Naruto: The jinchuuriki ninja.

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Chapter 1: Thee clash with Shukaku.

It was a breezy night as the hidden sand village was peaceful until Garaa transformed and being possessed by the ne tail demon Shukaku which Shukaku yelled "Yeah I am finally free and I am gonna trash the place" but as Shukaku was about to attack a brave hidden leaf ninja said "Don't you even dare because Naruto Uzumaki is here to stop you and your not the only demon here as inside me is your fellow tailed demon Kyuubi the nine tail fox".

After Naruto spoke Shukaku laughed "A human of the likes of you control a fellow tailed demon that is the dummest thing you spoke which I am gonna kill you just to make a great victory me feel alive" then just as Shukaku attacked Naruto draws out a summoning scroll which Naruto made the hand signs acording to the scroll ready to summon Kyuubi in order for Naruto to fully control him.
 

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After Naruto successfully did the hand signs Naruto slams his hand down as Naruto yelled "Summoning Jutsu!" which out appears the nine tail fox demon Kyuubi then Kyuubi said "Why did you summon me Naruto after all the times I wanted to be free from that seal" which Kyuubi looked right at Shukaku.

After Kyuubi looked at Shukaku Naruto replied "Kyuubi I summoned you because I need you to help me defeat Shukaku and to reseal him because I believe you the only one who can stand Shukaku's attacks plus when I summon you well you get some form of freedom from the 4th hokage seal inspecially that I am 4th hokage's son" then Kyuubi said "You asked me for help so very well I will help you but you better not lose because if you diie I will die since our life is one" so Kyuubi roars at Shukaku to make sure Garaa can hear the nine tail fox Kyuubi being ready to help Naruto reseal Shukaku.
 

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Chapter 2: 1 tail vs 9 tails

After Kyuubi roared at Shukaku Kyuubi dashed to attack Shukaku while Naruto starts to form up a rasengan then as Kyuubi gripped onto Shukaku Naruto hits Shukaku with rasengan then Shukaku knocks Kyuubi away as Shukaku gets ready to attack until Kyuubi yelled "Naruto the seal use the seal of the Uzumaki clan because there not only Garaa's seal will be restored but Garaa will have to earn the power to completely control Shukaku just as you earned the joy to completely control me plus there Garaa gets to sign the demon summoning jutsu contract that you have with you".

After Kyuubi spoke Naruto made some hand signs then Naruto yelled "Sealing jutsu great jinchuuriki bond" which Garaa regained control as not only Shukaku went back in the seal but the seal is restored plus Garaa changed back to his normal kazekage self which Garaa was sent to the medical core to be healed by a medical ninja that is equally skilled as Sakura Haruno so Naruto teleported home in the hidden leaf village to report of what happend in the hidden sand village inspecially Naruto is closing in to be hokage.
 

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After Naruto arrived back to report about what happend in Naruto's mission Naruto walked in the hokage office as Naruto said "Lady Hokage Tsunade I saved the hidden sand village from Shukaku and I resealed the 1 tail demon back in Garaa" then Lady Tsunade replied "Very good Naruto I am proud of you and there is something I have to tell you because it is time you know the hidden leaf villages most kept secret".

After Lady Tsunade spoke Naruto looked brave as Naruto said "OK what is this most kept secret because I am going back home to rest and I need to work hard for when I take your place as the next hokage" which Lady Tsunade felt calm as Lady Tsunade replied "The truth is that you Naruto are the son of the 4th hokage and not only that your the member of the special and most powerful clan going which that clan is the Uzumaki clan plus your mother Kushina has the Uzumaki clan kekki genkai but your clan powers will awaken in time of great importance" so Naruto jumped for joy hearing that he had a family inspecially that Naruto gets to restore his clan unlike the way Sasuke Uchiha plans to restore his own clan.
 

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Chapter 3: Clan peace treaty.

After Naruto did his celebration thing Lady Tsunade said "Naruto as your the only Uzumaki clan member alive it makes you head of your clan and you have to make a clan peace treaty with other clans because I will be sending you along with each of one single clan leader on a mission of great importance" then Naruto said "OK we will have a clan peace treaty in the meeting room of your hokage mansion because it is important that we discuss plans for a better future" so Lady Tsunade send an anbu black op to imform each clan leaders about the clan peace treaty inspecially that the clan leaders will go on a mission together.

After the anbu black op informed the clan leaders they arrived in the meeting room which they signed the peace treaty as Lady Tsunade said "OK your mission is not like any other mission because the Uchiha demon child Madara Uchiha is trying to destroy a village with a demon but not a tailed demon since they have hosts that they are friends with" which Hiashi replied "OK we understand the mission but who will lead the mission inspecially that only an Uchiha has knowledge about Madara Uchiha the Uchiha demon child" so Naruto stood up as Naruto ssaid "My own tailed demon has the knowledge of the Uchiha clan meaning we have a great advantage of our foe but becareful of the Sharingan since it has a dangerous ability that allows the user to copy any of our non clan skills".
 

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-.-'' .........o....k....a.....y.....fantastic fanfiction !!!!keep up with this GREAT JOB :D:D:D!!!!!Just one favour.....Post them in your profile,and give gifts to your self instead of "winning" a medal.....lol!!!!!
 

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(Naruto is the Uzumaki clan leader because his father the 4th hokage wasthe previous clan leader).

Chapter 4: The death of Madara Uchiha.

After Naruto spoke Naruto went off to confront Madara Uchiha but as Naruto arrived to Madara's location one hour later Naruto looked directly at Madara as Naruto said "your plan of using tailed beasts is going to end and your going down" then Madara Uchiha said "No kid you and the nine tails fox is going down plus I will destroy the village with my own demon power" which Madara Uchiha laughed until Naruto's Uzumaki eyes activated as Naruto angrily yelled "That does it Madara nobody is going to hurt the village or my friends so as the destined to be 6th hokage I am going to kill you" so Naruto went into his demon sage mode knowing Kyuubi wants revenge on Madara for controlling Kyuubi without asking him for permission.

After Naruto went into demon sage mode Naruto starts to make a hand sign while Naruto draws a red chidori in his hand then Naruto dashed right at Madara as Naruto striked Madara Uchiha with a red chidori while Naruto yelled "Chidori red burning sun" which Madara Uchiha nstantly died of the effect of red chidori aka vermillion chidori otherwise known as Kyuubi chidori so as Madara Uchiha was killed Naruto transformed back into regular mode as deep within Naruto Kyuubi said "You destroyed my arch enemy so allow me to take you back home or at least to the Hyuuga mansion but you need to somehow summon me without breaking the seal so Naruto used summoning jutsu to summon Kyuubi which Kyuubi pick up Naruto as Kyuubi carried Naruto to the hyuuga mansion for a good rest before returning home.
 

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Chapter 5: The medical treatment.

After Kyuubi took Naruto to the Hyuuga masnion Kyuubi returned in the seal as the hyuuga mansion door opens then out came Hinabi as Hinabi noticed Naruto laying down looking all warn out so Hinabi carefully gets Naruto inside as Hiashi came to take a look as Hiashi said "Naruto looks really warn out and I believe that Naruto needs a medical treatment to give Naruto enough energy to open his eyes.

After Hiashi spoke Hiashi carrys Naruto to the living room as Hinabi got some healing cream then Hinabi rubs some on Naruto to give Naruto the wake me up but as Hinabi rubs a little more cream Naruto opens his eyes as Naruto said "Oh hey Hiashi sir what happens to me and all I remember is that the creature in me took me here which lucky that creature is my demon that I have complete control plus I managed to defeat Madara Uchiha inspecially that he was the toughest foe I ever slayed" so Hiashi Hyuuga replied "You need your rest Naruto and I'll get Hinata to keep you company well good night have a peaceful night" which Naruto fell asleep knowing Hinata came to where Naruto is only to keep Naruto company for a safe reason.
 

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good fanfic but i have some ideas for you:

1-make longer chapters in the future cuz these are very short
2-make longer battles cuz naruto finished off madara quickly
3-dont make naruto use jutsus without explaining how he got them,like chidori for example u made his use chidori wich is a lightning release jutsu and doesnt have lighting element.
4-dont post ur chapters in the same thread(creat a thread for each one)
 

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Chapter 6: Naruto awakens.

On the next day Naruto woke up as Hinata sits down next to Naruto which Hinata said "Good morning Naruto did you have a nice sleep" then Naruto replied "Yes Hinata and in my dream I have been getting some sort of warning abouta dangerous demon named Moryo and it is planning to destroy the five great villages but I can not let it happen" Naruto got up to head off right to the land of demons to meet the priestess Shion.

After Naruto arrived at the land of demons Priestess Shion said "Oh good your here well the demon named Moryo is a demon of darkness and I don't know what to do except I had been getting visions of a tailed demon defeating Moryo with your help" then Naruto replied "I am the host of Kyuubi the nine tail fox demon and where is that Moryo you speak about" which Priestess shion pointed to the top of a mountain where Moryo waits to attack.
 

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Chapter 7: Battle of the demons.

After Priestess Shion pointed to where Moryo is Naruto dashed of right to the top of the mountain which as Naruto arrived Naruto yelled "I am not going to allow you to har anyone and I had just enough so get ready to face my wrath" then Moryo laughed as Moryo replied "Do you think a human such as you can stop a very powerful demon like me".

After Moryo spoke Naruto used his summoning jutsu to summon Kyuubi but as Kyuubi arrived Moryo roared "You!" which Kyuubi said "Yes you foolish runt nobody disrespect my host like that I am the 9 tail fox demon Kyuubi" then Kyuubi looks at Naruto who sits on Kyuubi's head as Kyuubi said "Naruto I am going to help you out but you better help me because I am going to eliminate that foolish insect Moryo plus I am the very powerful demon that will not allow Moryo to destroy the five great nations".
 
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