and kabuto flying towards the island. Suddenly they are destroyed by Ōnoki's dust release but watches in shock as he sees yamato being taken away by The same two he thought were destroyed. Onoki then tells them they have been discovered and they all head towards the battlefield.
Elsewhere's Tobi smiles as kabuto arrives with his captive. "finally now i have the first hokage Hashirama senju's DNA, now i can strengthen the white zetsu army even further" Soon after White zetsu appears with the scroll from Kisame, he reads it and gives some orders to Kabuto and Zetsu. He then heads off to check up with sasuke's recovery.
At the same time The Allied shinobi forces are spreading out into their formations.
Im not sure about this one, Please tell me how it is
chapter 1 link :
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I know it will probably seem like im copying the original but, its just the start of my FF
