Naruto: The Last Soul-Prologue 1: A new mission? The 99th soul!

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~Naruto, Avatar: The Last Airbender, Soul Eater Crossover~












Naruto: The Last Soul

Prologue 1
A new mission? The 99th soul!






Enter Death City.



Walking the streets of Death City, Maka and her partner Soul are beginning the dreadful week of school ahead of them.




Maka: "Dr. Stein said this would be the most challenging week of school in DMWA history. This will be awful."

Soul: "Relax, Maka. You're a top grade student. It's uncool for you to act this way."

Maka: "Well...I was referring to you, Soul."

Soul: "Heh, it's just a test. What's the worst thing they can do? Give me detention for flunking? That just means Black*Star and I get some more time to relax."

Maka: "No one told you?!"

Soul: "Told me what?"

Maka: "If you fail this test, then you'll never be a Death Scythe, even if you capture all ninety-nine kishin souls, and one witch soul."

Soul: "What?! But we are so close! We are only two away."

Soul's thoughts: "Man, calm down. You'll ace this and become the ultimate weapon. Stop being uncool."

Soul: "Guess I'll have to barrow your papers then."

Maka: "Yeah, I guess-Wait what?"

Soul: "I'm just saying, If I-"

(Suddenly, Death appears through a shopping window near them)

Death: "Hello Maka! How are you and Soul today?"

(Soul turns around, his face consumed with confusion and annoyance, while Maka turns around with a face of happiness and interest)

Soul: "Yeah?"

Maka: "Shinigami-Sama?"

Death: "Good morning kids! I bet you two want to know why I called you to my office, right?"

Soul: "Heh?"

Maka: "Sir....you didn't call us to your office."

Death: "Oh? Well, I should have. Come to my office! Please."

Maka: "Okay."

Soul: "Whatever."

(Death vanishes from the mirror, and Maka begins to write 42-42-564, the code to enter his room, on the miror)

Maka: "What do you thing he wants?"

Soul: "I dunno, but if it prevents us from going to school, I'm fine with it."

(Maka finishes writing the code, and they walk through the mirror, appearing infront of Death)

Soul: "Hey, Maka, where's your father?"

Maka: "Don't call him that."

Death: "Spirit said he went to check on Maka at home this morning. Did he not see you?"

Maka: "No! I knew he wasn't much of a father, but...."

(Maka shares a glance with Soul)

Maka: "You don't think.."

Soul: "Wouldn't surprise me."







At Maka's home.




Spirit: "Today has been amazing! Want some more drinks?"

(Blair smiles)

Blair: "Sure! Meow!"




Back in Death's room




Maka: "That pervert!"

Soul: "Can you blame him?"

Death: "Besides your father's antics, there's a reason why I called you two here. I hear you've collected nearly one hundred souls."

Maka: "Ninety-eight."

Soul: "One more kishin to go, and then a witch soul. Then I'll be a Death Scythe. A high rank, fitting a cool guy."

Maka: "Shinigame-Sama, what does the numbers of souls we have collected have to do with this meeting?"

Death: "Oh, everything. I needed to select a group of students who needed exactly one more kishin soul."

Soul: "That rules Black*Star out. He still has none."

Maka: "Poor Tsubaki."

Soul: "But, then why not pick your son? He needs only one more, right?"

Maka: "Plus, he's stronger than we'll ever hope to be."

(Maka and Soul sigh)

Death: "He needs two more kishin souls, due to him wielding two weapons. Realistically, he would be a better choice, but you two fit the bull perfectly. Plus, due to past experience, you two have the perfect chance to defeat this kishin soul."

Soul: "Why's that?"

Death: "He has a thing for snakes, like the witch Medusa. He also is a very talented scientist. I honestly though about sending Dr. Stein, but they'd probably become friends than fight."

Maka: "Where is this soul located?"

Death: "In a place you've never seen, nor heard of before. It's really stunning though. I visited it once. Had a cup of delicious tea with some traveler. Nice guy, although a but too perverted. Reminded me of Spirit to much, plus he had a thing for toads which is horrible for my skin."

Soul: "Back to the place..."

Death: "Ah yes. This place is actually in a different realm, so to speak. A different part of the world. It's much like here, but...well, some things work differently."

Soul: "So? Whatever. We need the soul. We accept."

Maka: "He's right. When should we depart?"

Death: "Soon. But, I'll let finish you test first! Dr. Stein agreed to give you the full test today, instead of sections of it this week. I'll even bring you to school!"

Maka: ".....Thank you."

Soul: "Man..."










In one of Orochimaru's many labs......



Kabuto, who's nearly taken over by the cells of his former mentor: "It was gracious of Madara to lend me one of his many Uchiha eyes, especially before a war, but then again, with my secret weapon, he really had no other choice. The fool is so unaware.....This eye is unlike all the others. More powerful than his own, I imagine. With these tools, and my power...I'll do Orochimaru-sama's dream, and unlock the secrets of this world!"




Prologue 1

End​








Next time! Prolouge 2: Rise to power. Call me firelord!"​





Thoughts so far? It'll make more sense as it goes along. I have to set up the plot. I hope all of you enjoyed the little prologue. Two more prologues, and then full chapters!
 
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Interesting. Can't wait to see how this turns out. So mysterious! :D
Keep up the good work, AZ!

Though it caught my attention because it had "99" in the title XD Woo!
 

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Interesting. Can't wait to see how this turns out. So mysterious! :D
Keep up the good work, AZ!

Though it caught my attention because it had "99" in the title XD Woo!
I know how to attract readers. Next time, I'll have yard's name in there somehow xd


Thanks though:) Unlike my others, this one feels more....fun. I like my Avatar one alot, and I'll add the 2nd installment soon, but this is like Free-Flow. Naruto's Fall Inside the Black also needs an update. I need to focus on that soon. LITA is on hold, because it's like a TV Show, where else the others are like a movie. I also will randomly be releasing oneshots about anything.


Just an update to anyone who reads my stories lol

Again, thanks man!

Hint!

A couple characters (one for sure) will die. I'll leave a cliffhanger after I finish like the first main installment in case I want to and will return to this. I want to introduce Black*Star/Tsubaki, DTK/Thompson Sisters, and Medusa/Dr.Stein. Don't expect a big role at all by Aang or anyone in Avatar besides my favorites-Azula, Ty Lee, Mai, and Zuko. MAinly the first two. I'll add in little specials though. On the Naruto side, just expect Kabuto for the most time and maybe a role by Madara. Not much Naruto action, besides Kabuto. HOWEVER, I have a plan to make a big ending to this via a war between all three worlds.
 

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Wow :D
You're so imaginative. Being able to write so many stories, each with their own themes, at the same time. Good way to win the Fanfic contest, huh? ;)

Great work, though! You're stuff never disappoints me :D I do want to see more of Kabuto anyway — he's like the mad scientist of the Naruto world. Can't wait for more. VM me when it's out :D

If this was a Youtube channel, I'd totally subscribe XD
 
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Cool man, I'll wait for the next prologue which I think, judging from the title "Rise to power. Call me firelord", will have to do with Avatar, awesome! Can't wait......!!
 

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Thanks to both you guys:)


New chapter, AVATAR chapter xd, will be out later on today. Then I'll write some more when I get back from the movies. Green Lantern baby! I was gonna go yesterday, but my days and nights are messed up. I stayed up all night to get it in order, I am I mean.
 
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