[Adventure] Naruto : The Iron that Tears us Apart | Part 1

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A Bit of Front Information:
Naruto is 23, the most skilled ninja of the leaf Village.
A High Ranked Jounin with his own Team of genins.
Tsunade is still the hokage but naruto knows that tsunade plans to Step down and Promote Naruto as Hokage on his Birthday in 6 weeks.


Actions
Jutsu
"Talking"
'thinking'


Naruto Uzumaki had just finished a mission with his team, they all departed, leaving naruto to go home.
on his way, he notices shizune rushing towards him.

Naruto:"Shizune? What is with the Rushing?"
Shizune:"Naruto! Tsunade needs you right now!"
Naruto:"Huh? Why? Is there something wrong?"
Shizune:"Its an Emergency! something is indeed wrong! go naruto quick!"
Naruto quickly jumps on the roof of an nearby building, continueing to jump from building to building until he reaches the hokage mansion. Naruto steps on the balcony, opening a window and jumping inside Tsunade's Office.
Upon entering, Naruto Grins

Naruto:"Yo! Granny! I heard from shizune that -"
naruto was cut off by tsunade
Tsunade:"Naruto! There is an emergency! a nearby village, that supplies us with Ninja tools has been attacked by an unidentified enemy! I am Quickly despatching you right now!
Rock lee shall Follow you immidiatly when he returns from his training! Now go!"
As Tsunade Started talking, Naruto's Grin Quickly changes into a blanc face.
He quickly jumps back out of the window, leaving the hokage mansion.

Naruto:'What is wrong?who attacked the village?'
Naruto Bites his lower lip, and Starts to go Faster.
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As naruto reaches the forest right behind the village, he Sees Flames in the far distance.

Naruto:'what...?'
As Naruto Dashes past trees and Bushes, he finds himself an old man.
Old Man:"Help me... My Son...Brakyu... Hes in the village..."
As the man falls down, naruto manages to catch him.
Naruto:"Don't worry old man... Il get your son... Shadow clone jutsu!"
A Clone appears right next to naruto, Naruto Gives the Clone the old man.
The clone continues to Hurry back to the leaf village as the original Naruto Hurries to the village in destruction.
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Upon entering the village gates, All naruto Can see is ruins.
Buildings in ash and dead bodies everywhere.
he sees one shadow and a Young Boy, Seems around 15 years old.
The Boy Carries an Iron Katana.
Naruto Dashes past the boy, Summoning another clone to stay beside the boy while he walks towards the shadow.

Young boy:"Leave... This is my Opponent! HE DESTROYED THE VILLAGE!"
Naruto:"Don't worry... I am here to help... Who destroyed the village?"
???:"I did"
The voice Sounds metallic.
As the Figure steps out of the Shadow, The form of an Mechanised Copy Of Naruto appears.
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Mecha Naruto: "I am Mecha Naruto... I will destroy the Original Naruto..."
Naruto:"Ehh...? A Copy of me?"
Naruto Switches from his Blanc Emotionless face towards a Confident and Serious Face.
Naruto:"You are just a piece of metal... I won't hold back agains a large piece of iron.."
Naruto Raises his Right hand, Slowly a blue Spiralling ball appears.
The Mecha Naruto Does the Same, Except the Ball has a Bit of an Mixed Blue and Purple Colours.
With the core of it being Red.

Naruto:"Rasengan!"
Mecha Naruto: "Rocket Rasengan!"
Small Rockets appear on the back of Mecha Naruto.
As he Rapidly Afterwards dashes forwards, Naruto Gains a Small Red Shroud of Chakra and Rushes forwards as well.



Dun Dun duuuhn!
Cliffhanger!

Ok so i tought about Adding a fanfiction Containing Mecha Naruto From the Newest naruto Ultimate ninja storm.
I hope yall like it!
I Spent some work in this!


Gimme Feedback please U_U
 
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Haha..Mecha Naruto Lol..It isn't bad..Spelling errors here and there but no one's perfect as I have errors in my fics too. And the idea of a village supplying chakra...err..I'll prefer if that was changed to something else like say 'ninja tools'.

Interesting story altogether though and some wicked cliffhanger XD awaiting the next chap :win:
 

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Haha..Mecha Naruto Lol..It isn't bad..Spelling errors here and there but no one's perfect as I have errors in my fics too. And the idea of a village supplying chakra...err..I'll prefer if that was changed to something else like say 'ninja tools'.

Interesting story altogether though and some wicked cliffhanger XD awaiting the next chap :win:
Thanks.
Il double check spelling next time.
i might have rushed this time.
 
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