Naruto Tensai Gaiden: [Chapter: 11] "Mystery."

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Hey guys xD, sorry for not making a chapter in a long time...Anyways the "Parts", have converted to "Chapters" because now is when the action starts..Hope you all enjoy! :D
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The crisis starts!, what is the reason behind this? What will Naruto's team do? What is this secret art Yuki speaks of?, What is Konohamaru's sage mode's abilities?...Several mysteries clash with eachother!

The team rush through the village to get to the spot of the four shinobi, A person is following them in the shadows as they do so, the person is seen wearing a Jonin vest and a sword on her back. At last the team gets to the spot of the 4 shinobi and get in a battle stance.

Haru: This'll be fun!

Naruto: Haru!, stick close to you're sensei

Haru: Awww, Fineeeee

A man with brown hair black eyes, pale skin and wearing a black and white striped vest and brown shoes appear before the team

?: Hah!, so its Naruto Uzumaki and his team!

Naruto: Who are you?

?: Call me Eita!

Naruto: Eita huh? I'll remember that!

Hikaru: Sensei, what are you're orders?

Naruto: Just stick close to me.

Yuki: Doton: Tsuchiken! (Earth Style: Earth Blades)

Yuki attacks a girl on the opponents side, and the team gasps in shock

All: WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU'RE DOING YUKI!?!?!?

Yuki: Battling!

Naruto: This is a pain, Yuki hold your ground!..You have the most intelligence compared too these 3 nincompoops.

Haru/Hikaru/Konohamaru: DIDN'T YOU TELL US TO STICK WITH YOU!?, YOU'RE THE NINCOMPOOP!!!!!

Suddenly, Eita breaks into the conversation and goes in for a attack with a Kunai, With quick reflexes Naruto grabs a Kunai and defends himself against his attack, the two opponents become intimidated

Eita: You live up to your name.

Naruto: Why thank you.

With his strength, Naruto pushes back Eita and makes a Shadow clone, His Shadow Clone makes a Rasengan in his hands, as the clones disappear, Naruto dashes in for the attack

Naruto: I'll make you live up to yours!

Naruto: RASENGAN!!!!

With sheer force, Naruto uses his Rasengan to attack the enemy making the enemy fall back

Eita: GAH!

Eita: *So this is the power of Naruto Uzumaki huh?*

Eita: *Ever since I seen him, this is the level of person I wanted to fight!*

Eita: *I've lived up to my name "Eita the Shining Crystal" to this very day!*

From the clouds of smoke after the Rasengan, out comes a swift Eita with his Kunai with bloodlust eyes.

Eita: THAT'S THE POWER I WANT TO SEE!!

Naruto: I don't want to fight you.

Naruto grabs his Kunai and defends himself against the attack

Naruto: Can we just settle with an agreement?

?: Nope!

A man with black short hair and pale skin with green eyes wearing a Green and white striped robe with black boots attack Konohamaru.

Konohamaru: Damn you!, Whats your name?

?: Call me Daichi!

As Haru, Hikaru and Yuki look at the two fighting the two, the other two other enemy's approach for an attack on the three of them, Naruto in shock, looks at them.

Naruto: HARU, HIKARU, YUKI...LOOK OUT!!

Haru, Hikaru, Yuki: !?

Suddenly a shadow appears in front of them with a sword with a katana with a pink hilt and a cherry blossom Tsuba (Guard) protect the three.

?: Himitsu no Sakura: Tatsumaki no Hana!

A tornado gusts up with several spiked flowers with it attacking the two opposing attackers

?/?: GAHH!!

While battling Naruto looks at the girl

Naruto: It's...you!

The revealing sunlight shows a girl with with long pink hair, pale skin, green eyes, a Red Konoha Headband, a green Konoha Jonin vest, regular Jonin woman pants, and black sandals..And at back having a Katana with a Pink hilt and cherry blossom-like Tsuba (Guard)..None other then Sakura Haruno!

Sakura: Looks like I made it in time!

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Hmm, this was enjoyable :yay: Although you have some mistakes here and there...

Like using "you're" when it should be "your"! Some caps are off... Like words appearing with it's initials in caps in a middle of a sentence and not being on purpose, since the words I saw was "With" and "His".

And then, there's the chapter's length XD But I already know why you make them that way so... It doesn't matter.

Regardless, what matters is it's content and I liked it! :p
 

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Hmm, this was enjoyable :yay: Although you have some mistakes here and there...

Like using "you're" when it should be "your"! Some caps are off... Like words appearing with it's initials in caps in a middle of a sentence and not being on purpose, since the words I saw was "With" and "His".

And then, there's the chapter's length XD But I already know why you make them that way so... It doesn't matter.

Regardless, what matters is it's content and I liked it! :p
Thanks, I'll make sure I do any of that next chapter..And I'll try to make the next chapter "lengthy" as I possibly could :)
 
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