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Chapter 2:
Naruto could not believe his eyes. Who he looked at in the mirror was not him anymore. It was a new person. A person he no longer recognized. He felt as if he did not deserve to live anymore after the things he had done. He had to kill innocent humans to get these eyes, these eyes of power. A tear ran down his cheek. He saw it in the mirror and brought up his hand and wiped it away. He now knew what he had to do. He could not do this any longer. He had to escape; he would not kill innocent people any longer. He had to run. He knew that he could not beat Madara, he was too weak. So how would he get away? He had never even thought of escaping from his sensei's care. Madara had taken him out of his hateful village that he used to call home, and trained him to defend himself.
He looked away from the mirror not wanting to look at his face any longer. He did not want to see the face that killed people for power. As he looked away he saw his hands. In the middle of his hands were slits. What was on his hands? Suddenly gathering chakra into his hands to check for anything wrong the slits opened. When the slits opened in both of his hands he saw Sharingan eyes. What had Madara done? He put Sharingans in his hands. He could not handle this; he went into the corner and begun to weep for what had happened to him. Madara it was his fault. He had done this to him. He looked at his hands once more. He stopped sending chakra into his hands making the Sharingan eyes close and look like slits once again.
He sat there in the corner for awhile until he finally thought of something. His new found abilities, he would no longer use them for evil, but good. He would learn all he could from Madara, and then he would leave and help the need. He would help the people who he hurt the most. He wiped the lone tear from his eye, and went into his bathroom to take a shower.
When he got out of the shower he looked at his eyes in the mirror. They held power and the memory of all the jutsus that it had seen. He had no idea what the eyes could do. All he knew was that they were very powerful. He brought his hands up, palms facing the mirror, he channeled chakra into them. The Mangekyou Sharingan eyes opened, he looked at his eyes, and his hands.
"I will use this power for good." Naruto said. Closing the Sharingans in his hands he got dressed in his Akatsuki attire. He grabbed his sword which he had thrown on the ground last night and he walked out his room door. He noticed that his chakra was slowly diminishing.
'It must be because of the Sharingans.' Naruto thought.
He noticed on the way to the training grounds that it did not take as much chakra when he had his mask on, so he left it on. He had his cloak specially made, with a large hood so it covered his face (Like an anbu cloak). He past a lot of the different members on his route to the training grounds. He just said hi not wanting to go past that. He finally made it the training grounds where he saw Madara waiting for him. He could barely hold the urge to just attack him and kill him, for making him what he was now.
Madara smiled under his orange mask as he saw Naruto come up to the training grounds. Naruto walked right in front of Madara waiting for Madara to start the conversation.
"I hope that you have discovered your new toys." Madara said.
"Yes, I have, but I do not understand what the ones in my eyes are for." Naruto said.
"They are for better control of the Amaterasu flames, and different techniques I am going to teach you." Madara said.
"How will you teach me these techniques if you do not have them? Also, may I ask where you got the extra eyes from?" Naruto asked.
"I have my ways, and to answer your question about who I got them from, it is none of your concern." Madara said.
"Sorry I asked sensei." Naruto said bowing.
"Ma, ma, Naruto it is no problem. Just start your warm up, and then meet me here once you're done." Madara said. Naruto nodded and began his warm up. As he ran he went over plans in his head on how to escape Madara's grip. He thought about this the whole time and he was eventually done with his warm up. He met Madara back at where he was supposed to, and Madara was there waiting for him.
"Now, since you're finally done with your sword training from Kisame, I will teach you non stop about your Sharingan. Here take these scrolls and read over them. Once you are done with them I want you to some back here and we will begin to practice. I do not want you to go into training without knowing certain aspects about the Sharingan. I don't have time to go over them because I have Akatsuki business." Madara said throwing Naruto two scrolls.
"Yes, sensei." Naruto said bowing. Naruto then began to walk to his room with the scrolls to begin reading on the Sharingan. When Naruto finally arrived at his room he set one scroll down and began to read the first scroll.
The first of the Sharingan's powers is being able to see the chakra flow. The Sharingan can tell if a person is under a genjutsu because the person's chakra flow would be irregular.
The Sharingan's second-most prominent ability grants the user an incredible clarity of perception, allowing them to easily recognize genjutsu and different forms of chakra, though not to the same extent as the Byakugan. This also allows the user to pick up on subtle details, enabling them to read lip movements or mimic something like pencil movements. As the Sharingan evolves, gaining more tomoe seals, this ability extends to being able to track fast-moving objects before finally giving some amount of predictive capabilities to the user. However, even though the user may be able to see an attack or know it is coming, their body may not have time to react.
The Sharingan's third and most well-known ability is that it grants the user the ability to memorize any technique that he or she witnesses, apart from other Kekkei Genkai techniques. The user can memorize ninjutsu, genjutsu , and taijutsu with perfect accuracy, allowing the user to use the techniques as his own, or even modify them to create his own new techniques.
Naruto finally was done reading the first scroll and he understood the bascis of the Sharingan. He then grabbed the next scroll and began to read.
The Mangekyō Sharingan is a heightened form of Sharingan. The Mangekyō Sharingan gives the user access to powerful and forbidden techniques. The Mangekyō Sharingan is distinguished from a normal Sharingan through its appearance, which changes the form of the tomoe seal. Unlike in the case of the Sharingan, the appearance of the Mangekyō Sharingan differs from user to user.
The Mangekyō Sharingan gives the user access to several powerful techniques, including the powerful fire jutsu Amaterasu and the almost unbreakable genjutsu Tsukiyomi. The Mangekyō Sharingan erodes the eyesight of its users, eventually causing blindness, which can be alleviated by obtaining another pair of Mangekyō Sharingan from asibling.
The Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan is the last stage of the Sharingan. Having to get it by taking the Mangekyō Sharingan of another person, you gain immense power, and the downside of the Sharingan causing blindness is gone.
Techniques:
Amaterasu: The jet-black flames of the Amaterasu, said to be as hot as the sun, ignite at the focus of the usersvision. They're unavoidable as long as the user keeps their eyes focused on their target. The flames are extremely powerful, capable of burning through anything and can even smother regular flames easily. Amaterasu is said to burn for seven days and seven nights, and cannot be extinguished with water or any other normal methods.
Kamui: a technique able to send an oppenant to another diemension.
Susanoo: is a technique that creates a spiritual humanoid being. The spirit is gigantic and surrounds and protects the user.
Tsukuyomi: requires eye contact to be performed. When executed, the jutsu traps the target in an illusion that is completely controlled by the user.
Time Skip (Three Years)
Naruto awoke to the same ceiling he had seen for pretty much all of his life. Today, was the day that he would escape from his sensei's grip. He had been put through rigerous training over the past three, and he thought he found himself ready to leave. He knew Madara would come after him, and he thought he was powerful enough to defeat him, but he did not want to take that chance unless he had to.
Over the past three years he had gained unlimited control over the Amaterasu flames, and his Sharingan eyes. He found out that the Sharingans in his hands were meant to be able to control the Amaterasu flames like it was apart of you. Being able to control the flames to its ultimate power he was able to also use Susanoo. A spirit made out of the flames protecting him from anything, the ultimnate defense. He could also attack with it like he was only in armor.
He began to pack his things and put them in a sealing scroll. Once he was done sealing the little things that he had he put his sword on his back with his cloak and looked at his room one last time.
'I am finally leaving this blasted place.' Naruto said. He then turned and walked out his door. He then began to sneak his way through the base not wanting to be spotted by anyone that could report it and get him caught. He eaisly made his way through the base into the outside world. He breathed in the air and made his way to one of the training grounds. When he finally got to where he wanted to be he went over his plan.
'Okay now I'll use the Kamui to disrupt time around me hopefully being able to send me back in time, so I can change what I have done and save those people, that I killed.' Naruto thought to himself.
"Are you going somewhere?" a voice said. Naruto was scared now. He turned around to see Madara leaning against a tree.
'Crap, looks like I am going to have to fight him.' Naruto thought," I am leaving."
"Why, would you leave, I have everything here for you here?" Madara asked.
"Because I am tired of killing innocent people, for you. I cant do it anymore, so I plan on going back in time to change my mistakes." Naruto said. Madara laughed at this. Naruto frowned not liking where this was going.
"You actually think that I would let you escape from me, something that took years for me to make." Madara said.
"So, I guess this means we are going to fight." Naruto said.
"There is no way you can beat me. I am your teacher I taught you everything you know." Madara said.
"Not everything." Naruto said pulling out Kusanagi.
"Don't do this Naruto. Come back and I will make your punishment less severe." Madara said getting ready for a fight.
"**** you." Naruto said. Naruto then rushed at Madara with his sword. Madara pulled out a kunai and blocked Naruto's attack. They exchanged blows until finally Madara cut Naruto across the chest and then following it up with a kick, which sent Naruto flying through several trees. Naruto quickly recovered, and put his sword away. Madara had been around to long and knew more about swordsmanship than he did.
"Naruto giving up already?" Madara asked.
'What can I do? He is more powerful than I am.' Naruto thought. Naruto suddenly reached down and took off the weights hidden by his cloak. He dropped them which made two huge craters; where they landed. Naruto then disappeared and appeared behind Madara kicking him in the air.
'What, where did he get the weights from. He is as fast as me now. This is bad.' Madara thought. Naruto then followed up that with," Katon: Gōryūka no Jutsu." Naruto said going through hand seals. He then took a big breath. He then blew out a huge fire dragon. The dragon swirled around and then headed towards the flying Madara. It went to fast for Madara to dodge and so it hit him head on. There was big explosion causing smoke to hurdle away from the point of impact, and Naruto saw Madara fall down unto the ground.
'Did I kill him?' Naruto thought.
"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA." Madara laughed as he got up from the ground. When Naruto got a good look of him he saw that he did not even have a scratch on him.
"How?" Naruto asked, very surprised that someone could survive and attack like that.
"Good job, Naruto. I did not expect that. I will not be caught off guard like that again." Madara said. Madara disappeared and then appeared behind Naruto and then began to perform an onslaught on Naruto. Punches to the face, gut, and other places on Naruto's body took its toll as he only returned a couple, but only giving Madara scratches. Madara then kneed Naruto sending him into the air. Naruto hit the ground with a thud. He was breathing heavy and he had blood coming from his mouth.
"Tsk, tsk, tsk, Naruto I thought I trained you better than this." Madara said. Madara walked over to Naruto who was lying on his back.
"Get away from me." Naruto said.
"I'm sorry Naruto, but I have to kill you now." Madara said.
"Not yet." Naruto said. Black flames suddenly came out of nowhere and hit Madara head on knocking him off his feet unto his back. Naruto slowly got up to see this sight. It did not last for long because Madara got up unto his feet once more.
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To be continued
Chapter 2:
Naruto could not believe his eyes. Who he looked at in the mirror was not him anymore. It was a new person. A person he no longer recognized. He felt as if he did not deserve to live anymore after the things he had done. He had to kill innocent humans to get these eyes, these eyes of power. A tear ran down his cheek. He saw it in the mirror and brought up his hand and wiped it away. He now knew what he had to do. He could not do this any longer. He had to escape; he would not kill innocent people any longer. He had to run. He knew that he could not beat Madara, he was too weak. So how would he get away? He had never even thought of escaping from his sensei's care. Madara had taken him out of his hateful village that he used to call home, and trained him to defend himself.
He looked away from the mirror not wanting to look at his face any longer. He did not want to see the face that killed people for power. As he looked away he saw his hands. In the middle of his hands were slits. What was on his hands? Suddenly gathering chakra into his hands to check for anything wrong the slits opened. When the slits opened in both of his hands he saw Sharingan eyes. What had Madara done? He put Sharingans in his hands. He could not handle this; he went into the corner and begun to weep for what had happened to him. Madara it was his fault. He had done this to him. He looked at his hands once more. He stopped sending chakra into his hands making the Sharingan eyes close and look like slits once again.
He sat there in the corner for awhile until he finally thought of something. His new found abilities, he would no longer use them for evil, but good. He would learn all he could from Madara, and then he would leave and help the need. He would help the people who he hurt the most. He wiped the lone tear from his eye, and went into his bathroom to take a shower.
When he got out of the shower he looked at his eyes in the mirror. They held power and the memory of all the jutsus that it had seen. He had no idea what the eyes could do. All he knew was that they were very powerful. He brought his hands up, palms facing the mirror, he channeled chakra into them. The Mangekyou Sharingan eyes opened, he looked at his eyes, and his hands.
"I will use this power for good." Naruto said. Closing the Sharingans in his hands he got dressed in his Akatsuki attire. He grabbed his sword which he had thrown on the ground last night and he walked out his room door. He noticed that his chakra was slowly diminishing.
'It must be because of the Sharingans.' Naruto thought.
He noticed on the way to the training grounds that it did not take as much chakra when he had his mask on, so he left it on. He had his cloak specially made, with a large hood so it covered his face (Like an anbu cloak). He past a lot of the different members on his route to the training grounds. He just said hi not wanting to go past that. He finally made it the training grounds where he saw Madara waiting for him. He could barely hold the urge to just attack him and kill him, for making him what he was now.
Madara smiled under his orange mask as he saw Naruto come up to the training grounds. Naruto walked right in front of Madara waiting for Madara to start the conversation.
"I hope that you have discovered your new toys." Madara said.
"Yes, I have, but I do not understand what the ones in my eyes are for." Naruto said.
"They are for better control of the Amaterasu flames, and different techniques I am going to teach you." Madara said.
"How will you teach me these techniques if you do not have them? Also, may I ask where you got the extra eyes from?" Naruto asked.
"I have my ways, and to answer your question about who I got them from, it is none of your concern." Madara said.
"Sorry I asked sensei." Naruto said bowing.
"Ma, ma, Naruto it is no problem. Just start your warm up, and then meet me here once you're done." Madara said. Naruto nodded and began his warm up. As he ran he went over plans in his head on how to escape Madara's grip. He thought about this the whole time and he was eventually done with his warm up. He met Madara back at where he was supposed to, and Madara was there waiting for him.
"Now, since you're finally done with your sword training from Kisame, I will teach you non stop about your Sharingan. Here take these scrolls and read over them. Once you are done with them I want you to some back here and we will begin to practice. I do not want you to go into training without knowing certain aspects about the Sharingan. I don't have time to go over them because I have Akatsuki business." Madara said throwing Naruto two scrolls.
"Yes, sensei." Naruto said bowing. Naruto then began to walk to his room with the scrolls to begin reading on the Sharingan. When Naruto finally arrived at his room he set one scroll down and began to read the first scroll.
The first of the Sharingan's powers is being able to see the chakra flow. The Sharingan can tell if a person is under a genjutsu because the person's chakra flow would be irregular.
The Sharingan's second-most prominent ability grants the user an incredible clarity of perception, allowing them to easily recognize genjutsu and different forms of chakra, though not to the same extent as the Byakugan. This also allows the user to pick up on subtle details, enabling them to read lip movements or mimic something like pencil movements. As the Sharingan evolves, gaining more tomoe seals, this ability extends to being able to track fast-moving objects before finally giving some amount of predictive capabilities to the user. However, even though the user may be able to see an attack or know it is coming, their body may not have time to react.
The Sharingan's third and most well-known ability is that it grants the user the ability to memorize any technique that he or she witnesses, apart from other Kekkei Genkai techniques. The user can memorize ninjutsu, genjutsu , and taijutsu with perfect accuracy, allowing the user to use the techniques as his own, or even modify them to create his own new techniques.
Naruto finally was done reading the first scroll and he understood the bascis of the Sharingan. He then grabbed the next scroll and began to read.
The Mangekyō Sharingan is a heightened form of Sharingan. The Mangekyō Sharingan gives the user access to powerful and forbidden techniques. The Mangekyō Sharingan is distinguished from a normal Sharingan through its appearance, which changes the form of the tomoe seal. Unlike in the case of the Sharingan, the appearance of the Mangekyō Sharingan differs from user to user.
The Mangekyō Sharingan gives the user access to several powerful techniques, including the powerful fire jutsu Amaterasu and the almost unbreakable genjutsu Tsukiyomi. The Mangekyō Sharingan erodes the eyesight of its users, eventually causing blindness, which can be alleviated by obtaining another pair of Mangekyō Sharingan from asibling.
The Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan is the last stage of the Sharingan. Having to get it by taking the Mangekyō Sharingan of another person, you gain immense power, and the downside of the Sharingan causing blindness is gone.
Techniques:
Amaterasu: The jet-black flames of the Amaterasu, said to be as hot as the sun, ignite at the focus of the usersvision. They're unavoidable as long as the user keeps their eyes focused on their target. The flames are extremely powerful, capable of burning through anything and can even smother regular flames easily. Amaterasu is said to burn for seven days and seven nights, and cannot be extinguished with water or any other normal methods.
Kamui: a technique able to send an oppenant to another diemension.
Susanoo: is a technique that creates a spiritual humanoid being. The spirit is gigantic and surrounds and protects the user.
Tsukuyomi: requires eye contact to be performed. When executed, the jutsu traps the target in an illusion that is completely controlled by the user.
Time Skip (Three Years)
Naruto awoke to the same ceiling he had seen for pretty much all of his life. Today, was the day that he would escape from his sensei's grip. He had been put through rigerous training over the past three, and he thought he found himself ready to leave. He knew Madara would come after him, and he thought he was powerful enough to defeat him, but he did not want to take that chance unless he had to.
Over the past three years he had gained unlimited control over the Amaterasu flames, and his Sharingan eyes. He found out that the Sharingans in his hands were meant to be able to control the Amaterasu flames like it was apart of you. Being able to control the flames to its ultimate power he was able to also use Susanoo. A spirit made out of the flames protecting him from anything, the ultimnate defense. He could also attack with it like he was only in armor.
He began to pack his things and put them in a sealing scroll. Once he was done sealing the little things that he had he put his sword on his back with his cloak and looked at his room one last time.
'I am finally leaving this blasted place.' Naruto said. He then turned and walked out his door. He then began to sneak his way through the base not wanting to be spotted by anyone that could report it and get him caught. He eaisly made his way through the base into the outside world. He breathed in the air and made his way to one of the training grounds. When he finally got to where he wanted to be he went over his plan.
'Okay now I'll use the Kamui to disrupt time around me hopefully being able to send me back in time, so I can change what I have done and save those people, that I killed.' Naruto thought to himself.
"Are you going somewhere?" a voice said. Naruto was scared now. He turned around to see Madara leaning against a tree.
'Crap, looks like I am going to have to fight him.' Naruto thought," I am leaving."
"Why, would you leave, I have everything here for you here?" Madara asked.
"Because I am tired of killing innocent people, for you. I cant do it anymore, so I plan on going back in time to change my mistakes." Naruto said. Madara laughed at this. Naruto frowned not liking where this was going.
"You actually think that I would let you escape from me, something that took years for me to make." Madara said.
"So, I guess this means we are going to fight." Naruto said.
"There is no way you can beat me. I am your teacher I taught you everything you know." Madara said.
"Not everything." Naruto said pulling out Kusanagi.
"Don't do this Naruto. Come back and I will make your punishment less severe." Madara said getting ready for a fight.
"**** you." Naruto said. Naruto then rushed at Madara with his sword. Madara pulled out a kunai and blocked Naruto's attack. They exchanged blows until finally Madara cut Naruto across the chest and then following it up with a kick, which sent Naruto flying through several trees. Naruto quickly recovered, and put his sword away. Madara had been around to long and knew more about swordsmanship than he did.
"Naruto giving up already?" Madara asked.
'What can I do? He is more powerful than I am.' Naruto thought. Naruto suddenly reached down and took off the weights hidden by his cloak. He dropped them which made two huge craters; where they landed. Naruto then disappeared and appeared behind Madara kicking him in the air.
'What, where did he get the weights from. He is as fast as me now. This is bad.' Madara thought. Naruto then followed up that with," Katon: Gōryūka no Jutsu." Naruto said going through hand seals. He then took a big breath. He then blew out a huge fire dragon. The dragon swirled around and then headed towards the flying Madara. It went to fast for Madara to dodge and so it hit him head on. There was big explosion causing smoke to hurdle away from the point of impact, and Naruto saw Madara fall down unto the ground.
'Did I kill him?' Naruto thought.
"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA." Madara laughed as he got up from the ground. When Naruto got a good look of him he saw that he did not even have a scratch on him.
"How?" Naruto asked, very surprised that someone could survive and attack like that.
"Good job, Naruto. I did not expect that. I will not be caught off guard like that again." Madara said. Madara disappeared and then appeared behind Naruto and then began to perform an onslaught on Naruto. Punches to the face, gut, and other places on Naruto's body took its toll as he only returned a couple, but only giving Madara scratches. Madara then kneed Naruto sending him into the air. Naruto hit the ground with a thud. He was breathing heavy and he had blood coming from his mouth.
"Tsk, tsk, tsk, Naruto I thought I trained you better than this." Madara said. Madara walked over to Naruto who was lying on his back.
"Get away from me." Naruto said.
"I'm sorry Naruto, but I have to kill you now." Madara said.
"Not yet." Naruto said. Black flames suddenly came out of nowhere and hit Madara head on knocking him off his feet unto his back. Naruto slowly got up to see this sight. It did not last for long because Madara got up unto his feet once more.
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To be continued
