naruto: rise of the uzumaki dynasty chapter 6 part 2 sasuke's rage (revised)

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this is long but shorter then previous chapters. also my special thanks go to

this is a reponse to my sucky chapter. chapter 6 part 2 sasuke's new tachnique this is the revised and canon version

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yall keep tuned this just warming up :D

warping: naruto term in my fanfic for very high speed movement untracebel
()= type of voice
*= censor or thoughts
show= music

is long but wroth it :D
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(with music)

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chapter begins now

yamamotto finshes off the guards and sprints to naruto's location. a few miles away sasuke awakens and goes out side the cave. his sweat trips upon leaves under him causing little pools to form in the leafs. sasuke feels a dark pressence heading toward them. sasuke runs back in the cave to see sakura and everyone else asleep. he gets on his gear and moves over to kiss sakura's forehead

sasuke i'll be back... this for giera (he whispers)

sasuke then sprints out of the cave and heads toward yamamotto's location. sasuke foot makes imprints upon the ground


*yamamotto's location a few minutes later*

yamamotto i know your there.... uchiha pig (he says delighted)

sasuke steps from behind a tree. his eyes are filled with malice and rage. the day that yamamotto killed that girl is still seared in his mind like fire burning on wood. sasuke unsheaths his katana and points it at yamamotto. yamamotto smiles delighted in the fact another weakling has come to play. he snickers a little bit. sasuke sees this and slice the tree next to him in half


yamamotto well someones angry
sasuke im ending you here for everyone you caused hurt too... you'll pay for the little girls life (he shouts in anger)

sasuke activates ems and unleashes a wave amatasaru flames around him. hie eyes are longing to see blood especialy yamamotto's blood. sasuke charges at him. sasuke launches several amatasaru waves at yamamotto who easily dodge them. sasuke then launches a chidori current into the ground yamamotto leg is caught. yamamotto attack with his katana and him and sasuke clash. sasuke holds his ground and tries to envelope him and yamamotto in amatasaru flames. but with barely enough time yamamotto gets loose and warps to a near by tree.

sasuke inferno style: grand rising. (he shouts)

below yamamotto massive amounts of fire rise up on the tree yamamotto warps to another tree and dodges another attack from sasuke. sasuke grits his teeth and forms several hand seals

yamamotto you ain't got nothing on me (he shouts)

sasuke activates his new sharingan the divine mangekyo sharingan a ripple pattern forms inside the ems. sasuke activates his new sasunoo. it glows bright yellow and red.

sasuke with this i harold your ending (he shouts)
yamamotto come then uchiha pig (he shouts)

sasuke draws out a massive sword covered in amatasaru.


sasuke lets go (he shouts)

sasuke and yamamotto sprint at eachother. yamamotto jumps over the blade as sasuke swings to hit him. yamaotto launches a torrent of lightning at sasuke. sasuke uses his sword to block it and absorb it. yamamotto forms hand seals as sasuke launches it back at him

yamamotto wind style: gale

the winds manage to deflect the lighting into the sky. sasuke smiles at this and blocks the massive wind jutsu. as he does the winds flaten the land scape and several trees are blown away.

sasuke dodge this (he yells)

sasuke points his hands toward the sky. a massive kirin comes forth as it does several trees burst into flames around it

sasuke DIE (he screams in a rage)

the kirin goes back into the air. yamamotto forms a tiger seal and stands still motionless. his eyes go to the demagan. he grows black claws and sharper cannies. he extents his arm to the sky he is in divine mode

yamamotto chakra absorbtion (he whispers)

sasuke launches the kirin and it slams into the ground sasuke deactivates his dms and ems he looks at the smouldering ruins. he lets a smirk slip across his face

sasuke for the record the uchiha are not.... (he yells and stops)

a metal object extens from his chest its a katana. his katana is now springing out of his chest sasuke's turns around to see yamamotto perfectly healthy.


divine yamamotto pigs? (he says delighted)

sasuke tries to charge at yamamotto but he staggers and falls to the ground. sasuke is bleeding out and fast. yamamotto grabs his katana and raises it above his head. thousands of memeories and moments flood sasuke's mind. the ones that stick out are naruto and sakura. sasuke's vision goes blurry.

divine yamamotto now... YOU DIE (he screams)

sasuke sees the katana coming for his head. he is paralyized. sasuke lets out a few tears.

sasuke im sorry sakura.. my wife (he says in a sad tone)

a sound of metal on metal flood sasuke's ears

ends

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