[Adventure] Naruto Supairaru

[JCW]

I'm starting my own fanfic naruto post war TS.

Enjoy

Scene opens and shows not konoha or any particular village. But shows all the villages and nations are in the middle of the map named:

The Nation of Tides and Change

The village of Turning Tides

On this map... U will notice a portion of it was actually missing and never shown


Kakashi narration:

Its been 6 years since that last day. The day where everything changed. The day the two "brothers" took off to who knows where. All the villages gave up being separated from one another after that war. Chaos ceased to exist and for once... Peace was actually maintained. Being without the sharingan is different but I've became accustomed. Helped actually develop and combine the jutsus I know.

Being Rīdā and Tsunade back on her adventures (who knows how much money she lost) has been a whirl.

After the war. All the past kages gave up their titles to live their lives and nominated me to be the overseer. I'm not too really fond of being called hokage as there is no need to it.

Sitting in this chair rambling to myself.. I digress.

Who knows when or if naruto and sasuke will show themselves but what I do know is... There is part of this map that's missing... Unknown land. Unknown areas. Who knows what's out there? Whoever or whatever is out there they haven't shown themselves yet so I guess that's OK.

Well time to get up and do what needs to be done. A party is needed to go search this area.

Naruto supairaru


Would you guys read it if I continued?

Rīdā-leader

Also if you are interested on this. Subscribe to the thread for new chapters. Every four days length at max a new chapter will be released

 

[farhca]

Truth be told, this scenario is kinda too unrealistic, I mean both Naruto and Sasuke want to become Hokage so they wouldn't simply take off somewhere for 6 years, also fighting together dosn't mean that they will all unite that easy, etc...

If you took those major couple of points into consideration I believe this alternative storyline would be more interesting, and I would certainly read all that you'd right.

I respect the effort you put into the post above by the way and I would continue to read what you'd right even if you didn't make any changes =)

 

[JCW]

Read this

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Then re read my fanfic

BTW in fanfic.. There isn't a "realistic" view point but I understand.

BTW ur jumping the gun. I never said they were together or fighting or simply anything

 

[chopstickchakra]

Well it's hard to say as you've not written much. I did notice a few things though, Kakashi doesn't have sharingan anymore and it's ceased not seized, chaos ceased to exist. btw is jcw juggalo championshit wrestling?

 

[JCW]

Well it's hard to say as you've not written much. I did notice a few things though, Kakashi doesn't have sharingan anymore and it's ceased not seized, chaos ceased to exist. btw is jcw juggalo championshit wrestling?

Changed

Also its the intro so I want to see if that was appealing before I expend my time on something pointless.

And no... JCW is my initials

 

[farhca]

Read this

You must be registered for see links

Then re read my fanfic

BTW in fanfic.. There isn't a "realistic" view point but I understand.

BTW ur jumping the gun. I never said they were together or fighting or simply anything

I think there is a misunderstanding in the second point, when I said unite by simply fighting I was talking about how all the 5 villages became one, "The village of turning Tides". For all the 5 villages to become one single village, all the 5 nations should become one first because the hidden villages can't act independently from their respective nations.

Also, despite it not being that important, I might as well point out something I forgot to mention in my first post, the head of this new village shouldn't be called "Hokage"... "Hokage" is a title given only to the leader and protector of Konoha village.

 

[JCW]

I think there is a misunderstanding in the second point, when I said unite by simply fighting I was talking about how all the 5 villages became one, "The village of turning Tides". For all the 5 villages to become one single village, all the 5 nations should become one first because the hidden villages can't act independently from their respective nations.

Also, despite it not being that important, I might as well point out something I forgot to mention in my first post, the head of this new village shouldn't be called "Hokage"... "Hokage" is a title given only to the leader and protector of Konoha village.

Thanks for the point outs

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[farhca]

Thanks for the point outs

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You're welcome

 

[JCW]

When I off work I will start working on the pilot

 

[farhca]

When I off work I will start working on the pilot

Good to know =)

 

[chopstickchakra]

Changed

Also its the intro so I want to see if that was appealing before I expend my time on something pointless.

And no... JCW is my initials

gotcha, and this is just my opinion but any work the author does for themselves and their own enjoyment is infinitely better then something made to appeal to a group. As long as the creator is happy with their work it comes across and makes the story(or whatever it may be) more enjoyable.

 

[farhca]

gotcha, and this is just my opinion but any work the author does for themselves and their own enjoyment is infinitely better then something made to appeal to a group. As long as the creator is happy with their work it comes across and makes the story(or whatever it may be) more enjoyable.

True, Agreed.

 

[JCW]

gotcha, and this is just my opinion but any work the author does for themselves and their own enjoyment is infinitely better then something made to appeal to a group. As long as the creator is happy with their work it comes across and makes the story(or whatever it may be) more enjoyable.

I like your op. I wasn't going to completely stop but just not share it here

 

[JCW]

Actually I believe I have time...

PILOT: A NEW ERA

The screen is shown panning down from the sky with something falling to the ground.

Knohamoru is shown first with a chunnin vest on walking next to sakura which:

Long pink hair that's straight down

Shirt that is no sleeved but has chain mail looking long sleeve under it with a pouch on forearm

Shorts with long black socks that goes higher than her knee

Sakura: hey knohamoru I was wondering something.

Koha:

Taller. Around the high of naruto at vote

Hair that is somewhat like obitos

Koha: yes lady sakura?

Sakura: remember when naruto was around you too...

Koha: WHAT IS THAT!?!

A paper that looks beat up fell from the sky

Sakura: let me look at it!

Koha hands paper in confusion

-----I can tell everything is better. Everything is quite. I hope everything is OK. My time writing this is limited....

The paper is ripped halfway. What does it say?

Sakura: I wonder who this was for?

Koha: what did it say! Was it naruto?

Sakura: I don't know but I'll see you later. Go work on that jutsu you said you were going to show naruto when he gets back... (When..if)

-----

Kashi- hey sakura, what's going on.

Sakura: I found this piece of paper... Or maybe it found me... Read it

---kashi reads it---

Kashi: mmm can't really tell who wrote it. Looks old and very worn down.

Sakura: what do we do about it?!?

Kashi: nothing right now...(is that you)

---

Where are we going...

Who are you people...

Why are we here

----THIS IS THE LAND OF WONDER, CONFUSION, LIFE, EVERYTHING.----

WE ARE KNOWN AS: THE BRINGERS!

The bringers simple bio

Leader: shikan

Shikan:
Height: 5'8
Age: 450
Jutsu: Jigoku-jutsu no seikatsu (life of living hell jutsu) @high-level dream jutsu
Location: isle of lost memories
Outfit: unknown (atm)

2nd leader: rikashi
Height: 4,9
Age: 376
Jutsu: lightning,wind,dreams,
Location: isle of lost dreams
Outfit: unknown (atm)

Name: Ka
Height: 6'0
Age: unknown
Location: unknown
Jutsu: unknown
Outfit:
Shirt:says Lost on back
Cloak that's white, black rigged trim at the bottom
Pants all white but more like a dress robe

Current form:Owl
Natural form: human

Eyes: pure white
Hair: long white: drapes over shoulders to half of back
Human outfit:

A ragged black shirt with a black cloak on

Black pants. Ragged at the bottom

Headband: ?




Episode 2. THE BRINGERS!

 

[JCW]

Updated!!! Enough on this till after work

 

[chopstickchakra]

I liked that you included Konohamaru right off the bat, too many people ignore him. That and the stats for the characters were good touches imo, curious as to what you plan on doing with dream jutsus, is it a genjutsu type or a elemental style jutsu?

 

[Chakra Wizard]

I do like the idea of exploring lands outside of the continent. Nice premise, should turn out nice

 

[JCW]

EPISODE 2. THE BRINGERS!

(flashback)

???: RUN....RUN...RUN.. That's all I can remember... Being alone. Forgotten.. Stranded... I lost all my dreams.. All hope for everything. If people are that easy to put me aside along with my dreams... Dreams... what are they

-------

Shikan: Hello all of you. Welcome to to my clan...

Shiv: Master, why is this clan called lost and first and foremost... HOW THE HELL DID I GET HERE AND JUST CALL YOU MASTER!?!

Nira: I too was was wonder...

Shikan: ENOUGH!! You want answers?

All together, 365 people answered.

YES!

Shikan: well... Started when I was 20

Samatomori: Arnt you like 200+ years...

Shikan: "Jigoku-jutsu no seikatsu" (life of hell jutsu)

Jigoku-jutsu no seikatsu effect: user implants their wishes, ideals, dreams of their choice on the opponent but this jutsu also places the user in hell for 9000 years mentally but physically you see everything but they feel nothing. (Some will say this is a genjutsu but as the story unfolds you will understand)

NIRA: (not so sure if I want to join)

Shikan: Nira, you have no choice since you are here now.

Nira: (how did...

Shikan: I will shut all of you up if I don't speak...

Now as I resume where I left off...

I was on a mission. Before there were villages. Before clans.. Before what I came to hear, tailed beast. What a pointless add on if you ask me.

I was on a mission to kill a female, name was Kaguya. She was the "queen" if you will of jutsu. But all that is rubbish.

She was just the first one in her area to understand the BASIS OF JUTSU...JUST THE BASIS AND THEY CALLED HER QUEEN!

(Red flames mixed with white wings start to resonate from Shikan as he gets angry)

All I really need to tell you people is... Because of her.. Her kids... And the generations afterward.. People will figure out Dream jutsu. Its genjutsu as they call it now. Taijutsu, ying. Yang blah blah blah.. I don't really care.

I came to this area and found an elder owl just standing in darkness. His name was KA!

Deciples: KA? An owl?

Shikan: KA told me to harness this areas energy. And picture how I want this area to look like. "Dream it and it can be reality or it can be the worst night mare you will have for eternity should you fail. If you wish not to dream... Your eyes will go dark..cold" is what he told me

That's how this became to what you see. But this where we are now is nothing but a dream.. But its reality at the exact same time.

This is THE ISLAND OF LOST DREAMS. AND WE ARE THE BRINGERS!

In two weeks I will leave a letter for certain individuals to come seek me. Choose to come... There is no returning back..should you not come... Well let's say there is an island. Everything around u is black.. The island is only as wide as you can see...

The goal of the bringers: ERADICATE NINJAS. CHAKRA. AND BRING TRUE BALANCE. NATURE. REAL DREAMS TO REALITY.

Nira: but I don't understand... You are 450 yes old and Kaguya was only a few generations ago.. How were you 20 then and 450 now?

Shikan: Isle of lost dreams, there is no time, to past, future, aging,

Shira: so how are you 450?

Shikan: if you get the note and should come seek me for the truth about everything and turn your back on everything you know.. All will be answered.

Now all of you go back to your era's and be watching for clues.

Next episode: KA!

 

[ultimater]

I think there is a misunderstanding in the second point, when I said unite by simply fighting I was talking about how all the 5 villages became one, "The village of turning Tides". For all the 5 villages to become one single village, all the 5 nations should become one first because the hidden villages can't act independently from their respective nations.

Also, despite it not being that important, I might as well point out something I forgot to mention in my first post, the head of this new village shouldn't be called "Hokage"... "Hokage" is a title given only to the leader and protector of Konoha village.

That's what i was saying,well thanks *_*

 

[JCW]

That's what i was saying,well thanks *_*

What were you saying? You said nothing bro.