Naruto: The great ninja

[Kyuubi Sage]

Chapter 1: The visit to the Hidden Sand Village.

It was a nice sunny day as the sixth hokage Naruto is traveling on Kyuubi all the way to the hidden sand village as Naruto said "You know Kyuubi since when I created a demon summon you have been extreamily nice to me as in far more nicer than when I first met you" then Kyuubi said "Naruto I am being really nice to you because when the akasuki was about to kill us by stealing me you did not give up as you used rasengan to free me fro their rotten hands plus sending e back into your seal for safety and I hate to admit it but I am glad that the forth hokage sealed me in you" so the two kept on chatting until Naruto arrived at the sand village at the same time Kyuubi returned inside Naruto's seal.

After Naruto arrived at the hidden sand village Naruto walked in as the kazekage Garaa noticed Naruto which Garaa yelled "Temari please see me in the kazekage office because you have a special mission which you must complete since our visitor is the sixth hokage Naruto Uzumaki a Kyuubi host" then Temari appeared as Temari replied "Kazekage Garaa sir I heard the mission and I accept it because I have something that I want to tell Naruto inspecially that I happen to have special feelings for him even when he is just like you a jinichiriki other wise known as the host of a tailed demon".

 

[Anbu578]

nice story but it would be better with more action

 

[Kyuubi Sage]

Chapter 2: Naruto's date with Temari.

After Kazekage Garaa spoke with Temari she dashed right over to Naruto not knowing that her life will get really interesting so as soon as Temari arrived to where Naruto is Temari said "Naruto your here in person and you are the sixth hokage well that is cool but to be honest I am in love with you meaning I would like to be your girlfriend if that is cool with you Naruto Uzumaki" then Naruto Uzumaki replied "As the sixth hokage of the hidden leaf village I have to be strong so yes I would love to go on a date with you plus I sure hope that the sand village has its own ramen shop since I want to take you out for some ramen which I will pay ofcourse".

After Naruto spoke he took Temari to the sand villages own ramen shop which as soon as they arrived a snake summon appeared as it attacked the hidden sand village so Naruto said "Temari my love report this to the kazekage while I hold this snake summon since it appears to be a call for war against the sound village" which Temari agreed while Naruto dashed to the safe point of the sand village just in time for Naruto to bite his thumb allowing Naruto to slam his hand down as Naruto yelled "Demon Summoning jutsu nine tail fox demon Kyuubi" well Naruto's summoning worked as Kyuubi appeared ready to fight the sound village snake summon knowing Garaa will call forth Shukaku as soon as Garaa joins Naruto in a battle.

 

[Anbu578]

great story keep it up

 

[Kyuubi Sage]

Chapter 3: War against Orochimaru.

While Naruto and Kyuubi gets ready to kill the sound village snake summon Kazekage Garaa arrived in the scene with Temari as Garaa said "Naruto you summoned your demon and your in complete control well that is impressive and I hope my demon Shukaku wants to join in since that snake summon must die" so Garaa bit his thumb as Garaa slammed down his hand as Garaa yelled "Demon summoning jutsu one tail demon Shukaku" which Shukaku appeared as Shukaku roared "OK Kyuubi my demon friend lets crush this perfectic snake summon and as for you humans better help us demons or we will return to the seals of ours" then Shukaku got ready to do one of his attacks which will be his air bullets.

After Shukaku got ready to attack Shukaku held his stomache as Shukaku yelled "Wind style air bullets" which Shukaku blasted power guts or air at the snake summons face as Kyuubi grabbed the snake summons throat as Kyuubi said "Naruto go for that rasengan of yours and that fool Orochimaru will die in my wrath when we get to fight him in a furious battle for this Sasuke Uchiha's life being on the line" which Naruto made a shadow clone with his shadow clone jutsu while Shukaku said "Garaa you made have stopped killing because of that human Naruto but it does not ean you can kill the rogue ninja's that dare to cross our path but now you must use the sand to crush the snake summon hoping that whatever jutsu that Naruto has will help us all" so Garaa gripped hard as Garaa yelled "Sand Coffin" which Garaa wrapped the snake summon with a sand coffin knowing that the villian who summoned the snake will have to be killed by the skills of the sixth hokage Naruto Uzumaki the kyuubi host aka the Kyuubi sage hokage.

 

[Anbu578]

That's the best out of all three keep it up!

 

[Kyuubi Sage]

Chapter 4: The end of the snake.

While Garaa has the snake summon locked in a sand coffin Naruto's shadow clone gathered Naruto's chakra into an orb as Naruto whacked the orb along with Naruto's own hand as Naruto yelled "Rasengan" which the snake summon turned out extreamily injured until Kyuubi grapped the snake summon as Kyuubi ripped it in half as the snake summon died in Kyuubi's hand then Kyuubi laughed "I knew that I liked killing stuff but this is great so Naruto I enjoyed killing something evil and I do not want to have the seal broken anymore" then Shukaku said "Garaa we killed the snake summon and even when it was evil I enjoyed the battle so I refuse to come out of you for other reasons even if you fall asleep which now you can able to sleep as I will speak to you through your dream since I have enjoyed meeting you in person" so the two demons returned in their seal as Garaa announced "Naruto I allow you to take Temari to your village which Temari has full support from me if she wants to be your helper".

After Garaa spoke Temari said "I do wish to live with you in the leaf village and I would like to be your helper if that is OK with you and you will never be working alone anymore since I will not let you be lonely anymore" then Naruto replied "Thank you Temari I accept you as my helper and as my way to show that I a not afraid to date you lets have our ramen date in this village before we go home together inspecially that I feel that we will have a wonderful future together as a couple of brave shinobi's" so Naruto took Temari to the sand village ramen shop to have their date while Garaa went back to his office to deal with the paper work that he needs to do knowing that he will visit the leaf village at his own spare time unless a kazekage mission is on.

 

[Anbu578]

beautiful story reps for you man!!!!

 

[Kyuubi Sage]

Chapter 5: New 3 legendary sannin.

While Naruto and Temari are having their date they eaten up all their ramen which Naruto kissed Temari as Naruto said "Lets go home back to the hidden leaf village after all it is time for me to announce the new 3 legendary sannin which I know the perfect three and I would like you to live in the hokage mansion where I live in since I can not return to feel lonely" then Temari replied I was wishing for that meaning yes I will move in with you and I will help you with whatever trouble that you might end up meeting inspecially that there are missions to give out to the fellow shinobi" so Naruto teleported home with Temari knowing that the new 3 legendary sannin will be happy.

After they returned home in the hokage mansion Naruto sat on his hokage chair as Naruto respectfully yelled "Hinata Hyuuga, Shikamaru Nara and Rock Lee please see me at the hokage mansion for something special to hear" then the 3 selected Shinobi appeared in the hokage office as Naruto announced "You three are the new legendary sannin and your very first sannin mission is to kill the rogue ninja known as Orochimaru plus you must rescue Sasuke Uchiha since if you kill Orochimaru the curse mark mark be easy to remove since I already removed the one on our own old sensei Anko" so Hinata Hyuuga replied "Thank you Naruto Uzumaki sir we are honored to do this mission plus may I say that even when you have a girlfriend I believe you are one handsome guy that never afraid to take on the Akasuki like ninja's".

 

[Anbu578]

awesome storyline overall

 

[LeafDude]

the story is cool but use some comma plz. It will be easier to some ppl 2 read it.

 

[Kyuubi Sage]

Chapter 6: The mission begins.

After Hinata spoke the three legendary sannin went off to do their mission while Naruto stood up from his hokage chair as Naruto said "Temari lets go on our second date and this time you get to pick where we go since our first date was a ramen dinner date" then Temari replied "OK Naruto lets go for some ramen in your village after all I know that ramen is your favourite food inspecially that I would like to try the leaf village ramen out" so Naruto scooped Temari onto his arms as Naruto carried Temari to Ichiraku ramen not knowing that the ramen cook is gone as the ramen shop is now run by Choji as soon as they arrived at Ichiraku ramen Naruto cheered "I would like two bowls of BBQ pork ramen" then Choji replied "Oh hey Naruto I am sorry that the orginal Ichiraku ramen shop owner died but I will keep his shop alive but OK two BBQ pork ramen coming right up".

After Choji spoke he cooked up the BBQ ramen which he cooked it well enough that he personally dished it up as nice as possible then Choji turned around to prepare for more ramen eaters which Naruto eaten up his ramen at the same time Temari eaten up her ramen as Temari looked at Naruto in a romantic way so after they eaten up all their ramen Naruto said "Temari lets get to the training field because I am hoping to get stronger enough to create my own revival jutsu that does not force the dead to fight but allows the revive person to have the free will to do whatever the revived person wants inspecially if the revive person happens to be one of the former hokage such as my own father the 4th hokage" which Temari agreed to help Naruto grow stronger knowing that Temari will meet Naruto's father Minato.