naruto: rise of the uzumaki dynasty ch4 part 2 a belief

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chapter 4 part 2 a belief

*in the memorial site*
minato damn finnaly fresh air
after breaking out of his coffin
kushina bout time
sticks her tongue out at him
minato * time to see the old ftg god seal i placed on naruto still works* kushina grab on
she grabs on
*in mount myoboku*
a few hours after the fight in the after life everyone was asleep except for naruto who could not shake feeling somthing happened somewhere he could hear the voices of dying shinobi and the dead alike
*in naruto's mind*
dying shinobi HELP SOMEONE
dying shinobi 2 AHHHHH HELP
a slice his heard
dying shinobi 3 WERE IS NARUTO GWAAA
a sword plunges into him
the man looks straight at naruto its the fire damiyo
naruto STOP THIS
fire damiyo ITS ONLY GETTING STARTED! MUHAHAHA!
naruto wakes up from the nightmare he walks out of fukusaku's house
naruto why now....
he picks up a rock
naruto WHY NOW!!!
he transforms into km mode while throwing the rock impacts the ground making a crater
hinata naruto kun?
naruto suddenly swings his fist around barely stopping before hitting hinata
km mode deactivates hinata steps backwards and she begins to walk toward naruto
hinata na-naruto k-kun
she now right in front of naruto
naruto hinata..... im sorry
he steps toward her
hinata naruto * whats going on why is he stepping toward me*
he puts his on her cheek but immidiately removes it hearing laughter from the bushes
naruto COME OUT ! I KNOW YOUR THERE
kushina like father like son always got to yell
minato what you talking about last time i heard you yelled more than anyone
takes step out of the bush
kushina YEAH RIGHT!
she takes a jump forward landing to were naruto is standing
minato * women what ya gonna do*
he warps to her location
naruto MOM DAD ! HOW
minato the sage of six paths izanagi revived us
he suddenly looks down
minato but by doing so he was weakend when he battled a dark enitity he has perished
kushina give him the scroll minato
minato gives the scroll to naruto
naruto what is this
he opens the scroll on it contains a jutsu formula
naruto what is this
minato takes a step forward
minato since the sage doubt me to read the old language ill read it to you huh hm
takes a deep breath
minato to who may this worlds hero may be. to whom of pure of heart and a will as large as the world. i leave you with very jutsu to recreate the 10 tails. for it to work all tailed beast must agree to join together and depending on your soul and purity may form a purified 10 tails i entrust the world to you i have not much time should get this from one of my compainons. with this trust my very will and soul to ....... NARUTO UZUMAKI
naruto so this scroll tells me how the to weave the ancient hand seals needed to form the tailed beast into the juubi
picks up the scroll
kushina yes
she takes a step forward to hug naruto
kushina we love you naruto but were going to leave this place me and your father are taking to an ancient training site to master your ture hidden potential
naruto now?
minato no not yet we'll be staying at a near by house gamabunta knows were here come see use when your ready
they warp away
hinata so i... i guess your going away again naruto kun
naruto not for a while come i want to show you somthing perfected doing
hinata follows naruto to a secret training field
naruto my dads flying thunder god in past hours i manage to this throws his dads kunai and warps to it
naruto that is lv1 but thats not what im here to show
he points to the ground a small formula forms and naruto warps to it
naruto im able to use this anytime even from a huge distance away i can warp to the location like that
snaps his fingers
hinata why are telling me this?
naruto warps behind hinata
naruto remember when you saved me from pain what was it you said
he puts his arm on hinata she turns bright red
hinata tha that i.... i *what is he doing*
she struggels to hudder the words out
naruto spins her around their eyes meet
naruto that i .....
he waiting slowly his face moves towards her's and her's towards his
hinata that i lo - love
they are almost there both them close their eyes then he stops
naruto hinata hyuuga i love you
she flengs in his embrace and share a passionate kiss
naruto when i leave i'll leave with this
he raises hinata coat up
hinata what are you doing
naruto contract seal: flying thunder god lv 3
now no matter were you are or how far you are i will be there
they kiss again
the sun is coming up
hinata its almost time isn't it
naruto yeah
they hold eachother in a tight embrace
hinata promiss me
naruto what
she crys
hinata you'll end this maddness and come back to me
naruto i promiss
they kiss right about the time minato and kushina find them
kushina they remind me of us
minato i know. maybe there another way maybe fukusaku knows a place naruto can stay and do the training here
kushina awwww minato finnaly breaking down
tears run down his eyes
minato what you talking about
naruto sees them and he walks towards them

end of ch4
 

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